Makoto Sensou

[\\\Makoto///]

Name: Makoto Sensou
Age: 18
Height: 5'6''
Weight: 140
Gender: Male
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Birth Country: Earth
Village: Stone
Special:

TaiJutsu Master
Suiken - Drunken Fist
Capoiera
Chakra Gate User

Secondary Weapons:

Windmill Shuriken +1
Kunai +5
Exploding Tags +4
Knife +2
Shuriken +1
Double-Bladed Kunai +2
Hikari (Light Bombs) +1

Primary Weapon:

Sickle (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main
Effect: A Style of weaponry that was first used for gardening but then later turned into an art of weaponry. The sickles range in different sizes and for different sizes they have different price ranges.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Traditional farming implements similar to a sickle used for reaping crops and also employed as a weapon. The Sickle is a large curved blade attached to a stick or staff. There is small ones with a stick the size of a foot to two feet such as the Kama, the Chicken Sickles and the Arit, and there is large ones with a staff the size of over four feet with a larger blade.
Limit: These types of weapons may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop
Cost: Small: 500 Ryo,

Personality:

Being a human he is a person that people could look up to and say "Hey I want to be with at guy." So he try hard to make people to under stand were he coming form not, so guy that what to make people to like how he is. He is a persons that you can hang out with have some fun might have some fight here and there, but that ok with him. He wants to have fun with people and try to have some good times.

When in a ever good fight he becomes a defend person, someone that want to try is best at all times or one that will try to take you down. When there is evil around he will try to make some more fun with them, trying to bring them back to the good side, see they have more fun the bad guys. If he can’t the bad guys to come over the good side, they he have no choose to kill them. If they will give ask for his life not to be killed then he know tht they are on the good side.

Sometime that does not work how it goes. So he always have back up plane if thing goes to bad even for him [seeing that a laded back guy]. So he look for way out of things that he does on like. If a fight that gone bad or someone is getting of is last lag. If you do meat him do not piss him off.

Appearance:

A human that have a perfect skin color, that not to dark and not to light just right. His is one that have aura around him that make people like more people look. With a dark hair the cover his soft brown eyes, that make anyone say aww when they look in his eyes. When most people look at his them this of a Elf.

With his clothes are more of person that will could like to be one of in the important people in the world. He has a black and dark yellow theme wit his clothes. With the trims are dark yellow and his main color his black. With are dish black scarf around his neck, that cover up to his nose most of the time. With reddish black gloves covering his hand all the time.

His body his slim and tall, always standing up strain as he can look that me his more important in the world. With his weight around 150-140 most of the time as he train round the clock.

Bloodlimit: N/A
NinJutsu Techniques:

N/A

GenJutsu Techniques:

N/a

TaiJutsu Techniques:

Speed of the Mind
Rank: "C", "B", "A"
Skill: Skill / Knowledge / TaiJutsu
Effect: Within this, this type of knowledge and technique enables the user the capability of withstanding the elements of the Chakra Gates. They must learn this multiple times. Without this the Chakra gates become more destructive within the body. The body must be capable of enduring the gates, and this allows the body to endure the speed for the gate.
Special: ---
Drawback: Must be learned each time before they go into a new gate. For Gates one through three they must learn the "C" Rank version, for Gates four through six they must learn the "B" Rank version, and for Gates six and seven they must learn the "A" Rank versions.
Description: ---
Limit: Must become a Chakra Gate User.

ouyou Kobushi (Shaking Fist)
Rank: D
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Punching out with their palm, the attacker quivers the palm before hitting in order to do more damage
Special: None
Drawback: None
Description: Upon striking the opponent, one makes their fist vibrate slightly before impact to do more damage than a regular punch could do. This punch’s secret is in the vibration causing the internal organs to be vibrated/shocked. They bump around due to the movement and damage is caused.
Limit: Must know Gouken no Kamae.

