Jake's Character Interaction Thread

[Flower]

Rules:

You Have No Weapons
IIC Time: 3 Days
You have all jutsus on your bio.
Location:

It is in a forest that stretches out for 100 meters by 100 meters. The sun is only shining slightly, and bugs are coming out for it is just the beginning of spring. Water is shimmering on the leaves of all of the trees and it is truly a beautiful day. Each tree stretches up for 20 meters and there is a thick canopy of leaves above your head.

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Genjutsu Specialist
Taijutsu Specialist
500 TP

Julia walked into the forest and peered all around her. The bugs and birds were out and about and there was a single flower growing behind a tree. A ladybug was softly crawling along the petal. She looked at the bug, her rear end up in the air. She was wearing short shorts, and a rather revealing shirt, but she hadn't planned on meeting anyone today. Hopefully no one would see her in such a revealing outfit as this one, but if they did Julia wouldn't care so much. She had lived through worse.

[Ryusei]

Kazuko made his way through a large forest. There was much shade here, for the trees that grew within the forest blocked most of the sunlight with their large branches full of leaves. As he made his way through the forest he found an abundance of life. He came across a few animals as well as insects that he batted away with his hand. A few moments later he would find a women. She wore very revealing clothes that made Kazuko blush. He couldn't help but stare for a few moments before saying anything. "uh h-hello!" These were the only words he could mutter at the sight of such a voluptuous women.

[Flower]

[OOC: And so teaching begins. Alright, I liked the opening post, just a few tips:

First Off: With Character Interactions it is always helpful to add a picture of your character in the intro post. This is by no means necessary, and most people don't do it, but it makes a thread that much better. It's like saying, "We're just here to talk not battle, so let's get along. Here is my character."

Second Off: You did well in commenting on my character's clothing, however, she had already commented on this. It is true that you'd want to bring it up in your post, but also bring up something else about her that she hadn't mentioned, like her hair, or legs.

Third Off: You will also want to include stuff about yourself, such as a description of your appearance and clothing. This is very helpful for making your post better and helpful for the other person.]

Julia heard a noise and she turned around. Actually, a better word then turn would be spun. She almost screamed but was able to hold it in at the last minute as she caught sight of a boy in front of her. "Whoa, you scared me," Julia said, noticing that the boy was a little flustered. Suddenly she remembered the clothes that she was wearing. "Oh dear," Julia said, "I'm wearing such horrible clothing." Julia brought her arms over herself, trying to shield her body, but she knew it was a feeble attempt. "Ummm, I'm sorry for my appearance," Julia said, still trying to shield herself. "You don't mind do you? I'd love some company."

[Ryusei]

He was surprised when she asked him to stay. "S-sure!'" He said in the same nervous tone. He came closer, but maintained a slight distance from her. "Well I suppose you should know my name right? I'm Kazuko." He found it hard to keep eye contact when he spoke, only looking at her with quick glances that sometimes went farther below her eyes. He wasn't used to being around women of such beauty, but he tried his best to keep calm. "Oh! I almost forgot w-what's your name?" He would ask with an awkward smile.

[Flower]

[OOC: I liked this post, particularly the set up of your sentences. They compliment each other well. Also, I like the length decisions.]

Julia looked at this boy as he seemed quite embarassed, and she assumed it was because of her clothing. Julia started to lift her hands away from her body a little more then as she realized that it was okay. This boy assumed that she'd know his name and asked for hers. Julia looked up at the boy, now known as Kazuko, and she began to speak. "My name is Julia. You said that I would know your name, but how would I know it?" Julia asked truly curious. Julia's hands were slowly falling away from her body, revealing the clothes a little bit more and the skin underneath.

[Ryusei]

He blushed even more as Julia’s arms revealed more of her body. He was trying his best to keep it together, but it was beginning to become unbearable. He then took a moment to calm himself by taking in a deep breath. He moved slightly closer to Julia while also standing with a much more upright posture. “Well you see Julia; I'm a very famous ninja from Konoha, so it would surprise me if you didn’t know my name.” This was of course a boast, but he kept a smirk on his face to seem confident in his words. He was taking advantage of the fact that she did not know him too well. “I come to the forest to get away from all hordes of women chasing me throughout the village.” His words of course were all false. Truthfully, none of the women in Konoha paid him any heed, nor was he at all famous. He was trying to make it seem as if he was some sort of renowned ninja within his village, in a feeble attempt to impress her. “You could say I’m sort of a ladies’ man back home.” He hoped that she would not see through his lies, but he had already made himself look like a fool.

