Shigeru Tenmei [Incentive]

[Shigeru]

Basic Information

Name: Shigeru Tenmeii
Bloodlimit: Kaishin
Height: 5'5"
Weight: 136 lbs
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Alignment: Evil, Neutral
Birth Country: Land of Earth
Village: Stone (incentive village ey)
Special:
Specialist
- Taijutsu

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- Ninjutsu

• Water Release [Free technique]
• Wind Release [Free technique]
• Ice Release [Freebie]
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Non-Specialist
- Clan

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- Genjutsu

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Traits:

• Bait and Tactics
  Rank: "C"
  Skill: Teamwork Trait
  Effect: User and an ally work together to take out the enemy with a game of deception.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: Once per day when the user makes a successful feint against a target, that target is considered flat-footed to any ally with this trait for 1 round. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
  Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.
  
  
• Aura of Misfortune
  Rank: "C"
  Skill: Supplementary
  Effect: The user gives an uncontrolled aura that weakens anyone around them including the user.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: All creatures (including the user) within 3 meters of the user are subject to a -2 profane penalty to their Saves. This penalty increases to -3 at "C" Class, and increases by an additional -1 every Class Level thereafter (Maximum -5). This Ability functions only while the user is conscious, not if they are unconscious or dead.
  Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.
  
  
• Heavy Hitter
  Rank: "C"
  Skill: Regional Trait
  Effect: User has trained in martial arts and so their blows are especially painful.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: User gains a +10 Armour Points Trait bonus on damage made with Unarmed attacks. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
  Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.
  
  
  

Skills:

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Weapons


Primary Weapon:

• Gauntlet (Overview) x2
  Rank: "C"
  Type: Main, Bludgeoning/Piercing/Slashing, Gauntlet
  Effect: A defensive and offensive armour used as a weapon or protection for the user's arms.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +3 Amour Points of Damage. Metal or armoured gloves that allow the user to deal lethal damage with unarmed strikes. A strike with a gauntlet is otherwise considered an unarmed attack. The opponent cannot use a disarm action to disarm a user with gauntlets on unless they remove the gauntlets completely. Examples of Gauntlets: Brass Knuckles, Cestus, and Gauntlets.
  Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
  Cost: 2,500 Ryo Each (5,000 Ryo)

• Sword, Short (Overview)
  Rank: "C"
  Type: Main, Piercing/Slashing, Sword
  Effect: A weapon with a long metal blade and a hilt with a hand guard.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +6 Amour Points of Damage. A short sword is about 2 feet in length. Examples of Short Swords: Tanto, Baselard, Cinquedea, Gladius, Kodachi, Xiphos or even the Mechete.
  Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
  Cost: 2,000 Ryo
  
  
• Greaves (Overview) x1
  Rank: "C"
  Type: Main, Bludgeoning/Piercing/Slashing, Greaves
  Effect: A defensive and offensive armour used as a weapon or protection for the user's legs.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +3 Amour Points of Damage. Metal or armoured leg protectors that allow the user to deal lethal damage with their legs as unarmed strikes. A strike with a greave is otherwise considered an unarmed attack. The opponent cannot use a disarm action to disarm a user with greaves on unless they remove the greaves completely.
  Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
  Cost: 2,500 Ryo Each
  
  
• Wire (Overview) x1 bundle
  Rank: "C"
  Type: Main, Slashing, Soft Weapon
  Effect: Metal drawn out into the form of a thin flexible thread or rod.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: A Two-Handed Weapon. These weapons do +4 Amour Points of Damage. Wire is a single, usually cylindrical, flexible strand or rod of metal. Wires are used to bear mechanical loads and to carry electricity and telecommunications signals. Wire is commonly formed by drawing the metal through a hole in a die or draw plate. Standard sizes are determined by various wire gauges. When using Wire over 1.2 m (1 to 4 feet) they are treated as a 2-handed weapon. Wire under 1.2 m (1 to 4 feet) are treated as 1-handed weapons. If the user learns Wield Oversized Weapon the user is able to wield the weapon 1-handed.
  Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
  Cost: 3,000 Ryo per Bundle, 200 Ryo per Meter (3,000 Ryo)
  

Secondary Items:

