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The lake in this location is a tributary of the Grand Waterfall Lake, the infamous landmark of Kirigakure. A small waterfall that is approximately fourteen feet high, brings water down from the large lake, down to create this small lake. While still inside the great walls of the Village of Mist. The water that travels through the lake, is nice a cool. Very nice to jump in on a hot day, that barely ever happen in Mizu no Kuni. The trees that surround the water, are very condensed closely together. This creates a protective roof over the head of anyone walking in these parts of the forest with the bright and dark green leaves. While it rains the leaves catch most of the water that would otherwise have soaked the ground underneath. Yet somehow that sun manages to get its rays of sunshine to peak through the small gaps in between the leaves. Which leaves nice effects of spotlights in random spots of the forest, while producing a nice greenish light effect under the trees. Since nothing covers the top of the lake rain and sunlight always pour right through the gap that is left unprotected by the large trees. The lake is also surrounded by heavy boulders. Most of them have a mossy underside, while the upper halves of all of the boulders remain smooth and untainted by the green plant. Also the boulders stay surprisingly dry, considering they are right next to a waterfall. This exact location is about an hour away from the harbor even if you know the exact way how to get to the lake.
This small area is mostly used by its founder, Kinuaka Hissori. Who found it several years ago while he was still a student in the academy, he stumbled across it while playing around with his loyal companion. Since then the shinobi uses this area to train and learn new skills and jutsu to better himself as a shinobi. Since this place is so peaceful and undisturbed by other people.

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Raiton • Raikou Yama No Jutsu [Lightning Release • Lightning Bullet]
Rank: D-Ranked
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The users fingertips begin to glow a light blue as they fire off lightning bolts from the fingertips.
Special: Tiger, Serpent, Dragon
Drawback: After being used multiple times they begin to numb the user’s finger making it very difficult to use weapon’s such as Bows, Swords, or even Kunai. Can be trained multiple times to increase the amount of times that it is capable of using without making finger’s numb
Description: Once the user has performed the required handseals the user will outstretch his hands and his fingers. Chakra will be rapidly gathered their and suddenly each finger will begin to emit electricity. The user will then move their hands back and fling them forward releasing the Lightning Bullets at the opponent. The Bullet’s look like small marble-sized balls of lightning with is giving off a constant discharge. The balls travel as fast as a person can throw a kunai or shuriken.
Limit: Lightning Release

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Kin slowly walked through the thick forests of Mizu no Kuni, slowly making his way to his destination at which he was planning to spend the day so he could better himself. The plan for today was to just learn more jutsu, so far the boy had set his mind on more Ration techniques. But that definitely wasn’t his final decision, he might decide to try to learn some Suiton techniques or maybe some jutsus from the two clans that he is a part of. It took the shinobi a few extra minutes to find his usual training spot, since a thick mist had covered the land. It proved to be a nuisance for the boy, but it didn’t get in his way too much. The mist was thick enough to hinder his vision slightly, an area of about six meters was visible to anyone who would be in this location. After several minutes of wandering around the forest, Kin’s training area was finally visible to the child. It was time to train.

As soon as the boy stepped on what he felt like was his property, he opened the book that he was carrying with him. Which contained many lightning techniques. Several seconds later, a technique that interested the boy was found. Raiton • Raikou Yama No Jutsu. This jutsu seemed useful and effective in battle. The boy read the description and the drawbacks and all of the information on the technique about three times to memorize it. He then gently placed the book down onto the ground and faced a random direction which happened to be opposite to where he placed the book. “Shooting lightning bullets, should be fun” the boy told himself. From what the boy understood what this technique did, was it let the user shoot out lightning bullets from his/her fingertips. But there was a drawback, if the jutsu was overused then the user’s fingers would become numb and this would hinder them from using weaponry. The hand seals that were required for the activation of this jutsu were, Tiger, Serpent and Dragon, in that order. So after the seals were made the boy would have to focus his chakra into his hands and then his fingers. Where he would then have to convert his chakra into lightning, and force it out. The bullets would have to come out fast to be in any way effective to the boy. The goal was to make them shoot out at least as fast as he could throw a kunai.

