Takashi Rito [Revamp] 2.0

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Name

Takashi Rito


Bloodlimit

None


Height

5�6Inches


Weight

121 lbs


Age

12 yrs. old




Gender

Male


Alignment

Lawful Good


Birth Country

Fire Country


Village

Hidden Leaf Village


Special

Ninjutsu Master



Weapons

Primary Weapon

Sword, Longsword (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Piercing/Slashing, Sword
Effect: Swords that slash hack, dice and anything else within this genre that reaches a certain length.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Sword with a blade between 3 feet to 4. These weapons range from any types of blades such as the long Sword, the Falchion, Katana, Tachi, Jian, Rapier, the Scimitr, the Shinai, and Waster. Any of these weapons or any weapon that fits within the length is considered as a long sword.
Limit: These types of weapons may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop
Cost: 4,000 Ryo


Secondary Items

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Utility Belt Type 2:

Hira-Shuriken (Overview)(4)
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: Secondary, 15 per Slot, Piercing, Shuriken
Effect: Is a concealed weapon that is generally for throwing, and sometimes stabbing or slashing.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Hira-shuriken is constructed from thin, flat plates of metal derived from a variety of sources including hishi-gane (coins), and kugi-nuki (carpentry tools), and generally resemble popular conceptions of shuriken. In modern popular culture, these are called "throwing stars" or "ninja stars". They often have a hole in the center and possess a fairly thin blade sharpened only at the tip. The holes derive from their source in items that had holes - old coins, washers, and nail-removing tools. This proved convenient for the shuriken user, as well, as the weapons could be strung on a string or dowel in the belt for transport, and the hole also had aerodynamic and weighting effects that aided the flight of the blade after it was thrown. There is a wide variety of forms of hira-shuriken and they are now usually identified by the number of points the blades possess.
Limit: These types of items may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,500 Ryo per Slot , or 100 Ryo Each.

Scroll (Small) (2)
Rank: "C"
Type: Secondary, 1 per Slot , Non-Combative, Book, Scroll
Effect: Allows a user to summon an object, or animal from one location of the world, to another location of the world where the user is holding the scroll.
Special: ---
Drawback: Holds only so much worth of items, animals or technique capabilities. When it comes to puppets, user must accommodate everything that is being held within that puppet such as individual items inside the puppet. When it comes to an animal or person user must accommodate all training points to the feet of Scroll. May be used multiple times as long as the seals are put on them.
Description: Picture A roll of paper or parchment; a writing formed into a roll; A scroll is a roll of papyrus, parchment, or paper which has been written, drawn or painted upon for the purpose of transmitting information or using as a decoration. It is distinguished from a roll by virtue of being intended for repeated use rather than continuous, but once-only use of the roll. The "Small Scroll" is the size of 2.5 inches in diameter as a whole. The Length between the top ends of the core, to the other end of the core is between one to two feet in length. The core of the scroll is 1 inch in diameter while thickness of the paper is .0032 inches making it 100 feet worth of scroll paper. For storing anything "D" Rank, it takes up 10 feet worth of scroll. For storing anything "C" Rank, it takes up 20 feet worth of scroll. For anything, "B" ranks it takes up 60 feet worth of scroll. For anything "A" Rank, it takes up 80 feet worth of scroll. For anything, "S" ranks it takes up 100 feet worth of scroll. Secondary items are stored per slot . So 1 slot of "C" Rank items take up 20 feet. Even though the "storing" takes up so much, the seals to summon, or items to bring forth may be relatively close to the end of the scroll. This means that a user does not have to unravel 100 feet or more worth of scroll to summon up the item, or creature. When it comes to puppets, user must accommodate everything that is being held within that puppet such as individual items inside the puppet. When it comes to an animal or person user must accommodate all training points to the feet of Scroll.
Limit: These types of books may be capable of being bought inside any Book Shop.
Cost: 1,000 Ryo per Slot

