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RAMSES The Jabberwocky Pronunciation: Ram-seez Alias: The Jabberwocky Bloodlimit:NA Height:5'10 Weight:165 lbs Age:18 years old Gender:Male Alignment: Evil Neutral Birth Country:Kaze no Kuni Village: Sunakagure Current Relations: Mom - Deceased Father - Deceased Traits: Criminal (Heritage Trait)(Freebie) Beggar (Freebie) Able Learner (Freebie) x2 Will of Men(Freebie)

P e r s o n a

Ramses. He is known to be a wolf dressed as a sheep. A trickster spirit that wanders the lands in search of more thrill. However, there is so much more to him than meets the eye. Ramses has a sense of adventure. Exploration of the land has always been a thrill for him. Wandering into abandoned houses and eerie looking caverns. Restricted areas have also been quite to his fancy as well. He enjoys wandering into places that he knows he has no business being in. Some may call this extreme curiosity even, however he just calls it expeditions. He can also be very social with people. Talking and badgering and striking up a conversation with someone has never been a problem for Ramses. He mostly uses this tactic to get what he wants or if it is amusing at the time. He has a natural sense of charm and appeal. He is also know to be very creative, getting himself out of situations that would normally be hard to get out of. His mind ticks and turns in a way that changes perspectives of situations. He avoids confrontation as much as possible. If he can get the job done by getting and getting out then he would much prefer that. He doesn't like to overcomplicate situations and having to fight someone is considered to be a complication.

A nasty habit, however, of Ramses is that he is Kleptomaniac. Growing up the way he did, stealing and robberies was an essential way of life. He steals constantly. If he sees something that appeals to his eye he will take it. Of course it doesn't take precedence over other things but from time to time he will sneak a small item or two into his pocket for the "road home". He is also very manipulative, never letting himself do the work and mostly getting other people to do it for him. His tongue is sharp and always has a way of getting what it really wants. He is also very witty and enjoys attempting to being the smartest person in the room even though he clearly is not. He always tries to outsmart other people and use them to his advantage. He also keeps his true intentions hidden, never revealing what his endgame is and always keeping people in the dark. He has several trust issues and can only really trust himself. If he is given no other choice but to trust someone he will hardly give them the whole truth if it isn't necessary.  He always has a very smug look too him which somehow strikes a red flag to people as a suspicious character. 

He enjoys the nice blazing sun of Kaze no Kuni and avoids any place that is cold. He also enjoys playing with animals and running around with them. He probably enjoys the company of animals more than the company of humans. Most likely because Animals cannot tell his secrets and never ask too many questions. His favourite animal of course is either a fox or a snake for the obvious reasons. He hates dogs with a passion finding them either too blunt and forceful and loud and obnoxious. He likes to explore and going out,never staying in one place and hates being cooped up too long. He has a small attention span and a smaller sense of patience. He enjoys stealing very much and treat it like a normal everyday hobby. However, he absolutely hates it when people steal from him. He feels that he worked hard either stealing or legitimately buying an object. One should never steal from a thief. 

A P P E A R A N C E

Ramses has a very Kaze no Kuni appearance. His hair is long and grey-ish white that is either spiked up or settle downwards. His eyes are a dull blue that borderlines between a shade of purple. They have a piercing gaze that can be very intimidating to certain individuals. They almost feel like they are staring into your thoughts. Ramses's skin is very tanned from always being out in the blazing sun as well. His nose is very arch shaped. His skin is smooth despite the environment that he is in. His body is well toned and well built, mostly from all the training he has done which leaves him as well with some scabs and scars across his body. His body is mainly built for long term physical activity instead of sudden bursts of it. He takes pride in out sustaining his opponents in battle than ending it quickly. He is fairly bulky and not skinny. His hands are the roughest part of his body considering the work that he had done when he was child causing it to be very rough and very strong. His facial feature is very sharp and ovally and his chin and cheek structure also makes his face almost blade like. 


