Ryu's Character Interaction Thread

[Flower]

Rules:

You Have No Weapons
IIC Time: 3 Days
You have all jutsus on your bio.
Location:

It is in a forest that stretches out for 100 meters by 100 meters. The sun is only shining slightly, and bugs are coming out for it is just the beginning of spring. Water is shimmering on the leaves of all of the trees and it is truly a beautiful day. Each tree stretches up for 20 meters and there is a thick canopy of leaves above your head.

NPC In Progress:

SPOILER: Click to show

Ninjustu Master
1500 TP

I walked into the forest on the cool spring day, the sun shining off of my blade in a wonderful manner that I truly enjoyed. I looked up at the trees and at the wonderful bugs that were zooming by. "How lovely," I said aloud, and laid down on the grass, hoping that it wouldn't cause me to start itching. I waited to see if anyone would be joining me.

[zenoske1ryu]

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Yūkimaru was sitting in a tree relaxing, he had been working hard all day on his mission. It was his task to find and capture a mutant bear, this bear was a terrifying creature that had been scaring all the girls in Mo, it's name was Pedo-bear. Well at least he could take his mind off things for the moment, so he decided to take in the scenery. Such a beautiful place, the sun was shining down through the lush green leaves, illuminating the forest floor with the dancing lights.

The birds chirping chorus was music to his ears, he had considered falling to sleep on his branch. Although if he fell asleep here he would be out for hours, which could lead to the captain getting upset or Pedo-bear striking again. He let out a loud yawn and a over exaggerated stretch, ruining the back of his hands down the tree's coarse brown bark.

A simple lean to the right was all that was needed, for Yūkimaru to fall off the branch he was perched upon. As he preformed a flip, his white kimono would flicker the small breeze catching it. A few moments later Yūki would land on the floor, in a kneeling position. The impact from hitting the dry floor kicked up some dirt and dust, some of which setted on his long white hair. He ran his right hand through his messy hair sweeping it back out of his face, it was time to explore.

He walked through the forests thick green undergrowth, for the best part of five minutes still unable to find the Pedo-bear. But his search wasn't in vain, he did stumble upon a girl, “Hey, Hello there.”

[/color]. Yūkimaru wasn't going to mention the bear to the girl yet, as it could scare her. He gazed at her, his deep blue orbs examining her. Well she certainly looked interesting enough, she had a very light complexion similar to Yūkimaru. He hair was pink and pulled back into a ponytail, which seemed to suit her quite well. As for her clothing she seemed to have a black one-piece on. A belt around her waist seemed to secure the only weapon he could see, a large sword.
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[Flower]

[OOC:

Alright here is a few hints:

1) Character Interactions are not based upon length. Your length here is fine, but it appears longer than it actually is. If in post like this you shortened your font it might look a little better. Just a hint, you don't necessarily have to do this.

2) A good thing to do when beginning Character Interaction Threads is to include a picture on the intro post. It is considerate for other characters, and even though few people to do it looks a lot more professional on a first post.

Also, I love the way you commented, but only slightly, on my character's appearance. Good job.]

I looked at the man who was standing directly in front of me. He had a strange hair style, and eye style for that matter. It was truly interesting and I was hooked almost from the beginning. Was this some kind of jutsu or skill? The boy said hello and I responded readily. "Hi," I said from my position still on the ground, turning my head slightly. My light purple hair rubbed up against my cheek and I smiled at the boy, trying my best to please him with my look directly from the beginning. "I am Juliet," I said, "May I ask for your name?"

[zenoske1ryu]

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[Flower]

[OOC: I like the post Ryu. I meant smaller font, not less description. Also, I hope you found a picture you liked from the options I gave you.]

I watched the man sit down beside me and listened to him as he said his name was Yukimaru. It was an interesting name for sure, and I wanted to learn more about this new host of mine. But of course, I'd have to be careful. By just skimming his body I could tell that he was tough, possibly able to mold chakra, and if so I had to be very careful. I lifted my upper torso up off of the ground and looked at Yukimaru. My hair got into my face a little bit and I pushed it away.

"So, Yukimaru," I would say, "What kind of activites are you into? As long as we're sitting here all alone we might as well start a conversation about ourselves." I was trying to be as straight forward as possible, but also trying to glean much useful information from the man.