Lock Picking Kit (1)
Rank: "C"
Type: Secondary, 1 per Slot , Accessory, Tool Kit
Effect: A tool Kit used for opening Locks.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture There are different things within the Lock Picking Tool Kit. The tension wrench, is used to apply torque to the lock plug to keep pins from being pushed back down by springs after they are correctly set at the shear line. It is usually anywhere from 1/16th inch to 1/8th inch wide, bent into an L, and occasionally has a quarter twist on the long side. The hook pick is self explanatory, it is similar to the half diamond pick, but has a hook shaped tip rather than a half diamond shape. The hook pick is sometimes referred to as a 'feeler' and is generally used to lift the pins individually, rather than 'rake' them simultaneously. A warded pick is a device for opening warded locks. It is generally made to conform to a generalized key shape relatively simpler than the actual key used to open the lock; this simpler shape allows for internal manipulations.
Limit: Universal Item. Capable of being bought anywhere that is a shop.
Cost: 2,000 Ryo per Kit

Flute, Side-Blown, Small (Overview) (1)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Instrument, Wind Instrument
Effect: Side-blown flute uses a hole on the side of the tube to produce a tone.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Some of these types are Bansuri, Dizi, Irish Flute, Koudi, Nohkan, Ryuteki, Shinobue, and Venu. These Instruments range up to 2 feet in size.
Limit: These types of items may be capable of being bought inside any Musical Shop.
Cost: 2,500 Ryo

8 inch Length Flashlight (Overview) (1)
Rank: "C"
Type: Secondary, 1 per Slot , Gadget, Survival, Light
Effect: A portable light source.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture A flashlight is a hand-held portable electric-powered light source. Usually the light source is a small incandescent light bulb or light-emitting diode (LED). Typical flashlight designs consist of a light source mounted in a reflector, a lens to protect the light source and reflector, a battery or other power source, and a switch. In addition to the general-purpose hand-held flashlight, many forms have been adapted for special uses. These flashlights are 8 inch length with a 2.5 inch diameter.
Limit: These types of items may be capable of being bought inside any Gadget Shop.
Cost: 2,000 Ryo Each.



Walkie-Talkie (1)
Rank: "C"
Type: Secondary, 1per Slot , Gadget, Surveillance, Transmitter
Effect: A radio transmitting device that sends signals through electromagnetic waves.
Special: ---
Drawback: Limited Range in transmitting information.
Description: Picture A small combined radio transmitter and receiver, usually operating on shortwave that can be carried around by one person. Dimensions are 5 inches by 1.7 inches by 2.1 inches. The radio has a built in speaker / Microphone, Volume control and Squelch facility. The radio can be used with a short or long antenna and operates from a 15 Volt battery. Range between two radios is 20 miles (Distance between close approximate threads in a single board.)
Limit: These types of items may be capable of being bought inside any Gadget Shop.
Cost: 1,500 Ryo Each

Marbles (Large) (Overview) (2)
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: Secondary, 15 per Slot , Bludgeoning, Ball
Effect: A marble is a small spherical weapons used for tripping.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: These balls vary in size. Most commonly, they are about 1 inch (2.54 cm) across, but they may range from 1 inch (0.635 cm) to 2 inches (7.75 cm). Marbles are created in steal or lead material to allow easier pattern, and giving them endurance. These overview Marbles are 3 inches in size. Heavier versions of these exist to be as Bolas. Each "Bola" is attached to 0.5 meters of wire.
Limit: These types of items may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,800 Ryo per Slot, or 120 Ryo Each.

Kunai (Overview) (3)
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: Secondary, 2 per Slot , Piercing/Slashing, Knife
Effect: A digging tool, a bit like a trowel. The blade was soft iron and unsharpened because the edges were used to smash plaster and wood, to dig holes and to pry. Also used as a knife.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: The kunai is conventionally wrought in ranges from 6 to 8 inches, with the average at 7 inches. The kunai was used by common folk as multi-purpose gardening tools and by workers of stone and masonry. The kunai is not a knife, but something more akin to a crowbar. The blade was soft iron and unsharpened because the edges were used to smash plaster and wood, to dig holes and to pry. Normally only the tip would have been sharpened. The uses to which a kunai was put would have destroyed any heat-treated and sharpened tool like a knife. There could be multiple kinds of kunais such as handless ones, or even double sided kunais as long as they are within the same length.
Limit: These types of items may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,000 Ryo per Slot, or 500 Ryo Each.