He casually wears most of the time a very free and ventilated attire, seeing as he has been in the sun constantly. The first layer is a beige/ tan robe that wraps around him and easy to slip on. It is made of soft silk and is constantly open. It also has a large hood attached to it that he can easily use to cover his face. Overtop of this garment is another robe in the colour of red that directly overlaps his inner robe. The material of this robe is a rougher material almost wool like and maybe considered as fleece. It has the same beige/tan color lining on the edges of the robe and has two lines at the bottom of the sleeve. As well this robe is also very open to provide better ventilation in cooling off. For his bottom he wears a navy blue skirt that goes till alitte bit over his knees. Underneath, however, he wears a black latex cover to ensure that none of his genitals are flying around in the midst of battle. Overtop of this skirt he wears beige/tan colored sash that matches the color oft he lines and his inner robe. This is of course useful in maintaining the security of his skirt and is constantly tightened. His sandals are brown open-toed sandals that strap on very nicely across his feet. 
 
At the luxury of his home and his bedroom his attire changes. He usually wears a white long sleeve silk t shirt and matching white silk pants that drape to his ankles. It is very simplistic and yet very comfortable. He is also one to wear fancy jewelry such as golden necklaces and golden bracelets that he had most likely stolen from places he has ventured to. His war outfit is a normal shinobi outfit with a black longsleeve shirt, black pants and the sandals he wears with the tactical vest on as well. This is so that in the heat of serious battles the clothing will not get in the way. He still however wears the same things when he is in formal occasions such as meeting kages or dignified people. He finds attatchment to the clothes he wears. On his back there is a snake tattoo that stretches across his back as well. The snake is a large rattle snake, home to the desert he is in, emerging around a lotus flower. Many people attempt to decipher what the tattoo means but many fail to do so. 

INVENTORY   Main Weapon - Large, Barrel (Gourd Shape)            - Filled with Sand  Secondary Weapons - Cloak Type 3 Senbon x 285 (5 Slots Kunai x2 ( 1 Slot )

STATISTICS  Taijutsu Specialist - Meimei Undoushinkei  - Art of Throwing - Air Treck - Gates 1-4 Genjutsu Specialist - Glamour - Shadow - Enchantment  - Charm Clan Non-Specialist - Bard - Yamanaka Ninjutsu Non-Specialist - Doton - Fuuton (M) - Saton (M) Miscellaneous  - Beast Master

Skill	Skill Points
Sleight of Hand	40
na	na
Disguise	20

 + 20 Sleight of Hand Points from Criminal
 + 20 Pick Pocket Points from Beggar
 + 20 on Disguise
 altered and relocated pick pocket points to sleight of hand due to site changes

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H I S T O R Y

Ramses never had a rich family. He never had an average living family either. He was born into the poor parts of Sunakagure. Before the village could have been really developed he was born as a street rat of Suna. However he never found a reason to complain. His mother and father never really loved him and only found him as another mouth to feed. At a very young age he was told that he was an accident, a pregnancy that was never meant to go through. However that never dampened Ramses spirits. He would go outside and do odd jobs for people on the streets like handing out fliers or fixing up stores. He would come clean out kitchens or take out people garbages for some scrap pieces of Ryo. He would save up what he would make for the whole day and provide for himself on small food such as bread and cheese. It was all good and fine. However, his parents had gone into debt with some of the street gangs of Suna. They had been promised money if they could return it but they didn't have the option too. He also had a nice group of friends as he was very sociable. Most of them had attended school so during the day he would proceed to working and as soon as his friends were out of school he would make sure to go out and play with them. He made a bad situation into a better one so that he wouldn't find his life so down. So they sold Ramses to the gang as an equal payment and Ramses became a criminal. 

While in the gang Ramses had a harder time coming up with money. Many people knew when someone was adopted into their gang or who now belonged to them. Most of the people who had allowed him to work for them for small fees now stayed away from him. Even the friends that he had played with didn'twant to be around him anymore. They didn't want anything to do with the boy who had been adopted by the fiercest gangs. In the gang he learned many different skills such as pickpocketing, disguising himself and sleight of hand. All became his essential tools in getting money. At first he was absolutely terrible at it. Not knowing how to do any of the skills. He began to refuse to do it and refused to learn which led the gang to just locking him and making him do nothing which irritated Ramses more. So he began to practice and soon it became something he was proficient at and even began to master it. He learned how to do it with ease and suddenly it just became a thrill. There was  such a rush in going in and stealing people stuff. Soon it became an addiction. An addiction that had caused some sever actions.