[Flower]

[OOC: I am impressed. Things you did right:

1) You noticed the movement of the arms. Very good commenting on this.
2) You described your movements forward. Wonderful.
3) Once again you made your sentences flow. Great.

Things to improve:

1) Your personality link from the second post to your third are strange. First he is nervous, but then he is willing to lie. I can understand how Julia not knowing him could change his personality, but I don't know about this much. Might want to examine these things in the future.
]

Julia noticed the boy suddenly had a surge of confidence, like a battery touching a wire. Julia listened to his boasting and immediately saw through it. Instead of looking at him as a boy of his age then she saw him as a smaller brother, who lies occasionally. Julia wasn't aware that she was having these thoughts, but those were the processes going on in her head. Julia noticed his step closer and she was fairly curious as to why he was coming forward...it made it harder to shield herself.

"Is that so?" Julia said, "Such a strong shinobi." Julia laughed and tried to step back a little. She didn't want this man close enough to her so that he would think her slutty because of her clothing or some other part of her body. She was also hoping he wouldn't notice, and if he did he wouldn't take it as an insult.

[Ryusei]

Julia had seen through his façade. She even proceeded to laugh at him “I guess that didn’t work out for me, but I shouldn’t have lied to you in the first place, that’s not really like me.” Her appearance had at first made him nervous, but after talking to her for awhile he was beginning to feel more comfortable around her. He then decided to sit on the ground to take some weight off of his legs. “What’s a girl like you doing in the forest anyway?” He said while messing with the grass that covered the ground below him. "It's not everyday you find someone randomly in the forest."

[Flower]

[OOC: What I noticed this time is that you didn't comment on my characters movements. When interacting with other characters one should also comment on their movements, or state that he didn't notice the movements. I'm referring to my character backing up by the way. It would've been nice to see some sort of reference to that in your post.]

Julia was smiling still, as she wasn't sure whether Kazuko had bluntly just lied, or whether he had tried to be joking around. She was kind of hoping that it was the later. He took a seat on the grass and started to toy with the ground and he asked why she'd been in the forest. "Well," Julia said, "It might seem kind of weird, but I love flowers. I come out here and pick them occasionally, then bring them home, and put them in a vase of water. I'm like to make floral arrangements." Julia was wondering if she had said too much, and decided that she should probably calm down over the simple plants in the presence of someone else.

[Ryusei]

Julia kept a warming smile directed at Kazuko, while he looked at her with curiosity as she began to tell him about her love for flowers. He admired how open she had been with him, for most people would have told him that it was none of his business. "Oh, and speaking of flowers, let me show you something." He would then take both of his hands and begin making a few hand seals. After awhile he would extend his left arm and leave only his thumb, middle, and index fingers open. He would then focus his chakra along these fingers while forming a triangle with the tips of them. From the middle of the triangle first came a bright orange stem growing until it reached proper size. Then a bud started to form from the top of the stem, which blossomed with six beautiful petals once it had completely formed. The flower was entirely made of flames, shifting from bright orange to dark red on all parts of the flower. "It's probably one of the most beautiful flowers I've ever seen." He said as his gaze focused on the flower he had created. He would then extend his arm towards Julia so she could get a closer look at the flower, but making sure to maintain a safe distance from her to avoid burning her.