The shinobi took in a deep breath to prepare himself to learn the technique. With lightning speed he then formed the three necessary hand signs for the jutsu to work. As soon as the Dragon seal was activated, the boy reached out his right forward. He felt like it was best to just try it with one hand first and then move on to doing the jutsu with his left and right hands. Kin channeled his chakra from his body into the five finger tips of his right hand. He had his hand positioned as if he had his hand around someone’s neck. After he felt like he gathered enough chakra he tried to release it from his hand. It backfired badly. The electricity instead of leaving his body, traveled through every part of him. Shocking him hard enough to make him drop to the ground in pain. “I hate this release” he muttered to himself. Since pretty much every Raiton technique that he had learned caused him pain in some way. The boy stood as he tried to think how come his technique backfired so badly. After thinking back on the description. He remembered what he didn’t do. In the technique it stated that when you have the charged chakra in your hand you are supposed to move your hand back and then fling it forward in a way to force the bullets to be thrown with force. Kin clearly didn’t do that, which led to the chakra leaving his body but not away from him because not enough force was put into it, so instead it travelled through his body and gave him the biggest shock of his life.

“OK, no more stupid mistakes” he whispered to himself, before letting a big sigh from his lips. The boy tried to calm down a bit before giving the technique another try. With the same speed as last time Kin made the needed hand seals for the technique. After the last hand sign was completed, the boy’s hand rose up as chakra was gathered into the fingertips of the right hand. After approximately a second, the hand of the shinobi was brought back and with a huge amount of force pushed forward. As the boys hand had reached its full extension the lightning escaped out of his body with speed matching any projectile that was ever thrown by the shinobi. It felt amazing how the lightning escaped his body, there was a small tingle sensation in his fingertips which felt quite strange. The boy had assumed that it was the feeling of his fingers going slightly numb like it informed him in the book. Very pleased with the result that he received the boy felt like he was ready to try the technique with both hands.

The boy shook his right hand for a few seconds to try and get rid of the strange sensation in his hand. He was so far still able to feel and use his fingers like he was earlier before using the technique. Very quickly he assumed his stance, and for the third time the seals would have been created by the hands of the young shinobi. After the hand signs were made, the boy outstretched both of his arms this time. Focusing his chakra into all ten finger tips trying his best to keep the chakra equal in both hands. Keeping his hands in the same position as the first time, as if he was choking two people that were standing right in front of him. A light blue glow was begin emitted from the fingertips, it was very clear to see that there was enough chakra gathered by this point. Both arms were brought out and in a sharp motion flung forwards. Forcing the lightning from both hands to fly across the forest and into the shadows. “Brilliant” the boy whispered as he fell down onto his ass.

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Raiton • Raikou Yama No Jutsu [Lightning Release • Lightning Bullet]
Rank: D-Ranked
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The users fingertips begin to glow a light blue as they fire off lightning bolts from the fingertips.
Special: Tiger, Serpent, Dragon
Drawback: After being used multiple times they begin to numb the user’s finger making it very difficult to use weapon’s such as Bows, Swords, or even Kunai. Can be trained multiple times to increase the amount of times that it is capable of using without making finger’s numb
Description: Once the user has performed the required handseals the user will outstretch his hands and his fingers. Chakra will be rapidly gathered their and suddenly each finger will begin to emit electricity. The user will then move their hands back and fling them forward releasing the Lightning Bullets at the opponent. The Bullet’s look like small marble-sized balls of lightning with is giving off a constant discharge. The balls travel as fast as a person can throw a kunai or shuriken.
Limit: Lightning Release

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Kin got back onto his feet slowly. He could feel his right hand going a bit numb. Still he decided to try the technique at least one more time, he wanted to see how accurate he could be with this jutsu. Since he wasn’t really concerned with accuracy earlier, he felt like he should have paid a bit more attention to it. The boy took a postion 3 meters away from a tree, he had chosen it to be his target. He performed the hand signs a bit slower than he had the previous few times. Tiger, Serpent, Dragon. As soon as the last hand seal was created, both hands lifted themselves. Chakra rushed into each fingertip of the ninja’s right and left hand. As soon as Kin spotted a small blue glow coming from each finger, he opened up his arms as if he was about to embrace someone with a big bear hug. And in an instance his hands had snapped back to their original position. Forcing the chakra out with deadly speed towards the three that stood several meters away from him, not able to escape the impact of the lightning that was about to strike it. When the bullets connected, Kin noticed that only about seventy five percent of them actually made contact with the tree. The rest missed.

This wasn’t good enough for the young shinobi. All he would accept is perfection and at this moment it meant that all the bullets would have to hit the tree. For the fifth time that day, the boy would perform the exact same hand seals as he had before. As soon as the last one was formed he would lift his arms and position his hands in a choking fashion. Directing the chakra into both hands, when the blue glow was visible once more both arms would be drawn back. With the same ferocious speed they would rush to meet each other. At certain point the chakra inside the fingertips of the boy would be released. As they were, they flew parallel to each other all ten heading for the tree. As soon as the impact was made there was a sound of wood being snapped. At this point that was music to the boy’s ears.

