Kedoin brawler training (T)

[TheRedKing]

(im dumb)

[CATBUG!]

Tetsu Tekken (Iron Fist)
Rank: "C"
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: A Brawler's true capabilities is within his fists and legs. The Brawler is capable of hitting as if his fists were gauntlets themselves. They say a Brawler's punch is like being smacked by a bull and that is where these power attacks come to play. Those who get hit by a Brawler's Iron Fist feel a knock back effect depending on the user's class.
Special: ---
Drawback: The user is only capable of performing this attack so many times per day depending on how many times the user knows this technique as well as the Class level of the user.
Description: When the user first learns this technique they are capable of performing this technique a total of five times per day as well as any other technique that is in conjunction of the Iron Fist. Every time this technique is learned the user is capable of performing this technique as well other techniques into conjunction one more time. This means that if a user learns this technique twice they are capable of performing this technique a total of six times. Depending on how well and how strong the user is by Class, the user is capable of performing the technique with devastating power. The higher the class is the more devastating the attack will be creating a more sufficient way of breaking one's bones.

• D Class - Five Meters Knock back
• C Class - Fifteen Meters Knock back
• B Class - Twenty Five Meters Knock back - 10% Chance Bones may Break
• A Class - Forty Meters Knock back - 30% Chance Bones may Break
• S Class - Sixty Meters Knock back - 50% Chance Bones may Break

Limit: Must be a Brawler

Lisa sighed as she stretched in the gym. She had grown tired of just beign stealth, she wanted to be able to attack if she needed to. She smiled gently as she stood infront og the punching bag, the object was heavy, and the technique she had in mind would force it back, if she did it right. She stretched a little more, her arms getting relaxed as she did. The muscles ready for quick rapid movement. She tried to move the punching bag with just her own body weight and it barely budged. She grunted and kept trying jut to make sure and she smiled, stepping back and preparing herself.

She smiled and took up position, bouncing on her feet and lossening up. She threw a few punches in the air. Soon as she felt she was ready, she set into the punching bag, hitting it over and over again as hard and as fast as she could. She pummeled the bag, striking it with every pound of strength she could muster, But it barely moved. She panted gently before regaining her composer, she took a breath before going back to hitting the bag like it owed her money. She panted gently as it moved maybe an inch and she smiled. “Good, im getting there.”

She tooka break for a minute or two and went back to punching the bag, her strength moving it slowly, but it didn’t get far before she couldbt move it any more. Maybe just a few inches. She laughed and smiled before setting back upon the bag. The flesh of her hands stung and she smiled gently. She loved the feeling of the stinging. It felt good. She smiled as she went back to punching it as hard as she can. She had managed to move it a foot or two before she felt the pain in her hand as she saw it begin to bleed.

She smiled as she looked at her blood before heading over to the medicine cabinet on the gym wall and taking out a first air kit. She cleaned and fixed her hand. She liked this technique so far. It feel tgood to lay into something, to get it to move from just a few blows. But she set a new goal for herself. She would make it move 5 feet with just one punch. She make it move away with a punch hard enough to move her opponent away from her.

She smiled gently and stood up, she was done training for the day. But she would be back. She looked at the little bit of blood on the bag and smiled gently. “Ill be back for you, And ill make you move.”

[[Guess Who]]

..Enter..

The sound of slapping and grunting had come from inside the Dojo Karinna had been standing outside of. The Dojo was quite large and obviously appeared to belong to someone. Perhaps the person inside was the owner. Karinna wanted some place to train and was a little short on cash at this point to buy one. Dressed in her usual short sky blue dress. The edge of the skirt resting well above her knees. Standing just outside the door, Kari removed her sandals and opened the door quietly.

“Hello? May I come in?” Her voice was thread-like, best resembling a whisper. Her movements were very agile as she glided partway into the Dojo. Closing the door behind her, the young woman standing at the punching bag was not what Kari had expected. This woman appeared not a woman at all, rather than a child. Barely twelve if Kari was forced to guess. Her tiny frame had been plunging into the punching bag with little to no force but the determination was admiring.

