Perception of Life [P/T]

[theron]

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Phantasm Perception
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: With this technique the user is capable of performing Jutsus that deals with the type of perception of Phantasm kind.
Special: ---
Drawback: Without this the user is unable to perform Jutsus dealing with the Phantasm Perception.
Description: Phantasm Perception creates a mental image usually only the user and the opponent (or opponents) of the technique can perceive. These are considered to be as personalized techniques that affects the opponent's mind. These techniques could be messages, dream stopping, complete disarray techniques. Phantasm Techniques are known to harm the person's mind, making them feel weaker, harming them through the perception of the mind but not with real life effects. Phantasm techniques are all in their heads, and are known to make people go crazy. Third parties viewing or studying the scene do not notice the phantasm. All phantasms are mind-affecting Jutsus.
Limit: No Limitation

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Harbor District

Fumihiro Ishimaru walked along the harbor staring at the ships. He felt so strange looking at the ships and the people walking around. He really hated the harbor district because he grew up there poor and weak like post around there were. He pumped into a rich family that were moving around the ships like they were better then everyone else which made him angry. After they got past him he turned around stared at them. He let his mind just fix at on them being in the worst mental state ever. His emotions of his past came up to the surface to cause him to remember his first day in the harbor district.

He remembers walking along the streets as a young child, around the age of 12, stumbling back and forth as he walked. His eyes were bloodshot and had bags under them from the lack of sleep. His body was thin and frail as he moved forward he notice a man sitting on a crate eating some bread. He smiled a half starved smile as drool ran down his lip as he began to run forward at top speed. He jumped pulling food right out of the mans hands and taking off. The man looked up seeing the boy running and his starved body and just sighed letting boy run off with the bread.

He snapped back to reality as his eyes narrowed in on them. They stopped from a feeling they were being looked at. As they turned they blinked and looked at themselves. They froze stopping and just staring into space. A voice spoke into there mind telling them to look around and see what they will become. It was a fitting torture for the snobby people who had everything but no passion to be kind to the less fortunate. He hate people like that because when he was younger he always fought people like that hating them for everything they put him through.

He took a step back blinking as he realized what he did. He took another step back as the were release from the perception. He turned and took off running he turned hard down an alley as they turned to see a blur running and turning down a alley. They just blinked and teared up running along down the street. He stopped in the alley near the back slowly sliding down to his knees in a puddle of water crying. His tears falling down into the puddle. His dislike for those that put him in the poor situation now went through his mind. He was not going to turn into one of them with his power. He became a medical ninja to help the unfortunate which was why he became what he is trying to be.

With a little sigh and a effort he pushed himself up onto his feet. He sighed alittle looking around to see that he was not followed and walked out. He slowly moved out of the opposite end of the ally where he entered. He looked around to see if anyone was looking for him and quickly exited the alley disapearing into the crowd.

[kuragari]

+10

Alright, so I grade really easy on perceptions / releases because learning them is a pain in the ass.

For everything else, I only grade the parts of the post where training happens (so the last three paragraphs in this case). Everybody grades differently, but for me, I only give +10s for 450+ words of training or training related stuff.

[theron]

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Fumihiro moved out along the docks. His eyes were hidden under his white hair. He pushed through people slowly coming forward. He stopped looking up as 3 kids were running holding a bag that had some food in it. He focused in on the kids that were moving through the crowds running from a shop keeper who was carrying a broom. His eyes widen as he just stared at the kids as they stopped in their tracks and just stood there. The shop keeper came up to them and stopped seeing Fumihiro came through the crowd of people and stopped in front of the shop keeper. He placed 300 ryo in the shop keeper’s hands and he left.

He sighed a little crouching down beside the kids as they came out of there dazed position sitting there looking up at him. The food had been sprawled all across the ground. People were just ignoring them walking past. He gathered there food for them and placed it down on the bag. He was trying to be nice to the kids. They looked up at his scared face and stood up looking at him scared and afraid of him. He looked at them and took in a deep breath. He looked in their eyes with his left eye. They froze and stood there as he told them to that he paid for their food so they would not get in trouble. They just stared at him and slowly looked at each other confused as they were not sure what was going on. He nodded to them and stood up walking past them moving around them and down the street.