• Caltrops (Overview) x2 slots
  Rank: "C" Rank
  Type: Secondary, 16 per Slot, Piercing, Caltrops
  Effect: A spiked device thrown on the ground to impede characters.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +1 Amour Points of Damage. The Range Increment of this weapon is 5 meters. A caltrop is a 4-pronged iron spike crafted so that one prong faces up no matter how the caltrop comes to rest. The user scatters caltrops on the ground in the hope that the opponent steps on them or at least forced to slow down to avoid them. 1 slot of caltrops cover an area 2 meter squared. Each time a creature moves into an area covered by caltrops or spends a round fighting while standing in an area, they may step on one. If the opponent steps on a caltrop the Caltrop deals 1 Armour Points of Damage, and the opponent's movements is reduced by 1/2 because its foot is wounded. This movement penalty lasts for 24 hours, or until the creature is treated with a First Aid: Healing Hard Check, or they are healed from minor wounds. A charging or running creature must immediately stop if it steps on a caltrop.
  Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
  Cost: 1,600 Ryo per Slot, or 100 Ryo Each (3,200 Ryo)

• Kunai (Overview) x2 slots
  Rank: "C" Rank
  Type: Secondary, 2 per Slot, Piercing/Slashing, Knife
  Effect: A kunai is a tool derived from the masonry trowel.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +4 Amour Points of Damage. The Range Increment of this weapon is 5 meters. A kunai has a blade that is about less than 1 foot in length. The user gains a +10 bonus on Sleight of Hand Skill to conceal a knife on their body.
  Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
  Cost: 1,000 Ryo per Slot, or 500 Ryo Each. (2,000 Ryo)

Non-Weapon Items

• Butt Bag Type 1 (Overview)
  Rank: "C"
  Type: Main, Tailor, Slot Holder, Holds 15 Slots (15 for Items of Scroll Length), Bag
  Effect: A waist pack worn with the pouch in back.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: Picture A pack worn at the back along a belt at the waist. Water repellent collar with drawstring pack with quick release closures attached to 1 inch cinch straps and a top carry handle. It has a vented bottom with keeper clips to attach to the belt, or straps to wrap around a belt. The compartment has the dimensions Height of 10.25 inches Width of 10.5 inches and Depth of 7 inches. The interior holds 15 slots of scroll length as well as main objects that fit in the same dimensions. Normally extra clothes is held in this spot as well as other non combative supplies.
  Limit: These type of items may be bought inside any Tailor Shop.
  Cost: 1,700 Ryo
  
  
• Grenade: Smoke x3
  Rank: "C"
  Type: Secondary, 1 per Slot, Explosive, Grenade
  Effect: A Grenade that gives off thick smoke when it explodes; used to make a smoke screen or to mark a position.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: May harm the user if not thrown right.
  Description: Smoke grenades are used as ground-to-ground or ground-to-air signaling devices, target or landing zone marking devices, and screening devices for unit movement. The body is a sheet-steel cylinder with emission holes in the top and bottom. These allow the smoke to be released when the grenade is ignited. Two main types exist, colored smoke (for signaling) and screening smoke. It fills an area radius of 15 meters with thick smoke. The smoke may come in different colors if the user wishes. Different color smoke could be used for information value if need. It takes 6 seconds before it explodes.
  Limit: These types of items may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop.
  Cost: 1,500 Ryo Each (4,500 Ryo)

• Walkie-Talkie
  Rank: "C"
  Type: Secondary, 1per Slot, Gadget, Surveillance, Transmitter
  Effect: A radio transmitting device that sends signals through electromagnetic waves.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: Limited Range in transmitting information.
  Description: Picture A small combined radio transmitter and receiver, usually operating on shortwave that can be carried around by one person. Dimensions are 5 inches by 1.7 inches by 2.1 inches. The radio has a built in speaker / Microphone, Volume control and Squelch facility. The radio can be used with a short or long antenna and operates from a 15 Volt battery. Range between two radios is 20 miles (Distance between close approximate threads in a single board.)
  Limit: These items may be bought inside any Gadget Shop.
  Cost: 1,500 Ryo Each
  
