The Terror Kaito -Finished! Rawr-

[Kaito The Beast]

Hoshigaki, Kaito 

- Bloodlimit: N/A
- Height: 6'0"
- Weight: 152 lbs
- Age: 16
- Gender: Male
- Alignment: Chaotic Evil
- Birth Country: Ame no Kuni
- Village: Amegakure no Sato

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[忍術 NinJutsu Specialist]

Able to go into 6 Releases, May Master 4 of the 6 Releases.
Releases not mastering user may only go into it for 300 Training Points.
May use 250 Training Points into Universal NinJutsu.

- 水遁 Suiton no Jutsu
- 土遁 Doton no Jutsu [F]
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[体術 TaiJutsu Specialist]

Able to go into 6 Fighting Styles, May Master 4 of the 6 Fighting Styles.
Fighting Styles not mastering user may only go into it for 300 Training Points.
May use 250 Training Points into Universal TaiJutsu.

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Personality:

--- Hostile/Aggressive
:: He is not known for being kind hearted and sweet. Quit the opposite in fact, Kaito has a pretty nasty temper and people tend to make a wide wake around him, afraid of him maybe lashing out when hes in a mood. If he does get put in a mood its best to avoid him, for any challenge or act of disrespect might cause him to lose his mind. He isn't known for backing down even form a match that looks heavily against him. However even though he might be the under dog, he has a reputation for winning his fights which makes him even scarier and more intimidating to consider fighting with. He doesn't show mercy well and holding back isn't a strong suit of his as well, he fights like a rabid animal with cunning and power of a sly beast. If he can see weakness, essentially smell your blood or fear, believe he'll exploit it.

--- Cocky/Arrogant
:: He knows hes got talent, skill even and isn't afraid of showing it. He believes in himself, probably to much and tends to be very self conceited about his abilities, even sometimes over casting them grater then they might be. Thats not to say he's all talk, he does have an impressive ability to get a job done and is nothing to ignore in a fight. He acts like your classic all star wrestler, full of himself and he wants everyone else to be as well. Not to mention most of what he says he very well might be able o back up.

--- Ambitious
:: Like everyone else in the world, Kaito has goals and objectives he has set for himself and he will stop at nothing to obtain those for himself. As of now, he doesn't have much more to live for aside form himself so he'll train, kill, and reach for whatever he needs to to get to his goals and be the beast he see's himself as. If nothing else, when he talks about his goals he is serious, and if you stand in his way may heaven protect you because you'll see just how bloodthirsty he truly is.

--- Loyalty
:: As of now, Kaito holds no loyalty to any one man or women aside form himself. He obeys the laws of his village to an extent really, as long as they don't interfere with his needs or desires. He doesn't really feel any sense of belonging to the Hidden rain aside form being born here and raised as a shinobi. He's grateful for the training training and oppurtunity and thats why he behaves himself really, but as far as the superiors go he respects them, maybe even reveres their power, but he doesn't apply any of his loyalty to them at this time. However if someone does earn his loyalty they have it till death or betrayal. He can be firecly loyal, offering his life to protect those he finds worthy even. To gain his loyalty he has to see a sense of comradeship that expands beyond mere acquaintances, and even a companion. To him loyalty is gained by devotion to him or his goals/mutual interest. Its a promise of someone who he can rely on to have his back in any situation.

And don't even mention if he's loyal to his family. He wants those fuckers dead then dead and he holds no alliance to his clan aside from the sharing of common suffering and strength, although he respects the power of others in his clan and isn't outright aggressive to them usually, he doesn't see any belonging with them either.

--- Determined/Driven
:: Whether its in a fight or in an attempt to reach his goals, Kaito cannot be deterred. Its a trait that makes him invaluable for a mission or mutual goal, because he will never stop until the job gets done. His determination can maybe be described as pigheadedness, but its more of a moral responsibility. When he takes on a task, he's committing himself to its completion. If it suits him that is. Its his reputation on the line and he won't have that diminished over nothing. For his goals, he won't be stopped and his motivation, while being his own, is present to anyone pay attention. Its clear that he means business and that sort of drive radiates of you like a confidence that cannot be replaced.

--- Deeper Emotion
:: There is occasionally evidence that he does care for people, in situations were they are being beaten or forced down away from their goals by people who abuse others for fun. That shit drives him crazy, the strong picking on the weak just for kicks when the other person can't do anything for themselves. Even when he's seen admiring beauty, he seems to grow softer, and his hard exterior lightens to someone who wants to be apart of that beauty. But since he isn't one to share these moments are few and far between and he probably wouldn't acknowledge it happened anyway.

