Diago (Revamped)

[Diago]

Name: Diago si ming uchiha
Age: 15
Height: 6'1 ft 0 inches
Weight: 180 ibs.
Gender: Male
Alignment: Chaotic evil
Birth Country: Fire
Village: Leaf
Speacial: Gate User


Gen/Tai Specialist/ninjutsu non specialist/clan non specialist

Clans:

Inuzuka 0/500

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miscellaneous slots:
mythical summoner

Anbu (future)


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Freebies:

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Katon - Goukakyuu no Jutsu (Great Fireball Technique)
Rank: "C" "B" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user is capable of performing a few handseals in which gives them the capability of blowing a large body of fire in size of a large sphere that has great fire proportions and explosive capabilities.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: Depending on the Rank, is dependent on how strong or how much the user is capable of doing with the Goukakyuu no Jutsu.
Description: The user quickly performs a few handseals. The user then places the hand over their mouth creating a small like circle. This technique in turn is then to help the user control the great flame. The use then blows out and creates a large fireball that twice the size of a normal human body. When the "C" Rank version is first learned the user is only capable of blowing out the Great Fireball that is cannot be moved or go anywhere else. This also means that the technique does not explode in a fiery explosion, but burns greatly to anyone that is caught within the technique. When the user learns the "B" Rank version then the user is capable blowing the Great Fireball into the distance, sending it away from the use it to hurl towards the very opponent. This technique is only capable of going into a straight line and this is capable of having the size three times the size of a human body. This technique when launched at an opponent then becomes dangerous because at this point the technique can explode causing damage that is even more devastating.
Limit: Must have the Fire Release



Sugizou learned 1x
Rank: gCh
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: A High speed movement technique where a user moves from one point to another as if appearing to teleport in a short distance in almost untraceable speeds. User moves in 10 meters leaving an after image behind of the user.
Special: ---
Drawback: Able to use 3 times a day when first learned. Each time learned after first time user is able to use it one more time. If user uses it passes the number capable, leg muscles cramp dramatically and user is unable to move till medical treatment. May only be used on the ground in a straight line whether facing forward or away.
Description: The after image technique is the technique that allows the user to move side to side with extreme speed and towards a general direction creating an after image of the person. This is the basis techniques for all techniques that may consist or deal with moves that deal with the After Image. This means that if a user wishes to know a technique that uses an after image they must have knowledge of this technique as well. When used this technique does not take up any movements. However a user may only use this technique equal to half the amount of their movements per round rounding down. Thus 3 movements user may use it only once per round. 15 movements user may use it 7 times per round without it taking up a movement.
Limit: Universal Technique

Releases
Raiton no jutsu

Katon no jutsu

Suiton no jutsu

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Fighting styles
Goutetsu : 10/500 TP

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Goutetsu no Kamae #1 (Strong Iron Stance #1)
Rank: "E"
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: A simple upright stance used with most Goutetsu Œ“S (Strong Iron) Practitioners.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture Standing with one arm behind their back and one extended, the user is ready for a quick strike with their fists and feet. This leaves them open for quick spins and jumps that will power their attacks.
Limit: Must learn from a Master of Goutetsu Œ“S (Strong Iron)

Goutetsu no Kamae #2 (Strong Iron Stance #1)
Rank: "E"
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: A more diverse stance used within the Goutetsu Œ“S (Strong Iron) style. This stance adds more flexibility for the users then the upright stance.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture A boxer stance. The user has their legs bent and arms raised up to cover the face. The Jabbing fist is slightly more forward then the strong fist. Elbows are in, shoulders are up, hands are cupped but not clenched. Fist is never clenched because it is best to clench the moment of contact. This creates a stronger force of hit. Knees are bent, body straight but lowered to protect the stomach area. The legs move as the user bobs and weaves never staying in place.
Limit: Must learn from a Master of Goutetsu Œ“S (Strong Iron)

Senbon Taitoku 15/500

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Senbon Taitoku Stance
Rank: E Rank
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: A way of holding senbon that adds to all attacks made with them.
Special:None
Drawback: Required to know for ALL other Senbon Taitoku jutsu
Description: Holding the senbon between knuckles but also holding their wrist back and the senbon farther up then most senbon users hold it. This adds to power and accuracy and allows the Senbon Taitoku to master their craft.
Limit: Must be of the Senbon Taitoku