He moved up the street and stopped seeing a group of teens surrounding a younger male. He glared at them through his hair and his medallions. He moved toward them and stopped behind them. They turned to look at him and look at him in his face. Their mistake was great for they froze looking at him. He looked down at the younger male and motioned for him to leave. He stood up and took off running down an alley. He turned to them as they unfroze from there temporary stasis. They rushed him and he raised his fist ready to punch then stopped as he just smiled, his smile was very twisted and dark as he looked back up into their face and they stopped again. A message went through their mind as they quickly shivered realizing what he was doing and they stopped there advancement turning and running away scared of him. He looked down at his feet, tears began to fall from his face and land on the street. He turned and continued to walk heading for an alley to get some rest. It was where he stayed and slept when he was not out doing something. His tears ran down cold as they fell splashing in puddles. His tears ran down cold and large as the anger of what he is trying not to become re-entered his mind.

[kuragari]

+10 O.o

[theron]

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Fumihiro laid down in the alley on a four large crates relaxing slowly letting his eyes close but heard a noise turning over to see a women being chased by a dog. He grunted and rolled falling to the ground and slowly stood as the women ran past he opened his eyes wide as the dog ran toward him stopping the dog moving slow in his sight. The dog slowly came to a halt in front of him as he raised his fist and punched straight down into the dogs head making it fall forward and skid across the ground. He and the dog returned back to normal. The dog stood up and ran off its tail between its legs running full spring out of the alley. He smiled as he fell to his knee hard staying down with his knee on the ground. He forced himself to stand as the lady ran up and hugging him from behind as three men entered both ends of the alley.

They slowly walked forward toward him and the women. He slowly looked up and coughed as he was not feeling good from this because he was starting to be so drained from the usage of the power he has been trying to learn. He turned his head to the group on his left as they stopped feeling pain there the stomach making them buckled over in pain. He quickly turned to the ones to the right and stared at them they stopped as they heard a voice in their mind saying, “Come and closer and you will die. For this woman is not yours to harm.” They looked at each other the group on the right started to come in closer and closer and as they blinked they both disappeared. They blinked as they looked around and walked past them not seeing them standing right in front of them and just turned and left. The women let go of him and looked at him.

He looked down at her and sighed a little as he looked into her eyes. She slowly backed up as she slowly feel down to her knee’s He caught her half way down and smiled a little as he did. He placed her on the crates and left the alley. He had put her to a temporary sleep that would not last long but would last long enough for him to leave the alley. He staggered to an alley a few blocks away and collapsed onto a pile of crates just laying there unconscious and slept there with no care to the world. His dream’s brought tears to his sleeping eyes. They fell down the sides of his head to the crates behind his head. He sat up as his dream ended it was morning of another day. He looked up at the sky see that it was just about to rain. He lowered his head as he now had to go back to the alley and gather up his puppet.

[kuragari]

+10

[theron]

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Kanetsu no Gyou (Heat Seeker)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Raises the body temperature.
Special: --
Drawback: Overuse can cause a fever in the body.
Description: The user focuses chakra into their hands yet again, creating a faintly red glow around them. The user then places his hands to the chest of the body in question, heating it and raising body temperature. This technique will prevent such ailments as hypothermia. However, using this technique continuously for four movements in a cured or healthy body will cause a fever to break out.
Limit: Must be a medic.

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Fumihiro stood in the alley with his back to a large amount of crates that sat behind him. His eyes closed as he was focusing. His chakra flowed through his body fairly quickly. His hands were placed palm to palm which helped him imagine things for some reason. He opened his eyes and his body temperature rose a few degrees but then dropped again down to normal. He sighed a little looking down at his feet again with a sad look on his face looking in a puddle that reflected his face back which made him even sadder but more determined to perfect this technique. He took a deep breath and smiled closing his eyes once again and concentrating. His hair was wiped up in a breeze.

Fumihiro’s concentration went very deep. His body began to warm up slowly not raising to quickly but fast enough he could feel the difference. He opened his eyes and the warmth that he had gathered just dropped back to normal. He sighed a little taking in another deep breath and this time keeping his eyes open. His chakra flowed quickly through his body beginning to warm him up quickly. He smiled as he warmed up and moved his hands out away from each other down to his sides, but the warm feeling he got died away going back to normal body temperature. He grumbled something behind his raggedy scarf and placed his hands back out at his side just standing there.

He focused hard trying to warm up his body keeping it at a nice warm temperature. His body warmed up quickly and with a surprise he started to give off a slight glow of red. He smiled as he turned toward the left side of the alley and started to walk. The glow on his body began to fade as he walked along the alley causing him to stop. He focused again placing his eyes on the sky remember the feeling of the warm summer sun on his shoulders and head. He grunted beginning to warm up again to a red glow that covered his body.

