:: Hikari ::

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OOC: Hello Hikari! My name is Naevia and welcome to my RolePlay school!

Since you have no experience whatsoever, what section do you wish to work on first? The choice is totally up to you. However, if you have any questions that you wish to ask, simply post them in your reply post.

[Hikari Maeko]

Uh.....my character has a dark and cold attitude to people she doesn't know well. So....is it okay if she acts like this? I know you don't like people who don't give you respect (which I will make my character do.), but I like to stay in character.

Don't expect her to be a know-it-all. What I meant by cold and dark attitude, was that she glares often and sometimes thinks people(her age) are so below her level that she practically hates them and she ignores people who are below her skill. She doesn't talk much either. But as soon as you get to know her she'll be a whole different person towards you.

BACK TO THE POINT: Can I act like this



Note: I will be on everyday, so you don't have to worry about me not replying for weeks.

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Hmm........Let's see.....
Let's start a training thread!

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OOC: The part about being disrespectful is when your talking to me OOC. IIC does not matter, if your character is a disrespectful person then by all means, RP like your character. I will not be offended by it at all. It's the OOC talk that I pay particular attention to in that criteria.

Well training it is! For starters I will provide you a technique from the release index since your character is a Ninjutsu master. So all I need from you is a regular training post. Train as if you were learning the actual technique in your own training thread alright?

Good luck!

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Suna Bunshin no Jutsu (Sand Clone Technique)
Rank: "D" "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user is capable of creating clones by using the sand around them. Depending on how much sand the user has, and how well the user is capable of using this technique is dependent on how many clones the user is capable of creating. The C Rank version of this very technique allows the clones movement, and basic attacks such as punches and kicks, but no techniques. When first learned the user is capable of creating up to five Clones, this is for the D Rank Version. If the user learns the C Rank version they are capable of creating two clones. Each time learned for the D Rank Version of this technique the user is capable of creating two clones. Each time the user learns a C Rank version of this technique the user is capable of creating one extra clone.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: For D Ranks The Clones that are created are basically useless, only used as a distraction, only used to stand and can not be used to attack. The user can not learn more C Rank Versions of this technique then that of the D Rank Version of this technique.
Description: If the user has an abundance amount of sand along the ground the user is capable of focusing their chakra along the sand to where they are capable of controlling the sand's structure to create a vast amount of clones if capable.
Limit: Must have the Sand Release, Must know the Sand Control of D Rank. For every Ten Clones equals ten meters of Sand Needed.

[Hikari Maeko]

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Suna Bunshin no Jutsu (Sand Clone Technique)
Rank: "D" "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user is capable of creating clones by using the sand around them. Depending on how much sand the user has, and how well the user is capable of using this technique is dependent on how many clones the user is capable of creating. The C Rank version of this very technique allows the clones movement, and basic attacks such as punches and kicks, but no techniques. When first learned the user is capable of creating up to five Clones, this is for the D Rank Version. If the user learns the C Rank version they are capable of creating two clones. Each time learned for the D Rank Version of this technique the user is capable of creating two clones. Each time the user learns a C Rank version of this technique the user is capable of creating one extra clone.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: For D Ranks The Clones that are created are basically useless, only used as a distraction, only used to stand and can not be used to attack. The user can not learn more C Rank Versions of this technique then that of the D Rank Version of this technique.
Description: If the user has an abundance amount of sand along the ground the user is capable of focusing their chakra along the sand to where they are capable of controlling the sand's structure to create a vast amount of clones if capable.
Limit: Must have the Sand Release, Must know the Sand Control of D Rank. For every Ten Clones equals ten meters of Sand Needed.

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Hikari sat on the very edge of her bed, polishing her cherished katana. She held it up, viewing herself in the gleaming sword. She noticed how the light wasn't as bright as it would be. Instead of a blinding shine in her face, it was more of a warm orange glow. Hikari shoved her katana back into her case, stood up, and took a gaze outside her window. The sun was setting. "Well, there's nothing better to do these days." Hikari admitted. She exited her average apartment, leaving her sword behind.

Silence.

