A slight issue.

[Naota]

Debaidarei (Soul Divider)
Rank: B, A, S
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: The user divides a ninjutsu in half, causing it to crash harmlessly on either side of the user.
Special: --
Drawback: Consumes an equal amount of chakra as the ninjutsu being divided. Can only be used six times daily before the sword is too divide ninjutsu anymore.
Description: The user charges chakra into their sword, and then swings downward, slashing it in half. The two halves will veer of front the slash point at 22.5 degree angles, creating a total of a forty-five degree angle of safety around the user. This technique can only be used to divide a ninjutsu one rank below the user's rank in this technique.. Certain ninjutsu, ones that have no tangible form, eg. Ototon and the like, cannot be divided.
Limit: Must learn from a Protegera Nushi or higher.

Mirarei (Mirror Soul)
Rank: A, S
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Reflects a ninjutsu back in the direction it came from.
Special: --
Drawback: Consumes a rank higher than the amount of chakra required to use the ninjutsu. Can only be used four times a day before the sword is too weak to handle more.
Description: The user slashes out with their katana, batting at a ninjutsu and reflecting it back where it came from, a direct 180 degree direction change. This technique can only reflect a ninjutsu two ranks below the user's rank in this technique. Certain ninjutsu, like ones without tangible form, eg. Ototon and the like, cannot be reflected.
Limit: Must learn from a Protegera Nushi or higher. Must have the cooresponding rank in Debaidarei.

Kyanseru Rei (Cancel Soul)
Rank: S
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: The user extends their bare hand, negating a ninjutsu.
Special: --
Drawback: Consumes two ranks higher of chakra than normal to use this technique. Can only be used twice per day before the hand can no longer handle the strain.
Description: The user extends their hand, channeling an ungodly amount of chakra into it. They then release it as a ninjutsu comes towards them, dissipating it completely. This technique only works on ninjutsu three ranks below the user's rank in this technique.
Limit: Must learn from a Protegera Nushi or higher. Must have corresponding rank in Mirarei.

Alright so I was looking through the style and this caught my eye and slightly bothered me. I like the first one, since it can kill up to A rank techniques and that's dandy. For Like 200-250ish TP. The second one is an extension of it that turns it back, stylish and nice.

I have a problem with the last one.

So you have a total of about 60 posts for a technique that at S rank nullifies a C rank completely? I understand this also works on sound techniques and that's nice and all but. 600 Tp just for that?

Sorry I just had to point this out and be bothered.

[Okami]

I think someone said something like "stopping a b rank just by touching it seems a little OP" while it was in customs, and the person who was creating it added it mostly to look cool when it was used, so they just dropped the rank blocked by one. But people don't just revamp member created techniques because they're not that strong. They just never get learned.

Also, it's not 600 tp just for that. You still get all those other techs you trained, and you really shouldn't be learning a sword style if your only goal is to negate ninjutsu with your hands.

[Naota]

In addition to what iv'e said. I also like to say that the actual sword style itself is lacking. Compared to Dragon Strike's cut a dude in half from a few meters away. I'm simply stating that the entire style as a whole is one I'd love to see get revamped and made better.

[Logi Shimizu]

A dragon strike does NOT cut a dude in half.

SPOILER: Click to show

Gosei Ryuu: Ryusen (Dragon Strike)
Rank: "C", "B", "A"
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: This technique is a range technique that sends a force wave attack in a line at far off distances to cut those far away.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A simple technique and the basic technique that must be learned before going into the more advanced techniques of Gosei Ryuu. The user slashes their sword with such strength and fierce force that a blade of force is shocked out with the blade knocking into whoever stands in its way capable of cutting capabilities as if it were a regular sword. When first learned this technique is only as strong as if a user was stricken by a simple bat. When the user learns the next rank, the "B" rank, the force feels like the user was cut like an actual sword. When the user learns the last rank, the highest rank, "A" rank" the force cannot be stopped by a block. The best option is to dodge. Depending on the user's class level depends on the strength of the technique.
"D" Class - Fifteen Meter Cone
"C" Class - Twenty Meter Cone
"B" Class - Thirty Five Meter Cone
"A" Class - Fifty Five Meter Cone
"S" Class - Eighty Meter Cone

Limit: Must Learn from a Master of Burēdono Kenseijin - ブレードの剣聖人 - Blade of the Sword Saint, Must know all Stances.

Oh wait, what's that? There's no damage increase for learning 'a' rank? That's right. The most damage this technique can do is what you could do by slashing at someone with a sword. Cutting someone in half, with a sword, is incredibly hard. Even then, the technique states that the technique FEELS as if you were cut by a sword, nothing about the increase of damage, so it might even be 'c' ranked damage. All 'a' rank does is make the strike unblockable.

[Okami]

I saw 2 big pigs chopped in half with one stroke of a katana on deadliest warrior. Don't underestimate how powerful a sword strike can be if the user has all the space they want to attack correctly and the target can't block.

Anyway, as I said we don't revamp user created styles just because they aren't the strongest styles. If you want to revamp it you'd have to talk to Masakuni. Even then, customs are closed for fighting styles so I'm not sure if it would be allowed.

[← KIRA →]

Oct 5, 2011 11:24:32 GMT -7 Logi Shimizu said:

A dragon strike does NOT cut a dude in half.

SPOILER: Click to show

Gosei Ryuu: Ryusen (Dragon Strike)
Rank: "C", "B", "A"
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: This technique is a range technique that sends a force wave attack in a line at far off distances to cut those far away.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A simple technique and the basic technique that must be learned before going into the more advanced techniques of Gosei Ryuu. The user slashes their sword with such strength and fierce force that a blade of force is shocked out with the blade knocking into whoever stands in its way capable of cutting capabilities as if it were a regular sword. When first learned this technique is only as strong as if a user was stricken by a simple bat. When the user learns the next rank, the "B" rank, the force feels like the user was cut like an actual sword. When the user learns the last rank, the highest rank, "A" rank" the force cannot be stopped by a block. The best option is to dodge. Depending on the user's class level depends on the strength of the technique.
"D" Class - Fifteen Meter Cone
"C" Class - Twenty Meter Cone
"B" Class - Thirty Five Meter Cone
"A" Class - Fifty Five Meter Cone
"S" Class - Eighty Meter Cone

Limit: Must Learn from a Master of Burēdono Kenseijin - ブレードの剣聖人 - Blade of the Sword Saint, Must know all Stances.

Oh wait, what's that? There's no damage increase for learning 'a' rank? That's right. The most damage this technique can do is what you could do by slashing at someone with a sword. Cutting someone in half, with a sword, is incredibly hard. Even then, the technique states that the technique FEELS as if you were cut by a sword, nothing about the increase of damage, so it might even be 'c' ranked damage. All 'a' rank does is make the strike unblockable.

Heero has even said that it can go through someone; just sayin'.

[Defiant]

Jesus Logi, no need to get all aggro. Dragon Strike stomps, Protegera gets stomped, The world is round, sky is blue, Yankees suck, need permission of creator to revamp, all these things have been established.

Time for a lock, no?

[Naota]

Oct 5, 2011 15:40:43 GMT -7 Defiant said:

Jesus Logi, no need to get all aggro. Dragon Strike stomps, Protegera gets stomped, The world is round, sky is blue, Yankees suck, need permission of creator to revamp, all these things have been established.

Time for a lock, no?

I c wat u did thar.


also, lockable since I don't care anymore.

[← KIRA →]

lol nice locked~