  
• Multi-Tool (Overview) x1
  Rank: "A"
  Type: Secondary, 4 per Slot, Gadget, Survival, Tool
  Effect: A multi-tool is a portable, versatile hand tool that combines several individual tool functions in a single grip or in the shape of a credit card.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: Picture A multi-tool is a portable, versatile hand tool that combines several individual tool functions in a single grip or in the shape of a credit card. Folding Multi-tools are the most common of all types of Multi-Tools. The second most common types are Pocket Knives (Swiss Army Knives). Multi-Tools are known to have needle-nose pliers, crimper, regular pliers, wire stripper, hard wire/wire cutters, large screw driver, small bit driver, scissors, serrated knife/cutting hook, saw, clip point knife, wood/metal & diamond-coated file, bottle/can opener, and a large bit driver
  Limit: These items may be bought inside any Gadget Shop.
  Cost: 8,000 Ryo per Slot, or 2,000 Ryo Each (2,000 Ryo)
  
  
• Flint (Overview) x1 slot
  Rank: "C"
  Type: Secondary, 20 per Slot, Gadget, Survival, Tool
  Effect: A rock device created to use as a source for creating a spark.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: Picture Flint is a hard, sedimentary cryptocrystalline form of the mineral quartz, categorized as a variety of chert. It occurs chiefly as nodules and masses in sedimentary rocks, such as chalks and limestones. Inside the nodule, flint is usually dark grey, black, green, white, or brown in colour, and often has a glassy or waxy appearance. A thin layer on the outside of the nodules is usually different in colour, typically white and rough in texture. Scrape tool with any knife (or sharp object, like a rock) to create small magnesium shavings. Ignite shavings with built-in sparking insert. Start hundreds of fires with a flame source of 5,400°F. Safe; fireproof in solid form. Carry in a pocket or attach to bag with included chain loop. It's measurements is 3 inches by 1 inch by 0.5 inches and weighs 1.4 ounces.
  Limit: These items may be bought inside any Gadget Shop.
  Cost: 2,000 Ryo per Slot, or 100 Ryo Each (2,000 Ryo)
  

Character Depth

Personality

A henchman at his core, Shigeru can motivate himself, he just finds it much easier to do it when in a team. In the past, this has usually been his usual group of fellow menaces, but now, as a graduate, he finds himself without a team again. Shigeru finds his list of accomplishments piling up when he's got someone else to report to, or along with. In turn, he's fairly likely to stick with the team he's with- once they can retain some semblance of power; and go along with his basic moral values i.e. they should lack moral values. He's not useless on his own, but years of depending on others to weather the changes he'd made during his childhood has made him a bit of a dependent. 

He believes in survival of the fittest, and works for the benefit of himself and his friends above all else. Random acts of kindness from Shigeru are exceedingly rare, and most of his good deeds have some alternate motivation. He doesn't mind murder one bit. Despite only having ever killed one person, he's been privy to quite a few deaths, and the shock of it wore off over the years. He's learned to look on the bright side of death- that every kill is a bit more experience for the one doing the killing. 

That said Shigeru isn't hostile most of the time. On the contrary, he is amicable to most people he meets unless given some reason not to be. He enjoys talking to others and finding out about them, and gives an ear to listen. A born and bred extrovert, Shigeru never backs down from conversations. He likes to initiate them with people he finds interesting, and in the shinobi world, he's found there's no lack of interesting people.

He lacks the delicate social graces of some of the older ninja clans, or, if he does have them, he certainly doesn't use them. He rarely backs down in social situations, is fond of starting conversations and making loud jokes. He gets energy from social situations, and he hates being low-energy.  He's also by no means a homebody. It takes very little persuasion to get him to displace himself and go off on whatever adventure catches his fancy. The more the merrier. It might be his age, but if he's not stepping out of his comfort zone, physically and emotionally, he's not doing enough.

In terms of doing things, he's certainly the do-first-think-later type; something the Academy has been trying to curtail in him since day one. His schooling has managed to scrub some of his more impulsive tendencies away, but Shigeru still tends to do the minimal amount of research before jumping into a situation and getting a feel for it himself. It's risky, and he usually relies on someone else to reel him back. With no one around, though, it's likely his more impulsive behaviours will get the Kaishin in trouble.

Appearance

Shigeru looks like a Kaishin, only not quite. The long, hard face he inherited from his mother's side of the family stops him from being as pretty as most of the clan's male members, and his lack of delicacy doesn't help matters. The only facial features the Kaishin clan offer Shigeru are his eyes and nose. His eyes are round and dark, brown, almost doe-eyed if he'd ever let his expression slip into something so 'soft'. Along with his slightly upturned button nose, he manages to shimmy his way into attractiveness.

