hi. battle me.

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Name: 'simply' che
Type of Class: battling
Referral Links: never had a battling
Additional Comments: I know the basics from reading ur other posts in ur Rp school. I wanna battle u [using my dead character] okay any helpful hintz would be appreciated. your move!

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Simple enough.

But before we begin, know this:
Battling is a technique, as I have stated so many times before. Remember to state anything and everything in your post; but make sure you don't overstep the limits of six seconds per post in the battle, otherwise it is possible for me to void out bits of unrealistically long posts, as it is for anybody battling you.

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The Arena

Kaizu wandered around the outside of the grassy meadow, sticking close to the sure cover of the trees. He trudged slowly along, hands in pockets, lost in thought but still maintaining a presence of mind. He knew that there had been reports of other Shinobi like himself - though people were rarely killed, it seemed like a good idea to keep himself alert.

A light breeze whispered through the meadow. Such a peaceful scene. How could it possibly mean trouble?

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(OOc; usually u rp teachers take forever to post. lol. Srry I feel in my posts they can be Godmody. Tell me if they are. Is this good enough.)

Ic; Reaching the grassy meadow, my place of solitude for which i need ever-so suddenly. I was greeted by the sight of a ninja one that, appeared to be from an enemy nation. This would be my time to strike, my time to kill, my time to feed. I inched closer now roughly ten meters away, surrounded by the overgrowth and shrubs. I knelt down to feel the earth. There would be blood spilled today. I reached for my kuni with a tag at my opponent.

The tag was hurled from my left hand, my dominant as I whirled through the tree giving signs of my presence. Only hoping my opponent would look back and see the tag and scurry away just in time for my jutusu to hit it's mark. I did the hand signs faster then I could comprehend, in this fight my chakra was somehow taking over me, leaving my brain and thought on the back burner.

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Suiton: Oxyhydro Conversion Technique [ f ]
Rank: B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Converts oxygen and hydrogen in the air into water.
Special: Automatic when performing a water jutsu.
Drawback: It is easy to exceed your chakra level when creating large amounts of chakra- the amount of water needed will automatically be created when you cast a water jutsu when you are not aroud a water source. Therefore, if you cast a technique and you do not have enough chakra to cast both the technique and create the amount of water necessary,
Description: After spending a large amount of time utilizing water techniques, the Water Shinobi begins to understand the true composition of water. They use this to such an effect that they can create water out of nothing. This is automatic when casting a water jutsu and there is no water source.
Limit: Must have 500 training points into techniques that focus only on Suiton no Jutsu. Once you have obtained 500 training points in Suiton techniques, they gain this technique automatically.

Pressure Jet [ 1 0 ]
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: User shoots a stream of water towards the opponent.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: Easier to dodge at longer distances.
Description: A simple jutsu utilizing the water release. User performs the hand seals Snake, Dragon then transfers charka to their throat, creating a steady stream of pressured water from their mouths, that then hits the opponent for D rank damage. The jet stream has a maximum range of 10 meters and travels in a straight line. Speed is equivalent to throwing a kunai.
Limit: Water Release.

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This is my training thread I'm starting, can you tell me what you think.

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Mmkay. Firstoff, please rewrite your first post - it was good, very good, and quite precise, but I'd like it to be a no-attacking first post battle. This will be a general rule throughout the arena, and pretty much always in actual full on battles in countries and stuff.

You training thread link just sends me to the homepage.

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Ok sorry I know I said battle me, but I need help on my training, this is my training thread. would you mind telling me what you think.

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[.// Two cents:

Your training posts are mainly lacking in length. Your word usage is great and your detail you be tweaked just a tad, not like nothing major, just like..an inch so it'll go along and flow nicely with the length you need to get those 10's.

<3

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xD

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Thanks for that Takkun

Kk, just let me say that she has a good point. While your wording is good, you need to maybe add one more paragraph into your posts.

Another pointer, and something that might slightly increase the amount of TP you get per post, is proper spacing. Sometimes you seem to skip over that spacebar, and it jumbles the post together and makes it look a bit messy.

Spell checks are good too. Proboards have them, handily, down the bottom there. No insult intended, just trying to help. Punctuation is a good idea too. These problems can be easily solved by writing out your posts on Microsoft Word first; they have one of the most accurate spelling & grammar checks around.

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Hi, what would be the most effective way for me to train genjutsu?

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A few suggestions would be:

1. Train on animals.
2. Train on other people.
3. Or, of course, you could simply train on yourself.

Mainly just try to use all options. Since Genjutsu is dealing with the mind, try to really tap into your character's thoughts.