Post by Saigoto on Oct 6, 2011 22:15:07 GMT -7
So I have two suggestions for the kyoudo clan.
One thing I wanted to suggest is possiably adding two technique to this. The first one being along the lines of the distance two objects are going to attract or repel each other. There is a technique that states how fast you can change the charge on the object however there isnt one that states how far apart the objects can be to effect each other. Maybe add something to train into to state how far apart they can be to effect eachother. Seeing as how its chakra that your using to change the charges I dont see where it would be crazy to say you could effect two objects from a decent distance from each other.
The other thing that could be added would be the ability to affect only two items to attract or repel against each other. Say like I have 4 kunai laying on the ground to my right. I am wearing a glove with a metal plate in the palm of it. I make the plate in my palm into a charge that would attract only one target kunai to whip the kunai into my hand from the ground while the other 3 kunai would be unaffected.
My second suggestion would be this.
Its stated in several jutsu in the clan that you need to know the A rank of the jutsu above in order to learn some of the jutsus in the clan. I would imagine that the A rank allowed you to perform other jutsu along with the clans main jutsu. Maybe adding this jutsu back in would work nicely but i dont know why it was removed in the first place.
Sutatikku Nagare (Static Current)
Rank: "C"
Skill: Kekkai Genkai Ninjutsu
Effect: Allows the user to manipulate electrostatics and electric charges.
Special: Rat, Dragon, Ram, Tiger, Monkey, Dog, Horse, Rabbit once per 5 turns.
Drawback: Objects must be visible. While actively using this ability, the user must remain perfectly still, and no other jutsu may be used while the user is attempting to manipulate charges. Only metallic objects or semi-metallic objects can be manipulated.
Description: Allows the user to manipulate and control electrostatic, which is by definition electricity at rest. This gives the user the ability to move around both positive and negative charges on objects, which, in the end, can result in the ability to either repel or attract objects to and from each other. It must be noted that this jutsu strictly follows the concept of the Conservation of Charges. That means that without influence, all charges within nature are balanced at zero. Only when acted upon do these charges change. This ability is a requirement for all members of the Kyoudo Clan. When the user first gains this ability, they have only the ability to affect one object at a time within five meters of their person. At maximum, the user may move 10% of an object’s positive or negative charges to another object. While actively using this ability, the user must remain perfectly still, and no other jutsu may be used while the user is attempting to manipulate charges. Due to the relative electrical field produced by every person Kyoudo cannot affect people, and due to the low electronegativity of non-metallic objects, only metallic objects can be affected. It is only through mastery over the element of thunder that one can obtain this ability.
Limit: Kyoudo Clan only
* Nintai Keiko (Endurance Training)
Rank: Initially E-Rank, can be learned 19 times.
Skill: Kekkai Genkai Training Method
Effect: Allows the user to go longer without having to perform the Handseals for Sutatikku Nagare.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Each time trained increases the time before the user must re-activate the Sutatikku Nagare (Static Current) ability by 5 turns.
Limit: Sutatikku Nagare (Static Current) ability.
* Kyori Keiko (Distance Training)
Rank: E, D, C, B, A, S
Skill: Kekkai Genkai Training Method
Effect: Allows the user the capability of having a wider-ranged Sutatikku Nagare.
Special: ---
Drawback: The training of these techniques are unaffected by difficulty class.
Description: Allows the user’s Static Current ability to effect a larger area. Every time this ability is trained, the user is then allowed to manipulate charges at a longer distance. The additional distance is dependent upon the rank and number of times this technique has been learned.
o E Rank increases the number of meters that the user is capable of manipulating by one for each time that the training is learned. Must be learned two times before the user may learn the D Rank.
o D Rank increases the number of meters that the user is capable of manipulating by one for each time that the training is learned. Must be learned three times before the user may learn the C Rank.
o C Rank increases the number of meters that the user is capable of manipulating by two for each time that the training is learned. Must be learned five times before the user may learn the B Rank.
o B Rank increases the number of meters that the user is capable of manipulating by three for each time that the training is learned. Must be learned ten times before the user may learn the A Rank.
o A Rank increases the number of meters that the user is capable of manipulating by four for each time that the training is learned. Must be learned fifteen times before the user may learn the S Rank.
o S Rank increases the number of meters that the user is capable of manipulating by five for each time that the training is learned. The S Rank may be learned an infinite number of times.
