Daichi's Training Thread

[Flower]

[OOC:

So alright, let us begin. You are going to make the first post, so go through the index and find a tech you wanna learn. I will train with you, as a team thing. For your first post just make an intro post, no need to start training without your teammate first. I will help guide you through the training thing, and try to give you hints along the way. After we use this tech for teaching you can always copy and paste your training that you wrote here into your training thread and learn the techs.

So in other words, find a tech and let's begin.
]

[Y]

Entering Lily and Rose's mansion, I intend to train. They plan on teaching me. So I decided to see what they can do. I want to learn to have power over living plants. This is a new desire for me. I hjave never really considered plants like this before. the twins claim they have.

I knock on the brass knocker. I am ready. I have my bow and kunai.

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Mokuton no Jutsu (Wood Release Skill)
Rank: "B"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Wood. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Wood Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: Must have Doton no Jutsu (Earth Release Skill) and Suiton no Jutsu (Water Release Skill).
OOC: Short post. Didn't know what to do. don't have water or wood yet. Those will be for my apartment.

[Flower]

Lily answered the door, her sister Rose residing inside of her body. Lily then looked at Daichi and said, "Welcome, it's great to see you." Both Lily and Rose were wearing their normal clothing, and had their great sword with them. The boy told them about the training that he needed help with and Lily replied, "I would be happy to help you learn the wood release. Please come this way." Lily would lead Daichi back to the garden of their home where there was an abundance of plants and life. Lily would then try to help Daichi as soon as possible.

Lily tore a peice of bark off of the nearest tree and would hand it to Daichi. Lily would then say, "Daichi, try to push your chakra into those plant molecules enough to make a scratch in this peice of bark. When you are ready..."

[Y]

Moving before Lily could finish the sentence, I would gather chakra. I would take the bark. Lily was refering to plants on a molecular level. i would prefer cellular, because Ia human can grasp the size of a cell.

Plant cells are made of water and nutrients from soil. That is where it all comes from. So I gahter my chakra into the bark. I reach into some of the cells. I withdraw water from the mso they die of. The should kill some of the wood. Then a little chakra ewould shape the wood with a slash mark. I allow the water to be gone. Then i press with chkra. The bark barely is compressed. nothing on a big scale.

I try earth. Nutrient deprivation. I take the nutrients from soil. The plan is made of earth. I should be able to manipulate the plant by using the nutrients as building blocks. I force all of the minerals fro mthe cells to the side. I push. Water flows out of the bark a little. That and a gooey, partially decomposed mess is formed. It should of worked. Wood is made of two elements. Earth and water form wood. Using those two things, wood should of been easy.

Now to try pure ofrce of chakra. A lousy technique for any ninja to attempt. At this point it is frustration. I grunt. Then I reach out with chakra towards a section of the bark. I try to swipe in at the wood. Instead the cells just are squeezed as my muscle cells are by signals from my brain. I try to make a blade of chakra and slash. This is to no avail. Wood needs to molded some other way. Angry I finally ask for help. I look up at the older girl. "How?" I ask simply, my braid flicking by my fore head.

Before she could answer I tr yagain. I combine the two elements. I grip the cells. I channel chakra into every bit of the wood. Then Icompress. I put the force of wood and water. I heave the cells apart at a certain point. some are split in the process. I try to avoid that. I want the cells to live. I attempt to control the cells, not to force them, but to have them release bonds to neighboring cells, then make new bonds when I get them into place. Of course I don't speak cell, and I can tel l the wood took damage from my sculpting.

[Flower]

[OOC: Alright, try to improve your grammar. When a staff member looks at grading this can be a big influence. Also, go into more detail on your deprivation of the nutrients in the cells. Say something more influenced like, "I concentrated on my chakra and making it enter the cells. It was difficult to move my chakra past the cells walls, but I did it with maximum concentration. The chakra entered the cells and I started to force the chakra to enter the water molecules." If you are more descriptive in these small ways they can add up to enormous amounts of writing that will be graded.

