Sita's Battle Thread

[Flower]

[OOC: Before we begin do you have any questions?]

[shadowdance]

How do I battle without slipping into God modding? I just having trouble altogether. Help please, i'd be so greatful.

[Flower]

[OOC: Alright, well, I guess we'll learn through experience. So let's begin.]

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Ninjutsu Master
3000 TP

Siris stepped out on to the 100 meters by 100 meters desert ground. It was lovely and hot all at the same time. His clothes were his normal white shirt and relatively long pants, but the pants didn't bug him today. He looked up to the sky and prayed for a fight. With his 5 kunai, 20 hira shuriken, 4 fragment grenades, and 3 smoke grenades. He was prepared for one. He also had his air blasters inside of his palms. He wondered if there was anyone out there to fight...

[shadowdance]

So this is what a battle Field looks like? Nice, spacious plenty of room to improve my training. Silently I walked out into the opened space until the feeling of being watched made the little hairs upon my neck stand up in aware. I did a full turn and when my eyes fell upon a stranger stare right at me, I glared and then approach aware of my surroundings.

As I neared him, I was first to speak. "What are you doing out here in a place like this?" I gripped my fan and made sure that my other weapons which are 2 knifes tied to my thigh, all 9 Shuriken and wire. I should have brought my kunai with me but for a reason, I didn't.

[Flower]

[OOC: Okay, this is a mistake a lot of people tend to make. Always and I mean always state, if you get the chance to, how far away from an opponent you are. Above you should've stated how far away from me you were, and stated it so that it benefited you. If you are tai then it should've been a short distance, if mid it should've been 10 meters, and if long it should've been around 30 meters. Please repost that with the distance you are away from me so that you can remember to do it. ]

[shadowdance]

[OOC: OK, lets try again.]

I am a woman with regrets. My shoulders sagged as the day's heat and my high heels made the short walk even harder than expected. The sun shone heavily upon my shoulders as I walked through the desert. There are no clouds within the sky but the sun was making patterns upon the sandy earth. The sound of earth crunching under my heels gave out a rhythm of comfort as I made a short cut through to my destination. My black leather leggings clung tight to my skin as well as my Edwardian hourglass corset, making it hard for me to breathe. But to add to my comfort was my butt bag which is always strapped to my right side for easy access. Within my bag held items of wire, all 9 shuriken, 4 kunai knifes and 2 knifes in which I normally have planted within my boots. Upon my back was my large battle fan which leaves me loaded with protection. As I silently rush my way through the desert the feeling of someone or something watching me makes the hairs upon my neck stand up. I stopped suddenly within my tracks and turn in a full 360 degree motion but as I stare where I start from, a young male catches my eye. And like I sensed, he is watching me. I hiss low in a warning before I shrug and approach him with aware. I know instantly that he is a shinobi for I see his butt bag but what it held is the question. As I approach him I grip my fan in case I need to use it as a shield but within talking distance I stop. I was the first to speak, but as I did so, I unclipped my fan and held it in front of me, arms length away from his figure. “What are you looking at?” I growl and slip into a stance in case he strikes without replying.

[OOC: There, I had more time to reply. Since I am on a A rank mission and doing a competition with Kumo, I'm busy. Thanks for your time though I had to put my chuunin exams aside.]

[Flower]

[OOC: Okay, you'd still want to put the exact distance in meters, but I guess you can just keep that in mind.]

Siris listened as he heard someone and then saw a girl as she shouted, "What are you looking at?" Siris sighed, how annoying. But...he did want a fight and this girl seemed just the person to participate. She had the look, the eyes, the weapons. Siris thought that he could have some fun with this one...He drew his head up and looked into her eyes and said, "I hope that you won't hold it against me if I kill you, but I will allow you to make the first move." Siris smiled, let's see how good she actually is...

[OOC: Also, I gave you another chance to state the exact distance, like 10 meters or 15.]

[shadowdance]

Sorry for wasting your time. But I have to stop this lession. I'm simply too busy. Have things to do and only had enough time to do some training before I am off.

I apologize for wasting your time.
But with the teaching you did taught me, the distance part, I wont forget it. Thanks.

[Flower]

Sure, and no problem. I enjoyed it.