Shigeru's most distinguishing facial features are the two moles under his eyes, identical and evenly apart. They're more often than not mistaken for tattoos. Similar moles dot his arms, legs, and chest, some natural but most as a result of sun damage on his once-pale skin. After years of burning him red, the Stone sun has finally managed to give him a respectable tan, and the moles remain as scars.

Shigeru's hair is straight and crow-black, falling down to his shoulders. Because caring for it like it needs it is something he hates doing, more often than not he's got a few strands flying into his face or just bouncing around, haphazard. In missions he avoids the distraction of his long hair by putting it into a low ponytail, but most of the time he lets is fly free. Occasionally he'll have the forethought to pull at least the front of it back, so it's not flying into his face all the time, but those days are pretty rare.

Each muscle Shigeru has was earned in a hard-fought battle against his genes, which seemed to be trying to keep him lanky. From the minute he hit puberty and other boys started packing on muscle, he's been training outside of class to gain muscle. After three years the end-result is a lean, toned and almost wiry physique, still thinner than the average shinobi. Combined with his modest height, Shigeru doesn't cut the most intimidating figure. He makes up for this by pulling the coldest expressions he can. It usually works- one benefit of big, doe eyes is that they're effective at expressing a range of emotions, including malice. If it doesn't, well, he probably didn't want to get on that person's bad side anyway.

Clothing-wise, the Kaishin has a penchant for red. His casual outfit is usually a red T-shirt, casual trousers and shinobi sandals, for comfort, or a casual, yukata on warmer days. The one he most often wears has a simple, gradient pattern, going from orange at the neckline to faded red, and tied with a white obi. On missions his usual garb consists of the same shinobi sandals, grey trousers, and, since bright red doesn't usually fly for shinobi, he settles for a loose, off-red top that drapes over his upper body, cordoned off in the middle with a black obi, with sleeves just short enough to give a casual glance at what little muscle he has.

Background:

A black cat crossed the path of Shigeru's mother the day he was born, and they say that was the start of her bad luck. Plain and practical chunin-level ninja Akane and Shinya had been dating since right out of the Academy. Deciding, in their genin years, that the fighting and killing of missions was overwhelming for them, they both quickly took their chunin exams and became teachers in Konoha's Academy. They would only have less wedding guests to contend with. Somewhere down the line, they moved in together, had a daughter, got married, then they had their son. But their contentedness was ruined by fights with her family over what else, but marriage problems? Her husband was the son of a missing nin who had frequently terrorised their farmlands, and the relatives were not happy with it.

Shigeru was a hyperactive child; curious and excited, if a bit slow. When his elder sister joined the Academy, Shigeru was sorely jealous, insisting that he be enrolled as soon as was able and spending all his time 'playing' ninja with toy shuriken and teddy bear targets. Unfortunately, Shigeru's birth had been the start of more strife in the family. This time, it showed no sign of dailling down, and when Shigeru was 4, the disagreement between Akane and her family escalated, forcing the Smiths to leave the fire country and flee to live with their closest extended family in Stone. Opting to ignore the grim rumours they had heard about the harsh training the some parts of the academy made its students endure, however, ended up being the downfall of their relatively uneventful stint at parenting.

Moving from Kiri's outskirts to Stone was a large and unwanted change for Shigeru- from lush forests and busy streets to endlessly barren, featureless rock. Even at four, he found trouble adjusting. The new, older friends he made were different than his friends at home, and he found himself changing his behaviour to fit in with them- killing animals, harassing elders... By the end of the year, his parents were alarmed in the changes they saw in not just him, but their daughter- though with their hands full with their own troubles, they chose to ignore it. Adjusting to a new society had made Shinya Smith too sick to work, so Shigeru found himself spending more time out than in.

