Rei vs Rosie

[Natsy]

[/b] 100x100m
- No need to state weapons, just use what's in your bio
- No attacking on the first post.
- Questions are aloud cause this is a lesson after all lol
- Have fun![/i][/size][/font][/ul][/blockquote][/blockquote][/justify]

[Natsy]

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i

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[atrb=style, background-image: url(http://i.imgur.com/CoWD3.png);] Shoryureppa...!Shinryuken...! [STYLE=font-family: century gothic; font-size: 20px; margin-top: -2px; color: #CEC6AA; letter-spacing: 2px; opacity: 0.40;margin-left: 30px]Feel my burning vigor![/style] [STYLE=margin-top: 6px; height: 80px; width: 480px; border-radius: 25px; background-image: url(http://i.imgur.com/5idVC.png); opacity: 1][/style][STYLE=font-size: 11px; font-family: arial; margin-right: 13px; margin-left: 13px; text-align: justify; background-color: #787576; padding: 13px; color: #000000; margin-top: 6px; opacity: 0.95; margin-bottom: 1px; width:460px; height: 450px; overflow: auto;]Rei walks into the arena staring at his surroundings in awe. He hadn't been on arena battles often and never the one participating in the fight itself so it was a whole new experience to him. He knew however that he had worked hard for this and believed he was prepared. The announcer was telling him something but he was to distracted looking at the grass surrounding the concrete square in the middle where Rei was heading so he needed to have the instructions said once again. Finally he found himself standing on the huge square with his eyes set on his opponent. He greeted her with a warm smile. [/style][/classy][STYLE=margin-top: 6px; height: 220px; width: 480px; border-radius: 25px; background-image: url(http://i.imgur.com/5idVC.png); opacity: 1] [newclass=kentemp ::-webkit-scrollbar-thumb]background: #565656;[/newclass] [newclass=kentemp ::-webkit-scrollbar]height: 2px; width: 8px; background: #565656787576;[/newclass] [/style][/style]

[Natsy]

i

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[atrb=border,0,true][atrb=style, bpx-shadow: 0px 0px 5px #ffffff; -moz-box-shadow: 0px 0px 5px #ffffff; -webkit-box-shadow: 0px 0px 5px #ffffff; width: 450px; background: white;] After the referee spoke, introducing the rules and such and seeing another male approach the scene, I knew immediately that he was to be my opponent. I glance at him as he smiled at me and gave him a simple nod – like bow. He was at least nine or ten inches taller than myself, looked in his late teens to early twenties, with scruffy blonde hair up to his shoulders, well muscled arms and a orange outfit. Personally he looked every bit of a boxer to me. But the one thing that caught my full attention was the fact that he was from Konohagakure. “Hi, I'm Rosalie.” I say in my young toned voice. He will soon realize that he is not fighting a teen, but a child and this causes a wide smile to break out across my face. I wondered then if he was going to go easy on me. However, I turn around and walks ten feet away and parts my legs into a stance. I had a feeling this man preferred close combat, so giving him that will require work. “Let's show me what you've got!” I then say in a taunting voice before awaiting for the referee to give the all clear.

[/b] Wow, nice template! I am allowing you to make the first move. So post when ready. Also, it would be wise to state your distance away from your foe, and where you are like are you standing ten feet away and slightly to the left of Rosalie? Or ten feet right in front of her. That will give your opponent an idea of where your character is standing and will give you more ideas of where and how to strike. If you have any questions or problems, don't hesitate to state them in your next post. Oh, and sorry for the wait.[/i][/size][/font][/ul][/blockquote][/blockquote][/justify]

