Wynaut

[¯\_(ツ)_/¯]

Name: Masaa

Age: 90000

Gender: Male

Desired Position: Mod, obviously.

Experience

Assistant for a several months.

Role-Play Experience and/or Event

one

two for the money

threefortheshow

fourtogetready

andfivetogo

Additional Comments

So, yeah. I'm back baby. I think I can handle mod duties, I've seemed to handle the assistant ones so far. :3 I've been watching mods, and I think I'm well cut-out to handle the shiz they do. Last time my behavior was an issue, so I've made sure take a major chill pill. I don't think there have been any more issues, so uh.. Yeah.


Ily guiz.

vote masaa.

[|Ayame Unbound|]

Overall you've been doing pretty well. I want to ask you some questions first though.

[Questions Coming]

[|Ayame Unbound|]

For the note of this testing please assume that whatever you see is all that is included in the submission.

1)

Thread Title: CuStOm PuPpEt

Name: Awesomesauce900XRL
Rank: A for Awesome
Type: Main Wapon, Puppet, Holds 20 Slots
Effect: All sorts of puppetry awesomeness ftw
Special: This puppet is made by me and only me and no on else could ever possible use it because of the design
Drawback: See special.
Description: Highly experimental, and rare kind of puppet. Units of this size are titans of the battlefield, able to destroy almost anything they can hit. Gargantuan puppets can be common for underwater battle, but are quite often expensive and unwieldy used for surface based missions. The Gargantuan Puppet has a reach of up to 15 feet with no need of extra weapons. The fighting space that is needed is 20 by 20 feet. It takes 13 Chakra Strings to control a Gargantuan puppet without additional skill. A Gargantuan puppet has 17 slots available. These slots are located as follows.
Limit: Only usable by me. Blows up if I die.
Cost: 65k

• Head: 1 Slot: Enigma Sensor Suite
• Visor: 1 Slot: Class CI Sensor System
• Cranium: 1 Slot: Oracle Targeting System Type: 3
• Back: 3 Slots : Jet pack with Jet Assisted Wings
• Left Arm: 1 Slot: Retractable Tactical Tower Shield
• Left Hand: 1 Slot: Pouch Launcher
• Right Arm: 1 Slot: Retractable Tactical Tower Shield
• Right Hand: 1 Slot: Senbon Launcher
• Shoulders: 3 Slots
• Torso: 3 Slots: Cockpit, Net Launcher
• Belt: 1 Slot: Deflection Shield
• Left Leg: 1 Slot: Anti-shock Array Mark II
• Right Leg: 1 Slot Senbon Ballistic Cannon
• Boots: 1 Slot: Ramjet Thruster Boots

Jutsu:

Puppetry: Combat Knowledge
Rank: ["D", "C", "B", "A", "S"]
Skill: TaiJutsu/Supplementary
Effect: Allows the user to mimic fighting styles with their puppets.
Special: ---
Drawback: Unable to perform Chakra Related Techniques (Such as Enten Kobushi - Scorching Sun Fist). Unable to perform enhancement techniques (Such as The Eight Celestial Divination Gates). Unable to perform techniques that increase power when continuous learning nor powered attacks (Such as Tsuyosa Ryuu: Futae-no-Kiwami (Mastery of Two Layers) and Ryoku-Tama (Power Shot)). Masteries do not carry over to the Puppets. Unable to perform Shunshin no Jutsu.
Description: May only perform Techniques the user knows. Each time the user learns this technique they are able to perform a technique within a fighting style 1 rank below while using puppets. This means when the user first learns this technique they are able to mimic the techniques of "E" Rank. When the user learns the "C" Rank version of this technique they are able to mimic "D" Rank techniques while using puppets. When the user learns the "B" Rank version of this technique they are able to mimic "C" Rank techniques while using puppets. When the user learns the "A" Rank version of this technique they are able to mimic "B" Rank techniques while using puppets. When the user learns the "S" Rank version of this technique they are able to mimic "A" Rank techniques while using puppets. Users are unable to have their puppets perform "S" Rank techniques.
Limit: Must have Mastered Puppetry

Also Fireball no Jutsu, I couldn’t find the list for that.


2) You have been called in to moderate a battle in a gate thread between Shinobi A, B, and C from the defending village and Shinobi X, Y, Z from the attacking village. Shinobi XYZ are currently infiltrating the village and trying to destroy it. Each person has already posted twice. Three people did not state items in their intro but are using them. Two people have prepped nin/gen techs and a third has prepped a taijutsu technique. You also noticed the Kage of the defending village has now entered the thread and quickly performed 2 A rank techniques on that post. Shinobi Z retaliated with 14 S ranks to completely obliterate the scene including his allies. What if anything is wrong and what will your post be?

3) You decide to go derp around in the CBox. You lurk for a little bit first and see the following conversation. Read top to bottom.

