Know all the Jutsu (training)

[11tails]

OOC: First training, apologies in advance to the unfortunate person who has to point out my flaws.

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Deido Nohara no Jutsu (Mud Field)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Causes the area (10m x 10m) around the user, given that it is earth and stone, to become mud.
Special: Rat, Dog, Boar
Drawback: It does not work in certain environments, such as tile and metallic floors.
Description: After the hand signs are performed, the user slams his/her hands into the ground. If the environment allows it, the area around the user will become a thick and heavy mud. No chakra is required to maintain the state of the area.
Limit: Earth Release, Water Release

At the north of the village there is lake, cross the lake and you’d find a forest perfect for training. In the village it’s quite hard to find a good place to train by yourself without interruptions. Go south, out of the village via the village gate and you’ll find a swamp. Swampy ground wouldn’t be beneficial to the multiple jutsu I’m aiming to learn.

After a short trek through the forest I find a large clearing which looks perfect. Almost entirely circular, it was clear of trees but had a few relatively large rocks to use as potential targets. The ground was solid so it would be helpful for most of the jutsu I was aiming to learn.

I brought a scroll titled ‘Simple Releases: Earth Edition’, so I could improve on my earth release. I open the scroll and see a ninjutsu titled Deido Nohara no Jutsu (Mud Field) near the top. Perhaps the one jutsu that’d been easier to complete on swampy land I decide to do it here anyway. Chances are I’ll be on ground like this in a battle and if I wasn’t it’d just be easier for me at the time, having mastered it on solid earth.

The handseals were rat, dog and boar before slamming my hands into the ground. It seemed simple enough but I’d have to focus heaps of chakra into my hands before channeling it through the ground.

I started by completing the handseals without putting any chakra into it so I could fluidly complete them without trouble. I then incorporated last part of the jutsu, smashing my hand into the ground. After a couple of times I must have accidently put some chakra into it as I started sinking into the ground, the area under my feet turned into mud!

Uneager to see how far down my accidental mud hole went I waded out before reflecting on it. To make the ground under my feet turn to mud I successfully did the handseals and smashed my palm on the ground; what I didn’t do was send the chakra away from me, I have to channel the chakra through the ground to where I want it to go, not simply release it into the ground.

I now start to practice with chakra, hoping my newfound realization will help in my mastering of the justu. I see a rock some 3 metres away and decide that it’s a good target to start with. I switch my gaze to the ground, willing it to help me somehow. I nimbly complete handseals and thump my open hand into the ground, willing my chakra to travel through the solid surface, all the way to the rock a short range away.

I feel my chakra surge out of my hand and I know that in a split second I’ll see if my jutsu has been successful.

[butterflyart]

+7

next time if you add more training to it, ideally i like about 4 -5 good quite large paras on training for a +10

for the final +3 if you do a good paragraph and a half then hit me back up

[11tails]

OOC: Thanks for that

I looked up and all I saw was that the rock hadn’t sunk at all. Total failure. I walked up to the rock where I saw and felt that the ground was softer. Closer to the rock the ground was slightly, but noticeably nevertheless, spongier. My trainers were leaving an imprint in the ground. Spurred on by this I returned to my original spot and vowed to not stop until this jutsu was or I was hungry.

I again practiced the handseals followed by the hand slam, as I liked to call it now. Content that I could still complete the handseals with great speed I got to work again.

My attempt at the jutsu again was a failure. My chakra just didn’t seem to want to turn solid earth into its muddy equivalent. I continue to persevere but to no avail, the ground below always turns slightly mushy but then doesn’t go any further. I decide to take a break and think. After looking at scroll again my eyes linger on the bottom line, I may have got this from an earth release scroll but my water release skills are also needed.

This second realisation may just let me master this jutsu. I put the scroll away and try to tap into my Suiton, as well my Doton chakra when I start the jutsu. Same result as before. I can do simple Suiton techniques easily enough, why can’t I combine it with Earth?!? I start to get a little pissed off then, an idea comes to me. By slamming my hand into the ground, I’m involving the earth, so why not just focus on the water and try to put all my chakra into suiton. If it works then my suiton chakra is transferred into the earth creating mud!
“Maybe I’m a genius, maybe I’m delusional,” I ponder as I speak for the first time in forever. I settle on delusional for thinking this idea will work, but I decide to try anyway. Nothing to lose other then a manageable amount of chakra after all. I try to think of all of my water techniques and pour the chakra I use for those justu’s into my hands, I plant my palms onto the soil below me, eyes squeezed shut in concentration; hoping for the best but expecting the worst.