[zenoske1ryu]

May 27, 2011 7:08:34 GMT -7 @zenoske1ryu said:

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Yūkimaru was sitting in a tree relaxing, he had been working hard all day on his mission. It was his task to find and capture a mutant bear, this bear was a terrifying creature that had been scaring all the girls in Mo, it's name was Pedo-bear. Well at least he could take his mind off things for the moment, so he decided to take in the scenery. Such a beautiful place, the sun was shining down through the lush green leaves, illuminating the forest floor with the dancing lights.

The birds chirping chorus was music to his ears, he had considered falling to sleep on his branch. Although if he fell asleep here he would be out for hours, which could lead to the captain getting upset or Pedo-bear striking again. He let out a loud yawn and a over exaggerated stretch, ruining the back of his hands down the tree's coarse brown bark.

A simple lean to the right was all that was needed, for Yūkimaru to fall off the branch he was perched upon. As he preformed a flip, his white kimono

[/u] would flicker the small breeze catching it. A few moments later Yūki would land on the floor, in a kneeling position. The impact from hitting the dry floor kicked up some dirt and dust, some of which setted on his long white hair. He ran his right hand through his messy hair sweeping it back out of his face,[/u] it was time to explore.

He walked through the forests thick green undergrowth, for the best part of five minutes still unable to find the Pedo-bear. But his search wasn't in vain, he did stumble upon a girl, “Hey, Hello there.”[/color]. Yūkimaru wasn't going to mention the bear to the girl yet, as it could scare her. He gazed at her, his deep blue orbs[/u] examining her. Well she certainly looked interesting enough, she had a very light complexion similar to Yūkimaru[/u]. He hair was pink and pulled back into a ponytail, which seemed to suit her quite well. As for her clothing she seemed to have a black one-piece on. A belt around her waist seemed to secure the only weapon he could see, a large sword.
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[zenoske1ryu]

[atrb=cellpadding,10,true][atrb=border,0,true][atrb=cellspacing,0,true][atrb=width, 450, true][atrb=rules,none][atrb=valign,top][atrb=style, background: #2c2c2c; -moz-border-radius: 20px 0px 20px 0px; border-radius: 20px 0px 20px 0px][atrb=style,padding-top:15px;][atrb=align,center] OOC: Out of curiosity does the code work for you ? Or do you get [ /style ] at the top and bottom. Now that he had time to think properly he noticed how the girl looked like a ninja. It would make sense if she was, she had a black outfit and gloves probably to blend in at night times, her ponytail could help keep her hair out of the way. All in all Yūkimaru's curiosity was growing, he would remain cautious as he didn't yet know the girls true intentions. Judging from her body type, he should be able to over power her in close combat if the need arise. The girl began to shift positions, almost giving Yūki a nose bleed as he saw how large her breasts were. He started to go a little red in the face. "So, Yūkimaru,"

[/color] but regained his composure after she began to speak to him. "What kind of activites are you into? As long as we're sitting here all alone we might as well start a conversation about ourselves."[/color]

Hmm how to answer that, should he lie or not... Yūkimaru decided to tell her the truth. “I like to socialise, you know meet new people that kind of thing. How about you ?”
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[Flower]

[OOC: I just see style. Also, I liked this post well, I particularly like the usage of words that don't hold back. Most people tend to have their characters hold back their thoughts, and in a character interaction they should never do this. Thoughts of your character in character interactions are very important.]

I looked at him closely, examining Yukimaru's answer to my question. To meet new people? That was his response? Seemed like a weird thing for a shinobi to say, but shinobi came in all varieties, I couldn't write him off because of that. Also, even if he was a shinobi, what motive was behind this response? Was he flirting, cause it kind of said, "I want to get to know you." In that case I was up for a little flirting, even if he wasn't seeing how he reacted to a pretty girl would be interesting.

I pushed my body closer to his, since he was now on the ground, and scooted over to him. My hand would brush up against his leg as I looked closer into his face. "Really?" I would ask slightly. "I like to read and draw. But anyways, in regards to your socializing, is that what I am? A person for you to pick apart and socialize with?"

[zenoske1ryu]

You should be getting something like this, it explans why you asked for smaller text

[Flower]

[OOC: Got it that time, thanks. You can respond to my character's post when you're ready now.]

[zenoske1ryu]

Anyway I think I will leave my lesson thank you for your time

[Flower]

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