Odoriko Onchou (Dancers Grace)
Rank: "D", "C", "B", "A", "S"
Skill: Tai
Effect: Becoming more aware of their surroundings the user is unable to be caught flat footed or be flanked.
Special: ---
Drawback: The user may only learn this technique by the class that they are. This means that in order to learn the "C" Rank version they must be "C" Class, if they wish to learn the "B" Rank version they must be "B" Class.
Description: Training to heighten their senses in the heat of combat, the Senbon Taitoku user under goes training to become more prepared then ever. They slowly become aware of their surroundings on the battle field, to the point they become similar with it like their own back yard. With this natural sense of their surroundings the user can't be caught flat footed or be flanked. Which means if the user was walking down the road minding their business, and a ambush party burst out from the bushes. The user wouldn't be caught of guard and would most likely except it, and will sense someone was coming up from behind to attack and will act quickly and either attack first or get out the way. This works on whenever they are being attacked. This technique however has a major flaw. The user is capable of dodging only whenever the opponent's class is equal or lower to that of the rank of the technique they know. This means that a "D" Class user that knows this technique can not use this against an opponent that is "C" Class or higher.
Limit: Must be a Senbon Taitoku user

Krav maga 10/500

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Striking Principles
Rank: E D C B A S
Skill: Taijutsu - Knowledge
Effect: Increases the users ability to effectively strike a vital point depending on the rank of technique.
E - Basic Knowledge of vital point location, roughly 50% chance that the user will land a direct hit on one of these points.
D - Increases the chance that a vital point will be hit to 60%.
C - Increases the chance that a vital point will be hit to 70%.
B - Increases the chance that a vital point will be hit to 80%.
A - Increases the chance that a vital point will be hit to 90%.
S - Increases the chance that a vital point will be hit to 100%.
Special: None
Drawback: None
Description: Effective striking with the weapons of the body to the opponent’s vital points is essential for a victorious outcome in a hand-to-hand struggle. A ninja must be able to employ the principles of effective striking if he is to emerge as the survivor in a fight to the death. Strikes should be targeted at the opponent’s vital points and nerve motor points. Strikes to nerve motor points cause temporary mental stunning and muscle motor dysfunction to the affected areas of the body. Mental stunning results when the brain is momentarily disoriented by overstimulation from too much input—for example, a strike to a major nerve. The stunning completely disables an opponent for three to seven seconds and allows the ninja to finish off the opponent, gain total control of the situation, or make his escape. Sometimes, such a strike causes unconsciousness. A successful strike to a nerve motor center also renders the affected body part immovable by causing muscle spasms and dysfunction due to nerve overload.
Limit: Must be Yellow Belt Krav Maga

Krav Maga Attitude
Rank: E D C B A S
Skill: Taijutsu - Knowledge
Effect: Increases the users ability to dodge and counter depending on rank of technique.
E - Increases the chance that a user can dodge and counter an opponents attack by 5%
D - Increases the chance that a user can dodge and counter an opponents attack by 10%
C - Increases the chance that a user can dodge and counter an opponents attack by 20%
B - Increases the chance that a user can dodge and counter an opponents attack by 30%
A - Increases the chance that a user can dodge and counter an opponents attack by 40%
S - Increases the chance that a user can dodge and counter an opponents attack by 50%
Special: None
Drawback: None
Description: Proper mental attitude is of primary importance in the Krav Maga's ability to strike an opponent. In hand-to-hand combat, the Krav Maga must have the attitude that he will defeat the enemy and complete the mission, no matter what. In a fight to the death, the Krav Maga user must have the frame of mind to survive above all else; the prospect of losing cannot enter his mind. He must commit himself to hit the opponent continuously with whatever it takes to drive him to the ground or end his resistance. A memory aid is, “Thump him and dump him!”
Limit: Must be Yellow Belt Krav Maga

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Secondary Weapons:
10smoke grenades

10 kunai


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Primary Weapon:
Long Sword (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main
Effect: Swords that slash hack, dice and anything else within this genre that reaches a certain length.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Any bladed weapon that is longer then three feet, to about four feet. These weapons range from any types of blades such as the the long Sword, the Claymore, the Falchion. Any of these weapons or any weapon that fits within the length is considered as a long sword.
Limit: These types of weapons may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop



Personality:
Diago has been very kept to himself every since his family was killed. The real truth is diago is scared to open up to anyone to everybody seems like the type of person who keeps to himself and dosn't like to have fun. The reality to diago's personality is that he loves to have fun joke around,loves the ladies and is very loyal to friends and comrads. Diago is also serious when it comes to training and missions but the only dark part about diago is he has a dislike for hyuugas because it was them who he believes killed his family and comrads that. Ever since that day Diago kept to himself hopefully to become stronger by not realying on noone but himself . Soon Diago will soon become the person nobody ever thought he was he will soon be the old Diago once he meets his new team and fellow comrades only little did he know what adventures and struggles they will go threw to change Diago.

