How to Fail 101 [IOSHI]

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My attempt at flow. Don't know if I really did it properly. Advice on how to do it and such would be mighty helpful

[|Ayame Unbound|]

I think Taro linked you a flow tut on page one. Try that :3

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Or you could just make me a sig.

[Taro. (FINISH HIM)]

Not to brag but after you looked at my tutorial (presumably after my post), your sigs greatly improved. Your use of C4Ds is becoming very nice and your style is becoming unique. Now I haven't done sigs in a long time but I still know my shit.

The sig you just put up does have flow.

good shit:
nice text
nice colors
beginner flow (just a nicer way of saying it's not that good C: )
nice effects
nice c4d

bad shit:
Render placement:

Renders should usually be centered like I said before. Now it is possible to have a non-centered render and have it look good, but since you still haven't grasped a lot of GFXing you should stick to having centered or near centered renders. Now I'm not commanding you here, but I am strongly recommending. The placement is just kind of weird with the render slanted and pointing downwards is all.

Render quality:

The render looks pretty shitty man. You can clearly see on the edges where you blurred it to make the pixels less prominent. Go somewhere like www.planetrenders.com or something to get nice quality, already cut renders.

-No depth
-No Lighting
-Blank space near text. This is why my sigs are usually somewhat small and compact. (My current sig I made a while ago and is abstract, which is why there is lots of blank space)

EDIT: Also, exit the thread in waterfall you son of a bitch I got the blood and exited the thread I've been waiting for you for like a month man wth! We need to get back to the village bro!