--- Clever
:: Even with his alpha male persona, he does have a clever mind under the muscle and aggressive behavior. He is cunning like a true predator, having bonded to the Apex predator, he shows a blood thirsty desire to overcome an adversary in almost every fight. He can apply that cunning to conversations with others and even to deduction although planning things out isn't his strong suit. If he were a chess piece it's more then likely be the knight, a slightly unpredictable piece that can take out any opposition but must be moved by a superior intellect. His cleverness applies to the short game sadly, he doesn't plan ahead very well, only setting his goals, not the path to get to them.

--- Careless/Doesn't Give A Single Fuck
:: Remember, kaito doesn't care about you. He doesn't care if you have goals as well, and he more then likely doesn't want to be friends and he won't be chummy with you. If you are powerful, or of his clan, he might respect you. Maybe. But otherwise expect to be treated like prey, he is rude and arrogant and you mean nothing to him. If you are weaker then trash and getting beat down, he might step in, but that does not make you friends. Don't get it twisted, it could get you killed.

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Appearance:

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::: The Body

        The Hoshigaki tend to be more striking physically then most. Their very visage can strike fear in someone and inspire nightmares in young children. Kaito is no different. He Stands at six feet even, which is an above average height for others his age and weighing in at just over 150 lbs. Don't be mislead, his weight is purely muscle, mainly from his shark enhanced physic. His skin is a light gray in color, red markings lie above his thin black eyebrows, pointed slightly down following the curve of his eyes. His eyes are also slightly outlined by a blue color thats natural. His eyes however give off an eerie appearance. Like other Hoshigaki, his pupils are smaller then normal, but still retain color from when he was young and still fully human. The bright sky blue is ever present, although a slit has replaced his pupils, much like a serpents eyes.

Three gills are present on either side of his neck,six in total, reaching from just behind his head to the sides, not making it to the center of his throat. His long white hair, that flows all the way to his thighs, occasionally obscure them from total view, but anytime spent with him at all would reveal them to sight. Otherwise his facial appearance is quite handsome, a small petite nose and angles outlining a strong, but not obtrusive jaw line and soft cheek bones.

His body isn't overly bulky, even given his enhancements. Although, aside form his gray skin, some patches of his skin do appear to display dark blue patches almost like strips. Although he wasn't bonded with a tiger shark its just a slight skin defect of his melding of shark and human flesh. In fact he was bonded with a juvenile Great White Shark, caught by his father. Thus his light gray color to match that of the over color of a great white. These patches are located on his left arm and shoulder, his abs and around his right side torso, and on both legs from his ankles to knees.

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        As for his attire, He is simple yet in his own way his style fits him. A dark blue loose fitting top, sleeveless and with a deep V-neck reveal more of his light gray skin. A normally blue sash belt keeps his dark blue matching trousers up. Light gold thread is used for detail and small tassels hang from the end of his belt. The quality of his clothing speaks to his almost royal upbringing by his rich family who always supplied the best when they could or when Kaito would allow it. His feet are wrapped in bandages and adorned by typical black shinobi footwear on occasion, otherwise he just wears the bandages out but thats seldom. Gold colored cloth is wrapped around his right arm, as is his rain village headband. Two thin dark red, almost crimson colored neck lesses are worn by him, each having gold pieces on them as well, and two thin gold bands are worn on each wrist as well for decoration, but were really a dear gift to him. Otherwise, his butt bag is often ahnging form his rear right side, a kunai holster may even be seen as well as any other veriaty of equipment he deems necessary. 

[Kaito The Beast]

生  [History]

        The life of Kaito was surprisingly lavish compared to most. He was born in the Hidden Rain, within the land of Ame no Kuni, and thats where he's spent most of his life. Whats important to note about his early years is his interactions with his father, and the ritual that made him more shark then man. His father was a skilled shinobi, achieving the rank of Chuunin within the land of rain but never advancing much further. His father before him was somewhat of a legend among the Hoshigaki people and the Rain, a legendary shark, or as he was refereed to by Kaito's father, The Great Jaws of the Rain. So from birth the expectations fro Kaito were high.

Since his father could never achieve greatness as a shinobi like his father before him, Kaito was expected to become a legend in his place. For as long as he could remember, Kaito had been told how he had no choice but to make his family and clan proud. That if he didn't become great he'd bring dishonor and shame to their entire family. Imagine an impressionable child, and to hear that he would bring dishonor was terrifying at a young age. So he tried his best, training starting as soon as he was old enough to do so, and always pushing himself under his fathers tutelage, and the supervision of private instructors his father hired to help create the perfect shinobi.

But with all the pressure his father put on him and the lack of support form his absent mother, Kaito was never enough, he never amounted to anything in his fathers eyes no matter how hard he tried. At the age of six Kaito was deemed old enough for the Same no Gishiki, and even though he was afraid, and as any frightened child would need, he sought reassurance from his father and mother. He got none, instead he was scolded for being afraid, and ignored by his mother who apparently had more important things on her mind. So he was taken for the ceremony, fighting back tears as he was ripped from his home with not a care given for him aside from his fathers selfish ambitions to create a legendary Hoshigaki shinobi.