His pickpocketing had gotten good. Good enough that he was capable of stealing from the daimyo of Kaze no Kuni. This was an amazing feat however it had directed the attention of shinobis who exactly knew what and who did it. Soon the shinobi broke into the gang warehouse and began to arrest the gang members. A battle brokeout and most of the gang member died or was arrested. However Ramses was different. One of the jounin had seen him and apprehended him but instead of putting him in jail they placed him in a shinobi academy. They found his skills of stealth and apprehension of goods to be intriguing and found it one day useful to the village. However he was carefully watched. The jounin stood as a guard always keeping an eye on him. Even putting a tracking seal on him which was a lotus on his back. He found it very girly so he decided to add a snake round it to prove that he was still in control. 

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NINJUTSU

Earth Release

Doton no Jutsu (Earth Release Skill) 
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Earth. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Earth Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Doton - Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu (Double Suicide Decapitation Technique)
Rank: "D" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu / TaiJutsu
Effect: A technique where the user hides within the ground for a brief moment to surprise attack the opponent from under ground.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: The user takes the time to push into the ground by using their Earth Release. The user pushes into the ground quickly so that to be used against the opponent later on. The user at this point cannot necessarily move within the ground at this moment, but the user does know by feel of when an opponent is right above. When an opponent is right under the user reaches up to take the opponent and drag them back down to the ground in one fell swoop without movement or notice. The opponent is unable to move for one post and the user is capable of slamming out of the ground with one movement.
Limit: Needs the Earth Release

Doton - Dochuu Eigyo (Underground Fish Projection)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: By using the similarity of Doton - Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu (Double Suicide Decapitation Technique) the user is capable of moving through the earth and all around.
Special: "Handseals" before performing
Drawback: Technique cannot be used through Sand
Description: The user uses the basic Doton - Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu (Double Suicide Decapitation Technique) as they slam down into the ground. Doing so the user is capable of moving about within the ground capable of rising, singing and capable of pushing through the very ground in multiple types of ways. This type of attack may be used so then the user may move away from the very opponent and attack at the moment's notice.
Limit: Needs the Earth Release, Must have knowledge of the Doton - Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu (Double Suicide Decapitation Technique)

Wind Release

Fuuton no Jutsu (Wind Release Skill) 
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Wind. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Wind Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Fuuton Kaze no Senbon (Needles of the Wind)
Rank: "D"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: User hurls a mixture of senbon needles in the form of wind to cut into the opponent.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: The ninja gathers air with his hands and mixes it with chakra, by doing this he transforms them into sharp and deadly needles. The needles are almost invisible so it is hard for the enemies to see them. This technique may be blocked by large objects, however something small such as a sword, or a staff will allow the needles to seperate still moving towards the object it was originally sent to. Not a powerful technique as the user is capable of hurling up to ten senbon wind needles that gives out minor cuts. However this could be used as a more of a set up technique to allow the user to perform a more dangerous technique.
Limit: Must have the Wind Release

Sand Release

Saton no Jutsu (Sand Release Skill) (FREEBIE)
Rank: "B"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Sand. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Sand Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: Must have Fuuton no Jutsu (Wind Release Skill) and Doton no Jutsu (Earth Release Skill).

Suna Bunshin no Jutsu (Sand Clone Technique)
Rank: ["D"] "C+"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user creates clones of sand.
Special: "Hand Seals"
Drawback: For D Ranks The Clones that are created are basically useless, only used as a distraction, only used to stand/move and can not be used to attack. One meter of sand is needed per clone.
Description: If the user has an abundant amount of sand along the ground the user is capable of focusing their chakra along the sand to where they are capable of controlling the sand's structure to create a vast amount of clones if capable. When first learned the user is capable of creating up to five Clones, this is for the D Rank Version. If the user learns the C Rank version they are capable of creating ten clones. At C rank the clones are capable of attacking and using sand techniques. The C rank of this may be learned an additional four times to create a maximum of thirty clones.
Limit: Must have the Sand Release.

