George's Training Thread

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[OOC:

So alright, let us begin. You are going to make the first post, so go through the index and find a tech you wanna learn. I will train with you, as a team thing. For your first post just make an intro post, no need to start training without your teammate first. I will help guide you through the training thing, and try to give you hints along the way. After we use this tech for teaching you can always copy and paste your training that you wrote here into your training thread and learn the techs.

So in other words, find a tech and let's begin.
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[gbeth721]

Kuroryu steps into the fighting ring, clad in his usual black fighting trunks and a black muscle shirt. Placing his hands together and bringing them in front of his chest, this is his way of paying homage, showing gratitude and honoring the sensei (the ritual called Wai Kru).

(OOC: This is the one that I'd like to learn, please let me know if I should put another one in its place)

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Pra Yaikae (Swinging Elbow)
Rank: " D ", "C"
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: A Horizontal Elbow Strike.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture The Boxer swings up the tip of the right elbow to the opponent's jaws and steps the right foot forwards. This trick is used for attack, defense, or escape. It is of importance that the user keeps their guard high and tight when executing elbows. User should never reach for the elbow strike. Should be thrown at clinch range. When using the elbow attack, user's elbow should be between 45 and 90 degrees angle away from the head. When the user learns the "C" Rank version the user hits with the sharp pointy bone part of the elbow that causes cutting damage against the opponent. When learning the "C" Rank version the effects carry over to other elbow strikes in Muay Thai. To Protect Wipes the left arm or throws the left arm to the left. (If User knows Horizontal High Elbow Strike (Elbow #1) in Krav Maga, the user does not need to learn this Technique.)
Limit: Must learn from a Muay Thai Master

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[OOC: Okay, when training you wanna make sure to put your jutsu in spoliers. If you don't know what that is look below:

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Jutsu Here
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Second, you need to bold the rank of the jutsu you want to learn. Besides that let's get started.
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Jacob stepped into the arena, he had black hair and a nice figure, along with completely black clothing and a particularly nice face. He was in the fighting clad area and understood that he was here to train a boy. He was suppose to teach him the swinging elbow move. Jacob said to the boy, "Alright, let's begin, show me a bit of your training in the taijutsu right now. Swing your elbow forward at my left arm as hard as you can. You won't hurt me."

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(OOC: My bad...I don't know how to put this in bold so I colored it red, is that okay? If not can you please tell me how to put it in bold text?)
Kuroryu swung his left elbow forward, the tip of it more bent as if to not only hit with the point of the elbow but with the tip and the back of the forearm. As he did this he stepped forward with his left foot, turning his body at the hip to put more force into it.

SPOILER: Click to show

Pra Yaikae (Swinging Elbow)
Rank: " D " - "C"
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: A Horizontal Elbow Strike.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture The Boxer swings up the tip of the right elbow to the opponent's jaws and steps the right foot forwards. This trick is used for attack, defense, or escape. It is of importance that the user keeps their guard high and tight when executing elbows. User should never reach for the elbow strike. Should be thrown at clinch range. When using the elbow attack, user's elbow should be between 45 and 90 degrees angle away from the head. When the user learns the "C" Rank version the user hits with the sharp pointy bone part of the elbow that causes cutting damage against the opponent. When learning the "C" Rank version the effects carry over to other elbow strikes in Muay Thai. To Protect Wipes the left arm or throws the left arm to the left. (If User knows Horizontal High Elbow Strike (Elbow #1) in Krav Maga, the user does not need to learn this Technique.)
Limit: Must learn from a Muay Thai Master

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[OOC: Putting it in red would be fine, but allow me to show you how to bold.


[b] Text here [/b]

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[gbeth721]

(OOC: Okay, I bolded it)

Kuroryu finished his elbow strike at Jacob-Sensei, "Like this?" he swung his elbow, again bending his elbow so that it hit with not just the point, but with the back of his forearm. Again he swung his hip and stepped forward to put more force into it.

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[OOC: Okay, we need to go over a lot here. For one training post you can get 10 training points. Because of this many people try to write enough in their training post so that they get the full 10 tp rather than get 1 tp every post. For a full 10 tp you'd need to write about four times as much as you just did, possibly five times as much. Try lengthening your post. Although, I realize it is hard with the fact that I'd have to block your attack but that's what I was trying to tell you when I had my character say, "You won't hurt me." I was hoping you'd have your arm bounce off and continue training, but I guess I should've clarified better. Anyways, go on with this new information.]