Personality

Takashi is a strict and stern teenage boy, often following the rules of his village. He sees himself as a police officer and will punish or warn anyone who is in the process of breaking the law no matter if it is his stranger or a family relative. Even for cases such as littering, Takashi will make sure the litterer hears an ear full. Takashi hates arguing with his superiors and often follows orders no matter how nasty the command is. For instance, if Takashi is ordered by a superior to murder his friend for the sake of the group, Takashi will do so.

Although Takashi is a strict and stern person, he is not a cold hearted individual. He loves to be around his friends and enjoys the company of others. Even if he were to be ordered to murder his comrade, Takashi would be greatly heart broken and fall into depression if he were successful. Takashi feels he is often misunderstood because of how he behaves to his seniors. He feels that others treat him as a kiss-up when he is trying to follow the law. It�s not that he is scared of doing something illegal, but Takashi is not mentally capable of doing so.

Takashi always gives his full effort in everything he does and as a result, hates when others are slacking in his group. It angers him and he will tell that person off even if he/she may be his senior. This shows his commitment to getting things done. Furthermore, Takashi is willing to fight someone if he/she is breaking the law. This impulsiveness makes him prone to fighting.


Appearance

Takashi has a round baby face with a tight jaw line. His skin is pale and dotted with freckles across his nose and cheeks. Takashi has emerald wide eyes that look at people as if they are searching their heart. He has thin lips. Takashi has short, neatly-combed blonde hair. He has a lot of hair that’s pulled back into a ponytail. The ponytail reaches just above the nape of his neck. Takashi has no facial hair as of yet. Takashi has thin blonde eyebrows with a fine arch. He has a small scar just above his eyebrows.

Takashi has a medium build; with broad shoulders and long legs. He has strongly defined abdominals. Takashi has hair on his legs. He has finely cut toe and finger nails. Takashi has a thin scar on the lower part of his knee, a wound he received from being hit by his mother. Takashi gets tanned very easily due to his pale skin. Takashi has a small butt. Furthermore, Takashi has a good sense of hygiene, a crisp smell of cinnamon cloaks his body. He has pearly white teeth .

In warm weather, Takashi will wear jean shorts and a light T-shirt. He isn’t much for fashion and will usually maintain a similar style every day. His jean shorts and T-shirts are always a basic color. In the winter, Takashi wears long sweat pants and a Buttoned Sweater. Underneath he has on a long sleeve shirt and a wife beater. Takashi always has a ring that he wears on his pinkie. The ring is made of oak wood and is crafted in the shape of a leaf.


Background

Takashi Rito was born is the son of Honako and Taleigh Rito. His parents were very abusive and were easily angered at Takashi for causing little trouble. At the age of 5, he moved with his Aunt; Himeko; Honako�s sister and to this day lives with her and hasn�t seen his parents since. Due to his life with his parents, Takashi is very obedient and at first feared breaking any laws. It was when his Aunt told him that rules are meant to keep people safe, that he changed his view on the law. The law is not something to fear, it is something to embrace.

Once Himeko accepted Takashi�s residence he began attending the Academy. He was a bright student that always listened to the teacher. However, due to this kids began bllying Takashi and out casting him because they thought he was a goody two shoes. Depressed by this, Takashi would always go home crying to Sakura. His Aunt would hold him until he stopped crying. One day a local school boy met Takashi on his way home. The school boy took pity on Takashi because he was always alone so, invited him to eat lunch with his friends. The school boy�s name was Amaya and what was first pity, soon grew into a great friendship. Along with Ayema, Takashi also made friends with a tomboy named Aiko and another quiet boy named Hotaru.