MemberA: Omg I told Zetsu not to grade my training but he totally did it anways.
MemberB: What a dick.
MemberA: I know he’s like the most useless mod around. Like y is this gai even staff?
MemberB: Cuzhelikestomakeoutliveshell
MemberA: lolololololololol
MemberA: I bet he shoots up heroin and just fucks dudes all the time.
‘Zetsu’: Look at me I’m a druggy hahahaa!
MemberC: Guys knock it off.
MemberA: What are you gonna do about it?
MemberB: Yeah god you’re such an idiot let us have fun. We aren’t hurting any1.
MemberC: Seriously guys can we just chat? You need to stop this.
MemberA: Yeah let’s talk about how dumb C is.
MemberB: Yeah his name is C I bet it ends in ‘unt’.

What do you do, if anything? What rules are broken, if any?

[¯\_(ツ)_/¯]

1) Fix typos please. They make it hard to read.

Not the first thing, but uh. Puppets can't use chakra, so no Fireball jutsus for the puppet. Or any jutsu, for that matter. Please remove both. Sidenote: the lists are under Release Index.

Also, while your limit can be 'plans to make are held by X', your puppet cannot spontaneously combust if you die. Please remove/change that. Your special falls under this as well.

Not to mention, I'm 80% sure you're somehow using the wrong template, please use the puppet one found here: narutoforumrp.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=templates&action=display&thread=13086. It includes some things you are missing: height and etc.

A Gargantuan puppet has 17 slots available. These slots are located as follows.
Head: 1 Slot
Visor: 1 Slot
Cranium: 1 Slot
Back: 2 Slots
Left Arm: 1 Slot
Left Hand: 1 Slot
Right Arm: 1 Slot
Right Hand: 1 Slot
Shoulders: 2 Slots
Torso: 2 Slots
Belt: 1 Slot
Left Leg: 1 Slot
Right Leg: 1 Slot
Boots: 1 Slot

Please edit your slots to reflect this.

Puppets don't have drawbacks. So.. Yeah.

For your items, you need to list the indexed version of each one.

(For example: Flame-Thrower
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: Secondary, 1 Equipment Slot (Puppetry), Launcher
Effect: A shooter that launches fire from a pipe, making them like flamethrowers. The flames are fierce enough to melt rocks and incinerate a metal kunai near instantly.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Used primarily against soft, unarmed targets. The Flame-Thrower sprays a 10 meter cone per puppet size of burning liquid fuel. Anyone caught within the cone will burn quickly, and die horribly by such scorching fire damage. The Flame-thrower carries enough fuel for 20 attacks; Each attack lasts up to 6 seconds. Refueling the tank 1/10th of full cost. Flame thrower takes up 1 Equipment Slot. An additional Equipment Slot may be used to carry an additional 20 attacks worth of fuel.
Limit: Can be bought at any Gadget Shop.
Cost: 1,000 Ryo per Puppet Size)

Also, if my calculation is right, your cost is off- Partially because you have no superstructure. Pick one from here if you would: narutoforumrp.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=puppetryindex&thread=69806&page=1#715264


2) I'm going into this assuming that the village invasion was approved, cause last I heard there was no village war.

Also, sigh. /facerub. This'll be a long one.

Aighty. First off- The items. If they weren't stated, they can't be used, so anything involving them is void. The preppies need to have PM'd their battle mod what jutsu they are prepping to ensure honesty, so that needs to be checked. You can't attack on first post, so the Kage's A ranks are ineffective.

Also.. Shinobi Z is a dick for team-killing. 14 S ranks are also far beyond anyone's limits, so, uh. Yeah Shinobi Z is probably long dead from chakra overuse. (Although I'm unsure if he could even perform 14 S ranks in a post. Maybe Dragon Strikes?)

So with that, my post'd be something along the lines of...

'[Insert the 3 peoples names here], as you didn't state items in your intro post, you don't have them. Sorry, but anything involving said items is void. As for the people prepping jutsu, you need to PM your BM what jutsu you are prepping when you're prepping it, to ensure honesty. So, if you would, please do so. Kage, I see you're eager to defend. Still are unable to attack on first post though, so your A ranks are void. As for Shinobi Z.. 14 S ranks is far beyond your chakra levels. At most, I'd say you can perform 5 without just flat-out passing out.* So, you performed [insert first couple S ranks here], and now you're passed out, assuming your attacks aren't interrupted.


*May depend on the S ranks, as some I believe take less chakra, and he may be Hoshi or some shiz. Also I don't know what special he is or anything. (A tai master with nin S ranks, or w/e) I just ballparked. Also I'm not sure if its physically possible for him to perform those, again depending on the ranks. I just assumed yes.



3) I like starting with minor things, so. No font color changes in C-box. :l Silly Members. Members B and A both get a time-out from the box for flaming/impersonating. Member C gets a highfive for trying to get them to stop it.

rules broken

-Font
-Flaming
-Impersonating




Note: this post is made by me and only me and no on else can ever possibly quote it because of the design. everyone who does probably shoots heroin and fucks dudes all day.

[|Ayame Unbound|]

1:

Correct:
Wrong Template.
Puppet doesn't go BOOM if they die.
Puppets don't use Jutsu.

Incorrect/Missed:
Gargantuan Puppets can have 5 bonus slots they just must be bought.
In pricing you forgot the price increase per size of puppet.
The Description is stolen from Puppet Basics and thusly tells nothing about THIS puppet.
Also may not have been adverse to assume this was a newbie who thus couldn't start with a puppet that size but that bit is negligible.