Suberi Suna Nami (Sliding Sand Wave)
Rank: "D"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: Creates a wave of sand.
Special: ---
Drawback: Can be destroyed by D rank Raiton techniques. Sand immediately falls to the ground after an attack/defense.
Description: The user throws his hand to the side as if calling the sand to follow, it forces the sand on the ground to fly up in front of the user to either attack or defend against oncoming jutsus. This sand is not very strong and will easily be broken down if hit by a C rank or higher jutsu and will revert back to the ground. The sand rises to about the size of a normal human body and will revert back to the ground right after being called upon. Once the user hits A rank this technique can stop C rank attack. When the user hits S rank it can stop B rank attacks.
Limit: Must have the Sand Release.


Daisan no Me (The Third Eye)
Rank: "D"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A technique that allows the user the capability of using their sand to where they can create an eye. This eye of sand is used for spying purposes and information gathering purposes. A simple technique known within the Sand Regiments.
Special: ---
Drawback: When the user uses this technique they are unable to use one of their eyes. The user will need to be capable of seeing and the mind is unable to process so many images. Lack of better words the user literally uses his own eye to see by using Sand. The user is however only capable of using this technique within the distance of 10 meters each character rank
Description: The user creates a simple eye that is in the color of brown. The sand is condensed to the point it solidifies and looks like that of an eye. The user keeps a small string of sand that is lined with chakra in order to allow the user to still see.
Limit: Must have the Sand Release.

Nimbus
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user takes the knowledge of Suberi Suna Nami and is capable of creating a cloud made out of compacted sand. This technique is somewhat simple as the user creates a cloud, and using the knowledge of the wind release the user can push the Sand Cloud in all directions. The Cloud of sand is strong enough to keep the user placed on top of the cloud and stand within mid air on top of a cloud. This technique is used for escaping or traveling purposes.
Special: "Hand Seals"
Drawback: ---
Description: When the user performs the small amount of handseals the user quickly forms a massive cloud of sand that is in the size of his own choosing. Usually done to fit for that of the user. The user is capable of controlling the very sand up down and all around in every direction allowing the user to float in the air and move high into the air in an elevated manner. When the user learns this technique the user is capable of moving in the same amount of movements per round as himself in which designates as to how fast this Sand Cloud can become.
Limit: must know Suberi Suna Nami (Sliding Sand).

Suna no Yoroi (Sand Armor)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Think layer of sand that wraps around the user so then they gain the capability of using it as a defense against on coming attacks. The sand is durable, and quite flexible as well that fits neatly around the very user. It may not be as protective as the Sand Shield technique but it helps those that are in need. The Sand Armor is only capable of protecting the user against attacks equal in Class or lower in Class.
Special: ---
Drawback: A technique that has many drawbacks. The user looses an extremely numerous amount of stamina when they have this placed upon them. If the user is a NinJutsu Master they are capable of having this technique up and running for ten posts, and rest for two posts before they use it again. If the user is a NinJutsu Specialist this technique lasts for only Five Rounds and rest for five posts if they wish to use it again. And if the user is a Non NinJutsu Specialist this technique lasts for two rounds before the user becomes to hot and fatigued and rest for ten posts before they are capable of using it again.
Description: A technique that is wrapped around the user's body and sticks on their skin, clothes while hardening greatly. The sand forms into the color of the clothing as well, to show those that attack do not know that the user has a sand armor around them.
Limit: Must have the Sand Release. This technique takes up a total of 10 Meters of sand.

Suna Hogo Sochi no Jutsu (Sand Shield)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user slams his hands down on the ground, bringing up a large amount of sand around him into the air to block attacks. This technique is as strong as the user. This technique lasts for three rounds but the user is capable of gaining more time with this technique via training.
Special: "Hand Seals" Slams their hands to the ground.
Drawback: This technique only lasts as long as the user trains into the technique. This technique also has a very large drawback which is that the user can not be within five feet away from the technique. If the user does so the technique will then fall apart. Can be destroyed by D rank lightning.
Description: The sand Shield looks like a massive dome. As the user performs their seals and slams their hand down to the ground the sand rises up and covers the user in a massive dome of sand. The user is unable to see outside of the sand and would need the technique of the third eye in order to help the user. The massive dome condenses with the sand as the sand hardens greatly allowing a number amount of protection against the opponents who wish to do harm. Each additional time this is trained the user can hold it up for one more round.
Limit: Must have the Sand Release.