Curious, Kari approached the child as she moved away to retrieve something from the medicine cabinet. At that, Kari’s eyes slid over the child to see why she had moved there. A small trail of blood followed her small steps and a red mass covered her fists. Karinna realized that this young girl had been punching a little too harshly. “You may want to wear some tape around your fists the next time you punch the bag. It protects your skin from grazing and bleeding from the friction.”

Karinna spoke softly, raising her tone at least two notches in volume. Her attempt at befriending was small and fast but this young girl looked determined enough to knock the bag off its hinges in the ceiling.

[Captain M]

+10/20 @ Catbug

[CATBUG!]

Lisa smiled gently as she fixed her hand, but soon she heard the voice and turned quickly to be met by another person. "Oh hello there," She mentioned the wound. "Oh this? ive had worse, The pains good.It lets me know how hard im hitting." She smiled gently before taking a towel and drying off with it. She smiled and looked at the blood on the ground. "My father told me that we dont know how much our body can take if we wear protective gear. We train so we get stronger not softer."

She tooka swig of her water. "If youd like to join you can. Id love some company."

[[Guess Who]]

The greeting was pleasant enough. No annoyed expressions or nasty replies. Karinna relaxed visibly and walked further into the Dojo. But the young girl’s explanation about why she won’t wear gloves or protective gear did make sense, but Kari couldn’t shake the feeling that this young Shinobi was simply growing up too fast. Tucking back a strand of jet black hair, Karinna touched the punching bag gingerly and smiled. “Fair point,” she said softly.

But being offered to join in with the training had Kari smiling even more. She was about to ask permission, but instead was offered the child’s hospitality instead. Perfect timing. Kari let out a slight bow in return. “Thank you.” She said before adding, “my name is Karinna Kaishin. It’s a pleasure to meet you.” Her voice was so gentle one would feel it like feathers to skin. Without moving, Kari raised her hand in an attempt to greet the other girl into a handshake.

[CATBUG!]

Lisa Smiled, but didnt take her hand. She instead took up a battle position. "My name is White Veil, its all im comfertable telling you, for the moment." She got ready to attack with her new technique, to push this girl away with a single punch. But the girls name reminded her of the comrade she had left behind in the mission. "I meet a Kaishin once...I doubt he would enjoy meeting me again. I was not the best person at the time." She sighed gently before looking her opponent in the eye. "My father Said that clashing fists tell you more about a person then their words. So please, Show me who you really are."

[[Guess Who]]

Despite the introduction, the young girl refused the offered handshake. This offended Karinna slightly, but she brushed it off as fast as the feeling had come. White Veil was not really a name. Kari assumed it was a code name of sorts and that this young girl had wanted to gain trust first before revealing her real name possibly. But scanning the formation of Veil’s movements it appeared as if she was about to throw a punch that had Kari jumping back two feet to avoid being struck whisking through a series of handseals as she did so.

Although after witnessing the force of the child’s blows, Kari felt confident that the blow, should it did connect would not have hurt her much. But she was not going to take any chances, White Veil obviously was mysterious and perhaps those punches against that bag were artificial or exaggerated. Meanwhile, once the final handseal was completed the area surrounding Karinna suddenly grew rather windy. The currents then sharpened with the intake of her chakra, into sharp needle like shapes before soaring directly toward the child’s legs.

Karinna then moved swiftly around to the left, nearing the punching bag as she did so. She had positioned herself closer to the girl, leaving virtually only an arm’s length of distance between the two. Should Veil attempt to strike her again, perhaps Karinna may have a little punch of her own…

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Jutsu:

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Fuuton Kaze no Senbon (Needles of the Wind) [10]
Rank: "D"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: User hurls a mixture of senbon needles in the form of wind to cut into the opponent.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: The ninja gathers air with his hands and mixes it with chakra, by doing this he transforms them into sharp and deadly needles. The needles are almost invisible so it is hard for the enemies to see them. This technique may be blocked by large objects, however something small such as a sword, or a staff will allow the needles to seperate still moving towards the object it was originally sent to. Not a powerful technique as the user is capable of hurling up to ten senbon wind needles that gives out minor cuts. However this could be used as a more of a set up technique to allow the user to perform a more dangerous technique.
Limit: Must have the Wind Release

[CATBUG!]