In another two years, Shigeru was officially enrolled in the Academy, and he found it in himself to be excited. All his excitement abated on the first day, when, after an excited outburst, the teacher 'kindly' reminded him that he was not in farmlands anymore. The following few years were filled with gruelling, spirit-crushing work. He tried pretty hard to go along with it. The move and the change killed the boy's drive to succeed, and he found himself falling behind in the school, day by day. Even his juniors far surpassed him, and the bruises he would get from training and shocked his parents, who were still wary of doing anything drastic- where would they move to? In a few years their son gone from a relatively-peaceful if rambunctious child to a gleefully ant-stomping little firework, within two he'd killed someone. An unfortunate accident activating his kekkei genkai- the sudden burst of ice had offed one of his juniors in the playground. It had left Shigeru traumatised, despite, but more so he was happy to have some form of power his classmates didn't. At first, it had terrified him. Shigeru wouldn't look at anything for weeks, frightened he would hurt it. The thought of facing the higher ups made him quake in fear- but if anything it was celebrated. He got into loads of trouble, almost being expelled from the academy; but behind the reprimands the boy could tell that his teachers were proud. He could use his kekkei genkai for the village. He attended the boy's funeral, and cried when appropriate, but Shigeru had found his muse.

By his 4th year he was the terror of the school…'s second hand man. One group after another, if there was a bully to be found, he was probably tagging alongside them. His grades and self-assurance skyrocketed as he found the motivation to succeed among his peers, and the aggressiveness he kept just under the surface came out, netting him a reputation as a tyrant even among the students at Stone. His new behaviours shocked his parents, but whatever punishments they could offer usually got laughed at, with their non-violent approach to parenting. Shigeru became one of the top students at school, an example and a menace.

Now, freshly graduated and out of academy politics, he's been forced to find other things to occupy his time with. He figures the first thing on the agenda is going to be finding those Kaishin sitting cozy on the countryside and teach them a lesson about harassing his parents. Of course, he'd need extensive training, and a team.

[Shigeru]

Kaishin

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Suiton Soushi (Water Creation) - Free technique
Rank: “D”, “C”, “B”, “A”, “S”
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: With this technique the user is able to create water from oxygen in the air for water techniques. When this water is created they can then manipulate the size and shape of the water, controlling it within their radius.
Special: This jutsu can be used as a source of Suiton jutsu without additional handseals.
Drawback: If the water is made for use outside specific jutsu or to manipulate the size/shape of water in their radius, then this jutsu requires handseals.
Description: By using their chakra a Kaishin member can manipulate the molecules in the air and allow them to take the shape and form of water. In doing so the user is capable of performing techniques that require a water source. The amount of water that can be made, as well as the radius depends on the rank of the jutsu. For D rank the user can create up to four cubic meters of water in a radius of four meters. At C rank eight cubic meters and a radius of eight meters. At B rank seventeen cubic meters of water in a radius of fifteen meters. At A rank thirty two cubic meters of water in a radius of twenty meters. At S rank fifty two cubic meters of water in a radius of thirty meters.
Limit: Must be of the Kaishin Bloodlimit. Must have Water Release.

Aisu Soushi (Ice Creation) - Free technique
Rank: “D”, “C”, “B”, “A”, “S”
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: With this technique, the user is able to create ice out of any source of water around them.
Special: This jutsu when combined with Suiton Soushi can be used as a source for Hyouton jutsu without additional handseals.
Drawback: The water source must be within their Radius. When controlling or Creating Hyouton outside of Hyouton jutsu then the user must perform the required handseals.
Description: By using their chakra a Kaishin member can lower the temperature around a body of water at an incredible rate to freeze the water into ice instantly; allowing for ice techniques to be used. In order to go into a rank of this technique a member must first learn the water creation technique of the same rank. If one wishes to train into the C rank Ice Creation they must first learn the C rank Water Creation technique and so on. The radius at which ice can be made depends on the rank of the technique. At D rank four meters radius. C rank eight meters radius. B rank fifteen meters radius. A rank twenty meters radius. S rank thirty meters radius.
Limit: Must have Water Creation Technique rank by rank. ex: D for D, C for C, etc. Must have Ice Release. Must be of the Kaishin Bloodlimit.

Deîpu Furîzu (Deep Freeze)
Rank: "C" "B"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: Utilizing advanced mechanics of the Water Creation and Ice Creation, the user forms a ball of water near the freezing point, before hurling it at the target. Once the ball comes in contact with the target; it freezes on contact.
Special: "Eight Handseals"
Drawback: The user is incapable of moving while performing this technique. In addition the jutsu only moves along a straight line.
Description: Utilizing the Water Creation jutsu, they perform eight handseals before swaying their hand in a circular motion. The swaying of their arms drops the temperature of the created water as it begins to forumlate into a ball within one of the user's hands (preferably the dominate hand but this is not necessary). When the user is ready the ball is hurled at the target. The water in question is at a temperature which is near freezing point and instantly freezes upon contact within a meter radius for the B-rank version. The B-rank version is capable of completely freezing anything within the three meter radius; making this variation a death move requiring death approval.
Limit: Kaishin Bloodlimit, Requires Water Creation and Ice Creation.