Suna Bakuhatsu no Jutsu (Sand Explosion Technique)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A technique that allows the user to take a small amount of sand to form the size of a ball that fits the palm of their hand. The user is capable of using the sand and allow the sand to move in the air. The explosion is mostly used for a distraction but is strong enough to distract opponents.
Special: "Hand Seals"
Drawback: Does not create a strong explosion, just strong enough to harm an opponent someone to stop them.
Description: The sand spreads out exploding outwards in all directions. The sand pushes forth being confined with the very chakra to where when it explodes outwards the sand is strong like glass. This technique cuts and slashes opponents if they are to close. In better terms the technique is more like a small grenade to where shrapnel spreads out in all directions.
Limit: Must have the Sand Release.

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GENJUTSU

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TAIJUTSU

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CLANS

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OTHER

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Uhm so just a confirmation

I used 2 of my free techniques on the wind and earth release. Idunno if I can do that or not but I figured it would be worth the shot. Uhm also I know sand is an incentive village but I was wondering if I could still join it without taking the incentive. Story purposes and what not.

Thanks!

[Nekomata Minh]

You have some slight errors here. Ok so first off are the freebies. You get 6 actually instead of 5. The problem is I think you might have scrambled up free techniques with freebies.

Now freebies cover: Traits, Taijutsu Stances, Genjutsu Perceptions, AND Ninjutsu Releases.

You added 5 traits. All of which require freebies to obtain. So like wise you would only have 1 freebie left. So this means you would have to get rid of two of your releases since they require freebies as well if you keep it this way.

Not only that but, you used 3 free techs out of 5 since you didn't take a bloodlimit. So you can add 2 more.

Really the problem is your freebies. You are 3 over. So as a suggestion I think you could use 3 freebies for Earth, Wind, and Sand Release. Then 3 more freebies for traits. So in that case all you would have to do is eliminate 2 traitst hen. But it is up to you how you want to distribute that.

Oh and, please label what is exactly getting the freebies please. (similar to how you did the Sand Release.)

Sorry for the drawback this may cause but, I can't give a 1/3 yet until you fix the errors provided. And please feel free to PM me if you need further help.

EDIT: Oh! and, I am sure you can join without the incentives, just please make a note stating so in your bio. Thank you. 

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Changed! Thanks!!

[Nekomata Minh]

Ok one other thing. Your secondary Ryo is 30,000. You spent 30,500 XD. So instead of two pairs of kunai just get one pair + one singular kunai.

So 28,500 Ryo in Senbon
+
1,500 in Kunai.

Apparel and Primary Weapons share primary ryo. So your total spent is: 8,700.

7,000 from gourd.
1,700 from Type 3 Cloak.

You have 4,300 primary ryo left.

Fix that secondary ryo problem then you get the 1/3

[KoKoKo]

Minh just quickly - you get one free apparel item worth 15 slots - it does not come out of the allowances.

Nice to see someone using Marik as a face claim, I was going to use Huck from the GX series.

For future reference if you want to join without taking the incentive just don't mention it, you only get the incentive if you ask for it.

Once the kunai is fixed you will have my mark

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Changed! And thanks! I kinda saw him and was like "Yup he looks like a desert guy". I dunno if its the whole Egypt thing or what

[Nekomata Minh]

1/3

[Beltran]

2.3

[Nira]

Yes, you can use free techniques on releases, as long as the releases you use it on are C rank or lower.

You get 6 freebies.
You get 5 free techniques.

All together, you get 11 of these free things.

Freebies are can spent on traits, releases, stances, perceptions, and skills.

Free techniques can be spent on anything that can be learned, which is "C" rank or lower.

Right now, you have spent 7 traits and 3 free techniques. You have one too many freebies.

Keep in mind that Able Learner takes up 2 freebies, not 1.

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Changed the techniques so that the releases are not free techs and re-added my con-artist trait.

[Nira]

1/3

[Beltran]

2.3

[Solus]

3/3