He smiled as he started to walk forward. The glow stayed with him as he began to run at a slow jog moving through puddles stepping in them causing cool water to touch his hot body sending chills through the body making him jump a little as he ran. He started to breathe normally as he started to increase his speed running forward. He quickly came to a stop as he ran into a man who had just ended up walking across the alley. He looked up at the man who had fallen with him and smiled a soft smile. The man spoke, “Are you ok? Are you sick”? Fumihiro looked up at him a shook his head and spoke in his shy timid tone, “I-I am f-fine thank you”. The man helped him up and started walking back down the street. He let out a sigh of relief as the glow slowly went away.

[kuragari]

+10 nice job

[theron]

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Equipment Exchange
Rank: "D"
Skill: Supplementary
Effect: Allows the user to place in, take out, and even exchange Puppetry Equipment Slots.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Simple tech all puppeteers may use, and is recommended they learn. With this technique the user is able to take any puppet and modify it to an extent. The user is able to take any generic puppet, and switch around any kind of Puppetry Equipment Slot they see fit. If a user purchases a generic puppet with no Equipment inside it, they may still place in Equipment inside said puppet. An example would be if user has a puppet with a Bo-Shuriken Launcher, they are able to take out the Launcher and switch it with another kind of Launcher, or any item that takes up the exact amount of spacing.
Limit: Must be a Puppeteer.

Fumihiro sat on a crate in an alley looking over what looked to be a body from a distance but from up close someone could tell it was a puppet. He sighed a little looking at the puppet as he took the puppets had off and started to work on it. He moved his hand around inside the puppets head around the mouth area. He was putting in a grenade launcher that he had got. He placed it so he could activate it so when the puppets mouth opened he can have it shoot a grenade out and hit its target. It was an effective way especially if he were to use it properly. He pulled his hand out of the puppets head and mouth reattaching it.

He moved down to the puppets left arm. He took it off taking it apart looking inside its hollow arm and smiled with a delighted smile. He placed in a flame-thrower that would shoot a flame out to burn opponents. He slide the pipe out a few times out of the hand to show that it was working and leaned back a little looking at the arm. He placed his hands on his head and sighed a little looking up at the head again then at the medallion that hung from his hair. They looked quit alike in shape. He smiled as he got another idea that could work but he was not sure if he could pull it off without getting hurt badly.

He moved to the opposite side of the puppet looking at its right arm and sighed again looking at the puppets right arm. He grunted as he pulled the puppets arm off and started working on it. He opened the arm up and reached inside it starting to place in the water stream shooter. He twisted the puppets hand till the opening to the water stream shooter got smaller. He reached up wiping the sweat from his brow and placed them on his knees and began to think. He sighed again realizing that he has made a mistake. He stood up looking down at the puppet with sad eyes knowing that this puppet will save his life maybe in the near future. He needed to get it right.

He pulled off the left and right arm of the puppet and placed them down sitting down again on the crate. He sat down with a grunt taking the arms apart. He thought of a joke and laughed saying to himself in a soft and timid voice, “I guess I am armed”. He let out a slight chuckle and sat back as he moved the water stream shooter from the right arm and placed it down on the crate. He moved the Flame-thrower from the left arm to the right arm and smiled down at it. He picked up the water stream shooter and placed it in the left arm up of the puppet beginning to put the puppet back together with a smile. He finished it and looked it over to make sure he did it right. And he succeed.

[kuragari]

+10

[theron]

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Sen’eitaishu (Hidden Shadow Bandage Hands)
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Wraps bandages around a patient or object.
Special: ---
Drawback: Must have a bandage source within the sleeve.
Description: The user thrusts their arm forward, releasing bandages from inside their sleeves towards the patient. These bandages are strong as ninja wire and fly forward at the speed of a kunai, wrapping around the target and immobilizing them. This technique has a range of five meters, plus five for every difficulty rank above D the user possesses.
Limit: Must be a medic.

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Standing in a alley, Fumihiro’s eyes closed as he moved his hands up to the side of his body. He had been surrounded by a large group of people. He quickly scanned through the group of them seeing many different faces. He counted them seeing 23 thugs around him. He sighed a grunted a little looking down at the ground. The first one rushed toward him hard and fast. He whipped his left hand up to smack block the attackers punch but instead the bandages around his arm full of his chakra whipped out smacking the attacker in the neck hard and causing him to fall onto his back hard looking up at the sky unconscious. He slowly dropped his hand back down to side and took a stance ready for them to come at him.