2 feet distance, She closed it the second the girl tried to jump back. She was a close up fighter, and something like this was a easy distance to cover. She used her forward hand to disrupt the seals as quickly as possible, with her other arm reeling back and time seemed to slow for her as she chose where she would send the punch toward. The jaw, if his hard enough would be a good knock out, but that wasn’t her goal. She decided to go for the shoulder. Firing of her iron fist punch as she would aim it toward the girls right shoulder and slam into it as hard as she can, putting her whole bodies weight behind the blow.

She wouldn’t stop there, She would follow up with a step forward to bring her back into range before delivering the same strength into the punch, the wound on her hand reopening as she gave it ever ounce of power she could. She had to, it was the only way to move an opponent backwards. This tech was ment to hit hard and knock someone away so you could have some breathing room, But by continuing the assault over and over again , you can deal some serious damage. Her memories flashed back to when her brother had beat her during her last few missions.

“I wont lose!” Lisa was lost in her memories, the image of the girl before her was gone replaced with her older brother. She continued the assult, using every ounce of her strength to try and hurt the image of her older brother. “I defeat you once and for all and get the answers I deserve!” She planted her foot, this was the final punch in her assault, and using every spare bit of power she could she tried to slam the punch home and send the girl flying back 5 meters. Her breath labored and her fists bleeding.

10/20

[Captain M]

18/20

[[Guess Who]]

Disrupting the handseals sent a pang of frustration through Karinna. Taking a step back, Kari realized that Veil was a close ranged fighter. This also meant that Kari was now in trouble since she preferred to remain somewhat at a distance. Seeing Veil use one hand to disrupt the handseals, the Shinobi was also using her other arm as she did so. Seeing it being drawn back clearly told Kari that she was preparing to punch somewhere between her abdomen and face. At this, Karinna shoved her body hard to the right, side stepping and bringing both her fists up to protect herself as she did so.

This young child seemed harmless enough at first, but now that she was engrossed in the spar, Kari realized that Veil was now in a completely different world. Alarm sprang through her as she began rummaging through her mental files for anything that could assist her in this situation. Remembering a boxing master’s stance suddenly flooded into her mind. She remembered observing his stance as he stood before an opponent. But knowing that Karinna was too close to perform handseals, she was forced to learn taijutsu alongside her. But without her bow, Karinna was stuck.

The boxer’s legs were shoulder length apart as he stood before his opponent. His back foot was roughly half a step behind his right.. Kari’s mind filed in the information carefully, while ducking the punch meant for her shoulder, stepping to the right as she did so. “Veil, what are you doing? What happened to the punching bag?!” She heard herself cry out, her body screaming at her in various places. She was a range fighter, and had yet to venture into something more intimate.

As Kari’s back foot moved to place itself half a step behind her right, she raised her right heel a few inches off the ground and forced her feet to point inward. Immediately she felt uncomfortable, her feet wanting to move away at the onslaught of Veil’s advance. But as Veil advanced on to her, Karinna’s half stance prevented her from falling over. She bent her knees and hips ever so slightly, but her back was rim-rod straight. The stance forcing her to remain in that position.

Karinna’s left fist remained at her eye level, readying to block Veil’s head shots, while her right fist was hovering right beside her chin. The boxer’s elbows were held tightly against his rib cage.. Such perfect formation! Karinna’s right elbow tucked in, sticking at her ribs just like the boxer in her mind was. She remained completely focused upon the child before her, hearing Veil scream. Confusion shot through her, who was this kid talking to? “What answers?” She then asked, stiffening her arms as Veil shoved her fist into them. The blow was somewhat unexpected, but the force of it did shove Karinna back roughly.

Landing on her back, Kari rolled four times before hitting the wall of the Dojo. Thus announcing that Veil was the winner of this round. Her arms stung from the impact of the child’s punch, it felt as if the fists were made entirely of iron. Parting her arms from her face, Karinna stood up and moved back into the stance she had been envisioning throughout the sparring session, Veil had suddenly conjured. Both of Kari’s legs were parted at shoulder’s length. Her arms raised before her. The left fist at eye level while her right hovering around her chin.

