jin yakuzachi

[jinkoyoto]

Basic Information

Name:jin yakuzachi
Bloodlimit:none
Height:5ft 9in
Weight:180lbs
Age:15
Gender:male
Alignment:good natural
Birth Country:land of fire
Village:stone
Special:

Weapons

Primary Weapon

Secondary Items: kunai (x30)

Non-Weapon Items

Character Depth

Personality.

Appearance:

Background

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[N A T S U M I]

First off, reading this, this and having a good look around in here would be a excellent start.

And could it be possible if you would create a character in a less active village like Stone, Sound, Mist please?

We need a personality, appearance and a history with three paragraphs min with six sentances in each paragraph, if you wish to go over that then you're a gem!

Secondary weapons: You are able to have a total of fifteen slots worth of items. But please note that the items have to be C rank.

Primary Weapon: You are able to have one primary weapon that is C ranked and an overview of the sellected primary weapon is needed as well.

You can have a total of three [3] freebies which can either be releases [ninjutsu], perceptions [Genjutsu] and/or fighting stances [taijutsu].

You can also have a total of five [5] free starter techs since you are not creating into a bloodlimit, these techniques can be C ranked or below.

If you have any questions then please don't hesitate to PM me

[Katsumaru]

1) You can have two specialists and two non-specialists or a mastery. Below is the link to the specialist thread, but it may be somewhat confusing for you.

narutoforumrp.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=charactersubmittion&action=display&thread=2031

As you are already a Taijutsu Specialist, you can still be a Ninjutsu, Medic, or Clan Specialist. Depending on what you chose, you will have two non-specialists then. If you are Tai/Nin Spec, for example, you are a Clan and Genjutsu Non Specialist.

2) You have sustaining pain selected as a technique, which required the Pattern Perception found here.

narutoforumrp.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=genjutsuindex

You can chose the pattern perception as a freebie. Freebies are either Fighting Style Stances, Releases, or Genjutsu Perceptions, such as the pattern perception which I mentioned above.

Also, you can have five starting techniques. I personally suggest you chose some more (they have to be either D or C rank). Otherwise you may regret it later!

[👺 Usiel]

You still have two more freebies to choose. Also I'm confused when you just put Gōuken 剛拳 (Strong Fist) / Ansatsuken 暗殺拳 (Assassination Fist). I understand you want to go into the style however I need to know if you know a stance or not. You wont be able to say the name of the style and just perform the techs. You'll still have to learn them.

Also gonna need some more appearance, personality and history.

[N A T S U M I]

May I suggest that you create into a much lesser occupied village like Sound, Mist or Rain? Konoha is a little over crowed at the present moment

Plus can you please not bold everything? It proves difficult for other members to read certain things.

I'm sorry, but you have far too many grammar and spelling mistakes, could it be possible if you can correct those as well?
And you can have one more freebie.

[Solus]

Your specialist section is a mess, I can't make out what you are. Please fix it and tidy it up.

[atem.]

You are missing the Cost from your Primary Weapon.

Spelling Error: For secondary weapons, its "kunai", not "kuni".

You need permission from the Tsuchikage to start with Phoenix Explosion, so either get the Tsuchikage to post here saying he will allow it, or replace it.

[Beltran]

1/3

Everything seems like it's in line.

[✗ Kaeor ✗]

2-3

[atem.]

Lol, the spelling error has not been changed, but that's fine.

3/3. Congrats.