Into The Depths of Despair.

        He was escorted by two Hoshigaki shinobi, probably chuunin from their posture, from his home in Amegakure to a small hidden cave near the village. The young boy sniffled and occasionally found himself stopping, his legs heavy with fear. The chuunin shoved him on, pulling him practically when need be. It got to the point to where all Kaito could do to not think about what was about to happen to him was to think about his family, the father who hated who he was, who wanted to change everything about him, and the mother who didn't know he even existed. His mind was torn, knowing they were sending him to this ceremony that was suppose to change him. To his father it was for the better, it was the only way. To his mother it meant nothing like Kaito did, and to Kaito himself, he saw it as nothing but a source of pain... and that he had enough of.

The cave was dark for the first few feet, he remembered not being able to see anything within it form the outside, and after a while walking in darkness, torches began to line the walls, providing a little light to pierce the veil of darkness that covered them. They finally arrived at a large room carved from the wall of the cave, inside was a small pool of water, pure blue, so clear he could see the bottom. The pool was circular and no more then a foot deep, and directly ahead of it was another circle, a body of a moderate sized great white shark lying at its center. The only light seemed to come from the pool of water itself, and 3 torches around the room inn a triangle. A larger circle was seen drawn in ink and blood around the pool of water. He absently rubbed his arm where earlier he'd been cut and blood had been collected from him previously that day before he was taken.

From the darkness of the room a tall man in a dark blue robe with golden trim emerged, his hood covered most of his face but Kaito could see the light blue skin of his chin and sharp teeth peering out from under it. A shark priest, the mere sight of him sent shivers down his spin and he instinctivly stepped back, only to have one of the chuunin step up to plant a leg behind him and stop him form moving. Before he knew what happened next, he was lifted from the ground and placed in the center of the pool of water, and shackles were placed around his wrists, holding him in place. Kaito fell to his knees in the water, silent tears falling from his eyes as he looked ahead at the body of the large shark. He saw kanjis painted on the ground, but he closed his eyes before he really got a good look at them. It was too late to get away now, he was here to suffer his fathers will. For what, for what was all he could ask himself. Why was he here? For the deranged fantasy of his father? Was this finally gonna make him worthy to be his son? The answer was no...He didn't think this would make him worthy.

The priest moved around him, setting teeth in the water around him, and spoke to Kaito, and the boy listened. The Priests words sounds mesmerizing like a sweet inviting song. He focused on the shark, slowly closing and opening his eyes, staring blankly at the white shark ahead of him. He thought of the shark, of his family, of himself and his worth, and finally of what he wanted. Blue light erupted from the pool as he seemed to drift to a deep sleep kneeling in the water. He still remembers parts of the ritual dream. A savage dark blue, monstrous version of himself charging at him. he remembers getting his shit kicked in, the monster shark version of himself beating and pounding on him until he was bloody. He most specifically remember s what gave him the courage and strength to fight back, what made him want to live, even though it was a dream world, it had felt so real to him. In this world he was ready to let the alter ego kill him, until he found his will. He found his inner fire.

he fought back because he wanted to be better, he wanted to destroy his father. The source of his pain, the cause of his suffering. Even now, he was getting beaten by himself because he had no will of his own, so he found it. He wouldn't be come a legendary hoshigaki shinobi for his fathers sake. He'd become what he saw across form him. He'd become the top predator, the Monstrous Hoshigaki, the Legend eater. That became his will, and with that driving him he killed his shadow self again, and again until the vision faded, and he lifted himself from the water, pain surging though his young body, every muscle in excruciating pain and he let out a scream, at first of pain and agony then it changed, to a roar of rage and anger.

He emerged from the cave a new person. Not just was he a beast, a true Hoshigaki, but he was a new Kaito. He no longer desired his fathers approval. He desired his blood. One day he'd achieve his desire, see it made reality.

When Light Fades, you Better Hide, that when Demons come out to Play

        For the next few years his father was still present, trying to push his son who only lashed out at him, showing him nothing but contempt and anger. He still paid for private lessons and anything that he thought would help better kaito as a shinobi, unknowingly preparing his son to reach his goal. His father spent a notable amount of time in the village of Sankori, a trade village full of the lowest filth in Ame no Kuni. It was a village full of thieves, gamblers, thugs and rapists. His father conducted secret business there which is where the majority of their wealth came from.

As he got older, Kaito learned all about his fathers little secerts and it all disgusted him. But at least growing up like this numbed him to most things seen as wrong or evil, he was able to view it all as a means to a self absorbed end. He could get on board with that, having nothing but his only motivations on his own mind, why would anyone do something for others when there was themselves to worry about.