Paiken (Cup Fist)
Rank: E
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: (In description)
Special: --
Drawback: --
Description: This stance is supposed to mimic the user holding a cup. This puts the character’s hand in a good position for blocking and striking, keeping the hands and arms of the user ready for a wide variety of techniques, and makes the shoulders ready for explosive movements. The wrist is in a position where it can easily strike or block, and the fingers are curled in with the index finger hooked out, which helps in trapping an opponent's arms while blocking. The arms can be used for short or long range techniques, as well as the elbows, combined with various feints and strikes.
Limit: Must be Drunk to do

Down the Hatch
Rank: C
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: (in description)
Special: --
Drawback: --
Description:First the user must have their back to the opponent before performing this maneuver. Stepping forward with the right foot, the user must spin on his toes so that the forward foot becomes the back foot, their back slightly hunched forward and away from the opponent. Putting most of the weight on the back heel (right foot) and bending the knees to lower them to the ground, bending backward until they are able to see the opponent's chest. Using their right hand, making it into a clamp claw with their index and thumb, the user then grips the opponent by the Adam's apple. Their left hand comes up to their mouth, mimicking the act of drinking a bottle of wine, with their left leg off of the ground and still bent.
Limit: Must be drunk to do.

Uncle Stirs the Barrel
Rank: C
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: (in description)
Special: --
Drawback: --
Description: First the user must strike the opponent's shoulders just before the collar bone ends, loosening the defense of an opponent; a strike to the head on each side simultaneously could also be used to dizzy the opponent. Next the user gets very close, touching the opponent chest to chest, extending their arms out behind the opponent's head and bending the elbows so that the hands nearly touch. Straightening one arm quickly, the user knocks the opponent's head toward the other arm, where the user proceeds to roll his upper body as if it were a ball. The user tosses the dizzied opponent forward with a thrust of their right arm, causing the opponent to stumble backward. Finally the user follows up with a leaping spin kick with the right leg, landing on the right leg. A reverse roundhouse is performed with the left leg, striking the opponent in the face with the outside of the foot, and ending with the user falling to his/her knees and striking the opponent in the chin with his/her wrist, his/her hand bent.
Limit: Must be drunk to do.

Ginga
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: D rank
Effect: None
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: The ginga (literally: rocking back and forth; to swing) is the fundamental movement in Capoeira. To accomplished this stance is by maintaining both feet approximately shoulder-width apart and then moving one foot backwards and then back to the base. This movement is done to prepare the body for other movements.
The rest of the body is also involved in the ginga: coordination of the arms (in such a way as to prevent the body from being kicked), torso (many core muscles may be engaged depending on the player's style), and the leaning of the body (forward and back in relation to the position of the feet; the body leans back to avoid kicks, and forward to create opportunities to show attacks). The overall movement should match the rhythm of the person.
Limit: Only a Mestra or a Contra can teach a Calouro these moves

Gouken no Kamae (Iron fist stance)
Rank: E
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Once in this stance one’s speed and strength increases due to positioning of muscles and limbs.
Special: None
Drawback: None
Description: Not exactly a technique, but a fighting style. It packs tons of speed and power and relies on the user's physical strength and fitness. It is also the prime holder of the majority of Konoha's elite taijutsu techniques. Standing with one arm behind their back and one extended, the user is ready for a quick strick with their fists and feet. This leaves them open for quick spins and jumps that will power their attacks.
Limit: none

White Tiger Washes Face
Rank: C
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: (in description)
Special: --
Drawback: --
Description: First the user leaps forward to kick the opponent in the face with the right leg, landing and then repeating the exact same kick a second time. Afterward, the user places their left hand over the top of their right, turning them so that the palms face themselves. Finally the user thrust their hands forward, striking the opponent in the face and sending them staggering backward.
Limit: Must be drunk to do.

History:

Being born in the same place, and still living their he know everyone at his age. He have friends everywhere in the town, almost everyone. He was a kid that loved to play with other kids his age. When it was time for him to choose if he want to go in the ninja academy of his home town. His mom did not want him to go at all, but his dad want see if he would be a good ninja.

The day he went to the academy he found out that he could not use that much chakra, but his teach had a nother way to become a ninja with out using that much chakra. It was call TaiJutsu. That day he start his own trainning to become a ninja. He was making friends on the way of his trainning but all of then could us chakra as well. Some of them was using Taijustu as well but he was only one that was heavly trainning in it.

