Trying Again?

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Name: Hey.

...I still jest. I'm Setsuai. Still.

Age: 21, huzzah. Only I still haven't been able to make use of that number.

Gender: According to the internet I'm some manner of hermaphroditic alien-thing, but for the sake of accuracy I'll say female.

Desired Position: Assistant

Experience: Here? Nada. Mostly just float about helping folks where I can. Though again I was in charge of a high school anime convention for three years, and have been doing some student teaching. I really have no idea if any of that matters, but it can't hurt to mention can it?

RolePlay Experience: Some of my better work, now with more accounts involved! Huzzah! [Deep inhalation] I can just SMELL the history...

A theif in the Night - Mission

Current Quest! Prelude to a Legend - Event?

Fucked Up Pervert - Mission/General RP

Grass Cannon (Ryouga vs Lexi & Lyra) - Battle

Positive Forward - Training, Ongoing

Suspicions~ - Training, Mission, General RP [La Trifecta warrants a sixth slot~<3]

Additional Comments: So I've been around a good long while off and on, and I always wanted to help out. I've been a lot more active of late, and have even been trying to make my presence known it bit more, asking and helping aswer questions alike, primarily the latter. I was turned down a little while ago for a lack of PROVEN activity, as while I could frequently be located in the CBox I did little in the way of actual posting. Anyway I said then that I would try again if we were still understaffed and it looks like we are. More moderaters than assistants whut? e-e

Anyway lately while my actual hours are rediculous and sporadic, I'm online nearly every day. And I look forward to working with you all in the future, regardless of how far down the line that may be. Long live NFRP, huzzah!

Yes. I do that now. I don't know when I started, but it's become something of a frequent follow-up.

In any event my fate is in your capable hands...

...Ciao 4 Niao~<3

[Ancestor Febrie]

Ok, I am on the fence here. I've seen you help here and there but I am still not sure so gonna give you some questions.


1) What is wrong with this application.

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Basic Information

Name: James Cameron "Kazeraikou"
Bloodlimit: Kazeraikou
Height: 300 m
Weight: 20 kg
Age: 150
Gender: Male
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Birth Country: Across the mountains
Village: Honohagakure
Special:

Weapons

Large kunai

Primary Weapon:

Secondary Items:

Non-Weapon Items

Character Depth

Red hair, purple eyes, fat.

Personality:

Appearance:

Background:

2) Grade this custom puppet.

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Name Reika
Class: C
Height: 4 ft 7 inches
Weight: 30 lbs
Grade: C
Slots: 20
Description: Modeled after a small child, the red haired puppet is modeled after Sora’s little sister. With a detachable arm on her right, and both arms holding extendable blades, this puppet is powerful in close range combat. A gas bomb launcher is stored in her mouth as well as a tongue stinger incase her arms are damaged. A folded blade with a serrated edge is in her leg for surprise attacks and a self destruct core sits in her chest as a last resort.
Cost: 1100+ 300 + 1800 + 200 + 100 + 1000 + 500
Limit: ---

Weapon Detachable Limbs [3/20]
Extendable Blades x2 [9/20]
Poison Gas Bomb [11/20]
Tongue Stinger [14/20]
Folded Arm Blades [17/20]
Senbon Launcher [20/20]

3) What do you think is a staff members role within the board.

4) What will you do when you become staff?

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1) lol damn that's horrid. okay we'll move from the top down.

first that spoiler isn't working, though i'm not entirely certain if that's part of the test.

second, height is being labeled in meters. no human is able to be 300 meters tall.

third, 20kg is 44 pounds. can't possibly be such a lightweight without an elemental bloodline like kazechuushin.

fourth, age is too high without serious extenuating circumstances like the kamyuja's eternal imprisonment. and frankly a bit on the absurd side for a newer account that needs to start at d class.

fifth, birth country. i would prefer you change this to an actual location, but precedent is actually on the side of the vagueness offered currently, here: narutoforumrp.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=mistninjabios&action=display&thread=69113

sixth, "honohagakure" is mis-spelled. it should be "Konohagakure" or alternatively just Leaf for simplicity's sake.