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Hanabi no Shinka (Fire Flower of Evolution)
Rank: “E” Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu, Offensive, Defensive, Pre-requisite
Effect: Creates a small flower made of flames with six petals that are each six inches long.
Special: “Hand Seals”- Rat, Dragon, Monkey, Rabbit, Tiger, extending the left hand away from the body, then using the thumb, index, and middle fingers in a triangle-like formation.
Drawback: This ability has no real value beyond using it within a combo attack.
Description: This jutsu creates a flower made entirely of flames. The user performs the required hand seals, channeling chakra through the left hand’s thumb, index, and middle fingers. The left hand is then moved away from the body, and the three mentioned fingers form a triangle shape, while the other two fingers close like the user would make a fist. The built chakra then move upwards and out of the hand, sparking to life and creating a flower with six petals that are six inches long each. If the triangle formation is ever broken, then the entire flame disappears. This ability can almost be treated like a fighting style stance. Each use of a Hanabi no Shinka will require a set amount of petals to be used; after the petals have all been used, the ability must be re-performed. Any time that a part of the Hanabi no Shinka has been destroyed, so long as the whole flower is not destroyed, it will slowly regenerate unless it has been used for an attack.
Limit: Requires the Fire Release

[Flower]

[OOC: You improved greatly with the notes on my character's movements. Nice. Now, let me ask you something, how far do you want to go with Character Interactions? I mean, 1 person, 2 people, etc.]

Julia watched as Kazuko made a flower out of flames at the palm and fingers of his hands. He was talking about how this was the prettiest flower he'd ever seen, and he outstretched it to let her see as well. Julia was on her gaurd, prepared to save herself if the boy attacked, but this didn't seem to be his intentions. Julia looked closely at the burning flames and felt the glow of warmth on her face. "Oh wow," Julia said. "It's beautiful." Julia sat down next to him then, forgetting her clothing for a moment. Had she noticed her clothing she'd see that it was very revealing lying next to Kazuko on the ground. "Can you attack with it too?" Julia asked genuinely curious.

[Ryusei]

((OOC: Hmm, well it might be a good idea for me to practice with more people.))

Julia had been intrigued by the flower he created. She now laid on the ground next to him, making Kazuko blush once again as he tried to keep his eyes off of the revealing parts of her body. It almost made him forget the question she had asked him as he started to feel the warmth of her body next to his. "N-not yet, but with some more training I might actually find a use for it." As time passed the nervous feeling he had eventually went away, and he felt more comfortable being this close to her. "Some people believe that the only thing that comes from fire is destruction, but I'm able to see the beauty in it." His expression changed to sadness for a brief moment, but this immediately became into a smile as he turned to face her. "I know I must sound silly, but what do you think of fire Julia?" He wanted to learn her opinion on the subject, wondering if she could possibly feel the same way.

[Flower]

[OOC: Brilliant post, you are doing good, Jake. Especially integrating my character's movements into the post. It isn't too long and isn't too short. Great. And I also liked the warmth of her body thing, adding sensations is always good, but remembering while doing so it can be easy to play someone's character for them. Keep in mind that you never want to do this. As for more than one, if you want to I can add them in at any time. Do you want to? If you'd rather keep practicing with one and switch later that is fine too.]

Julia listened to Kazuko speak and was starting to let her gaurd down more and more around him as he did so. He spoke about his feelings toward fire and asked for her own in response. Julia looked to him and said, "I've never really thought about it. I guess, in battle I've always seen it as destruction, but after seeing that flower I'm not so sure." Julia was getting closer to his body now, peering closer at the fire, and as she would do so her legs would graze up against his. Julia would notice this slight movement but would leave her legs there, feeling more comfortable with Kazuko now.

[Ryusei]

((OOC: I'll leave it up to you))

Her leg brushed up against his, making their bodies closer than ever now. He stared deeply into her eyes, the glow that came from his flower reflecting off of her pretty blue irises. "It's taken me awhile to notice it, but you really do have beautiful eyes Julia." He would say with a smile. He hoped this compliment would not turn her away, but Kazuko liked speaking his mind around her. He started to shy away from Julia turning his attention towards the flower, believing that she could possibly think lesser of him. "I'm sorry I must have sounded pretty stupid just then." He felt as if he had ruined a perfect moment he had been sharing with her, but he hoped this would not make her leave, for he really did enjoy her company.

[Flower]

[OOC: Good. Honestly Jake I think you are starting to get the hang of this thing. Mostly all that you can glean now is through experience and learning from tid bit errors that I can point out along the way. Of course I'll keep helping you with these things here, but I justed wanted to let you know where your progress is.]