Appearance: i133.photobucket.com/albums/q57/neji_31/anime-3-1.jpg

Diago is a little different from most uchiha'sinsted of the usual black hair that most uchiha's diago's hair is a golden brown color.On Diago's left arm he has a flame tattoo going from his elbow to half of his arm. You will mostly see diago wearing a green sleeves shirt with green pants,boots,gloves,and elbow pads with metal as its pad protection.Diago has a slim body figure which allows him to move quickly and swiftly in a fight. Diago also keeps a katana with him that also has a green hilt but with brown stichings going around it in a pattern. Insted of having the black eyes that most uchiha's have diago has a dark blue color in his eyes, so if you looked at him you wouldn't guess in a million years that he was an uchiha until he activates his sharigan.

Diago skin is a light caremal complexion,but if he stays out in the don to long if its to hot he gets a golden brown tan. You will see diago wear his black headband on his forhead at all times. even though diago has a slim figure he actualy has a muscular figure so don't be fooled by his slim figure. Diago aslo wears two loop earrings in his ears but you can't really see due to the fact that his hair goes pass his ears. Diago likes to wear his hair in spikes so thats how you will see his hair everytime.

Bloodlimit: uchiha

NinJutsu Techniques:

Katon no jutsu 15/500

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Katon no Jutsu (Fire Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Fire. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Fire Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---
Heat Mastery, when a user reaches to a point where they gain the full potential and understanding of fire and Heat the user is capable of many things. A technique such as this is a mastery of all Fire Techniques to where they do not have to worry about Minor Burns.

Hanabi no Shinka (Fire Flower of Evolution)
Rank: “E” Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu, Offensive, Defensive, Pre-requisite
Effect: Creates a small flower made of flames with six petals that are each six inches long.
Special: “Hand Seals”- Rat, Dragon, Monkey, Rabbit, Tiger, extending the left hand away from the body, then using the thumb, index, and middle fingers in a triangle-like formation.
Drawback: This ability has no real value beyond using it within a combo attack.
Description: This jutsu creates a flower made entirely of flames. The user performs the required hand seals, channeling chakra through the left hand’s thumb, index, and middle fingers. The left hand is then moved away from the body, and the three mentioned fingers form a triangle shape, while the other two fingers close like the user would make a fist. The built chakra then move upwards and out of the hand, sparking to life and creating a flower with six petals that are six inches long each. If the triangle formation is ever broken, then the entire flame disappears. This ability can almost be treated like a fighting style stance. Each use of a Hanabi no Shinka will require a set amount of petals to be used; after the petals have all been used, the ability must be re-performed. Any time that a part of the Hanabi no Shinka has been destroyed, so long as the whole flower is not destroyed, it will slowly regenerate unless it has been used for an attack.
Limit: Requires the Fire Release

Hanabi no Shinka: Mi (Fire Flower of Evolution, Seed)
Rank: “D” Rank, 5x “E” Rank Potential Additional Training
Skill: Ninjutsu, Offensive
Effect: Uses one of the petals of the Hanabi no Shinka to create a small orb of fire in the right hand.
Special: The forward movement of the index finger of the hand holding the Hanabi no Shinka.
Drawback: Uses one of the petals of the Hanabi no Shinka.
Description: The Orb ability of the Fire Flower of Evolution is a simple cantrip. Once the user has the Hanabi no Shinka in play, all the user must do is move the index finger of the left hand forward, and one of the petals of the flower will seemingly fade. The user will then open their right hand, revealing an orb of flame that bursts into life. The orb itself is small, with a diameter of about three inches. The orb itself hovers about two inches from the hand. The user at this point can either attack or continue a combo chain. Each time “E” rank training is performed, the shinobi then gains the ability to create one more orb. However, the ratio is always 1:1 for petals: orbs, so creating additional orbs will still require a petal.
Limit: Must know Hanabi no Shinka