Kuri Buki (Ice Harden)
Rank: “D”, “C”, “B”, “A”, “S”
Skill: Ninjutsu/Supplementary
Effect: In Description
Special: N/A
Drawback: Learning the ranks of the jutsu requires the specific class to be achieved.
Description: The understanding of this technique allows for a Kaishin user to truly harness the power of ice creation. This technique will determine how hard ice created is. The user must be the same class as the rank of jutsu they wish to learn. This means to learn the B rank version of this technique the user must be B class or higher and so on. At D rank the ice is as solid as regular ice. At C rank the ice is as strong as iron. At B rank the ice is as strong as titanium and cannot be melted with fire techniques below A rank. At A rank the ice is as strong as hard steel and can’t be melted by fire techniques below S rank. At S rank the ice is as strong as adamantine and cannot be melted by fire techniques. This technique is the base of all ice techniques used. The strength of every ice technique depends on this.
Limit: Kaishin Bloodlimit; Water Creation, Ice Creation

Aisu Ken (Ice Blades)
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user creates one meter long blades of ice attached to their forearms.
Special: Snake
Drawback: --
Description: The user forms the hand seal, focusing chakra along their arms. Blades of ice will sprout from their forearms, growing to extend to about a meter long. These blades are as hard as the user’s level of Kuri Buki, and last until the user chooses to dispel them or are broken. These blades are sharp on both sides and at the point.
Limit: Must be Kaishin. Must have Hyouton. Must have Aisu Soushi, Suiton Soushi, and Kuri Buki.

Taijutsu Specialist

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Ninjutsu Specialist

Water Release (Freebie)

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Suiton no Jutsu (Water Reease Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Water. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Water Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Wind Release (Freebie)
 

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Fuuton no Jutsu (Wind Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Wind. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Wind Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Ice Release

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Hyouton no Jutsu (Ice Release Skill) - Freebie
Rank: "B"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Ice. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Ice Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: Must have Fuuton no Jutsu (Wind Release Skill) and Suiton no Jutsu (Water Release Skill).

Hyouton - Hyourou no Jutsu (Ice Prison) - Free technique
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: A technique in where the uses the ice that is down upon the ground and is used to encase an opponent in a pure white like prison.
Special: "Hand Seals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A user quickly does a few hand seals as they quickly slam their hands against the ground. Doing so they can create a large like shield of snow that would either be used against an opponent or for themselves as a defensive like fashion to where the technique comes forth to stop from incoming attacks.
Limit: Must have the Ice Release

[Father 'Suke]

Moved to Character Submissions, am now working on grade

• 16500 of 13000 spent for main items. (Overspent)
  
• 15200 of 30000 spent for secondary items.
  
• I removed costs for the indigestible (blood clot and soldier pill) as you cannot start with these. The herbs and mixtures rule of Character Submission being applied here.
  
• Need a total of 5 paragraphs for each individual writing section. Please increase Personality and Appearance.
  
• Background has a problem, moving leaf to stone part. You cannot know the location of another vilage outside of the one you start in as a ninja and unless you meant "Hi no Kuni" then you may wish to change "Leaf" to "Fire."
  
• As a Kaishin you must start with Ice release but also you must start with two mandatory techniques. Water Creation and Ice creation (of the lowest rank each).
  

[Shigeru]

Thanks for the speed!
- Changed it.
- Leaving it as is.
- Sure.
- Padding ahoy! Any better?
- Whoops, the leaf thing was a spill-over from the first draft of his bio. It's been done over, and I hope it makes more sense now!
- Goodbye, sweet freebies. Done.

[Father 'Suke]

All good, however your wording for the two creation techniques should be "free technique" and not "freebie" as freebies are not techniques. However, seeing how you used two "technique slots" for the releases you can switch those wordings around (as in your water and wind release would be labeled "freebie" instead of free technique and vice versa for the creation techniques).

Once you've done that, you've earned 1/3 approval from me.

[Shigeru]

Gotcha. Changed it around.

[Gohan]

2/3

[Yoshi [Lynx!]]

3/3