Julia listened to his comment about her eyes and she enjoyed the comment. However, even as she enjoyed the comment it made her slightly embarassed. She didn't know how to feel about this man, after all, he might just be lying to her. He then said that he must sound somewhat stupid and Julia looked up in a hurry. "I don't think that's stupid at all," Julia said. She leaned a bit closer to Kazuko then and pushed him down to the ground, hoping that she wouldn't be burnt by his fire. "Here, lie down," Julia said, and she would lie down right beside him on the grass.

"You know," Julia would then say, "I'm wondering why you'd say something like that. Hmmm, Kazuko?"

[Ryusei]

((OOC: Hmmm, I would like to practice battling, but the only jutsu I have right now are a bunch that require other techniques to follow up on to really be any use and at D-ranked I don't plan on using much ninjutsu, so maybe after some more training I'll ask for some battle lessons, but as for this lesson before we stop I'd like to try adding more people as you suggested earlier.))

His technique was canceled as his body was pushed to the ground by Julia, making a resounding thud as he hit the ground. She questioned his motives for his comment on her eyes as they laid side by side on the ground. "I guess I kind of said it out of impulse." He wasn't used to the emotion he felt while lying next to her upon the earthen floor, but he no longer felt as if he had to hold back. He would then turn his body towards Julia. "Don't get me wrong, I meant what I said, but if I'm making you feel uncomfortable I won't let it happen again." In truth there were many other warming compliments he could say to Julia, but he didn't want to say empty words that had no meaning to them other than trying to gain false affection for his own personal gains.

[Flower]

[OOC: Alright, then let's try that after the couple next post. Sound cool?]

Julia listened to what Kazuko had to say and realized that it had made her feel a bit uncomfortable, but lying her with him on the grass was making her feel flirtatious, and she didn't want it to stop now. In fact, she didn't actually believe it was all just feeling flirtatious, perhaps she really liked this boy. He was nervous and shy, but somehow he was fun. Julia leaned forward close to him and said, "I don't mind at all." Now she could see his dark eyes and wanted to reach forward and touch him, but instead Julia took a different approach. "So, are you use to my clothing yet?" Julia asked. She took her hand and grazed it along Kazuko's face and leaned forward to have their lips meet.

[Ryusei]

((OOC: Yea sounds good to me.))

Julia laid her hand upon his cheek as she came closer. At the same time Kazuko also leaned closer, and their lips finally met in a passionate kiss. He would put his left hand on the side of her curvaceous figure as he continuously pressed his lips upon hers. Kazuko kept silent, letting his actions speak for themselves. He was astounded by the fact that he was now kissing the girl he had once been barely able to talk to. He liked the feeling he got around her and he didn't want it to stop. He would move his body closer and continue to kiss her, her skin soft and warm to the touch. He would gently go to hold the hand that had not been touching his face with his right, hoping she wouldn’t back away.

[Flower]

Julia was glad to find that this man was kissing her back and when he gripped her side she wondered what she was doing, how could she be so impulsive. She was about to pull away, interrupting their love scene, when a voice came from behind. "Well, hello," a man would say, "Having fun are we?" Julia jumped from surprise as a man came walking into the forest holding a great sword, having blonde hair and black clothing. His blonde hair was spiked and clearly made neat by gel. Julia immediately scooted a little ways from Kazuko and tried to shield herself with her hands, hoping that while she tried to cover her body Kazuko would think of something to say.

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Ninjutsu Master
500 tp

[Ryusei]

An unrecognized voice came from the forest. He got to his feet quickly, turning away from Julia to find a man with blonde hair of medium length. He wore a white collar shirt with a strange looking jacket, but the main thing he focused on was the large blue sword that he carried. The weapon that he held so openly made Kazuko uneasy. He would take his attention off the man for a brief second to look back at Julia. She was beginning to cover herself once again. Shielding himself in front of her, Kazuko would look back at the man. “Who are you, and what do you want?” He said giving the man a stern look. He didn’t think he had a chance if they were to battle, but he wasn’t about to let him hurt Julia.