Karinna’s back foot remained slightly behind her right, her heel a few inches above the ground. Karinna felt light, alive and energetic despite the throbbing in her forearms. Despite Veil was a child and obviously smaller than Kari, she did pack quite a punch. “Looks like I underestimated your strength, Veil. I’m impressed.” Kari said softly, sharing a smile of her own. “Let’s bring in round two.” The announcement was clear, but was Veil willing to bring forth another series of iron punches?

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Learning:

Upright Stance
Rank: "E"
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: A Basic upright stance used in boxing.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture To adopt an Upright Stance, you should stand with your legs roughly shoulder-width apart. Your back foot should be about half a step behind your front foot. If your dominant boxing hand is your right hand, your left foot will lead. Lift your right heel off the ground by about 3 inches and point both feet inward (although do not exaggerate this movement). If you lift your heel too far off the ground, or turn your feet too far inward, you will become unbalanced. As a test, imagine someone pushing you from any direction. In a properly balanced stance, you should be able to maintain an upright position and not fall to the ground or sway from side to side. To increase the stability of your stance, keep your knees and hips slightly bent but make sure your back is straight. Your lead fist (which will be your left fist if your dominant boxing hand is your right hand) should be positioned vertically at eye level, approximately six inches away from your face. Your right fist should be positioned next to your chin, with your elbow held against your ribcage. This is good defensive positioning and will effectively protect your body. Whilst watching televised boxing matches, you may have noticed the boxers tapping their cheeks with their hands. This repetitive action acts as a reminder to keep fists up at all times and is especially important as the match progresses and energy levels drop. To further protect yourself from blows from your opponent, keep your chin pressed against your chest. Punches to the jaw often cause knock-outs, so it is essential to keep this stance throughout the boxing match.
Limit: Must learn in a gym that teaches Bokushingu (Boxing)

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[Captain M]

LEARNED!

[CATBUG!]

Lisa watched as the girl got back up and entered abattle stance. It seemed to focus on guarding her face more then anything.it left of og her sides open and part of her face open as well. She recognized it from her fathers fighting style. It was boxing. He had taught her that boxers were ether in fighters or out fighters. But she didn’t know what that meant. She4 was a close range fighter. She stood for just a second, before a drop of blood fell from her hand and she shot forward. The matt below her feet tearing at the force of her kick off as she lead with a knee to the chest, it wasn’t meant to land. It was just ment to make her drop her guard. And should she. She would move her arm back and with all the force she could must, and a loud yell she drove the punch home, aiming for the girls face and blocking arm.

She hadn’t meant to go so hard on the girl, but it was how she was. You didn’t train just to learn a new tech, you trained to become stronger. She would drive as much strength into her punches as she could. The image of her brother still alive made her steam with anger. And that anger grew in her fists turning into power that she could use to attack.

18/20

[Father 'Suke]

Learned

[[Guess Who]]

Veil’s constant aggression was beginning to frustrate Karinna. As the younger female threw herself off the Dojo floor and in her direction, Kari watched as Veil’s knee had begun to ascend. But what else did Kari notice was that the knee was seconds from pausing in mid-move only to have the child’s fist withdrawing in an attempt to punch. This alone stated that the knee was simply an aversion. Karinna respected Veil’s determination and her attempts at keeping her opponent guessing, but Karinna was starting to grow frustrated by it.

Taking a step backward, Kari avoided the knee just moments before it struck her chest. However at the approach of Veil’s fist, Kari pushed her right arm forward to block and knock it to the side just as her left fist came forward. Flashes of the boxer’s movements then flooded her mind. And at that particular moment, Karinna took a deep breath, a more of a strangled gasp one might say; before Karishna made her entrance. “What the?” She said, bending her knees slightly while elevating her right heel. She pulled her elbows into her ribs so that they were in line with her fists. And as soon as she pushed herself forward using the ball of her right foot, Karishna bent her left knee slightly and extended her left fist.