Limit: Must know Sutatikku Nagare (Static Current).
* Kyoudo Keiko (Intensity Training)
Rank: D, C, B
Skill: Kekkai Genkai Training Method
Effect: Allows the user the capability of more quickly manipulating the charges in an object so that they become polarized at a greater rate.
Special: ---
Drawback: The training of these techniques are unaffected by difficulty class.
Description: A training method designed to be used in conjunction with Sutatikku Nagare, this ability allows the user the capability of manipulating charges at a faster rate in order to more quickly polarize an object. The percentile rates work in a manner of seconds, meaning that if the user has not learned this ability, they can manipulate the number of charges in an object by 10% of total polarization in one second. In order to completely manipulate an object of the user's choice they must have 100% polarized it. This means that unlearned, it will normally take a Kyoudo ten seconds to get control over one object and for every time they learn this it will take one less second.
o D Rank allows for the user to manipulate charges 10% faster for each time that the technique is learned. Must be learned three times before the user is capable of learning the C Rank version.
o C Rank allows for the user to manipulate charges 10% faster for each time that the technique is learned. Must be learned three times before the user is capable of learning the B Rank version.
o B Rank allows for the user to manipulate charges 10% faster for each time that the technique is learned. May only be learned three times, which puts the user at 100%.
Limit: Must know Sutatikku Nagare (Static Current).
* Houkou Keiko (Direction Training)
Rank: C, B, A, S
Skill: Kekkai Genkai Training Method
Effect: Allows the user the capability of effecting up to one additional object per training.
Special: ---
Drawback: The training of these techniques are unaffected by difficulty class. Only metallic objects can be manipulated.
Description: A specialized type of training meant to be combined with Sutatikku Nagare, this ability allows the user the capability of manipulating the charges of additional objects so that the user can more quickly cause distinct polarization of objects.
o C Rank allows the user to manipulate one additional object for every time that the training is learned. Must be learned five times before the user is capable of learning the B Rank.
o B Rank allows the user to manipulate one additional object for every time that the training is learned. Must be learned five times before the user is capable of learning the A Rank.
o A Rank allows the user to manipulate two additional objects for every time that the training is learned. Must be learned five times before the user is capable of the S Rank.
o S Rank allows the user to manipulate three additional objects for every time that the training is learned. May be learned an infinite number of times.
Limit: Must know Sutatikku Nagare (Static Current).
* Senshin Keiko (Concentration Training)
Rank: “C”, “B”
Skill: Kekkai Genkai Training Method
Effect: Allows the user the capability of being more active while manipulating the charges of objects.
Special: ---
Drawback: These abilities are almost required if the user wishes to become a capable fighter. Cannot be used at the same time with other techniques.
Description: A type of training meant to be combined with Sutatikku Nagare, it allows the user the capability of mobility and, at higher levels, the ability to perform other techniques, all while the user manipulates the charges of objects. The user's rank of this technique determines how mobile that they are allowed to be.
o “C” - Allows the user to move at a running pace while controlling currents. Any intense physical combat or the use of other jutsu while controlling these effects will result in the user being unable to manipulate charges for the rest of the turn and for the duration of the jutsu that they were using.
o “B” - Allows the user to fight in intense hand-to-hand combat while controlling currents. However, any use of jutsu while controlling the current effects will result in the user being unable to manipulate charges for the rest of the turn and for the duration of the jutsu they were using.
Limit: Sutatikku Nagare (Static Current) ability.
Rank: "C"
Skill: Kekkai Genkai Ninjutsu
Effect: Allows the user to manipulate electrostatics and electric charges.
Special: Rat, Dragon, Ram, Tiger, Monkey, Dog, Horse, Rabbit once per 5 turns.
Drawback: Objects must be visible. While actively using this ability, the user must remain perfectly still, and no other jutsu may be used while the user is attempting to manipulate charges. Only metallic objects or semi-metallic objects can be manipulated.