Two of the thugs rush at him hard. He stepped back placing his right foot toward one of the men as the other came forward. He stopped the man on his left catching a fist that came toward him with his left hand. The one the right was tripped as the bandages around his right leg grabbing the thugs foot pulling him off balance. The bandages around his left arm moved along the left thugs arm and restricted it up to his shoulder. He moved back away from the thug on the left toward the thug on the right and move the bandages as well to cause the bandages around his arm to break his arm. The bandages release him as he ran toward the thug on the right as he was getting up kneed him in the face hard.

Two more thugs rush his front and back. He was hit hard in the face making him fall back and get kicked in the back making him fall forward again. He moved his left arm up to in front of his face to block the kick that was aimed for his face. The thug from behind him moved toward his legs to grab him. The bandages from around his left arm stretched out rapping around the thug in front of hims leg and placing pressure down on the hip and down on the shin to snap the knee in half. The thug yelled in pain falling backwards giving Fumihiro time to kick his right leg back and hit the thug behind him in the knee cap making him fall backwards. He used his bandages to rap around the thugs leg and pull him onto his back and break his leg. He stood up slowly looking around at the people. He smiled and got ready as his dark nature in combat was coming to make an appearance. He was now losing his timid and shy nature. The battle was only just beginning. His body tensed up as the chakra flowed heavier and thicker into the bandages around his left arm and right leg. His hair fell down over his eyes causing shadows to cover his eyes.

[kuragari]

+10

[theron]

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He dashed forward fast toward 2 of them that were trying to attack his front. One of them stopped letting the other one continue. He reached out with his right hand out catching the throat of the charging one and smiled. He placed his left hand out his bandages shooting out long and grabbing onto the throat of the thug that stopped. He laughed as he moved toward the one being strangled slowly as he did. A wicked smile came across his face spreading as they went unconscious. His wicked inner he was going to make short work of them even if it got himself killed. The bandages retract back to his arm dropping the bodies to the ground. He spoke in an ominous tone, “Whose next?” They all glared at him for knocking them out.

They rushed him as a group. He raised his first up the bandages of his left arm spread out and gripped a 1 of them around his eyes blinding him. He jumped up onto his shoulders forcing him to the ground and with a swift punch to the head knocked him unconscious using the ground as the back force. He was grabbed from behind the thug pulling him off to have another thug run forward to punch him in the stomach. The bandages from his leg rap around his attacker and the thug behind him tripping them both. He swept his foot back knocking his older down and landing onto of him and head butting him in the face to knock him out. He dashed forward toward his attacker and jumped into the air and onto him crushes him and the thug behind him into the ground just hard enough to knock them out.

He turned dashed forward toward a two of the thugs and let his bandages rap around one of their throats and begins to cut off air flow. He jump landing on one of the thugs with his right hand punching him in the face. He rolled forward popping up and hopping into the air landing against a wall sliding down it and staring at them. They slowly made their way toward him and brought his hands up releasing the now unconscious thug from the bandages the bandages moving up to above his head and waving back and forth over his head.

Two of the thugs dashed forward toward him and he jumped landing on one of their shoulders this time just standing there looking down at him. He sighed as he was now getting bored. His combat side was bored from this little experience and wanted it just to end. He jumped in the air above them and placed his arms and legs out in a star shape. The bandages spraying out into four tendrils’s lashing around grabbing onto two of the thugs and launching them into the air. They crash into crates being knocked unconscious. He landed crouched and smiled at them as he was now interested on now how he could make them feel so much pain from his bandages. He got an idea but knew who is shy and timid side would not approve of it once it woke up.

[|Ayame Unbound|]

+10

[theron]

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Fumihiro looked at the 10 left, panting and tired he moved forward toward two of the thugs arm barring one across the throat with his left arm having him flip off his feet flipping backwards and landing on the back of his head unconscious. He moved bandages up and over a sign looking away from the other thug that was behind him who was moving up slowly behind him. The bandages ran down rapping around the thugs arms and lifted him up into the air then dropped him catching again break his arms at the joints. He sighed a little, the cracking sound of the bones breaking in the thug’s arms did not really satisfy his appetite for death and destruction but he really didn’t care. He did not want to listen to another mental lecture.