Suiton no jutsu 0/200

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Suiton no Jutsu (Water Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Water. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Water Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Raiton no jutsu 200/500

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Raiton no Jutsu (Lightning Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Lightning. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Lightning Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Raiton: Hidora, 雷光: 紫陽花, (Lightning Style: Hydra)
Rank: B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user creates a massive dragon of lightning to strike the foe.
Special: “Hand Seals”
Drawback: This technique is extremely loud and unsuited for stealth.
Description: The user forms the hand seals, focusing chakra into their hands. They then thrust their hands forward, releasing the lightning chakra forward. A long, sinuous dragon-like being of crackling blue-white lightning will spring forward from each of the user’s hands, twining around one another. They will extend towards the target at high speed, for a maximum range of thirty meters. When they reach the target they rear up and split from one another, crashing explosively into and around the target, creating a crater five meters in diameter. These hydras cause extreme shocking akin to severe second-degree burning on the target, as well as applying a fair amount of explosive force caused by the generated pressure wave.
Limit: Must have Raiton.

Ridairekuto
Rank: "C", "B", "A", "S" Rank
Skill: Nin
Effect: When the user is hit by any form of lightning (Includes jutsu's or natural) the user is able to make the lightning go threw their body and by channeling their chakra is able to redirect the lightning threw their hand anywhere they wish but must be a quick action.
Special: None
Drawback: If used to 5 times in a row the user's hand's start to get electrical burns making it impossible for the use to close their hand.
Description: When the user knows that they are about to be hit by lightning they start to channel their chakra threw their body to impress the impact, when they are hit the chakra then quickly lead's the lightning their the open channel way then made to send it out threw their hand. Depending on the rank of the technique means the rank that the user may deflect and redirect. When the user learns the "C" Rank they are capable of redirecting "C" Rank techniques. When the user learns the "B" Rank they are capable of redirecting "B" Rank techniques. This continues on till "S" Rank.
Limit: Lightning Release Skill (Raiton no Jutsu)

Raiton • Raikou Yama No Jutsu [Lightning Release • Lightning Bullet]
Rank: D-Ranked
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The users fingertips begin to glow a light blue as they fire off lightning bolts from the fingertips.
Special: Tiger, Serpent, Dragon
Drawback: After being used multiple times they begin to numb the user’s finger making it very difficult to use weapon’s such as Bows, Swords, or even Kunai. Can be trained multiple times to increase the amount of times that it is capable of using without making finger’s numb
Description: Once the user has performed the required handseals the user will outstretch his hands and his fingers. Chakra will be rapidly gathered their and suddenly each finger will begin to emit electricity. The user will then move their hands back and fling them forward releasing the Lightning Bullets at the opponent. The Bullet’s look like small marble-sized balls of lightning with is giving off a constant discharge. The balls travel as fast as a person can throw a kunai or shuriken.
Limit: Lightning Release

Raiton: Hirameki no Jutsu (Lightning Flash)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Causes a blinding flash that can disorientate enemies (up to 10m)
Special: Rat
Drawback: ---
Description:The user holds the rat handseal and closes their eyes, gathering chakra into them. The user then opens them suddenly, and emits an extremely bright flash from their eyes that can temporarily blind and/or disorientate enemies. The blinding effect usually lasts one turn.
Limit: Lightning Release

Raiton – Raiu Karasu (Thunderstorm Raven)
Rank: D, C, B
Skill: Ninjutsu.
Effect: Creates ravens of lightning to attack your opponent.
Special: Tiger, Dog, Tiger
Drawback: Must be learned multiple times in order to truly master. The swallows dissolve if they pass out of forty meters of the user.
Description: The user forms the hand seals, creating ravens of lightning around them. The ravens are roughly two feet in wingspan. The ravens are comprised of pure electricity, and discharge into a shock of electricity when they strike an object. Each swallow discharges with a D rank shock. The user can control the motions of the swallows completely. When first learned, the user is only capable of creating up to five ravens at a time. Each time learned, the user can create an additional five ravens. When the user attains to capability of creating fifty ravens, the technique increases to a C rank technique, allowing for an additional five per training as usual. When the user reaches the capability of creating one hundred twenty swallows, the training becomes B rank. The user can create two hundred swallows, total, before they max out.
Limit: Must have Lightning Release.