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Kunai rashinban (Kunai compass).
Rank: “D” Rank.
Skill: Ninjutsu.
Effect: The user channels a little chakra in a kunai to make it point towards north.
Special: Bird and dragon.
Drawback: Have to know how to use a real compass, or else, the jutsu will be useless.
Description: By using the magnetic forces in the earth, a shinobi can use it to their advantage if they are lost. They lay a kunai on the ground, and channel a little chakra in it. The blade will then point towards the north, while the handle will point to south. This jutsu can be extremely useful when lost or if you don’t have a compass to use.
Limit: Has to know lightning release.

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“I need to take a nap” was the only thing that Kin felt like he could say before practically collapsing to the ground from exhaustion. He didn’t sleep the night before that so he was pretty much falling asleep for the whole day. While asleep though, he wasn’t having a dream. It was a memory. A flash back to a few years ago, it was the first technique that Kin’s father had ever thought him a technique. It wasn’t a battle technique but it was still useful.

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“OK Kin, its not that hard” said Xin, his father in his deep manly voice. Which was very soothing at the same time. His father had said this as he placed his finger on the kunai that was laying on the ground. As soon as he made contact with it. The projectile sprung to life and began to spin. Abruptly stopping. “This jutsu will make the tip of the compass face north” Xin explained to his 8 year old son. All the child did was nod, hoping that he would be able to try it soon. After going over the details of the jutsu like the hand seals that were needed and what this jutsu was actually useful for. And that was pretty much if you ever got lost and you needed to know where north, south, east and west was. It was quite useless if you didn’t know what directions they actually were.

After the demonstration the boy felt very confident in himself that he would be able to perform the technique after his first go. The boy’s father spun the Kunai and stopped it randomly. The boy with all confidence in the world stood over the metal projectile and clumsily made the two required hand seals. Bird and then Dragon. Afterwards he attempted to bring chakra into his hand. Without waiting he touched the middle of the kunai. Expecting for it too move, the boy looked at his father and said “See, easy”. After looking back at it he realized that nothing happened. The young face went completely red as he heard his father’s laugh escape from his mouth. “Try again son” Xin said addressing the young boy with his reassuring voice.

This time Kin had decided to take it a bit slower and actually concentrate on casting the technique. He stood over the Kunai and tried to re-create the two needed hand seals. He failed on the dragon hand sign so he had to begin from the start. Slowly he made the Bird seal and then the Dragon seal. Afterwards he stretched his hand down towards the kunai touching it before he even brought chakra into his hand. But as he was touching the blade, he channeled chakra into it. A bit more than required. This cause the Kunai to spin extremely fast. The grown shinobi had to step on it to calm the blade down. “A bit less chakra” he said looking down at his son with a big grin.

With a nod the child looked down at the kunai once more. He closed his eyes and took in a deep breath. He opened his eyes and performed the required hand signs. A lot faster this time but still as clumsily. He then reached his hand out in front of him and concentrated really hard to channel the right amount of chakra into his hand. After several seconds he lowered his hand down very slowly and touched the Kunai. It began to spin left and then went right, until it came to stop. The boy looked at his father to see if he had done it correctly.

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Training isnt allowed to be done in templates im afraid dude.

I will grade it this time but please dont use it again or i wont grade

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Kunai rashinban (Kunai compass).
Rank: “D” Rank.
Skill: Ninjutsu.
Effect: The user channels a little chakra in a kunai to make it point towards north.
Special: Bird and dragon.
Drawback: Have to know how to use a real compass, or else, the jutsu will be useless.
Description: By using the magnetic forces in the earth, a shinobi can use it to their advantage if they are lost. They lay a kunai on the ground, and channel a little chakra in it. The blade will then point towards the north, while the handle will point to south. This jutsu can be extremely useful when lost or if you don’t have a compass to use.
Limit: Has to know lightning release.

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“Hmm, good but you can do it better, do it faster”

his father said looking down at his only child. ‘faster?’ the boy thought, he could barely do it at the speed that he just did it. But the boy knew that his father was challenging him to be the best he could. He loved his father for the fact that he always tries to better him. The young boy stared at the kunai for about a second and tried to make the combinations of seals as fast as he could, but failed on the first one. When it came to the second attempt he messed up the bird hand seal again. When it came around to the third time he got the bird seal perfectly but messed up on the transition. He was clearly getting annoyed because the next few tries were a complete fail. “Relax” his father told him, clearly seeing why he was making mistakes. Kin took a deep breath and tried against. This time both of his hands perfectly connected with each other for both of the seals at full speed. Forgetting what he was doing originally the boy jumped with joy. But very quickly remembering what he was trying to do first. He calmed himself down and focused his attention to the Kunai. Surprisingly he performed the two hand seals perfectly twice in a row now. He then quickly gathered chakra into his hand and touched the metal projectile. It swing wildly left and right before stopping. “Good Job son” Xin said with a proud smile on his face.[/right][/size][/color]

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Learned.