He readied himself for the next two. They came in hard and fast toward him faster than the others all holding knives. They rushed in swinging there blades at him. He brought his foot up and kicked the thug to his right with his right foot hitting him hard in the stomach. The bandages from his right foot sprang to life going up his chest and to his right arm and proceeds to snap the arm in half at the elbow. He punched the other thug to his left in the face the bandages running down his neck to his left arm and snaps that arm in half at the elbow as well. He brought his foot down and his left hand to his side.

He turned around to get his arm cut by a katana that was swung at him by the last 4 members of the group of thugs. He took a step back and sighed relaxing his body to muster up strength. He jumped straight into the air letting the bandages spread out from his body creating four tendrils out away from his body. The bands reach down grabbing them by different body parts and tossed them into the air. They landed in different places. He landed crouched placing his hands together and began to clap for them in an applauding manner. He looked at them as he closed his eyes and thought.

Fumihiro awoke from lying on the ground slowly waking up from what he thought was a nightmare. He looked around seeing what he thought were corpses. He quickly started to check each one to see if they were alive. He sighed a sigh of relief and started to mend their wounds. The bandages left his arm and leg spreading out and beginning to pull bodies toward him so he could heal them. He grunted as he was running low and every, energy, chakra and sleep. He slowly got up from finishing the healing moving forward toward the street. Once on the street he turned and just walked down the street leaving them in the alley way just laying there healed and bandaged up to fight another day. It was all he could do for them without being too friendly.

[|Ayame Unbound|]

Learned~

[theron]

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Tenrai Meimu: Eiei Karasu no Bunshin (Divine Illusion: Eternal Raven Clone)
Rank: “B” Rank
Skill: Genjutsu
Effect: Creates clones that, when hit, turn into a cluster of illusionary ravens that will fly back together within a turn.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: Every time the clones re-form requires additional chakra expenditure on the user’s behalf.
Description: The user performs the handseals, creating a much more powerful variation of the Bunshin no Jutsu. These Bunshins, when hit, will fall backwards completely off their feet. Before hitting the ground though, they begin to levitate within the air about an inch from the ground and then, after a few seconds, disperse into a mass of ravens. Within one turn, these Ravens have pieced themselves back together into the regular Bunshin.
Limit: Must know Phantasm Perception

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Fumihiro once again surrounded by a group of thugs, his back to a wall. This time he was ready for them and knew exactly want to do. He spoke in a normal tone of voice., “You people never learn….Never learn to leave me alone. Go away or something…Fine someone else to terrorize. “ They all just laughed which made him sigh of annoyance. He looked up at them seeing how many were there and counting how many were there. He quickly counted 31 of them and grunted. He did hand seals a clone appears beside him staring at them. They looked exactly alike, but the difference was that the other him was a raven clone. He had put them all in a powerful genjutsu that was called Tenrai Meimu: Eiei Karasu no Bunshin (Divine Illusion: Eternal Raven Clone).

The first of the thugs ran forward him and his clone ran forward. He dodged to the left as his clone went in to strike but was punched in the face. He fell back coming off his feet. He stopped inches from the ground and floated there dispersing into a group of raven. The cluster of ravens reformed behind the thug. The thug turned around and looking at the clone terrified that he was a demon. Fumihiro launched as he came right up behind the thug punching him hard in the kidney his fist embedding deep into the place where his kidney sits to the left side of his spine with enough force to knock him unconscious.

The second thug came in hard and fast onto him and the clone. He turned to the clone looking him in the face and side stepped the thug. The clone moved forward to in front of the attacker punching him in the face and was punched at the same time. The clone fell back coming off his feet. He stopped inches from the ground and floated there dispersing into a group of raven. The cluster of ravens reformed behind the thug. Fumihiro struck backwards with his elbow striking the thug in the face with a elbow making the thug leave his feet for a few moments landing on the back of his head causing him to fall unconscious from the blow.

He sighed turning to the rest of them and sighing feeling like they are pathetic. He ran forward toward one of the thugs bring his foot up only to be grabbed by the foot and shoved back. The clone jumped into the air landing in front of the thug and dashed forward and struck the thug across the face only to get punched in the face as well. The clone fell back coming off his feet. He stopped inches from the ground and floated there dispersing into a group of raven. The cluster of ravens reformed behind the thug. He regained himself landing on all fours and dashed forward hitting the thug in the stomach making him fall back causing him to hit his head on the ground knocking him out.

[|Ayame Unbound|]

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