Charged Projectile
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Charges a metal throwing projectile with lightning adding lightning damage.
Special: ---
Drawback: Can only do enough to slightly numb and paralyze (Only for a quarter of a post), if the user tries to make it stronger, it will end up backfiring and paralyzing their hand. Can only charge up to 5 slots at once
Description: The user holds as many kunai/shuriken, or metal projectile for that matter, as they can, up to 5 slots in their hands, and charges them with electricity. Extra lightning damage is added which will slightly paralyze or numb. The projectiles will shock the opponent weakly even if they don't make contact, but at least come close to.
Limit: Lightning release.

uchiha techniques : 110/500

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Sharingan (ŽÊ—ÖŠá "Copy Wheel Eye,") 1st Tomoe
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user gets to see through a small number of GenJutsu.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Regular Eyes, Sharingan (ŽÊ—ÖŠá "Copy Wheel Eye,") 1st Tomoe The eyes of the user turns red in color with a black pupil in the middle. A Tomoe (Comma) appears along the side of the eyes. Each eye gains one Tomoe. At this stage the Sharingan (ŽÊ—ÖŠá "Copy Wheel Eye,") is at its weakest stage and is only able to see through GenJutsu that is "C" Rank and "D" Rank.
Limit: Must be part of the Uchiha Bloodlimit (‚¤‚¿‚͈ꑰ "Uchiha family")

Sharingan (ŽÊ—ÖŠá "Copy Wheel Eye,") 2nd Tomoe
Rank: "B"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The Sharingan (ŽÊ—ÖŠá "Copy Wheel Eye,") 2nd Tomoe allows the user to track movements and copy them for techniques. User is also capable of piercing stronger GenJutsus.
Special: ---
Drawback: Technique Copying has its limits as well as Movement tracking.
Description: Sharingan (ŽÊ—ÖŠá "Copy Wheel Eye,") 2nd Tomoe The eyes of the user turns red in color with a black pupil in the middle. Two Tomoe (Comma) appears along the opposite ends of the eyes. Each eye gains two Tomoe.

Able to see through "B" Rank and lower GenJutsus.

Able to predict 3 movements per opponent.

Able to copy a technique to learn. Every Training Point User earns they get an Additional Point to learn the technique.

Additional Point does Not go into User's Class, nor Mastery.

Additional Point takes away from learning Capacity such as universal technique points and non mastery points.

May only copy Releases (If you know Release first), Perceptions (If you know Perception first), and Basic non Chakra Related Fighting Styles and TaiJutsu Techniques.

May copy Technique Trees if user learns the first technique that starts the Technique Tree.

Does not Copy Multi Ranked Techniques, except the first initial technique.

Does not Copy Selfish Techniques


Must watch technique being performed at all times whether it is Playable Character or Non Playable Character. Must not take eyes off of person performing said technique.

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History:
Hey hey big brother where are we going to do today diago said as him and his big brother walked along a long narrow path. you have to wait and see diago and man you are always impatience you really need to learn how to control that because one day that could be your downfall and i don't want nothing to happen to you. " hahahaha don't worry about me big brother im going to be as strong as you one day and i will even surpass you one day and join the anbu black ops". Hahahhahaha in your dreams diago you are to arrogant and you really have alot of stuff to work on ahhhhh here we are diago the place where today you will be reconized as a man. "wow" diago said as he looked out and saw a beautiful field with a big lake in the middle it.

"wow big brother so today you are going to teach me Katon: Gokakyu no Jutsu (Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique). Exactly diago i learn this technique at 9 years old and i want you to do the sae diago and trust me when i say its not going to be very easy diago so go ahead and prepare yourself diago. "Hahaha no it will be a piece of cake so im ready" and with that diago and his brother dosu train for hours . *huff huff* "man that was a lot harder than i thought" diago said as he laid on his back from hours of training and burned marks on him. * huff huff * I told you diago dosu said as he laid on his back tired from training diago, and it only took me 3 hours to teach you and i wish you wasn't so hardheaded and it you would have learn it alot faster .