Several months past and Takashi was eleven years old. He wasn�t as sad anymore and became more outspoken in class. This earned him respect among his classmates. The bullying stopped and he made more friends. Takashi no longer needed Ayema�s comfort and branched out to other children. Ayema confronts Takashi because he feels that their friendship is gone. This turns into a bad argument and the friendship is destroyed. Takashi is too stubborn to apologize even though his Aunt tells him to.



Freebies

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Figment Perception
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: With this technique the user is capable of performing Jutsus that deals with the type of perception of Figment kind.
Special: ---
Drawback: Without this the user is unable to perform Jutsus dealing with the Figment Perception.
Description: Figment Perception creates a false Sensation. When a Figment Technique is perceived everyone feels the same thing, there is no alter, or different versions of a technique from person to person. This means that if a user performs a Figment Perception on a group, everyone feels the exact same Perception. With a Figment Perception if a user wishes to create an affect such as speech, the user must pick the speech first in order for it to speak or else no audible speech will be heard. If intelligible speech is possible, it must be in a language the user can speak. This goes the same with images, a user cannot create an image unless the user knows the image. User can only create figments out of two sensory, sight and sound. Figments cannot cause damage to objects or creatures, support weight, provide nutrition, or provide protection from the elements. Figments are pure illusions, used for distractions, confounding, or delaying enemies. This is not a mind affecting perception.
Limit: No Limitation.

Phantasm Perception
Rank: "C"
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: Jutsu allows the user to perform Phantasm Perceptions.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Phantasms can only be perceived by the user and target, unlike the previous 3 Perceptions. The impression created by a Phantasm exists only in the mind and is personalized for everyone perceiving it. All phantasms are therefore, Mind-Affecting Jutsus. Nightmare is a good example of such a Phantasm. If you want to keep your actions secret from everyone but your subjects, Phantasm is a good choice, whether you want to frighten or to deliver a message.
Limit: ---

Katon no Jutsu (Fire Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Fire. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Fire Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---
Heat Mastery, when a user reaches to a point where they gain the full potential and understanding of fire and Heat the user is capable of many things. A technique such as this is a mastery of all Fire Techniques to where they do not have to worry about Minor Burns.


Jod Muay
Rank: "E" Rank
Type: TaiJutsu
Effect: The basic posture of the Muay Thai Style. The basic posture needed in order to move on into the more advanced techniques of the Muay Thai style. The Jod Muay is the basic step of defending but Muay is the martial art that uses the eight limbs, two hands, two shins, two knees, and two elbows to fight the opponent.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture The leading foot should be pointed straight, while the other is positioned to angle at ninety degrees whilst raising the heel of the back foot. Both the knees and the body are straight, designed to create posture. Arch the back backwards slightly. This allows power to be generated for the legs. The chin must remain in the same posture as the shoulders; in essence, this means that the user must lower their chin to be level with the shoulders, while raising the shoulders and the arms for guarding purposes. The next step is to grasp the hands, keeping them raised to face level, crafting a guard with the forearms to allow defending against oncoming attacks. The eyes are straight forward, locking onto the opponent's abdomen for full view of oncoming strikes against the upper or lower body.
Limit: Must learn from a Muay Thai Master.

Fuuton no Jutsu (Wind Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Wind. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Wind Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

5 Techniques

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Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Bbujiekuto) (Summoning Technique (Object))
Rank: “E,” “C,” “A,”
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A summoning technique that allows the user to summon an object/weapon/puppet the same rank and one rank above as the rank the user knows in the technique.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: Must have a scroll and seal.
Description: Picture 1-A; Picture 1-B, Picture 1-A; Picture 1-B A technique where the user uses a seal on a Scroll to summon an object they have. The object who is being summoned must have the same seal as well in order to be summoned. User is unable to summon where other seals are located. The Person is the medium and you need that person in order to bring someone in. Once the object has been summoned the seal disappears. In order to summon an object “E” Rank or “D“ Rank, user must learn “E” Rank Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Bbujiekuto) (Summoning Technique (Object)). In order to summon an object “C” Rank and “B“ Rank, user must learn “C” Rank Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Bbujiekuto) (Summoning Technique (Object)). In order to summon an object “A” Rank and “S“ Rank, user must learn “A” Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Bbujiekuto) (Summoning Technique (Object)).
Limit: Universal Nin, Unless Weapon Specialist, or Puppeteer