Description: Allows the user to manipulate and control electrostatic, which is by definition electricity at rest. This gives the user the ability to move around both positive and negative charges on objects, which, in the end, can result in the ability to either repel or attract objects to and from each other. It must be noted that this jutsu strictly follows the concept of the Conservation of Charges. That means that without influence, all charges within nature are balanced at zero. Only when acted upon do these charges change. This ability is a requirement for all members of the Kyoudo Clan. When the user first gains this ability, they have only the ability to affect one object at a time within five meters of their person. At maximum, the user may move 10% of an object’s positive or negative charges to another object. While actively using this ability, the user must remain perfectly still, and no other jutsu may be used while the user is attempting to manipulate charges. Due to the relative electrical field produced by every person Kyoudo cannot affect people, and due to the low electronegativity of non-metallic objects, only metallic objects can be affected. It is only through mastery over the element of thunder that one can obtain this ability.
Limit: Kyoudo Clan only
* Nintai Keiko (Endurance Training)
Rank: Initially E-Rank, can be learned 19 times.
Skill: Kekkai Genkai Training Method
Effect: Allows the user to go longer without having to perform the Handseals for Sutatikku Nagare.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Each time trained increases the time before the user must re-activate the Sutatikku Nagare (Static Current) ability by 5 turns.
Limit: Sutatikku Nagare (Static Current) ability.
* Kyori Keiko (Distance Training)
Rank: E, D, C, B, A, S
Skill: Kekkai Genkai Training Method
Effect: Allows the user the capability of having a wider-ranged Sutatikku Nagare.
Special: ---
Drawback: The training of these techniques are unaffected by difficulty class.
Description: Allows the user’s Static Current ability to effect a larger area. Every time this ability is trained, the user is then allowed to manipulate charges at a longer distance. The additional distance is dependent upon the rank and number of times this technique has been learned.
o E Rank increases the number of meters that the user is capable of manipulating by one for each time that the training is learned. Must be learned two times before the user may learn the D Rank.
o D Rank increases the number of meters that the user is capable of manipulating by one for each time that the training is learned. Must be learned three times before the user may learn the C Rank.
o C Rank increases the number of meters that the user is capable of manipulating by two for each time that the training is learned. Must be learned five times before the user may learn the B Rank.
o B Rank increases the number of meters that the user is capable of manipulating by three for each time that the training is learned. Must be learned ten times before the user may learn the A Rank.
o A Rank increases the number of meters that the user is capable of manipulating by four for each time that the training is learned. Must be learned fifteen times before the user may learn the S Rank.
o S Rank increases the number of meters that the user is capable of manipulating by five for each time that the training is learned. The S Rank may be learned an infinite number of times.
Limit: Must know Sutatikku Nagare (Static Current).
* Kyoudo Keiko (Intensity Training)
Rank: D, C, B
Skill: Kekkai Genkai Training Method
Effect: Allows the user the capability of more quickly manipulating the charges in an object so that they become polarized at a greater rate.
Special: ---
Drawback: The training of these techniques are unaffected by difficulty class.
Description: A training method designed to be used in conjunction with Sutatikku Nagare, this ability allows the user the capability of manipulating charges at a faster rate in order to more quickly polarize an object. The percentile rates work in a manner of seconds, meaning that if the user has not learned this ability, they can manipulate the number of charges in an object by 10% of total polarization in one second. In order to completely manipulate an object of the user's choice they must have 100% polarized it. This means that unlearned, it will normally take a Kyoudo ten seconds to get control over one object and for every time they learn this it will take one less second.
o D Rank allows for the user to manipulate charges 10% faster for each time that the technique is learned. Must be learned three times before the user is capable of learning the C Rank version.
o C Rank allows for the user to manipulate charges 10% faster for each time that the technique is learned. Must be learned three times before the user is capable of learning the B Rank version.
o B Rank allows for the user to manipulate charges 10% faster for each time that the technique is learned. May only be learned three times, which puts the user at 100%.
Limit: Must know Sutatikku Nagare (Static Current).
* Houkou Keiko (Direction Training)
Rank: C, B, A, S
Skill: Kekkai Genkai Training Method
Effect: Allows the user the capability of effecting up to one additional object per training.
Special: ---
Drawback: The training of these techniques are unaffected by difficulty class. Only metallic objects can be manipulated.
Description: A specialized type of training meant to be combined with Sutatikku Nagare, this ability allows the user the capability of manipulating the charges of additional objects so that the user can more quickly cause distinct polarization of objects.
o C Rank allows the user to manipulate one additional object for every time that the training is learned. Must be learned five times before the user is capable of learning the B Rank.
o B Rank allows the user to manipulate one additional object for every time that the training is learned. Must be learned five times before the user is capable of learning the A Rank.
o A Rank allows the user to manipulate two additional objects for every time that the training is learned. Must be learned five times before the user is capable of the S Rank.
o S Rank allows the user to manipulate three additional objects for every time that the training is learned. May be learned an infinite number of times.
