:: Rana ::

[F U T A K O N G O]

OOC: Hey Rana! My name is Naevia and welcome to my RolePlay school!
I have already seen the way you RP simply for the fact that I have been the only one grading your training threads ever since you located your two AC's.

However, to be honest with you, your training is fine. You get constant +10's or a little lower in your grades, so your training side of things is totally fine. - No need to work on that. However, there is one thing about your RolePlay that needs work on, and that's your grammar. Please write in full and not in txt.

So minus training, which would you like to work on first? Casual RP or Battling? Decision is up to you.
And if you have any questions that you would like to ask, simply ask them in your reply post.

[Dr. Horible]

OOC: Hey Naevia! i guess we can start with Casual RP. Since i'm not planing on battling anyone for a wile.

i know my grammer is bad, that is because i"m special. no really i was in the special class in high school for wrighting. among other thing. that is why i'm on this forum. i hope to improve my wrighting skills.

[F U T A K O N G O]

OOC: Casual RP it is.

Well for starters, I will be providing a scenery for us to RP in a few minutes. And I'll be simply using my own character, Naevia. But please note, if we do actually RP together as in Naevia runs into you while she's doing her world travel, both Naevia and Rana will not know each other and will have to go through the whole “Hi, nice to meet you” thing again.

This post will not require fighting, unless you decide to throw a little battling in there. That's totally fine with me.

Our scenery is:

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IIC:

Being present in a place where snow isn't falling is a definite change for me. The island is large, dry and green; perhaps wider than 100 meters. The area is so large that I cannot see the edge of the cliff on the far side. The wind dances around me, creating ripples in my long, pleated skirt which rocks around at the ankles. My corset remains perfectly still, revealing my natural curves; yet the lace covering my chest from bosom up to the ring of my neck, flutters lightly over my snow white skin. I have decided to leave my hair down today, the need of having it tied up is not relevant. The gray-white streaks lining my hair give me a more older appearance despite I am only a year out of my teens. The direction that the wind is blowing is clearly to the North and the breeze is so warm that I am fascinated by it.

My companion and best friend, Kali is happily running around the area. Her black powerful legs jumping while she leaps over small hills and dives into small ditches. Regular exercise for a Black Timber Wolf. Kali enjoys the long runs and the landscapes more than I do simply because she is built for such areas and conditions. Although Kali is free to roam the ground at my house in Yukigakure, she hardly ventures out without me by her side or in sight. She does occasionally glance over in my direction just to see if I am alright, but mainly pays attention to what is in front of her.

The simple day out is lovely, yet I will be leaving for my home back in Yuki no Kuni very soon. I miss the cool temperature and the snow. Plus I miss my two guardians and my elder sister, Lucretia and her Siberian Tiger companion, Marama. The ocean is rough and beats against the bottom of the cliff below. From my position, I can hear the water exploding as it hits the rocks scattered below the cliff. I know that if one were to jump off this cliff; one would surely die a painful death. The wind changes slightly and I catch a slight scent from behind me. It is stronger than that of a female so evidently it is a male. The smell of his scent is strong indicating that he has spent a great deal under the sun, he is not from my village or any villages nearby.

My head is turned ever so slightly, my eyes catching a glimpse of the male as he stands approximately thirty meters away. Kali notices a dark figure to her far left and abruptly stops before turning toward her mistress. A slight howl escapes from her mouth before she dashes toward my side in an attempt to protect me. Kali is very over protective and will not hesitate to attack upon command. “It's alright, Kali.” I murmur low enough for only the Wolf to overhear. Wither this male had ears like mine or not, he will not understand me simply for the fact that I spoke in Wolf talk. My attention is then drawn to the male while ice-blue eyes study him from afar. I do not speak, I wish for him to first...

[Dr. Horible]

The young shinobi was standing in the clearing looking at the woman in front of him, the squirrels in Rana’s coat had become frightened by the appearance of a wolf on the little island. But with a quick snap of his fingers they silenced themselves and where still. A slight wind blew in and rustled his coat, which was currently buttoned up. The boy’s hood was down so he could enjoy the nice breeze running through his hair. From this distance Rana could not accurately judge her age but she was older than him that much he could tell. He was no more than a boy himself but this was a grown woman, and the wolf at her side looked to be battle hardened. He was sure he did not want a fight, this was one he would not walk away form.

The boy opened his mouth and in a slightly louder voice then he would use inside said, “Greeting, my name is Rana. How are u this fine day?” the boy used a polite tone as he always did when meeting new people. He kept his eye on the woman and the wolf at her side, unsure of their intent. He looked to be relaxed but on the inside he was ready, in case this did not turn out to be a peaceful meeting. The three squirrel in is coat could tell he was worried and once again started to move about, making the coat look like it was moving of its own accord. Tui popped out of his jacket and stood on his shoulder, studding the two new comers. Fraulein and La waiting within the jacket to see what would happen. Ready for whatever might come.

[F U T A K O N G O]

OOC: Not a bad post actually. Kept me interested. Your also straight to the point and I like that in a RolePlayer.

However, you need to watch the way you type. The word u is in your post and that is not an actual word. In my book it is called text or txt language. Grammar is a important factor in writing and RolePlay alike. So my suggestion for you is to keep an eye on how you type.

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IIC:

From my distance, I notice that this Male's full appearance is difficult to read. Yet his voice seemed to determine that his age is not that of a teen; perhaps 13 at the most. He is a child. Rana seemed to approach me in an polite manner which causes a slight smile to appear upon my lips. He is well mannered, I can tell. I decide to close in the distance between Rana and myself by twenty meters. By this position I am able to clearly see his face and realize that something is moving inside the Male's coat. I do not believe that it is the wind, the movements are against the wind's direction and are too fast.

“Hello Rana-san. My name is Naevia Perne.” I say softly, softening my gaze despite I am somewhat skeptical. “I am quite well thank you.” My gaze shifts toward the Male's hands in search for any weaponry or an attempt in attacking. “And yourself?” I finish, eying the male quickly. Kali is not mentioned at this time, but my Wolf studies the male thoroughly yet doesn't seem to find anything alarming about him. I notice this by how she is standing and her fur is not on end. Rana poses no threat so therefore, my posture loosens slightly.