Jacob stopped the elbow thrust with ease. "Not enough force," he said. When his student threw another elbow once again it was blocked easily. "Come on, more power into your blade, and keep the stance steady," Jacob said. "Experience will help, hit my arm repetitively."

[gbeth721]

(OOC: Okay, this is a start, or so I believe...I might have to look up some Muay Thai on this site to find out other ways of putting force behind the blow.)

"Hai, Jacob-Sensei," Kuroryu said.
He began with his Jod Muay stance; he stood up straight, ducked his chin into his collarbone to be level with his shoulders, and kept his feet separated at a 90 degree angle, his right leg forward and his left leg positioned, foot going to the left. He raised his shoulders to make a guard with his forearms and fists.
His idea was to start with small blows, then make them progressively stronger with time.
He wasn't doing this to wear out the sensei, knowing that the sensei would just block every attack. He was testing himself to see if he could build strength and force gradually with more hits.
This sensei was strong, he had not felt the force that Kuroryu put into it. That just meant he had to go further, but for now he would have to deal small blows first, then get more force.
He made it a final goal to knock the sensei back with the force of his elbow. That will be the progress point. It was a long ways away, but he was willing to work for it.
Kuroryu stepped forward with his left leg, while swinging his elbow with the tip, just the tip this time. He pivoted his left hip to go forward with the blow, throwing his entire body into it.
Now that he had his foot forward he would strike the sensei three times like that, leaning back and forth, pivoting his hip accordingly. Every third strike he would step back and hit just like he did with his first strike, only with the force of the third blow being put into his elbow.

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[OOC: Okay, that training would be around 5 tp or so. Still not a complete 10. Your doing good with training, but put in some stuff about accuracy too. If you don't always hit your mark you can manipulate this to make your post longer. Also, your post still need to be longer so that you can get to a full 10 tp everytime.]

Jacob took the blows continuously, watching on as his student kept working on blow after blow. Jacob then stopped and said, "Alright, now we are going to work on accuracy, use this dummy and try to hit it in the neck continuously with your attack."

[gbeth721]

"Hai Jacob-Sensei." He nodded his understanding. He went to the dummy, carefully going into his stance; knees straight, the front of the left foot facing his left, keeping his feet at a 90 degree angle. He raised his shoulders and elbows, tucking his chin against his collarbone. Right now was accuracy training, and he was a little nervous. Within the space of a second he went at it, stepping forward with his left foot and pivoting his left hip to put more force into it.
His elbow went right into the dummy's chest with a crash. His elbow bounced off as he leaned back, then swinging his body forward he attacked it again, a little higher this time. His elbow crashed into the dummy's chin, so close! As he withdrew his elbow he took a moment to stare at the dummy's neck. A second later he drove his elbow into the dummy's lower neck.
He began to hit the dummy repeatedly, hitting the chin, the collar and the neck. But he wasn't going to stop there, he was going to make sure he would be able to hit the dummy exactly in the neck, repeatedly. He began to hit it recklessly until he saw he was off-stance. He went back into his stance, feet at the same 90 degree angle, shoulders high, chin tucked into his collar. He swung his elbow, this time angling it to knock the dummy over by using the point of his elbow and the back of his forearm, the space around the elbow tip. He struck the dummy in the neck, but it only cracked a little bit. He wanted to knock the dummy over, so chances are he was going to have to combine force and accuracy to knock it down.
He began to strike it, but in slow motion to get some form of muscle memory going. He went into his stance. This was it; break it or go home.
He made sure he was in his stance correctly, knees straight, feet 90 degrees apart, shoulders up. Without sparing another thought he threw his elbow with all of his strength, pivoting his left hip in a complete twist, while at the same time applying the muscle memory he aquired from hitting the dummy so many times. He smashed into it, the head bent at the neck, then snapped and fell forward to Kuroryu's feet.
Kuroryu faced Jacob-Sensei and bowed, his hands together in front of his chest.

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[OOC: Alright, still needs to be a bit longer. Also, with accuracy training, or any training for that matter, you can write about visual focus and concentration and it will count as tp. For example:
"I visualized my hand pushing into the body of the dummy, smashing through the wood, and although this didn't help my training a great deal it did improve the blow."

Jacob was impressed with the boy's improvement. Now for something a bit harder. "Alright," Jacob said, "now we are going to work on brute force. See this sheet of metal? It's a lot harder than a training dummy. All you have to do is dent the metal. That is easier said than done. You will have to concentrate on the strength in your forearm, focus on that as a catalyst." Jacob motioned toward the metal sheet and for his student to begin.

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