Now that he was old enough to, he took his inheritance and moved out of his fathers home against his wishes, getting his own apartment in Amegakure. His father regularly sent people to check on him, tutors even, most of which Kaito threatened or ignored or chased away. He was determined to seperate himself from his fathers name, and make a story for himself. A story of a monster, the monster he wanted to be. He wanted to rip apart Sankori, hurt his father where his wallet was and thus tearing out the mans real true love. Then the finishing blow would be to hold the real beating heart in person. One day, one glorious day he'd get there. For now he'd train and grow his name, as the Legend eater, the Shark in the Rain.

[Kaito The Beast]

刃 [Arsenal - Weapons]

Kunai (Overview)
Rank: "C" Rank      X2
Type: Secondary, 2 per Slot, Piercing/Slashing, Knife
Effect: A digging tool, a bit like a trowel. The blade was soft iron and unsharpened because the edges were used to smash plaster and wood, to dig holes and to pry. Also used as a knife.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: The kunai is conventionally wrought in ranges from 6 to 8 inches, with the average at 7 inches. The kunai was used by common folk as multi-purpose gardening tools and by workers of stone and masonry. The kunai is not a knife, but something more akin to a crowbar. The blade was soft iron and unsharpened because the edges were used to smash plaster and wood, to dig holes and to pry. Normally only the tip would have been sharpened. The uses to which a kunai was put would have destroyed any heat-treated and sharpened tool like a knife. There could be multiple kinds of kunais such as handless ones, or even double sided kunais as long as they are within the same length.
Limit: These types of items may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,000 Ryo per Slot, or 500 Ryo Each.

Knife (Overview)
Rank: "C" Rank    X2
Type: Secondary, 2 per Slot, Piercing/Slashing, Knife
Effect: A knife is any cutting edge or blade, handheld or otherwise, with or without a handle.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: The knife is conventionally wrought in ranges from 6 to 8 inches, with the average at 7 inches. Originally made of rock, flint, and obsidian; knives have evolved in construction as technology has with blades being made from bronze, copper, iron, steel, ceramics, and titanium. Many cultures have their unique version of the knife. Due to its role as humankind's first tool, certain cultures have attached spiritual and religious significance to the knife including the La Hu Si. There could be multiple kinds of knives such as throwing knives, curved knives, combat knives, or retractable knives.

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Limit: These types of items may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,000 Ryo per Slot, or 500 Ryo Each. =2,00

Gauntlet (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Bludgeoning/Piercing/Slashing, Gauntlet
Effect: Single-handed weapons not resembling a straight dagger blade. Usually wielded without wrist action. Often protects the forearm.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Single-handed weapons not resembling a straight dagger blade. Usually wielded without wrist action. Often protects the forearm. Examples of Gauntlets are Brass Knuckles, Cestus, Gauntlets, and others that resemble as such.

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Limit: These types of weapons may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop
Cost: 2,500 Ryo Each

Hira-Shuriken (Overview)
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: Secondary, 15 per Slot, Piercing, Shuriken
Effect: Is a concealed weapon that is generally for throwing, and sometimes stabbing or slashing.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Hira-shuriken is constructed from thin, flat plates of metal derived from a variety of sources including hishi-gane (coins), and kugi-nuki (carpentry tools), and generally resemble popular conceptions of shuriken. In modern popular culture, these are called "throwing stars" or "ninja stars". They often have a hole in the center and possess a fairly thin blade sharpened only at the tip. The holes derive from their source in items that had holes - old coins, washers, and nail-removing tools. This proved convenient for the shuriken user, as well, as the weapons could be strung on a string or dowel in the belt for transport, and the hole also had aerodynamic and weighting effects that aided the flight of the blade after it was thrown. There is a wide variety of forms of hira-shuriken and they are now usually identified by the number of points the blades possess.
Limit: These types of items may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,500 Ryo per Slot, or 100 Ryo Each.

8,000 Ryo Spent Here

服 [Clothing]

Butt Bag Type 1 (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Tailor, Slot Holder, Holds 15 Slots (15 for Items of Scroll Length), Bag
Effect: A waist pack worn with the pouch in back.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture A pack worn at the back along a belt at the waist. Water repellent collar with drawstring pack with quick release closures attached to 1 inch cinch straps and a top carry handle. It has a vented bottom with keeper clips to attach to the belt, or straps to wrap around a belt. The compartment has the dimensions Height of 10.25 inches Width of 10.5 inches and Depth of 7 inches. The interior holds 15 slots of scroll length as well as main objects that fit in the same dimensions. Normally extra clothes is held in this spot as well as other non combative supplies.
Limit: These type of items may be bought inside any Tailor Shop.
Cost: 1,700 Ryo