seventh, specialists. one may not be a master of two seperate specialties. either go nijutsu master, genjutsu master, or ninjutsu and genjutsu SPECIALISTS

eighth, main weapon. not REALLY a problem i suppose, but one should quote the Dai Weaponry overview so that its clear EXACTLY what you have. also wepons can come singly or in sensible weapon pairs, so if you want to start with a second main weapon of the same type, state that you have two.

ninth, secondary weapons. explosive tags are now "A" ranked, so they cannot be started with anymore as one may only start with weapons of "C" rank or lower. plus, even when they were ranked "C" fifteen tags did not consume fifteen slots. so they should be removed and replaced with fifteen slots of "C" ranked items such as Kunai, which would take thirty to consume all fifteen slots should one want only kunai.

NOTE: these fifteen slots go in a "butt bag (type 1)" under apparel in the items index.

tenth, non-weapon items. one is technically permitted to keep these seperated from the combative secondaries if they so choose, but they are subject still to the fifteen slots ruling, and we dont have "bucket" as an item. if one wishes their character to carry around a bucket with them that's just fine, but it does not belong in the list of equipment. also one cannot have both a weapon item and a non-wepon item at creation anyway, so if you want the giant kunai you should remove this anyway.

eleventh, "character depth". appearance, personality, and history are all segments of this type of section, and what is listed under it belongs in those segments, specifically appearance.

twelfth, history. kage killing is illegal outside of events for the time being, and highly improbable for a "D" classed ninja. also relations to cannon characters is forbidden as canon characters do not and CAN NOT exist here. this being a NON CANON roleplay.


2) first, weight. as a "C" ranked puppet is weight should be considered as medium, and though the wieght limits are not stated for each category, 30 pounds seems too light. will wait for second oppinion.

second, slots. for a C rank sized puppet, C grade material will grant an additional 15 slots of capacity, totalling at 35 slots rather than 20, so feel free to add more items if you like - just remember to include them in the price.

third, description. this is supposed to be considered the longest and most in-depth section of the puppet, so i would expect it to be longer by another six lines minimum, reason being that you should be capable of stating at least four lines of description per size class, but otherwise fine. shouldn't be entirely as strenuous as a living character.

fourth, weapons. poison gas bomb should be poison gas bomb launcher to take up two slots, and the bombs themselves will be two per slot from there. which is fine considering you have unused slots. Senbon launcher uses up five slots, not three. so you're using now 22 slots, not 20. still fits, but make the fix. and fill the remaining slots if you like. also this self destruct core requires the user be chuunin and up, and is not listed in your equipment, despite being noted in the price. it consumes 4 slots, bringing you to 26.

fifth, price. please list the total price as well, which will be different from where it is now after you fill the empty slots, should you choose to do so, though the fact that you listed individual values as well is much appreciated despite being unecessary. makes staff's life just a bit easier. please note that c grade material has a value of NEGATIVE 100 per size, so you should be reducing the price by 300, not increasing.

sixth, limit. no puppet may be gained entirely for free. if obtained post-creation list if it must be bought, or if it is some manner of heirloom or gift to be RPd out, etc. If starting with it, list that.

once the appropriate modifications have been made, you'll have my 1/3

3) i would have to say the role of staff is to maintain a peacable environment OOC and to see to the overall upkeep of the site through grading of training, profiles, customs, and manageing funds, as well as through revamping out-of-date rules and techniques to fit in with the way they need to be in the present. I WOULD say that their role, too, would be to offer help and advice where needed or asked, but I don't feel that to be so. I think help should be offered by ANYONE, regardless of their ranking within the site, and that higher rankings like assistant and moderater simply advance ones authority to do exactly that.

4) Pretty much what I've always done, whith the addition of grading things, which I lacked the authority to do. In other words flit about offering advice in the suggestions and support, lurking in the cbox and handing out advice where asked there, and maybe making an ic post here and there.


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[Lannigans]

Vouch

[Ancestor Febrie]

Pretty good answers. You missed a thing though. Kazeraikou isn't a BL, it should be changed to Ryuugan and needs permission from Marri.

Also the person should choose 3 freebies + 3 starter techs since they want to start in a BL.

1/3 from me

[|Ayame Unbound|]

2/3

[👺 Usiel]

3/3