Ninpou: Kari Shuriken (Ninja Art: Hunting Shuriken)
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user causes shuriken to track their foes.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: The shuriken cannot be recalled until they hit something.
Description: The user forms the hand seal, channeling chakra into a number of thrown or held shuriken. Those shuriken, when thrown, will curve and turn in their flight paths to continue to follow their opponent. They gain no bonuses to speed, and as such can be foiled with a fast enough or clever enough defensive maneuver.
Limit:Universal Ninjutsu

Soshuha (Manipulating Attack Blades)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user is capable of performing their very chakra down along the very ground. Doing so the user then takes the time to concentrate and begins to lift small blades such as Kunais, or knifes up into the air just a meter and a half up high. The knunais are then are just held there for a brief moment in which is targeted towards the target at hand.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: This technique can not be pushed any further then stated. It can not be re-thrown, can not be directed, turned or any other type of situation. There is no way to redirect these or change directions.
Description: When the user lifts the very blades up into the air, this technique is used to where they give a push towards the blades to hurl them towards one direction. This technique however can not be used for re-directing, and this technique is only capable of pushing forth in at least a ten meter of distance.
Limit: Universal NinJutsu Technique

Shunshin no Jutsu - Oshi (Body Flicker Technique - Push)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu/TaiJutsu
Effect: A Jutsu that allows a user to rush forward in almost instantaneous speed. Used to draw the user close to the opponent.
Special: ---
Drawback: May use 3 times a day. May perform 1 more each time learned. Passing amount renders the user's legs immobile due to severe pain. Unable to perform again unless gained medical treatment. Must move through an opening. Unable to maneuver around obstructing objects. Can't attack while performing any Shunshin or Variation.
Description: User is able to move forward in a straight line along the ground in almost instantaneous untraceable speed while temporarily masking the user's movements within 10 meters. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by focusing the user's chi along the ankles and foot. User mostly moves just with their ankles and feet. Jutsu takes up no movements. User may only use this Jutsu half of the movements may allow in a single round while rounding down. Example: User has 5 movements, user is able to perform Jutsu 2 times per round.
Limit: Universal NinJutsu or Universal TaiJutsu.

Fire Style: Inferno Technique
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Shoots small gout of flame towards the opponent.
Special: Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, Tiger
Drawback: Requires the user to exhale and keep their dominant hand cupped over their mouths. Once the user is out of breath of moves their hand, the technique falls.
Description: The user performs the handseals, energizing their hand and their esophagus with chakra. The user then cups their hand over their lips and exhales. The oxygen being expelled from the lungs combusts upon reaching the chakra from the hand, and the user blows it out a maximum of ten feet away. This is different from the Goukakyou no Jutsu in the fact that this comes out as a stream and not a fireball, and also different from the fact that once the user stops breathing out or moves their hand, the technique ends.
Limit: Fire Release

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New Techniques

510 Training Points



Total Training Points: 500 (500tp to use)


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D- 1 (10tp)
C- 3 (90tp)
B- 5 (400tp)
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Katon: Daitou (Fire Element: Longsword)
Rank: "B" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user concentrates their chakra along the palm of their hands. As the user does, so they are capable of creating a longsword like weapon made out of fire out of the palm of their hand.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: This technique tends to burn the user's hands and is only capable of staying out for two rounds with a five round rest before the hands suffer great damage. For each round the user keeps the fire Blade out past the two rounds the user is unable to use that hand for ten rounds.
Description: The user creates a large blade made out of fire along the palm of their hands. The user does so by creating a few handseals and holds their hands near their body. The user takes in a deep breathe blows out the air towards the palm of his hands. The user then blows in a straight line away from the user as the fire begins to formulate around the palm of the hand creating the large blade. This technique is capable of being used as a quick defensive style move, or may be used as a split offensive slashing attack.
Limit: Must have the Fire Release