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[atrb=style, background-image: url(http://i.imgur.com/CoWD3.png);] Shoryureppa...!Shinryuken...! [STYLE=font-family: century gothic; font-size: 20px; margin-top: -2px; color: #CEC6AA; letter-spacing: 2px; opacity: 0.40;margin-left: 30px]Feel my burning vigor![/style] [STYLE=margin-top: 6px; height: 80px; width: 480px; border-radius: 25px; background-image: url(http://i.imgur.com/5idVC.png); opacity: 0.7][/style][STYLE=font-size: 11px; font-family: arial; margin-right: 13px; margin-left: 13px; text-align: justify; background-color: #787576; padding: 13px; color: #000000; margin-top: 6px; opacity: 0.95; margin-bottom: 1px; width:460px; height: 450px; overflow: auto;]After he greeted her, Rei tok a better look at his opponent. A young girl, well shorter than he was. He wondered what exactly she was capable of, but whatever she could do it didn't matter. As the referee was finishing with the explanation of the rules, Rei closed his eyes and breathed in and out slowly. He concentrated. Nothing else mattered except the fight, he stopped hearing the voice of the referee, he didn't hear the greeting the girl sent him, he was deaf to the sounds of the blowing wind. After he opened his eyes again he locked them on his opponent, looking at her with all the determination in the world. At that time he was standing exactly ten feet away infront of the girl as he was taking his fighting stance. A second later the referee announced the start of the battle. At that time Rei was in a semi crouched position, he fixed his footing for better maneuverability and then rushed towards his enemy. When he got within fighting distance of the girl he would attempt to begin his combo of hits starting with two fast jabs from his left hand aimed at the right side of the opponent's face. Within the stance that he used, his left arm was standing further away thus being faster due to the shorter path it had to cover before meeting it's target. After the two distracting quick jabs, Rei would attempt to send a powerful right hook with his stronger hand aimed at the lower left side of her face where her lower cheek and jaw were placed. Being as swift as he could the hook would closely be followed by a jab towards the enemy's stomach, taking advantage of the attention she was probably suposed to put in defending her face. During this time of punches he would never let himself get out of balance or forget about his stance, thus keeping his guard up while punching.[/style][/classy][STYLE=margin-top: 6px; height: 220px; width: 480px; border-radius: 25px; background-image: url(http://i.imgur.com/5idVC.png); opacity: 0.8][/style][STYLE=font-size: 11px; font-family: arial; margin-right: 13px; margin-left: 13px; text-align: justify; background-color: #787576; padding: 13px; color: #000000; margin-top: 6px; opacity: 0.95; margin-bottom: 1px; width:460px; height: 120px; overflow: auto;]Semi-Crouch Rank: "E" Skill: TaiJutsu Effect: A semi-crouched stance used in boxing. Special: --- Drawback: --- Description: Picture You may choose to fight from a crouch (or semi-crouch) position during a boxing match. If you choose this option, lean forward rather than maintaining an upright position, whilst making sure your feet are kept close together. The most important thing to remember when adopting a balanced boxing stance is to relax. If you start to become tense, your balance will be negatively affected and you will be more likely to receive a harmful blow from your opponent. Your neck and back should never feel under any pressure. If your neck and back do feel tense, you may be leaning your shoulders too far forward and not rotating your hips in line with them. If you want to increase the range of your punches, try positioning your front foot ahead of your head. To see the difference that this new stance can make, stand in front of a punch bag whilst keeping your back foot steady and in the normal position. Punch forward slowly and keep your punch at its full extension. After this, move your lead foot in front of your head and repeat the punching movement. Stop the punch at its full extension and you should be able to notice the increased range now available to you. When practicing this variation, keep the other elements of the orthodox stance, such as the position of the elbows and chin, the same. Limit: Must learn in a gym that teaches Bokushingu (Boxing) The Jab Rank: "D" Skill: TaiJutsu Effect: A quick, straight punch thrown with the lead hand from the guard position. Special: --- Drawback: --- Description: Picture Stand with your feet hip distance apart. Step your right foot back 18-24 inches with the weight of your right leg on the ball of your foot (right heel is somewhat elevated and the knees are slightly bent). Bring your right fist close to your right cheek bone and your left fist slightly in front of it about jaw height. Pull your elbows in towards your ribs so that they line up somewhat below your fists. Push off of the ball of the right foot, bend the left knee slightly and start to extend the left hand in a pushing type motion (there should be a subtle rotation as your left hand goes forward your right shoulder moves back). You may also rotate the fist so that when it reaches the desired destination your left palm will be facing down. Retract the left hand as fast as you extended it and return to the original position. Remember before punching relax the hand, snap it forward and clinch before making contact. Do your best to strike with the first two knuckles and keep your wrist in neutral position upon impact. Aim six to eight inches beyond your target. Extend the arm only about 90-95 percent. Keep your chin tucked down toward your chest--this protects your jaw from exposure to being hit. Bring your hand back as fast as you throw it. Move your head on an angle as you throw the punch. Limit: Must learn in a gym that teaches Bokushingu (Boxing), Must know Upright Stance or Semi-Crouch The Hook Rank: "D" Skill: TaiJutsu Effect: A semi-circular punch thrown with the lead hand or rear hand to the side of the opponent's head. Special: --- Drawback: --- Description: Picture Shift your weight subtly forward by slightly bending your front leg while elevating your lead elbow to about shoulder height. Push off your front leg to shift your weight more towards the back leg while rotating your torso in the same direction with your lead hand heading towards a specific target. For the purpose of this intro we'll aim face high. That rotation and shifting motion should be accompanied by a whipping or thrusting of the hips. If you have your left leg forward and are throwing a lead hand hook (left hand hook) your hips should thrust from left to right while executing this punch. The punch should reach its mark with tremendous force. This will happen by throwing it fast and aiming to land your fist 6 to 8 inches beyond your target. Your fist can either be positioned to have your palm facing you or the ground. Return to your original stance. Do your best to hit your target with your first two knuckles. Limit: Must learn in a gym that teaches Bokushingu (Boxing), Must know Upright Stance or Semi-Crouch[/style] [/classy][newclass=kentemp ::-webkit-scrollbar-thumb]background: #565656;[/newclass][newclass=kentemp ::-webkit-scrollbar]height: 2px; width: 8px; background: #565656787576;[/newclass][/style][/style]