Hikari was alone on a nature filled training ground. Nothing much, trees were scattered here and there, flowers weren't plentiful, and there were vast amounts of bushes. She stood at the center of the training field, hoping it was a good spot. Hikari wore a very comfortable outfit that day, well, comfortable for her.

She wore a black sleeveless hoodie with a long sleeved fishnet shirt underneath. To match that, she put on a jet black skirt with a length about four inches from her knees.
Hikari wrapped white bandages all around her thighs, leaving her calves and below exposed. She also wore her usual ninja shoes.

Hikari also had her turquoise Konoha forehead protector knotted around her neck. She dressed her hair into a messy bun to keep it out of the way.

She checked out the landscape, seeing it was more sandy than filled with soil. "Perfect for a simple sand technique," Hikari murmured to herself.

Hikari breathed slowly and focused, gathering all the chakra she assumed she needed for her technique. She would have to make enough chakra to create at least 3 clones; that was her goal. Gradually, she concentrated all of her chakra into each part of her body equally. At first, she felt a bit uneasy from the sudden chakra(she hasn't done this in months) but soon after she started to adjust.

She closed her eyes, picturing at least one sand clone that looked like her. Hikari had remembered something her grandmother had told her, "If you believe, you can succeed." She formed the hand signs needed.

Chakra was now streaming through the sand, molding three human-like figures. Hikari blinked to make sure she wasn't fantasizing. When she saw this, she smirked, adding more chakra to flow. The sand started with the shape of Hikari's feet, slowly constructing from head to toe. She continued to concentrate.

The sand was now taking shape of Hikari's outfit, already up to her sleeveless hoodie. Hikari opened her eyes only slightly, surprised at the progress she was making.
Suddenly, a brisk draft blew past her eyes, losing her focus. All her sand had plopped back to the field, dis-forming the three figures of Hikari.

A little pissed on how something so little could distract her so easily, she forced even more chakra to stream through the ground. In a matter of mere seconds, the trio actually formed faster than before. She was pleased with her self.

The last grains of sand filled up, creating her three sand clones. Hikari walked around her clones, seeing how they weren't exactly like her, but they were extremely similar. The thing she noticed was, they didn't move at all. "Well, I guess that's it for now." she remarked, making her way towards her common apartment.

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OCC: I didn't know exactly how many clones I could make, because I became confused when I read this:

"When first learned the user is capable of creating up to five Clones, this is for the D Rank Version"

and then I read this:

"Each time learned for the D Rank Version of this technique the user is capable of creating two clones."

I got seriously confused, so could you explain it to me?

Thanks.

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Dec 2, 2011 19:48:25 GMT -7 Hikari Maeko said:

OCC: I didn't know exactly how many clones I could make, because I became confused when I read this:

"When first learned the user is capable of creating up to five Clones, this is for the D Rank Version"

and then I read this:

"Each time learned for the D Rank Version of this technique the user is capable of creating two clones."

I got seriously confused, so could you explain it to me?

Thanks.

OOC: The answer to the above quote is:
The first time you learn the technique you are capable of creating up to five clones of sand at a time. But if you don't wish to learn the C rank version of the technique and just stick with the D, you get an extra two clones added on to your collection. It's like Shunshin, the first time you learn it, you get to use it three times a day. And every additional training you do for it, you gain an extra shunshin. The difference between this technique and shunshin is that you get an extra two clones to add on to the five default ones you get when you learn it for the first time. Do you understand what I mean?

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Hmm... for your training post, I don't think it was too bad to be honest. It was a bit slow at the beginning, but overall was a good post. If I were grading it on my staff account, I probably would have given you a +8 or a +9. Despite most of the first part of it wasn't training at all, I felt that your describing of the technique was above average for me. Other staff may think different, but everyone is entitled to their own opinion. But may I suggest that you describe more of the actual technique in your training please?

Like, how did the chakra merge in with the sand and what reaction did the sand do when the chakra was able to manipulate it? Was it easier for you to build up the clone's appearance starting from feet first? Did the chakra fill in all the tiny details with percision or was it totally off or slightly off? Something like that. I did notice you do this in your post and it impressed me (a lot of people don't do it, that's why). So can you retrain the technique once more for me please? I'd like to see if I spot any changes in your description

Good luck!

And if you have any questions, shoot em down in your next post.