[Nyu]

Learned.

Please put how many TP you have and need below the jutsu so staff know.

Example:

Insert random D rank Jutsu text here.


0/10

Beginning of your training post.

[11tails]

OOC: Thanks for the tips Nyu.

Doton: Tamaishi Danmaku (Earth Element: Pebble Barrage)
Rank: "D" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A simple technique used as a distraction in which the user uses a few hand seals concentrating along the chakra towards the ground. Doing so, the user takes the chakra and the rocks as they use the simple knowledge of the Doton Soushi no Jutsu (Rock Creation Technique) to push forth sending multiple small grape sized like pebbles towards the opponent.
Special: "Handseals”
Drawback: Depending of the rank the user knows of Doton Soushi no Jutsu (Rock Creation Technique) depends on how much pebbles the user is capable of pushing forth.
Description: Small like stones is created along the ground in pebble like form as they are pushed up along the ground and sent flying towards the very enemy or enemies depending on the type of distance the enemy or where the enemy is standing. This type of attack is somewhat of a basic like attack and is to be considered more of an annoyance when first learned by the basic form of Doton Soushi no Jutsu (Rock Creation Technique). When the user gains rank as well as Difficulty class of Doton Soushi no Jutsu (Rock Creation Technique) the technique of Doton: Tamaishi Danmaku (Earth Element: Pebble Barrage) becomes even more dangerous with more pebbles within the distance.
Limit: Needs the Earth Release, must have knowledge of Doton Soushi no Jutsu (Rock Creation Technique)

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“Success. Finally,” I breathed out. Maybe I should have tried something easier to start with, but it sure felt good to master such a jutsu after all that time I spent working on it. I was on a roll, so I decided to continue and try to learn another jutsu.

After catching my breath, I went to look at the scroll again. The Earth Element: Pebble Barrage caught my eye. It looked like I could do it in less time then the mud field, as I already know the Rock Creation technique. It was getting dark, so I couldn’t spend as long as I had on my first jutsu, regrettably. I looked at the scroll and quickly committed the 6 handseals needed for this jutsu to memory. Now I ready to go.

Again, before putting any chakra into it I rehearse the handseals until I get a steady flow going. I practice the handseals with such speed my knuckles start the ache, but I keep going. If I were to fight using this jutsu I’d need to pull it off quickly and this method of training will help achieve the maximum quickness. After a while I stop, flexing my finger slowly so that they regain their feeling, then decide to try this jutsu seriously.

I skilfully completed the handseals and then willed the earth to rise. It did, but instead of in little fragmented forms it was just one hand-sized rock. “Well, I can already use rock creation, so that wasn’t overwhelming,” I thought. I must just be used to creating one full rock instead of heaps of tiny ones. I decided to try again, this time with slightly more success. The large rock, which again rose from the ground, was smaller, and had a couple dozen pebbles orbiting around. I smiled slightly at my improvement, then sent the clumps of earth flying into a tree on the opposite side of the clearing. I heard to crunch of bark to my delight. “Although, that was more of a rock creation then a pebble barrage,” I said aloud this time “no reason to thing I’ll get any better than this today.”

I continued to grind at the jutsu, still a larger rock was predominant, with a varying amount of pebbles orbiting around; though there was a general improvement. Couldn’t that larger rock just break apart and just become a large amount of pebbles instead? “Aaaaaaargh!” It wasn’t like me to get angry but I’ve been trying for last hour or so I wanted a result from my hard work. A new fully complete jutsu that I was competent at.

I probably only have ten more minutes worth of chakra at this rate, I reason. If I stop rushing and repeatedly try over and over again I should be able to add an extra five minutes to those ten. “Take it slowly, take it slowly.” Only after hearing my rasping voice did I realise how tired I was. Deciding to stick at it for awhile longer I connect the handseals together and try again. Practice makes perfect after all.

[Flower]

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