(OOC: Uhh, is this any good?)

[Natsy]

i

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[atrb=border,0,true][atrb=style, bpx-shadow: 0px 0px 5px #ffffff; -moz-box-shadow: 0px 0px 5px #ffffff; -webkit-box-shadow: 0px 0px 5px #ffffff; width: 450px; background: white;] It seemed as if the male had no interest in speaking to me at all. Fancy that, not knowing the name of your opponent. I shrug and watched silently, but as the ref stated that the fight is now in session, the man bolted in my direction head on which only made me smile. Seeing as this male showed his determination and intimidation toward me, I quickly withdraw my Tessen Fan and opens it with one swift flick of the wrist. Intimidation will not scare me into submission that easily. After my chakra began flowing through the stems of the fan, I swing the large weapon in a slashing manner and releases the chakra abruptly. A large sickle of wind, clear in sight and moving with deadly speed, rushes toward Rei with accuracy and killer intent. Although I had a feeling the man would move out of the way, so I wasn't worried about the jutsu killing him. The fan is briefly closed, re-strapped to my person before my hands lace together into a series of handseals before exerting my chakra into the air. By then, ten invisible needles form in the area above my head before they are launched off toward my foe if he manages to aviod my first attack. I have arranged the needles so that they will attack in the straight, horizontal line so either ducking or jumping would be ideal. If Rei is focused enough he should see them moving through the air, giving off a slight glimmer of a effect, however, if he should dodge the attack, my hands quickly dip into my butt-bag to retrieve two Kunai knives before they too, are hurled toward him. Keeping him at a distance is my primary objective.

Jutsu|Techniques Used:

• Futon: Bukisuraisu
  Rank: C
  Skill: Taijutsu
  Effect: Using a weapon or ones hand, the user slash's the air creating a sickle shaped gust of wind mixed with chakra that speeds out cutting anything in its way before eventually dissapitating.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: Accuracy counts and as the gust keep moving, they can damage anything in the area.
  Description: Not to be confused with Temari's Kamaitachi no Jutsu which requires a fan. The user gathers chakra to there hands or weapon and slash the air, diagonally in front of them with much force as a sickle shaped gust of wind blows out incredibly fast. It can cut down opponents, inflicting a moderate amount of damage and chop down trees. It has even been known to cut through rock when used with enough force. Can also repel weapons and even sound waves.
  Limit: Must have Wind Release
  
  
• Fuuton Kaze no Senbon (Needles of the Wind)
  Rank: "D"
  Skill: NinJutsu
  Effect: User hurls a mixture of senbon needles in the form of wind to cut into the opponent.
  Special: "Handseals"
  Drawback: ---
  Description: The ninja gathers air with his hands and mixes it with chakra, by doing this he transforms them into sharp and deadly needles. The needles are almost invisible so it is hard for the enemies to see them. This technique may be blocked by large objects, however something small such as a sword, or a staff will allow the needles to seperate still moving towards the object it was originally sent to. Not a powerful technique as the user is capable of hurling up to ten senbon wind needles that gives out minor cuts. However this could be used as a more of a set up technique to allow the user to perform a more dangerous technique.
  Limit: Must have the Wind Release
  
  
• 2|10 Kunai Knives used.