Secondary Items

Grenade: Smoke  X3
Rank: "C"
Type: Secondary, 1 per Slot, Explosive, Grenade
Effect: A Grenade that gives off thick smoke when it explodes; used to make a smoke screen or to mark a position.
Special: ---
Drawback: May harm the user if not thrown right.
Description: Smoke grenades are used as ground-to-ground or ground-to-air signaling devices, target or landing zone marking devices, and screening devices for unit movement. The body is a sheet-steel cylinder with emission holes in the top and bottom. These allow the smoke to be released when the grenade is ignited. Two main types exist, colored smoke (for signaling) and screening smoke. It fills an area radius of 15 meters with thick smoke. The smoke may come in different colors if the user wishes. Different color smoke could be used for information value if need. It takes 6 seconds before it explodes.
Limit: These types of items may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,500 Ryo Each = 4,500






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[Kaito The Beast]

[鬼鮫 Hoshigaki Ritual]

Same no Gishiki (Ritual of the Shark)
Rank: “C” Rank
Effects: Changes the user’s appearance to give them blue skin, gill-like appendages, and access to the ritual’s techniques.
Special: Preparing the Ritual- First, the user must obtain the body of a full-grown shark. The body must be fresh, not more than 3 days IC old. The type of the shark gained will determine the manner in which the user’s facial and bodily features will change. Then, the user must obtain 50 shark incisors, which cannot come from the shark to be used in the ritual. After that, the user must purchase a large bottle of ink from a shop. The user then pricks their finger and adds their blood to the ink. With that done, the user has completed all the preparations for the ritual and must then find a Same Saishi (Shark Priest) to perform the ritual.
Description: Once all the preparations for the ritual have been completed, the user will be asked to sit down by the Same Saishi. The man will then use the ink that has been prepared for him and draw a circle around the person that is ten meters in diameter. The kanji for the four seasons is written at the quarter marks for each circle, with summer at the top (behind the user), spring to the right, winter at the bottom (in front of the user), and autumn on the left. These directions are symbolic, as it represents a turning away from Fire (Summer) and embracing the Water (Winter). From there, the user’s shark is placed directly in front of where they sit, and the user will place the shark incisors in a circle around him. The user is then asked to meditate for one turn, getting lost into a trance. The Same Saishi then performs the handseals of “Rat, Rabbit, Dog, Monkey, Tiger, Snake, Dragon”. Upon the completion of the Dragon seal, the ink circle around the user will burst forth in radiant blue light, and the user will be thrown into an illusionary world.

In this world, they will enter an ocean battleground, where the opponent will be themselves. The difference will be that the person will be fighting themselves as they will become when the ritual is complete, thus they have the shark-like appearance. This self is capable of using any technique that the user has plus any technique from the Clan’s arsenal. This other self is roleplayed by either Lash or a staff member designated by Head Staff if he is not around. Any deathblows landed by the user will simply cause the Shark Self to regenerate. This fight will continue until the person has gained 90 TP. At that point, the user will fall down, exhausted, and a merging of the two aspects will occur. While this is happening within the mind, outside the body of the person and the shark begin to glow a bright blue. When the merging is over, the user will awaken to find that they have gained the qualities of the shark, which has since disappeared. They have less teeth, but are larger and sharper, much more pointed. Their skin tone takes on a blueish tint, and their body expands to gain more muscle.
Drawback: Once the Ritual is gained, the user cannot use or learn techniques from the Fire Release (Katon no Jutsu), Lightning Release (Raiton no Jutsu), or the the Wind Release (Fuuton no Jutsu) (Wind Release (Fuuton no Jutsu) technique for the Hyouton no Jutsu (Ice Release Skill) techniques but may not progress further). This ritual’s strength is such that it takes up all three of the user’s Ritual capabilities. If the user is gaining the ritual after character creation, then it costs 90 TP no matter what rank the user is. This is an increase of price than a regular “C” Rank and meant to be this way, as it represents the filling up of all three ritual spots. Counts as three of the user's starting techniques if taken at character creation.
Placement Requirements: Must have the Water Release (Suiton no Jutsu). Must complete all the required ritual steps. Must be a member of the Hoshigaki Clan.
Cost: The cost of the ritual is free if the user gathers all the materials necessary for the ritual. Specific portions of the ritual must be bought, but the cost of those items is listed above and is not included in this Cost section.

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Same no Seirei (Spirit of the Shark)
Rank: “C” Rank
Skill: Passive
Effect: Dramatically increases the user’s chakra pool.
Special: A passive ability that is always active. Must have had the Same no Gishiki put upon the body.
Drawback: The user must start with this technique if taking the ritual upon birth. Chakra control remains unaffected.
Description: One of the two Same no Isei, or Powers of the Shark, the Same no Seirei (Spirit of the Shark) allows the user to obtain a dramatically larger chakra pool than they would normally have. The amount that the chakra pool increases is dependent upon the user’s specialties and their Difficulty Class.

