:: Tix ::

[F U T A K O N G O]

OOC: Hey Tix! Welcome to my RolePlay School! My name is Naevia, and for now I'd like to focus on training since I've noticed quite a few things lacking in there. Your overall RP isn't too bad, and we can work on that next. Save the hardest till last

Now, what I want from you is a regular training post. I will be providing the jutsu for you to learn (this does not go toward your actual jutsu count so don't add TP to your bio or anything) and all you've got to do is reply back as if you are training in your own training thread.

Now the jutsu I will ask you to learn will be in the spoiler at the bottom of my post. And if you have any questions regarding anything I have said or anything in general, then please do not hesitate to mention them in your next post.

SPOILER: Click to show

Distracting Pattern
Rank: "D" Rank
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: A pattern that in which done, simply used for distractions.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A simple Pattern technique of lights, patterns or anything else that is needed to create a pattern in which distracts those seeing for a brief moment.. When the user is "D" Class, the user is capable of performing this technique off into the distance of thirty meters. When the user is "C" Class, the user is capable of performing this technique off into the distance of forty meters. When the user is "B" Class, the user is capable of performing this technique off into the distance of fifty meters. When the user is "A" Class, the user is capable of performing this technique off into the distance of sixty meters. When the user is "S" Class, the user is capable of performing this technique off into the distance of seventy meters.
Limit: Must know Pattern Perception of GenJutsus

[Tix]

OOC: Thanks for agreeing to assist me in my quest for better RPING.

What was that?!

SPOILER: Click to show

Distracting Pattern
Rank: "D" Rank
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: A pattern that in which done, simply used for distractions.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A simple Pattern technique of lights, patterns or anything else that is needed to create a pattern in which distracts those seeing for a brief moment.. When the user is "D" Class, the user is capable of performing this technique off into the distance of thirty meters. When the user is "C" Class, the user is capable of performing this technique off into the distance of forty meters. When the user is "B" Class, the user is capable of performing this technique off into the distance of fifty meters. When the user is "A" Class, the user is capable of performing this technique off into the distance of sixty meters. When the user is "S" Class, the user is capable of performing this technique off into the distance of seventy meters.
Limit: Must know Pattern Perception of GenJutsus

Standing in wake of an open tundra his chakra being focused in his hands as they starting moving into various handseals, a light shone off in the distance to his right. When turning to confirm the small light it was gone, it was successful. Again his hands started be a little quicker it still looked a little awkward doing it. Small lights were coming and going. As his continued to move getting better as time progressed.

The wind had a chill in it that would send a shiver down the spine of anyone. As the hard work continued, his hands started to ache the seals seemed as though there wearing being burned into his memory. As the day dragged on so did the phantom lights. His hands were almost like clashing forces continuously slamming together. After a couple of hours drained away, there was still some chakra left he could use for more training.

As his hands collided this time they seemed to collide with a lot more meaning and intent. As a couple lights shined through the snow. He had let out a much deserved sigh. Just standing there for a while looking off into the distance the snow sparkled. As his knees started to wobble from lack of rest, he knew that he should have took more breaks. So to commemorate the training session he left himself fall into a small snow bank.


OOC: Thanks again for aiding me in my quest to become a better RPER.

- Your student
Tix

[F U T A K O N G O]

OOC: Well for one thing you are welcome.

You haven't put up what TP your at. At the beginning of every training thread you must put 0|10 or whatever TP count your at before you post your actual training. Sorry about being so fussy, but it is a requirement when one is training.

Sorry but I would have given you a +4 for that post. This is because you didn't really describe the training at all. You simply just wrote that you performed handseals and looked to the right/left to see lights flashing. That will not do for a training post, especially if it's D ranked.

If I may, I would strongly suggest that you put more of an effort into the jutsu by stating how your chakra poured into the air and was focused to a certain area before your fingers laced through a number of handseals. You could try imagining a number of colors swirling around the chakra-infested area causing a flashy display of lights that would prove distracting toward you since you are simply training the jutsu. If you are looking for constant 10s, description and length is the key.

Can you try that again for me please, same technique.

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