The motion forward felt as if she were pushing back a force of wind as she threw her fist forward toward the child before her. The direction of said fist was aimed directly toward Veil’s cheek. Karishna twisted her wrist as she propelled forward so that her left palm, despite it being encased in the form of a fist faced the ground. Should the blow connect with Veil’s face, or near it, Karishna retracted it quickly as if her muscles were springs coiling. If the blow did not strike, she hoped that it was enough to alert the child to at least draw her back.

“How about you keep your distance, honey. I don’t like having things in my face.” Karishna said tartly, her entire demeanour changing. However, should Veil not retreat from her, Karishna would quickly retreat to a safe distance of at least four meters by darting sharply to the right and positioning herself closer toward the door. “Just who the hell are you anyway? And what was Karinna doing here in this tacky Dojo?” Karishna asked with a terse tone. She was annoyed with the sudden behaviour and wanted an explanation.

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Learning:

The Jab
Rank: "D"
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: A quick, straight punch thrown with the lead hand from the guard position.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture Stand with your feet hip distance apart. Step your right foot back 18-24 inches with the weight of your right leg on the ball of your foot (right heel is somewhat elevated and the knees are slightly bent). Bring your right fist close to your right cheek bone and your left fist slightly in front of it about jaw height. Pull your elbows in towards your ribs so that they line up somewhat below your fists. Push off of the ball of the right foot, bend the left knee slightly and start to extend the left hand in a pushing type motion (there should be a subtle rotation as your left hand goes forward your right shoulder moves back). You may also rotate the fist so that when it reaches the desired destination your left palm will be facing down. Retract the left hand as fast as you extended it and return to the original position. Remember before punching relax the hand, snap it forward and clinch before making contact. Do your best to strike with the first two knuckles and keep your wrist in neutral position upon impact. Aim six to eight inches beyond your target. Extend the arm only about 90-95 percent. Keep your chin tucked down toward your chest--this protects your jaw from exposure to being hit. Bring your hand back as fast as you throw it. Move your head on an angle as you throw the punch.
Limit: Must learn in a gym that teaches Bokushingu (Boxing), Must know Upright Stance or Semi-Crouch

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[Father 'Suke]

+6

[CATBUG!]

Legion of Maw
Rank: C-ranked
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: The user can grow mouths on the body for offensive purposes. Know as a "Maw".
Special: ---
Drawback: The teeth of a maw can be broken with enough force, rendering the maw useless for the remainder of the fight. The maws the user can create is capped at 12. Maw cannot be used for techniques other than the ones found within the blood line.
Description: The main offensive skill for the Kedōin Blood line. With training the user can grow a multitude of mouths on the body, used for biting. These mouths will bite flesh viciously with teeth, and are at the complete control of the user. The maws grown may or may not have tongues and may appear to the user's desire. If a maw has bitten into something, they may command the maw to spit the matter out, or consume the matter over the course of 2 posts (the maw chew the matter, and user consumes it). A full mouth cannot perform any functions and inorganic matter cannot be consumed. When first learned, the user can grow 2 additional mouths within 1 post, to be placed anywhere on the body. Removing a maw takes 1 post. "Maws" may measure up to 10cm in length. The user may relearn this technique to obtain another 2 maws. Teeth cannot be larger than 1/8 the width of the mouth. A maw is strong enough to tear flesh, but cannot tear through wood.
Limit: Kedōin Blood Line. "Warped Visage: Growth of Maw" and "Shift of Organs (External)"

Lisa felt the punch connect and it hurt, she stepped back roughly as it slammed into her face. She nearly lost her balance as she smiled. Her face hurt like a mother fucker, But as the ruby drops of blood dripped from her face. She smiled and couldn’t help but let the radiant aura around her darken and thicken. Her pulse pounded as she felt the heat rise within her body. This fight had just gotten fun. The ends oif her hair seemed to float slowly, as if moved by some energy. Her muscles twitched and shivered as her eyes became small dots, focused solely on her opponent.