Haisekishou
Rank: B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Surrounds the opponent in a fiery explosive attack
Special: *Hand seals*
Drawback: Clearly visible attack, someone else can detonate it as well.
Description: After performing the necessary handseals, the user will expel a cloud of dust in a cone shape from his mouth in a 20-meter diameter. The dust is highly flammable, and when the user clicks his teeth together, it will trigger the cloud of dust to explode, damaging whatever was trapped within it.
Limit: Fire Release

Awakened Fears
Rank: "C"
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: This Jutsu subjects the target to phantasmal images drawn from its latent or suppressed fears.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A Fear, Mind-Affecting Technique. Affects 1 living creature. The user is able to perform this technique at a distance of 30 meters plus 15 meters per class level. The duration of this technique is instantaneous. This technique may be disbelieved once interacted with. The fears within the target’s subconscious mind are transformed into terrifying and frightful images that its conscious mind can visualize. The target experiences a horde of phantasmal images swirling around its body, tearing and clawing at it. The target may make a save to disbelieve the phantasmal images, otherwise the target suffers from mental damage from the fear effect and is shaken.
Limit: Must know the Phantasm Perception.

Bewildering Visions
Rank: "C"
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: User channels mischievous divine energy to envelop their foe in sickened disorientation.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A Mind-Affecting Technique. Affects 1 living creature. The user is able to perform this technique at a distance of 7 meters plus 6 meters per class level. The duration of this technique lasts for 5 rounds per class level. This technique may be negated. This Jutsu makes the world appear to be tossing and rippling in a nauseating manner. The subject is sickened for the duration of the Jutsu and must make an additional save or be nauseated. This save though must be repeated each round.
Limit: Must know the Phantasm Perception.

Fuuton: Kamikaze: (Wind Element: Divine Wind)
Rank: "B"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Powerful Wind Technique that creates powerful miniature tornadoes swirling around, picking up multiple types of debris and uses them for a powerful striking like attack.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: User must be in the air in order to perform this technique.
Description: The user jumps up high into the air as they perform the handseals needed. Doing so they punch out forward towards the enemy, or kicks towards the enemy(ies) as a powerful wind jutsu is performed. A great and powerful wind technique comes forth as tornado winds is produced within a radius of twenty meters. A total of four miniature tornadoes within the radius reaching a grand height of twenty meters in the air spin around violently before enclosing in creating an even more devastating tornado technique. This technique sucks up debris all around to create a more powerful attack. An example would be a fire Jutsu being performed before hand as the Tornado uses the fire as a source creating a massive fiery tornado to destroy all from within. When the four Tornadoes joined into one devastating creation the tornado forms into a grand size of ten meters radius with a larger height of thirty meters.
Limit: Must have the Wind Release

Hikui Tenkuu Assaku no Jutsu (Low Air Pressure Technique)
Rank:"B"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A technique used to drop the air pressure within a room to the point that it makes the opponents and those that does not perform this technique fall into a deep sleep.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: A technique used within closed spaces such as a closed room.
Description: The user after performing the needed handseals does two things. The first thing it does is it allows the air around the user when breathing in to stay normal, to allow the user to perform normally. The second thing this technique does is it drops the air pressure around the user within the distance of five meters radius. This radius never decreases. Within the first round the opponent feels sleepy as they begin to yawn greatly, their reaction time becomes slow, their capability of performing handseals becomes drowsy. When the second round comes in the opponent or those that are within the same room whether an opponent or not, will fall into a deep sleep. The amount of time for them to stay in a long sleep is that of twenty rounds, which is equivalent to two minutes, or within the length of a small skip such as binding an opponent.
Limit: Must have the Wind Release