* Taijutsu/Ninjutsu Specialist

-- At “D” Rank, the Taijutsu/Ninjutsu Specialist Combo will gain a chakra pool equivalent to a “D” Ranked Ninjutsu Master.
-- At “C” Rank, the Taijutsu/Ninjutsu Specialist Combo will gain a chakra pool equivalent to a “C” Ranked Ninjutsu Master.
-- At “B” Rank, the Taijutsu/Ninjutsu Specialist Combo will gain a chakra pool equivalent to a “B” Ranked Ninjutsu Master.
-- At “A” Rank, the Taijutsu/Ninjutsu Specialist Combo will gain a chakra pool equivalent to an “A” Ranked Ninjutsu Master.
-- At “S” Rank, the Taijutsu/Ninjutsu Specialist Combo will gain a chakra pool equivalent to a “S” Ranked Ninjutsu Master.

Limit: Must have Same no Gishiki

Same no Ryoku (Strength of the Shark)
Rank: “C” Rank
Skill: Passive
Effect: Greatly increases the user’s brute physical strength.
Special: A passive ability that is always active. Must have had the Same no Gishiki put upon the body.
Drawback: The user must start with this technique if taking the ritual upon birth. All other physical aspects, such as speed, are not affected.
Description: One of the two Same no Isei, or Powers of the Shark, Same no Ryoku (Strength of the Shark) is a passive ability that greatly increases the user’s brute strength. The muscles have become greatly enhanced and are capable of performing much greater actions of lifting and overpowering the opponent. The strength gained is dependent upon the user’s Specialist choice and Difficulty Class.

* Ninjutsu/Taijutsu Specialist

-- At “D” Rank, the Ninjutsu/Taijutsu Specialist Combo will have the physical strength of a “D” Rank Taijutsu Master.
-- At “C” Rank, the Ninjutsu/Taijutsu Specialist Combo will have the physical strength of a “C” Rank Taijutsu Master.
-- At “B” Rank, the Ninjutsu/Taijutsu Specialist Combo will have the physical strength of a “B” Rank Taijutsu Master.
-- At “A” Rank, the Ninjutsu/Taijutsu Specialist Combo will have the physical strength of an “A” Rank Taijutsu Master.
--At “S” Rank, the Ninjutsu/Taijutsu Specialist Combo will have the physical strength of a “S” Rank Taijutsu Master.

Suichuu Binkatsu (Underwater Alacrity)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: Passive
Effect: Allows the user to move underwater just as well as they would above it.
Special: Passive ability that is always active.
Drawback: N/A
Description: The Hoshigaki Clan are very much used to fighting underwater; their whole fighting style is based upon flooding the field and then forcing the opponent to fight underwater, where the user will have the advantage. Because of their constant fighting underwater, they've learned how to move and manipulate their own bodies while submerged, making them terribly difficult opponents to match when they're in their element. This ability, once learned, allows the user to fight with grace and ease underwater, to the very point that it seems like they were fighting naturally above it.
Limit: Must have Same no Gishiki.

Akuarungu (Aqualung)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Allows the user the capability of switching between the use of gills and lungs.
Special: Ox, Dragon, Monkey, Snake, Tiger
Drawback: If activated above ground, the user is capable of suffocating to death.
Description: Normally, the Hoshigaki's body is set to breath through the lungs, which takes in oxygen from the air and then allows the user to exhale. However, the Hoshigaki's body has a secondary set of breathing tools- gills. By activating this technique, the user becomes capable of switching the manner in which their brain commands the body, moving to use the gills instead of the lungs. In this manner, it is impossible for the Hoshigaki to drown as they are now using gills to breath. To cancel the technique, the user must simply perform the Tiger handseal, ending the effect and transitioning back to the use of the lungs.
Limit: Must have Same no Gishiki.

Kowai Shiryoku (Frightening Eyesight)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: Passive
Effect: Allows the user to have naturally enhanced eyesight in both the day and the night.
Special: Passive ability that is always active.
Drawback: As with all forms of enhanced senses, they are also more susceptible to their perspective weaknesses.
Description: Sharks have amazing eyesight. Since they often swim the depths of the ocean, where it is dark and what little light that comes through the water is distorted, their ability to perceive minor changes is particularly excellent. Members of the clan learn to mimic these enhanced perceptions, able to peer through the darkest of night as if it were noon and the ability to notice subtle changes like the fluttering of a specific leaf in the wind.
Limit: Must have Same no Gishiki.

Chi Kaori (Blood Scent)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: Passive
Effect: Allows the user to use their sense of smell to hunt down opponents who have been injured.
Special: The user must cut the opponent and allow them to bleed.
Drawback: Cannot tell differing scents apart.
Description: After injuring an opponent, the Hoshigaki will generally try to force an underwater fight by flooding the field or trapping someone with some other water-based techniques. However, that is not necessary, it just makes the hunt easier. The user is then capable of using their sense of smell to track the scent of the blood of the opponent, making it much more difficult to hide from them.
Limit: Must have Same no Gishiki.