Limit: Must know Sutatikku Nagare (Static Current).
* Senshin Keiko (Concentration Training)
Rank: “C”, “B”
Skill: Kekkai Genkai Training Method
Effect: Allows the user the capability of being more active while manipulating the charges of objects.
Special: ---
Drawback: These abilities are almost required if the user wishes to become a capable fighter. Cannot be used at the same time with other techniques.
Description: A type of training meant to be combined with Sutatikku Nagare, it allows the user the capability of mobility and, at higher levels, the ability to perform other techniques, all while the user manipulates the charges of objects. The user's rank of this technique determines how mobile that they are allowed to be.
o “C” - Allows the user to move at a running pace while controlling currents. Any intense physical combat or the use of other jutsu while controlling these effects will result in the user being unable to manipulate charges for the rest of the turn and for the duration of the jutsu that they were using.
o “B” - Allows the user to fight in intense hand-to-hand combat while controlling currents. However, any use of jutsu while controlling the current effects will result in the user being unable to manipulate charges for the rest of the turn and for the duration of the jutsu they were using.
Limit: Sutatikku Nagare (Static Current) ability.
One thing I wanted to suggest is possiably adding two technique to this. The first one being along the lines of the distance two objects are going to attract or repel each other. There is a technique that states how fast you can change the charge on the object however there isnt one that states how far apart the objects can be to effect each other. Maybe add something to train into to state how far apart they can be to effect eachother. Seeing as how its chakra that your using to change the charges I dont see where it would be crazy to say you could effect two objects from a decent distance from each other.
The other thing that could be added would be the ability to affect only two items to attract or repel against each other. Say like I have 4 kunai laying on the ground to my right. I am wearing a glove with a metal plate in the palm of it. I make the plate in my palm into a charge that would attract only one target kunai to whip the kunai into my hand from the ground while the other 3 kunai would be unaffected.
My second suggestion would be this.
Senshin Keiko (Concentration Training)
Rank: “C”, “B”
Skill: Kekkai Genkai Training Method
Effect: Allows the user the capability of being more active while manipulating the charges of objects.
Special: ---
Drawback: These abilities are almost required if the user wishes to become a capable fighter. Cannot be used at the same time with other techniques.
Description: A type of training meant to be combined with Sutatikku Nagare, it allows the user the capability of mobility and, at higher levels, the ability to perform other techniques, all while the user manipulates the charges of objects. The user's rank of this technique determines how mobile that they are allowed to be.
o “C” - Allows the user to move at a running pace while controlling currents. Any intense physical combat or the use of other jutsu while controlling these effects will result in the user being unable to manipulate charges for the rest of the turn and for the duration of the jutsu that they were using.
o “B” - Allows the user to fight in intense hand-to-hand combat while controlling currents. However, any use of jutsu while controlling the current effects will result in the user being unable to manipulate charges for the rest of the turn and for the duration of the jutsu they were using.
Rank: “C”, “B”
Skill: Kekkai Genkai Training Method
Effect: Allows the user the capability of being more active while manipulating the charges of objects.
Special: ---
Drawback: These abilities are almost required if the user wishes to become a capable fighter. Cannot be used at the same time with other techniques.
Description: A type of training meant to be combined with Sutatikku Nagare, it allows the user the capability of mobility and, at higher levels, the ability to perform other techniques, all while the user manipulates the charges of objects. The user's rank of this technique determines how mobile that they are allowed to be.
o “C” - Allows the user to move at a running pace while controlling currents. Any intense physical combat or the use of other jutsu while controlling these effects will result in the user being unable to manipulate charges for the rest of the turn and for the duration of the jutsu that they were using.
o “B” - Allows the user to fight in intense hand-to-hand combat while controlling currents. However, any use of jutsu while controlling the current effects will result in the user being unable to manipulate charges for the rest of the turn and for the duration of the jutsu they were using.
Its stated in several jutsu in the clan that you need to know the A rank of the jutsu above in order to learn some of the jutsus in the clan. I would imagine that the A rank allowed you to perform other jutsu along with the clans main jutsu. Maybe adding this jutsu back in would work nicely but i dont know why it was removed in the first place.