Some of his freind did not want to become a ninja like him, but he was one that was having fun with them as time when by. He was having fun with the people that was trying to make fun of him. he will let roll of his sholder, and smile at him happness. He put his arm around him and start to talk with see what was up with him. The guy did not like that about him. So he push him a way and want to fight him.

Makoto start to laugh that the man want to fight him. So if the man want to fight he let him fight. Makoto let him have the fist punch as well. He did not punch Makoto he ran away. Makoto went on his life want to know more people in his life an more friends.

[Itaru]

For your technique, Speed of the Mind, bold the first rank. You can also add one more technique to your jutsu. Your two windmil shuriken take up 8 slots total, your four kunai take up 4 slots, but you can have 4 exploding tags per slot. So that means you have a little over one more slot to use.

[|Ayame Unbound|]

Link For Staff No chakra, sorry. T_T

For your secondary weapons, please clarify that that's the number of each weapon not slots. Also you still have some slots free if you'd like to fill them.

Please clarify that your main weapon is small.

Please Bold the lowest rank in your multi-rank technique.

You may also have one more technique if you'd like ^^

[\\\Makoto///]

Ok Fix, and that link did not work.

[|Ayame Unbound|]

The link is only viewable by staff members. And for the first technique only the C rank should be bolded.

[\\\Makoto///]

kk, done.

[Itaru]

You've only used up 9 of your 15 slots. You can also have an additionary technique, since I believe the stance Paiken is a freebie. Other than that I think this profile is ready to be checked.

btw Makoto, if staff is slow to look at your bio, don't be afraid to send them a PM. =]

[The Heron]

I'm not staff, but:

You have to be a Hyuuga to learn and use Jyuuken. It doesn't say that exactly in the restriction section for the style, but every technique says "Must be Hyuuga."

[\\\Makoto///]

I guest it fix.

[Kinz]

your secondary weapons are a bit messed up. I only count 11 slots filled. It isnt 15 weapons, but 15 slots. each weapon takes up a certain amount of slots. Check the item index, subsection secondary weapon index for each weapons slot count.

[\\\Makoto///]

Ok now it fix.

[|Ayame Unbound|]

You can have two more 'freebies' if you want. Stances in your case.

[\\\Makoto///]

Ok that cool, and add.

[Itaru]

Eh, you added two more techniques, but you're allowed stances. See, here's an example of a stance:

Paiken (Cup Fist)
Rank: E
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: (In description)
Special: --
Drawback: --
Description: This stance is supposed to mimic the user holding a cup. This puts the character’s hand in a good position for blocking and striking, keeping the hands and arms of the user ready for a wide variety of techniques, and makes the shoulders ready for explosive movements. The wrist is in a position where it can easily strike or block, and the fingers are curled in with the index finger hooked out, which helps in trapping an opponent's arms while blocking. The arms can be used for short or long range techniques, as well as the elbows, combined with various feints and strikes.
Limit: Must be Drunk to do

Usually you'll know a stance from a technique (a stance will usually be E rank). It's fine if you don't want the stances though, you can go without and still get your stuff accepted. It's up to you, I hope you can get this approved soon. Drop me a PM if you have any questions.

EDIT (response to destroyer): Right, he needs to take away the two Jutsu he added, and replace them with stances.

[destroyer]

I see only 1 freebie and 7 jutsus if I'm not mistaken. You can only start with 5 jutsus and 3 freebies, freebies are fighting stances, releases, perceptions, stuff like that, not actually moves/jutsus.

[\\\Makoto///]

ok, I did not see anymore stance I would like. So for right now I good on stance.

EDIT: Thank you, Itaru, and destroyer

[👺 Usiel]

Ginga is a stance believe it or not that can count as another freebie if you like

Also

Windmill Shuriken +1
Kunai +5
Exploding Tags +4
Knife +2
Shuriken +1

are these slots or the actual amount cause if these are the slots add the actual amount of weapons you have with the slots and then you also have two more slots if you want. Other then that things are nice

[destroyer]

I still see 6 jutsus if I'm not mistaken. Also I'd strongly suggest taking the other 2 freebies but again its your choice.

[\\\Makoto///]

I'm good on the Justu, and I fix up the Secondary Weapons.

[👺 Usiel]

1/3