She could feel it coming, the ned to draw blood, the need to do harm. She couldn’t help it, it was how her father and mother had raised her. She was a killing a machine for sure. “Good… Your punch hurt.” She smiled and using her thumb she cracked her index finger on each hand before she began to focus her chakra into her palms. The cells began to change, becoming harder and less skin like. She grunted as the bones in her reallined to allow for a small enough gap to allow her to form the inside of the mouths. The bones shifted with an audible pop and click as they created new joints and hinges. It hurt like hell forming new bone. But she could manage it. The worst part was yet to come.

She shifted her weight so it was ready to move should her opponent come at her. “This dojo isn’t for those with weak convictions!” She smiled. “Come at me and come at me hard! This village no longer needs weaklings and soft handed teachers! SO come at me full force or Ill come at you full force!” She smiled as she stood there ready to move, the bones in both her hands shifting and grinding to form new spaces and joint. She focused as best she could on her ooponent through the pain.

She connected the new bone to old muscle, creating new layers of muscle to create a working hinge like the one in her head. The bone was made, but now she needed to form the teeth. She Smiled as she waited for her opponent. The teeth forming from the base bone she had created in her hand. It made a horrible sound as it grew and she could feel it pressing against her skin, the sharp points of the teeth began to press against her skin. Soon she groaned as she held her hands infront of her facing her opponent. “This is a special technique of my people. Let me show you what it means to be willing to do what you need to to win!” She smiled as the skin in her palm ripped open and sealed, letting just a small amount of blood drip out as her hands. A long slitherly tongue traced the razor sharp teeth, still unable to open or close them. “Come then…Show me the Conviction worthy of the Snow Empire!”

[Father 'Suke]

+8

[[Guess Who]]

Seeing that the punch connected, made Karishna happy. Her smile was smug as she regarded the much younger kunoichi before her. But being phrased for it caused that smile to falter almost immediately. Was this girl off her rocker? But when her body started popping, her bones rearranging, the thought of labelling this child crazy had just gone to loco. Karinna had no intentions in fighting this girl, but it looked as if Veil was not going to give her a chance.

As the child continued to ramble on about weaknesses, Karishna moved as well, her feet widened until they were both standing at hip distance while her right foot took a carefully measured step backward, stopping at twenty inches with the entire weight of her right leg resting on the ball of her right foot. Her heel was elevated while her knees were slightly bent. This child was smaller than Karishna and therefore was bound to be weaker. Karishna was very unhappy at the moment, silently blaming Karinna for getting her into this situation.

“Look, I don’t know what Karinna had said to piss you off so bad, you’ll have to deal with her about that yourself. But I honestly am not in the mood to smack you about this tacky place as I have far better things to do.” Karishna said, annoyance in her tone was very much in evidence. Her right fist rose to her right cheek while the left rose slightly in front of it, hovering at her jaw level. Both her knuckles were white from the added tension she was administrating. If this kid implied on beating her as a result, then Karishna was not going to give this girl the satisfaction on having it easy.

Pulling her elbows in toward her ribs, Karishna aligned her fists along with them. This simple movement made her comfortable with hr stance despite she was rocking slightly. Experimenting with the stance while the child beckoned her forward. Karishna had made herself perfectly clear on the fact that she wanted no fight, it apparently it was falling on deaf ears. So shrugging slightly, Karishna smiled slyly. “As you wish!” At the word wish she sprang into motion, darting forward like a bullet, pushing off with the ball of her right foot as she did so.

Karishna was already extending her left arm just moments before the child groaned and raised her hands, palms facing toward Karishna. Although this movement was too slow in advance to Karishna’s attempted punch, her fist would simply slam into the child’s chest should she not made any last minute decisions. The kid had not made any attempts at blocking or avoiding the oncoming punch, nor did she attempt to punch Karishna either. In fact, Veil was on the verge of speaking just as the punch had been delivered.

Should the punch connect with Veil’s chest, Karishna would drive her weight into the punch, twisting her fist as she did so. This alone would give additional power to the punch, unless Veil managed to dodge it at such short notice. Karishna would then quickly retract her hand and send it forward again almost as if her entire arm were a mere spring. The balls of her feet grounding themselves into the floor of the Dojo as her fist tore out toward the child’s left cheek. However, Karishna would quickly dart to the right, creating a small distance of two meters and move into the stance yet again.

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[Father 'Suke]

Learned