" well at least i learned it and thats what counts at the moment and all i know that im a step closer to becomming stronger". damn diago quit being so cocky all the time i should beat the mess out of you but its getting late so we need to head hom home ok so lets go. "Hmph as if you will ever do that but watever lets goahead and go home already because im hungry and mom is makin hamburgers". Pow dosu hit diago right in the mouth see i told you i would now quit with the back talk and lets go home now." Ouch that hurt "diago said as he got up "fine im sorry about that ok and lets go because im hungry". and with that diago and Dosu went home to eat and later on diago was in for the worst day of his life.

One day diago was out training with his best friends. Diago and Kyru was sparing and diago stop and kyru said whats up with w you diago.Diago just stood there and said I dont know i just have a bad feeling that somthing is about to happen but i just dont know what but o well lets get back to training. .Then all of a sudden one of diago's cousins came runnin. Diago said whats wrong. Myru Diago's cousin said that theere people is attacing our clan and the clan killed alot of them but there is one thats still standing and he is to strong. what Diago no this cant be happening and at the same moment diago cuzzin and friends dropped dead with kuni in there backs. Dammit no not my friends diago said with rage building up inside of him and at that moment diago's sharigan awoken inside of him for the first time. Now i wll go after him and kill him myself but just as diago was about to move diago was knoced unconcious and when he woke up he was in the hospital. where am i and where is my family diago said. Im srry to say that your whole family and clan was killed the hokage said as he walked in on diago i am sorry.

Who did this diago said, and as he said this the hokage looked at some people behind him and looked back at diago and said it was sombody in the hyuuga clan his name was.... songo hyuuga but he has fled but we dont know where he is im sorry diago. No its not possible it cant be i dont know what to do with out my brother. Well you are old enought to go to the academy why not start there and become strong and do what you must do from there. I will diago as soon as i get some rest and with that diago fell asleep and when he awoke the next day he started the academy promising on getting revenge .

[Ancestor Febrie]

Hi der.

You should bold your multi-rank techs and use a template for remaking/revamping.

[Solus]

Uhm... yeh, this doesn't add up at all >.> How can you have all the Eye techniques whilst having all 345 TP in Lightning? You have far more than zero C-ranks. You are supposed to be familiar with how things work here >.> Fix it.

[Solus]

Uhm... The great fireball tech and Shishi Rendan can't possibly be freebies >.> Freebies should be only releases, perceptions and Fighting stances. And you only added more techs o.o The eye techs also take TP ya know... You have far more than two C-ranked techs, this chart is 100% messed up >.> Get your numbers straight...

[Ancestor Febrie]

You don't have the req for Raiton: Hiraishin (Lightning Element: Flying Thunder God ) and add fire and lightning release techs into their sections.

[Solus]

Jun 10, 2010 11:45:49 GMT -7 Ancestor Febrie said:

You don't have the req for Raiton: Hiraishin (Lightning Element: Flying Thunder God ) and add fire and lightning release techs into their sections.

Actually he did, B-ranked Ridairekuto is right there in his profile, it was just... Poorly spelled in the Raiton: Hiraishin tech.

Anyways, as an Uchiha you MUST start with the great fireball technique... Re-add it to your bio.

[Diago]

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Total Training Points:345

500 Training Points
E -3
D -3
C -2
B -3
A -
S -

1500 Training Points
E -
D -
C -
B -
A -
S -

3000 Training Points
E -
D -
C -
B -
A -
S -

5500 Training Points
E -
D -
C -
B -
A -
S -

[Elgar]

You need to put the new version of the Sharingan in here.

[Takeuchi]

Sansutomu Taitoku was a BL FS last time I checked, which means you shouldn't have it not being part of the BL and not having someone to teach you.

Also, please include the limit to Stage Two Sharingan and make sure you have ALL the prerequisites.

[Takeuchi]

Your Old Bio shows you only got 2 free starting jutsu, you're not getting the third back now.

[Solus]

Bold/underline the rank of the Great Fireball you have.

[ladynatsumi]

Since the chart is something I have yet to understand and learn, someone else will need to check that for you, but apart from that, I don't see anything else wrong with your bio, so I'll give you a 1/2 unless staff disagree.

Good luck^^

[roko]

add the number of times you have "Sugizou" learned besides it.

[Beltran]

Slapping my 1/2 for acceptance here. Can't find any more issues.

[ladynatsumi]

Yeah, but since Hiroko posted in, we have to start over again lol.

You need a mod to accept this, so to get this second acceptance, PM a person who is either a Moderator, A Head Moderator, or the Admin.

Good luck!

[Deleted]

hmmm

two out of two