Bonus:
Linked the thread for the releases the member couldn't find.

(I'm forgetting something here. I'll remember later.)

2)

Correct:
Items are lost.
Prepped jutsu must be PMd
No entry techs.
Shinobi Z is a dick. Who is probably dead and couldn't perform 14 S Ranks most likely.

Incorrect:
Should not assume this was approved, especially since a few rounds of posting have happened with no BM.
Can't prep Taijutsu.

Short Story:

You could have saved yourself a lot of work here. Even if the village attack thing was allowed.

"A Battle Moderator must be notified before a Battle starts or else the Battle will become void.". Bam. Voidsauce.

3:

Correct:
Font Color
Flaming
Impersonating

Missed:

Second Rule: No Baiting, No Flaming, No Antagonizing, No Trolling, No Spamming, No Changing of Font Size or Color, (Bold, Italic, Underline is fine.) and No Fighting. Keep it English

[1] All conversations must be kept "PG-13" at all times. Let me make this perfectly clear right now, there is to be no talk of rape, implied rape, sexual activity, sexual organs, drugs, or implied drug use. Keep it family friendly! Posting links to manga with questionable material is also against this rule and will result in an immediate ban. There is no exception to this rule.

I know we all suck at this rule.

[8] Do not try to bypass the filters they are there for a reason. If there is something however in which a name may have been filtered it is fine. For Example the Clan known as the Shitakuma, the word Shit will be filtered, it is fine to bypass that for the name. However using the name to insult someone will result into being removed.

See Last Insult by Member B.

[9] If you have an issue with a staff member do not address it in the C-Box. Please speak to the Higher Staff such as the Admins and the Headmods. Please explain to them of the situation, and please let them know of what is going on. Provide with as much evidence as possible. If something is however occurring off Site, there is really nothing we can do about it, except telling them to stop.

[12] If you are Not a staff member do not mini-mod. Mini-modding is pretending to be a mod and "reminding" people to follow the rules. Please, just let a Staff member know. You do not have to keep reminding people of the rules. However if a situation arises then please state it. (This will not get you banned, this is just a courtesy call unless you are considering of breaking Rule 10.)

4 - No Harassment - If a member asks you to not contact them or interact with them through Private Messenger or within Naruto Forum Role-play please abide by the request or else it is considered to be Harassment. If a user is harassing please contact a Staff Member. A member may not ask or tell a Staff Member to stay away from a thread that needs Grading or Accepting. If you feel that you are being treated unfairly please contact Higher Staff

Puppet one is overall fine. Second one... you missed one major key with the it should have been void. The last one you failed hard core.

I'm on the fence. Convince me.

[¯\_(ツ)_/¯]

Well, for the Second one, I assumed that I was the BM. Or someone was the BM, but I was called in to check it. (He AFK'd or some shiz.) So, that's why I answered as I did. ['You have been called in to moderate a battle'. Made me think that I was the BM, and thus had been notified previously, and was now modding the battle.]

As for the Tai prep, I also guessed he was prepping Kawa, or a Tai tech with a delay (some techs in Goutetsu have a short delay- perhaps he timed it to the end of the post?)

Yeah, perhaps I assumed to much. But I worried about assuming to little, lol.

3) Well, yeah. Did kinda fail it, but! I know staff isn't big into quoting every little rule broken. The ones I listed were bad enough for a ban, imo, and I recognize that I missed a few of the other minor rules.

So, I guess I'll go through the ones I missed and why I missed them.

1) Yeah, sorry. XD I kinda feel like that falls under flaming, though.

2) I honestly wasn't aware we.. had filters. I've seen various curse words in there. So, uh.. Yeah, I never woulda got that. Noted! Although, again, I feel like this is covered by flaming in the context it was used.

3) Again, I feel like flaming covers it. I realize its very broad, but, they were just insulting Zets over and over. A 'banned for flaming' covers all this in my opinion, if my opinion is wrong its easily rectified.

4) Staff member. Whee. Well, I did honestly forget that. However, I still have to give him props for trying to calm them down. In retrospect, he would just receive a verbal. I have no excuse for this one, just a lapse in my memory.

5) Same as above for this one, although even though I didn't mention it in my post, I know that you are not allowed to tell people not to grade things. I also know unfinished things are eligible for grading, and the two often cause some problems. So, I know its not allowed, it just got lost somewhere in the heroin and orgies.


Like, to help clarify. Bypassing the filter to call Zets a cunt is flaming imo. But again, if its wrong, this is something that is fixable in seconds. As in, its fixed now.

So, to convince you.. I guess most of my issues were caused by a minor misunderstanding. An easily rectified one at that, as well. My battle mod one was a misunderstanding as well, as I thought I was the BM.

So with that, I feel like I covered what you feel like I failed on in the questions and why I failed it. Hopefully that'll sway you.

[|Ayame Unbound|]

-looks left-








-looks right-






Screw it.






1/3

[Draven]

2.3 def.

[Tieren]

3/3 Let's see what you've got.