Fuuton: Kazekabe no Jutsu (Wind Release: Wind Wall Technique)
Rank: "B", "A"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user extends both arms, sending out a large, continuous burst of wind that forms a ten meter by ten meter wall of constantly spinning air. This air is then capable of dispersing incoming attacks, even "B" rank techniques.
Special: Handseals.
Drawback: While this is active the user cannot use other techniques, since both hands are required to maintain extended.
Description: The user performs the handseals and then extends both arms. A large gust of air escapes from the user’s arms, flatting against itself, forming a ten meter by ten meter wall of rapidly spinning air in front of the user. Air continuously flows from the user’s arm, feeding the technique as it blocks incoming attacks and continuing the spinning of the air. This technique is capable of redirecting impacting techniques as well as projectiles and projectile like techniques into other directions sending them away from the user. When the user learns the "A" rank version of this technique the user is capable of performing this technique and redirecting the technique, projectiles, or projectile like techniques back to the opponent.
Limit: Must have Wind Release

Ninpou: Shuriken Mokuzai Jiten (Ninja Art: Shuriken Lumber Spin)
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user causes a shuriken to spin intensely fast, greatly increasing it’s cutting power.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: --
Description: The user forms the hand seals, focusing chakra into held or thrown shuriken. The shuriken will begin to spin excessively fast, reminiscent of a saw blade. With this it gains enhanced cutting power, much like a saw blade does, to shear through wood, bite into stone, and slash the human body deeply.
Limit: Universal Ninjutsu.

Passionate Heat
Rank: D, C, B, A
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Creates an area of fire underneath the opponent, which will then burn them.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: If in the radius of the jutsu, the fire will also burn the user.
Description:
Rank D: Once the handseals are made, you must put your hands on the ground, and a line of fire will shot towards the enemy. It will create a circle of fire underneath one opponent. The circle starts as just a perimeter, but then fills up with flames. The flames reach about two and a half feet high, and can burn through clothes.

Rank C: Once the handseals are made, you must put your hands on the ground, and a line of fire will shot towards the enemy. It will create a circle of fire with a radius of three feet wide appear underneath the opponent, or opponents. The circle starts as just a perimeter, but then fills up with flames. It will only burn those that are within the radius of the circle. The flames will reach about three feet high and will burn though clothes.

Rank B: Once handseals are made, you must put your hands on the ground, and a line of fire will shot towards the enemy. It will create a circle of fire with a radius of five feet wide appear underneath the opponent, or opponents. The circle starts as just a perimeter, but then fills up with flames. It will burn anyone within the radius of the circle. The flames will be about three and a half feet high, and will burn through clothes and melt metal.

Rank A: Once handseals are made, you must put your hands on the ground, and a line of fire will shot towards the enemy. It will create a circle of fire with a radius of seven feet wide appear underneath the opponent, or opponents. The circle starts as just a perimeter, but then fills up with flames. The flames will reach about four feet high, and will burn through clothes and melt metal.
Limit: Must know Fire Release

Total Training Points: 1500 (10tp to use)

E-
D- 1(10tp)
C-
B-
A-
S-

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Plant Dance
Rank: "D"
Skill: GenJutsu
Effect: This Jutsu causes the target to think that all normal plants around them are dancing, swaying, and striking out an eerie fashion.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A Mind-Affecting Technique. Affects 1 target. The user is able to perform this technique at a distance of 7 meters plus 6 meters per class level. The duration of this technique lasts for 5 rounds per class level. This technique may be negated. This Jutsu causes the target to think that all normal plants around them are dancing, swaying, and striking out an eerie fashion. So shocking is this illusion that the target turns and flees in terror from any source or location of normal plants for the duration of the Jutsu. The target’s reaction to this illusion is treated as cause fear.
Limit: Must know the Phantasm Perception.

[sonic]

Okay, I think it's good now

[Roy (Defiance)]

First, In Kuchiyose no Jutsu (summoning Technique-Objects), can you bold or underline the rank you know in this technique.

I've counted 535tp in your update from the free tp gained. You need to get rid of some techniques worth 35tp. Also your unable to learn flame golem. The limit states you need to have mastered fire first before learning. Which means you need at least 500tp within the fire release. So go ahead and remove that technique and select something else.

Note: If you remove that technique you will have 75tp left to place anywhere and won't have to worry about free up 35tp to keep your remaining techniques. Ok? Any question contact me for further assistance.

