Nova
Oct 6, 2011 20:11:52 GMT -7
Post by ✗Gohma✗ on Oct 6, 2011 20:11:52 GMT -7
Not sure if this is exactly where I should post this, but I was looking to get input in this. It's a story that I want to make for NaNoWriMo. So I might be a little inactive, and I emphasize a little. How does this book sound and if you have any ideas that would help me, or break me, please say them.
Nova
Main Information
- Name: Mars Alence (Main Character)
- Where: Owl Country (A country filled with darkness and dead trees)
The Haven: The only civilized spot in all of Owl Country. Also, the only underground village that is put on the map.
- Nova: A substance of energy sealed within a newborn with a ritual to excrete a power. Aggression, or adrenaline is required to release Nova. Nova can be transmitted as an element of some sort, and can give complete control over one or two elements. Through clans all around the Nova universe, elements can be tweaked and given extremely valuable conditions which can prove useful in combat.
Nova Villages
- The Haven (Owl Country) – The only civilized spot in all of Owl Country. Also, the only underground village that is put on the map.
- The Sanctuary (Eagle Country) – A village built high in the mountains and guarded by a large fence. It looks a lot like a nest of some sort.
- The Syndicate (Frog Country) – A poor village, that doesn't get a lot of profit from it's associates. It's built around a marsh.
- The Oasis (Tiger Country) – A hot arid village with a lot of neighbors. The food isn't abundant but the land is inexpensive.
- The Blockade (Dragonfly Country) – A windy and lush village. It's surrounded by valleys which guide the wind.
- The Regiment (Bear Country) – A large village with a huge military output. It's caressed by nooks and crannies of rocks.
Main Input/Possible Output:
Mars is forced to go on a low ranking quest for the village: Go to The Blockade and receive the supplies for the Haven. The carriage would be waiting in the front of the village. Though when Mars arrives he notices that the village is being attacked by Regiment soldiers. Just when Mars was about to retreat, he is taken captive from Regiment officials. They interrogate him about what he knows about his village, but help soon arrives after receiving word of his disappearance and the battle between villages.
The holding cell that was keeping Mars in, was infiltrated by fellow clan members who retrieve Mars from his imprisonment. The information sacrificed by Mars at expense of his own life was unfortunately already transferred to the regiment superiors. Their village would be pursued a matter of weeks later. In the state that the blockade is in, they cannot give support to The Haven. At the same time, The Sanctuary, who are sworn enemies of the haven, are taking advantage of the heist. They will show up to the devastation.
Nova
Main Information
- Name: Mars Alence (Main Character)
- Where: Owl Country (A country filled with darkness and dead trees)
The Haven: The only civilized spot in all of Owl Country. Also, the only underground village that is put on the map.
- Nova: A substance of energy sealed within a newborn with a ritual to excrete a power. Aggression, or adrenaline is required to release Nova. Nova can be transmitted as an element of some sort, and can give complete control over one or two elements. Through clans all around the Nova universe, elements can be tweaked and given extremely valuable conditions which can prove useful in combat.
Nova Villages
- The Haven (Owl Country) – The only civilized spot in all of Owl Country. Also, the only underground village that is put on the map.
- The Sanctuary (Eagle Country) – A village built high in the mountains and guarded by a large fence. It looks a lot like a nest of some sort.
- The Syndicate (Frog Country) – A poor village, that doesn't get a lot of profit from it's associates. It's built around a marsh.
- The Oasis (Tiger Country) – A hot arid village with a lot of neighbors. The food isn't abundant but the land is inexpensive.
- The Blockade (Dragonfly Country) – A windy and lush village. It's surrounded by valleys which guide the wind.
- The Regiment (Bear Country) – A large village with a huge military output. It's caressed by nooks and crannies of rocks.
Main Input/Possible Output:
Mars is forced to go on a low ranking quest for the village: Go to The Blockade and receive the supplies for the Haven. The carriage would be waiting in the front of the village. Though when Mars arrives he notices that the village is being attacked by Regiment soldiers. Just when Mars was about to retreat, he is taken captive from Regiment officials. They interrogate him about what he knows about his village, but help soon arrives after receiving word of his disappearance and the battle between villages.
The holding cell that was keeping Mars in, was infiltrated by fellow clan members who retrieve Mars from his imprisonment. The information sacrificed by Mars at expense of his own life was unfortunately already transferred to the regiment superiors. Their village would be pursued a matter of weeks later. In the state that the blockade is in, they cannot give support to The Haven. At the same time, The Sanctuary, who are sworn enemies of the haven, are taking advantage of the heist. They will show up to the devastation.