[技  Justu]

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Suiton: Suibun Shuuko no Jutsu (Water Release: Moisture Condensing Technique)
Rank: [D, C], "B", "A", "S"
Skill: Ninjutsu, Supplementary
Effect: Allows the user to condense water within the atmosphere for use in Water-based techniques.
Special: The user adds "Tiger" to the end of every technique they wish to use this in association with.
Drawback: The water that is drawn from this attack comes from the atmosphere itself. Unlike the Oxyhydro Conversion, which is the combining of molecules in order to create water, this attack pulls the actual moisture out of the air and condenses it. Because of that, the ability is less effective in dry areas, sometimes not allowing enough water to be drawn for higher-level techniques.
Description: A supplementary Ninjutsu ability that is combined with other Suiton (Water Release) abilities, the user will focus chakra into the atmosphere, pulling the moisture out of the air and condensing it into forming an attack. The user must have the corresponding level of this technique in order to use it for a technique. This means that in order to use this ability for "D" Rank Suiton techniques, the user must have the "D" Rank of this technique. If the user wishes to perform "S" Rank Suiton techniques with this ability, they must have the "S" Rank of this ability. Since the technique is simply condensing the moisture in the atmosphere instead of creating the water, this technique is much more chakra efficient than Oxyhydro Conversion. Drains an additional "E" Rank amount of chakra for every rank of a technique (starting at "D") when used in a moist environment. Drains an additional "D" Rank amount of chakra for every rank of a technique (starting at "D") when used in a moderate environment. Drains an additional "C" Rank amount of chakra for every rank of a technique (Starting at "D" Rank) when used in a dry environment.
Limit: Must be a member of the Hoshigaki Clan.

Suiton: Samekabe no Jutsu (Water Release: Shark Wall Technique)
Rank: [ C ], "B", "A", "S"
Skill: Ninjutsu, Defensive
Effect: Creates a small wall in front of the user that takes on the appearance of a shark.
Special: Bird, Dog, Snake, Rat, Ram
Drawback: Is only capable of blocking one technique of the same rank as the technique.
Description: A powerful defensive technique that has been utilized by the Hoshigaki clan for a long time. By molding their chakra into a portion of water, they will cause that water to rise upwards in front of them, taking the form of a shark. The technique is also a pre-requisite technique for many attacks that build off of the technique, expanding this viable defense into a powerful offense once the imposing attack has been nullified. The Shark Wall will remain in place for three turns or until it has been destroyed. At maximum, the shark is six feet in height and eight feet in length.
Limit: Must know Suiton no Jutsu. Must be a part of the Hoshigaki Clan.

280 tp~

[Kaito The Beast]

[水遁 Sution no Jutsu]

Suiton no Jutsu (Water Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Water. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Water Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: --

[Kaito The Beast]

[土遁 Doton no Jutsu]

[Kaito The Beast]

[Reserved]

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[Reserved]

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[Reserved]

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体術 Taijutsu

[Kentoushi]

30 TP

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Tetsu Tekken (Iron Fist)
Rank: "C"
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: A Brawler's true capabilities is within his fists and legs. The Brawler is capable of hitting as if his fists were gauntlets themselves. They say a Brawler's punch is like being smacked by a bull and that is where these power attacks come to play. Those who get hit by a Brawler's Iron Fist feel a knock back effect depending on the user's class.
Special: ---
Drawback: The user is only capable of performing this attack so many times per day depending on how many times the user knows this technique as well as the Class level of the user.
Description: When the user first learns this technique they are capable of performing this technique a total of five times per day as well as any other technique that is in conjunction of the Iron Fist. Every time this technique is learned the user is capable of performing this technique as well other techniques into conjunction one more time. This means that if a user learns this technique twice they are capable of performing this technique a total of six times. Depending on how well and how strong the user is by Class, the user is capable of performing the technique with devastating power. The higher the class is the more devastating the attack will be creating a more sufficient way of breaking one's bones.

* D Class - Five Meters Knock back
* C Class - Fifteen Meters Knock back
* B Class - Twenty Five Meters Knock back - 10% Chance Bones may Break
* A Class - Forty Meters Knock back - 30% Chance Bones may Break
* S Class - Sixty Meters Knock back - 50% Chance Bones may Break
Limit: Must be a Brawler

[Kaito The Beast]

[才 Skills & Traits]

Berserker of the Society
Rank: "C"
Skill: Combat Trait
Effect: A user's time spent as a society member has taught them new truths about the origins of their rage ability.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: (Brawler Trait) User may use their Rage ability for 3 additional rounds per day. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