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[atrb=style, background-image: url(http://i.imgur.com/CoWD3.png);] Shoryureppa...!Shinryuken...! [STYLE=font-family: century gothic; font-size: 20px; margin-top: -2px; color: #CEC6AA; letter-spacing: 2px; opacity: 0.40;margin-left: 30px]Feel my burning vigor![/style] [STYLE=margin-top: 6px; height: 80px; width: 480px; border-radius: 25px; background-image: url(http://i.imgur.com/5idVC.png); opacity: 0.7][/style][STYLE=font-size: 11px; font-family: arial; margin-right: 13px; margin-left: 13px; text-align: justify; background-color: #787576; padding: 13px; color: #000000; margin-top: 6px; opacity: 0.95; margin-bottom: 1px; width:460px; height: 450px; overflow: auto;]Soon after rushing his opponent, Rei saw that she was drawing out a fan. Soon enough he realized what is going to follow. Images of winds being sent at him in an attempt to keep him at bay appeared in his mind. As the opponent was drawing out her fan, Rei reached in his buttbag, drawing out a couple of shurikens. As swift as he could he sent them out at her opponent. He made sure the shuriken's path of flight wasn't going to colide with her technique so they wouldn't be stopped in mid air. After he had forced his oponent to dodge the shurikens instead of proceeding with further techniques, Rei would trow one of his bolas that he got out of his buttbag if she was to dodge the shurikens. Having his eyes set on the attack flying towards him rei ducked low to the ground, quickly recovering his footing after the technique had passed him. After that he would continue his rush towards the enemy from the side and once he got in less than a meter from her he would attempt to perform the array of hits described in his previous post.[/style][/classy][STYLE=margin-top: 6px; height: 220px; width: 480px; border-radius: 25px; background-image: url(http://i.imgur.com/5idVC.png); opacity: 0.8][/style][STYLE=font-size: 11px; font-family: arial; margin-right: 13px; margin-left: 13px; text-align: justify; background-color: #787576; padding: 13px; color: #000000; margin-top: 6px; opacity: 0.95; margin-bottom: 1px; width:460px; height: 120px; overflow: auto;]Semi-Crouch Rank: "E" Skill: TaiJutsu Effect: A semi-crouched stance used in boxing. Special: --- Drawback: --- Description: Picture You may choose to fight from a crouch (or semi-crouch) position during a boxing match. If you choose this option, lean forward rather than maintaining an upright position, whilst making sure your feet are kept close together. The most important thing to remember when adopting a balanced boxing stance is to relax. If you start to become tense, your balance will be negatively affected and you will be more likely to receive a harmful blow from your opponent. Your neck and back should never feel under any pressure. If your neck and back do feel tense, you may be leaning your shoulders too far forward and not rotating your hips in line with them. If you want to increase the range of your punches, try positioning your front foot ahead of your head. To see the difference that this new stance can make, stand in front of a punch bag whilst keeping your back foot steady and in the normal position. Punch forward slowly and keep your punch at its full extension. After this, move your lead foot in front of your head and repeat the punching movement. Stop the punch at its full extension and you should be able to notice the increased range now available to you. When practicing this variation, keep the other elements of the orthodox stance, such as the position of the elbows and chin, the same. Limit: Must learn in a gym that teaches Bokushingu (Boxing) The Jab Rank: "D" Skill: TaiJutsu Effect: A quick, straight punch thrown with the lead hand from the guard position. Special: --- Drawback: --- Description: Picture Stand with your feet hip distance apart. Step your right foot back 18-24 inches with the weight of your right leg on the ball of your foot (right heel is somewhat elevated and the knees are slightly bent). Bring your right fist close to your right cheek bone and your left fist slightly in front of it about jaw height. Pull your elbows in towards your ribs so that they line up somewhat below your fists. Push off of the ball of the right foot, bend the left knee slightly and start to extend the left hand in a pushing type motion (there should be a subtle rotation as your left hand goes forward your right shoulder moves back). You may also rotate the fist so that when it reaches the desired destination your left palm will be facing down. Retract the left hand as fast as you extended it and return to the original position. Remember before punching relax the hand, snap it forward and clinch before making contact. Do your best to strike with the first two knuckles and keep your wrist in neutral position upon impact. Aim six to eight inches beyond your target. Extend the arm only about 90-95 percent. Keep your chin tucked down toward your chest--this protects your jaw from exposure to being hit. Bring your hand back as fast as you throw it. Move your head on an angle as you throw the punch. Limit: Must learn in a gym that teaches Bokushingu (Boxing), Must know Upright Stance or Semi-Crouch The Hook Rank: "D" Skill: TaiJutsu Effect: A semi-circular punch thrown with the lead hand or rear hand to the side of the opponent's head. Special: --- Drawback: --- Description: Picture Shift your weight subtly forward by slightly bending your front leg while elevating your lead elbow to about shoulder height. Push off your front leg to shift your weight more towards the back leg while rotating your torso in the same direction with your lead hand heading towards a specific target. For the purpose of this intro we'll aim face high. That rotation and shifting motion should be accompanied by a whipping or thrusting of the hips. If you have your left leg forward and are throwing a lead hand hook (left hand hook) your hips should thrust from left to right while executing this punch. The punch should reach its mark with tremendous force. This will happen by throwing it fast and aiming to land your fist 6 to 8 inches beyond your target. Your fist can either be positioned to have your palm facing you or the ground. Return to your original stance. Do your best to hit your target with your first two knuckles. Limit: Must learn in a gym that teaches Bokushingu (Boxing), Must know Upright Stance or Semi-Crouch 3|90 Shurikens 1|2 Bolas[/style] [/classy][newclass=kentemp ::-webkit-scrollbar-thumb]background: #565656;[/newclass][newclass=kentemp ::-webkit-scrollbar]height: 2px; width: 8px; background: #565656787576;[/newclass][/style][/style]