[sonic]

Okay I'll fix that

I do have the fire release skill. It's in my bio

[sonic]

I took out a C-rank tech and an E-rank tech so it should add up to 500 tp now

[Roy (Defiance)]

You still have Fire Golem in your bio.

I'll try to explain this a bit better. Your unable to obtain Fire Golem for the simple fact of it's limit.

Limit: Must have mastered Fire Release. The user can only have Golems from the same rank out at once, so if the user wishes to summon a Golem of a different rank, the user has to get rid of the other Golems first.

If you come across any technique that states "Must have Mastered XXXX Release/Style". It means you must be considered a master in that . In order to Release/Style be considered a master in that Release/Style you need 500tp into it. So in your case you need at least 500tp in Fire Release to be considered master.

As of now, your currently standing about 90 tp into Fire Release.

So with that being said go ahead and pick another technique, please.

[sonic]

Oh now I understand. Okay, I replaced Fire Golem with Fire element: Longsword

[Mist]

could you simply add all you're freebies under one area? Having them separated the you did makes them confusing. Separation things too much is what caused you to make a new bio thread. Please tr and keep things in the same area for tidiness.

The words from you're charts are confusing. You have 510 TP yet I dont know why you put 1510. The first chart is the 500 chart the 2nd s the 1500 chart. You will need to edit these to make this have more sense.

Also you're 1500-c rank chart has 1 d rank listed but the justs for it is an e rank. You will either have to replace that e rank with a d-rank jutsu or add another e-rank jutsu and change the chart to show 2 e-ranks.

I am not sure why you have the jutsu Passionate heat listed. You already have all you're starter/tp tree chart moves out. That move is an extra that doesnt fit anywhere. Could you please remove it.

[sonic]

Is it really so confusing? I put a header under both so, I thought you'd know what I was referring to. I'll change it though if it makes it easier to understand.

Oh I see

Passionate heat is a jutsu I had trained. I'll put it under the list of techniques

[Mist]

you cannot have 6 starter techniques....just because you trained for a jutsu doesnt mean you keep them in a revamp...the tp you gained for passionate heat is being used for something else. because you are using 510 elsewhere you cannot keep passionate heat unless you replace an existing d-rank jutsu with it. or you just remove passionate heat.

concerning the mis-match of you're listed d rank but only having a e-rank. you still have not fixed you're c-block training chart like i asked earlier... please follow the above instructions from my prior post.

[sonic]

But I had trained Passionate Heat prior to revamp. I have to take it away because of the revamp although Passionate Heat is still a listed jutsu?

[sonic]

Okay changed

[Mist]

You don't seem to be understanding things. Please read the following and do not ignore anything like you have previously.

1. You need a jutsu in your second chart.. because you have have over 500 tp. I do not know why you removed it from that chart.

Please place jutsus that equal the TP amount of 10 and fix the second chart. As you are right now you have only 500 tp worth in you're bio not 510 that you should have. the 500 tp you have now are in the first chart. that is fine. right now you need the second chart fixed.

For you're second chart, It will ether be 2 E-ranks or 1 D rank. Choose either 2 e ranks jutsus or 1 d rank jutsu. Make the chart reflect you're choice meaning list the amount you chose. You cannot have both options.. There is one last option but again you cant have all options just one. You may also have 1 E-rank skill that is worth 10 tp but you will need to perform a skill roll for that. There is a special board for skill rolls and wafter you post there you link the thread here.

2. Again.. remove passionate heat from you're starting techniques.. remove it. it doesn't belong there.

[sonic]

I had fixed the second chart before you posted that.

[sonic]

It was only a typo and you must have not seen me change it while you were writing your list.

[sonic]

I had also already switched a technique for passionate heat in my first chart before you posted that. I forgot to take it out of the list of techniques

[Mist]

Ive said it before i will say it again. please make use of the edit button. 3 posts in a row is a bit much. When you're character is approved would you like a bio-clean up? Thats where staff remove all posts but the necessary things to show such as you're bio/gradings. will wait for an answer before grading myself.

[sonic]

Sure, the bio-clean up sounds like a good idea. I'd like that thank you