Grendle Ancestry
Rank: "B"
Skill: Heritage Trait
Effect: A trait that grants healing properties to the user.
Special: ---
Drawback: Cannot gain any other Ancestry Traits.
Description: Some human bloodlines trace their linage back to a grendle, an offspring born of troll and human parentage. Living humans with this racial trait are immune to bleeding out. If they are also "C" Class they heal Minor damage per 15 rounds. If they "A" Class and they lose a limb, an organ, or any other body part, once per day the user's severed body members (fingers, toes, hands, feet, arms, legs, tails, broken bones, and ruined organs grow back. The physical regeneration is complete in 1 round if the severed members are present and touching the creature. It takes 15 rounds otherwise. Regenerate also heals Serious Damage within 15 rounds, and rids the subject of exhaustion and/or fatigue. It has no effect on nonliving creatures (including undead). This trait replaces 2 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 2 Freebies.

Signature Jutsu: Deido Soushi no Jutsu[Suiton: Samekabe no Jutsu (Water Release: Shark Wall Technique)]
Rank: "C"
Skill: Trait
Effect: User has learned a mystical secret that empowers their Jutsu Performing.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Pick one Jutsu when they choose this trait—from this point on, whenever the user performs this Jutsu, they do so at 1 Rank higher. This trait replaces 1 of the 5 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 of 5 Freebies.

Eidetic Memory
Rank: "C"
Skill: Heritage Trait
Effect: A few rare humans have perfect recall, allowing them to remember minor details from an event that others have long forgotten.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: They gain +5 heritage bonus to all Academia and Jutsu Lore checks. User gains a +10 heritage bonus on Observation checks to detect a disguise. The user also gains a +1 Racial bonus to Die Rolls pertaining to Academia Learning and Jutsu Lore. If they have any questions about an event, such as a person’s name or exactly what happened, their Game Master must tell them the details (even if the character’s player has forgotten them). They cannot remember extremely fine details, such as the text of a book left open on a desk, but they can remember the general gist of the book or the topic the passage covered. They always remember faces, names, and the basic sequence of events. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

[Kaito The Beast]

Overview
Alright so I am Finished as far as I can tell. Although if there is anything I missed please let me know and I'll be more then happy to correct it.

So I used the Freebies on
-- Sution Release
-- Signature Jutsu: Deido Soushi no Jutsu
-- Eidetic Memory
-- Grendle Ancestry [This Took 2 of the 6 Spaces]
-- Berserker of the Society

Also i counted the Required Rituals and such for Hoshigaki as techniques as i believe I'm suppose to, so I only have 2 actual techniques in that area.

As for my starting funds, I spent 11,180 of my starting 13,000 by my count. Leaving me 1,820 for my character bank.

Let the Grading commence!

[~Emi~]

1. You have 7 misc slots, you've currently only mark 3 possible slots for it.

2. The "buying items" system doesn't work as you seem to expect. You have an allowance that you can use to buy items, and if it's not used, you loose it. Your starting ryo is the same regardless of how much you spend of the allowance. Here's the info about that.

Your allowance for primary weapons (those with "main" written as their type) is 13'000 ryo.
The allowance for the secondary weapons (those with "secondary" as their type) is 30'000 tyo.

3. You only get a 15 slot apparel, which means that you needs to remove the "Double Knife Holster Type (Overview)" and "Cloak Type 1 (Overview)", you will have to buy them ic.

4. even though the "Suiton: Suibun Shuuko no Jutsu (Water Release: Moisture Condensing Technique)" and "Suiton: Mizu Samekiba no Jutsu (Water Release: Water Shark Fangs Technique)" are water technique, they're a part of the hoshigaki clan. So please list them among your hoshigaki techniques.

5.

Counts as three of the user's starting techniques if taken at character creation.

The ritual actually counts as 3 of your starting techniques, so with the 2 prerequisite techniques for it, you have to use all your techniques to become a hoshigaki.

6. Kentouchi doesn't take a freebie, stances/perceptions/releases/traits are the only thing you can get with freebies. (you only need to follow the restrictions of a fighting style when you learn things in it, you don't need to have a technique to start going into it like elements do. )

[Kaito The Beast]

Added the Miss Slots They ere place holders i forgot about ha. thanks for the reminder.

I corrected the money situation.

Removed the additional storage slots.

I'm not 100% sure where you pulled "Counts as three of the user's starting techniques if taken at character creation." but i beleive you and im assuming it refers to the Shark Ritual and necessary techniques. So I removed the Suiton Hoshigaki Techniques.

Now as far as The Gladiator is concerned I'm assuming your saying I can keep it in the profile but i didn't have to put it as an freebie slot? With this in mind I added Another release as a Freebie.

Let me know if I misinterpreted or did anything else incorrectly

[~Emi~]

hmm, Looks good 1/3

and for other staffies, he's fine with those weapons

[KoKoKo]

2.3

[Solus]

3/3