This seems to be your main problem, that you aren't descriptive enough in this regard. Visualize it in your mind, every aspect, and describe these aspects through your training. Alright, let's try some more. Let me see your improvement.]

"Yes," Lily said, "It is difficult to do, but what you have to do is have your chakra tear apart the cells on a molecular level. Molecules are smaller than cells. Have your chakra enter the molecules themselves." Rose watched all of this with interest. Lily walked forward and grabbed a bit more bark and laid it out in front of Daichi in case he would need more, which it seemed like he just might. "Concentrate your chakra better," Rose put in.

[Y]

[OOC: I was too tired to grammar check that night. ]

"I know what a molecule is. I here molecules are impossible for humans to grasp the size of. I wanted something I could understand. I will obey you, despite what I believe." She tells me to actually rip the cells. Wouldn’t that kill part of the bark? I will obey Lily regardless. Channeling my chakra, I go after the mutilated bark. I feel all of my chakra. I focus all of my attention on the tips of my finger. I feel where the cells meet together to be strongest.

“I feel the cell wall.” I notify Lily. I move my chakra along and feel the natural resistance of the bark. My chakra flows into small gaps between cells. No wonder It was harder earlier! The cells grab each other as tightly as possible. I target a line of cells. These cells seem to have been slightly neglected in the nutrient department. Now I narrow my chakra more. I understand the concept of molecules. They are tiny little pieces of matter that vibrate at different speeds. They are composed of atoms, which are composed of different amounts of protons, neutrons, and electrons. Wood is mostly carbon. Carbon has six of each type of particle. This makes it a not too small, but not large size of atom. There are lots of carbon atoms in each of these molecules.

Now I push my chakra. The molecules are dense together. The water and everything makes it hard to grasp my chakra around the right places. I push in my chakra. I look long and hard at the wood. I need to focus on my fingertips as I slide my fingers over the wood. My fingers are alive with chakra. I move my finger back and forth as my chakra grasps the molecules. Instead of breaking down the chains, I push my chakra ll around the molecules composing that line of cells. This will kill some cells, but here I go.

I push my chakra to both sides. It is way harder than expected. I need to push all the weight in that cell wall. I move my fingers to the side. My chakra seems to cling to the greater source. It drags the molecules apart. I feel the stress. The dragging doesn’t go long before the chakra disperses. I hold my finger in place for a little while. The chakra reestablishes its layer. I drag again. It pulls the molecules further and further apart. A jagged hairline tear becomes visible. Now that the chakra is becoming further apart I can apply more chakra to the molecules. The tearing gets easier and easier until I have a jagged scar in the wood. “Was that right, Lily?” I hope I am doing this correctly.

{OOC: Make this thread your last priotrity in the school. I am doing fine, just want to see if you can do me any good.]

[Flower]

[OOC: Thank you for letting me put this as a last priority, and may I say, wow. This post showed much improvement from your first one. Another little tip that is considered training and will get you training points is visualization excersises. This includes things like, "I visualized my chakra entering the cell wall and pushing through the pores, then entering the very water molecules, and soon my chakra listened and moved into the hydrogen and oxygen molecules."]

Lily looked at Daichi and smiled. "That's perfect," she said. She had noticed potiental progress, but he was a far ways away from mastering the wood release. "Now," Lily said, "You need to open that tear you just made. This training is designed to get your chakra accustomed to wood, and the next time is to learn to pressurize it on a small scale. Have your chakra pressurize the wood's cells in order to tear apart the fracture from the inside out." Lily smiled, he truly was excelling.

Rose meanwhile was moving her body outside of Lily's to get a better look at the boy. She wanted to see at a closer range how well he was doing, and be available if help was needed.

[Flower]

There has not been a post for over 20 days now. Lockable?

[Flower]

Locked