[Natsy]

[/b] For now I'm gonna simply state your mistakes. I will do a post tomorrow since my eyes are hanging out of my head. Hope you don't mind.

This post was better in appearance. However, a few typos were visible. In the first paragraph you mentioned:[/i]

“As swift as he could he sent them out at her opponent.”

Also, the needle technique is almost invisible to the naked eye. So simply stating:

“Having his eyes set on the attack flying towards him rei ducked low to the ground, quickly recovering his footing after the technique had passed him.”

That would not exactly cut it because the needles are made of wind and therefore, are transparent, giving little to no visibility whatsoever. So next time someone uses a jutsu like that, you will need to word things carefully in order to safely get out of the way. Plus with being a Taijutsu Master, are you in possession of any sensing jutsu? Like the Brawler's Second Sense technique? Or Krav Maga's Combat Perception jutsu? If so, that could have come in handy for a jutsu that you cannot see. Stating those passive jutsu at the beginning of a battle and stating that they will be forever active will help you further on down the track.

Also, the last bit of your post:

“After that he would continue his rush towards the enemy from the side and once he got in less than a meter from her he would attempt to perform the array of hits described in his previous post.”

Your character started off rushing toward mine head on, and had dodged it mid way between the three meter mark. That would require a lot of speed. And for someone of your character's build, that might prove a bit of a challenge unless Rei's muscles are mostly for show, which I doubt since he is a Tai Master. So attacking Rose from the side would prove difficult because Rose was throwing Kunai, senbon needles made of wind and a sickle of jutsu in the front range of where your character was dodging. I should have stated where the Kunai were heading so I apologize for that. But stating the last bit of that post above, may I suggest that you word it differently, remember, your charry is fighting. You may want to describe the attack then stating the previous post bit^^[/size][/font][/ul][/blockquote][/blockquote][/justify]

[reizaku]

OOC: I think there is some kind of a misunderstanding. “Having his eyes set on the attack flying towards him rei ducked low to the ground, quickly recovering his footing after the technique had passed him.” this is referred to your first attack which was the wind sickle jutsu- Futon: Bukisuraisu. The point of that paragraph was trowing the shurikens while you trow ur Futon: Bukisuraisu, thus stopping u from trowing the wind needles and the kunai that u did after ur wind sickle. So the ducking, dodging of the attack was referred to the sickle as you can't perform the rest of your attack due to the shurikens flying towards you. And yes my char has a "hightened perception" technique, i should've mention it at the start.

[Natsy]

[/b] Then when was the part mentioned about my[/i] needles of the wind technique?[/size][/font][/ul][/blockquote][/blockquote][/justify]