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Raiton - Rakurai Shuryuu (Lightning Style - Lightning Stream)
Rank: "D" - "C"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user creates a steady stream of electricity against a single target.
Special: Ox - Monkey - Dog - Dragon
Drawback: "D" Rank require both hands. "C" Rank requires one hand.
Description: After forming the needed hand seals the user will create a fist sized orb of electricity and thrust it at a single target as a steady stream of electricity. At "D" Rank the lightning is only capable of knock a target back and inflict minor burns, and could reach a maximum range of 5 meters. At "C" Rank the lightning is able to cause first degree burns and numbness to the affected area, and reach a maximum range of 10 meters.
Limit: Lightning Release

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The boy jumped awake, as if he had just had a nightmare even though it was probably one of the best dreams he had in a while. Lately all he had been getting was nightmares and because of them wasn’t able to sleep that much. It was nice to actual dream about something that had happened before something nice like some of the moments that he shared with his father. Since the boy hasn’t been able to see him much lately since he graduated from the academy it seemed like the boy’s father had gotten very busy. After completely waking up, the boy could feel that his hand had gotten a lot better. It didn’t feel numb at all. So he decided to learn more techniques, he was probably going to leave afterwards. Kin stretched his arm out for his book full of ration jutsus. He then scanned it. It seemed like he had learned pretty much all the low rank techniques except for one. So he decided that he would finish of with them by learning that last one.

The last technique was called Raiton - Rakurai Shuryuu. This technique seemed to be slightly similar to what he had learned earlier. Except it didn’t have that annoying effect that made your fingers numb after several uses and also the fact that it was a fucking laser beam. The boy studied the technique by reading it several times to make sure he had it learned of in his mind. This technique required for the user to perform four different hand seals. Quite simple it seemed Ox, Monkey, Dog and Dragon. It seemed like all the ration jutsus so far had ended with the Dragon seal. It didn’t seem important at all during that moment so the boy struck that thought from his mind. Afterwards the user would have to gather chakra in both hands to have the right amount of chakra to perform the technique. Then he would have to form an electric orb about the size of his fist. It didn’t seem that big but it probably caused a good bit of damage if it hit directly. It would cause minor burns and knock the enemy back. This seemed very useful if it connected.

The boy lifted himself up onto his feet, he read the technique once more to make sure he had all the information drilled into his skull. After taking in a deep breath the boy performed the needed hand seals a few times. He did this to just remind himself how the hand seals looked since he was just asleep he needed to bring all of the basics back into his brain. After performing the hand seals about three or four times, he was ready to practice performing the actual technique. He performed the four hand seals swiftly and accurately. “Ox, Monkey, Dog, Dragon” he said in his mind as he created the signs. The hands of the boy then joined together at bottom of their palms. Focusing his chakra into his hands. After a few seconds a ball began to form in between his hands. But before it reached it’s full size it seemed to just disintegrate in the air. Just vanished. This had left the boy very confused. “I lost my focus” the boy mumbled under his breath, admitting that his mind had drifted back to his dream with his father.

Snapping out of his fantasies again he tried to focus his mind on the matter at hand. He shouldn’t let small like this distract him. He recreated the hand seals that were needed for the technique. Placed his hands in the same position he had the first time. Closed his eyes and began to channel his chakra into the space that was between his hands. In his mind he had imagined the way chakra flowed to make a sphere. As he imagined this he tried to make his chakra flow in the same way, when he opened his eyes he could see the white orb of lightning spinning his hand. He pushed his arms out forwards, forcing the light to become a beam but it didn’t. The sphere had just collapsed to the ground and disappeared on contact. It seemed as if this technique would requite a lot more concentration and thought than any of the techniques he had learned beforehand.

In disappointed, Kin let a sigh escape his lips. He was getting frustrated but didn’t have the energy to actually get mad. He took his original position again, listing of the name of the hand seals that were required for this technique as he performed them. Placed his hands back to make sort of a semi-circle shape with them, and focused on the spiraling ball that he wanted to create with his chakra. In a matter of seconds the spiraling sphere was floating in between his hands. The shinobi then concentrated his mind on trying to make the sphere change its form into a beam. As he focused on doing that he forced his arms forward. With the force the sphere flung forwards quickly turning into a beam. With the happiness and excitement of actually using the technique he didn’t pay attention if he actually hit the techniques max range of five meters. He considered if he should do the technique one more time to see if he could.

[Corvus]

+10.

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