Zeki Sadojin

[Ranzu]

Basic Information

Name: Zeki Sadojin
Bloodlimit: Sadojin
Height: 6'0"
Weight: 274lbs
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Birth Country: Kaze no Kuni
Village: Kusagakure
Special: Ninjutsu Master

Weapons

Primary Weapon:

Secondary Items:

Non-Weapon Items

Character Depth

Personality:

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Repression

Literally Extreme

It and this one

Problems with Authority

What are morals?

Good guy troubles

Reverse discrimination

Guess what mood that is!

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Appearance:

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The body

The hair

Upper body apparel

Lower Body Apparel

The headgear

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Background:

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Techniques

Sadojin Bloodline

• Suna Sensu: Karada Souran (Sand Style: Body Control)
  Rank: "C", "B"
  Skill: Ninjutsu
  Effect: Allows the user to control and shape their body as they please.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: User can only make shapes and such up to their bodily size.
  Description: User gains the ability to change their body and transform its shape as they see fit. User has a set amount of sand within their body they cannot have more then a set number, allowing them to have a human shape and form. They have mastered the shape and form so well, it allows them to make contours so that they not only appear to have skin and cloths, but it feels that very as well. They may also use it to regenerate lost limbs with either another sand source, of sand from the lost limb. This form at "C" Rank is always active, otherwise they would be nothing more then a pile of sand. They have been able to do this for so long however, the "C" Rank form of this technique only takes an "E"Rank amount of chakra per day. Thus, allowing them to keep this form forever. This technique also allows the user to perform some Sand techniques directly from their body. The "B"Rank Form of this technique simply allows them to take form of more advanced things. For example, a pile of sand, a giant arm, Drill, or whatever they can imagine, so long as the object does not go over their sand capacity.
  Limit: Must be a Sadojin, Sand Release.
  
  
• Suna Sensu: Suna Kyuuchaku (Sand Style: Sand Absorbtion)
  Rank: "C", "B", "A"
  Skill: Ninjutsu
  Effect: Allows the user the knowledge to absorb extra sand to their body.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: If the user does not have enough sand within them, they will form without limbs and look deformed.
  Description: The user focuses chakra into a sand source whether from soil conversation or from a gourd, and begins to add that sand to their own bodily sand to increase their body mass. This is useful for storing sand within to be used for other sand techniques if the user so wishes, however with this, the body's size also increases as well.
  
  "C" Rank: Grows 2 extra feet, stores enough sand for one C rank technique
  "B" Rank: Grows 5 extra feet, stores enough sand for one B rank technique
  "A" Rank: Grows 10 extra feet, stores enough sand for one A rank technique
  
  Limit: Must be Sadojin
  
  
• Suna Sensu: Suna Taisha (Sand Style: Sand Regeneration)
  Rank: "C", "B", "A"
  Skill: Ninjutsu, Passive.
  Effect: Allows the user to regenerate their form after having it broken and rearranged.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: Takes time depending on what needs to be repaired.
  Description: Allows the user the knowledge of repairing their Sand form after being hit or having it disrupted by something, including their own will. User simply uses sand around them or sand from their old body part and recycles it to re-grow their lost limb or body part. Depending on the Rank of the technique, depends on how fast the user can regenerate.
  
  "C" Rank takes one full post (6 seconds)
  "B" Rank takes half a turn (3 seconds)
  "A" Rank is instantaneous.
  
  
• Suna Sensu: Suna Kikan (Sand Style: Sand Key)
  Rank: "D"
  Skill: Ninjutsu
  Effect: User loosens up the sand in their index finger so much take it can take the shape of a key fit perfectly for a key hole, before hardening it unlock things.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: User looses up the sand in their index finger with chakra and forces it into a key hole. The sand easily takes the shape of the Key that would be needed, and with more chakra, the finger is hardened to a level of steel, allowing the user to open and unlock all and any locks.
  Limit: Karada Souran "C".
  
  
• Suna Sensu: Suna Dangan (Sand Style: Sand Bullet)
  Rank: "C"
  Skill: Ninjutsu
  Effect: User shoots sand bullets from their fingertips using absorbed sand.
  Special: "Handseals"
  Drawback: Only shoots as fast as a kunai thrown.
  Description: User forms a few handseals, and with the absorbed sand, and focusing chakra to their middle and index finger tips, form a few sand bullets, 2 to be exact. With a burst of chakra, they are fired off into the distance as fast as a kunai thrown. The bullets are as strong as steel and pierce anything a kunai would upon being thrown.
  Limit: Karada Souran "C", Sand Absorption "C", Sand Key.
  

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Sand Release

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• Sand Controlling
  Rank: "D", "C", "B", "A", "S"
  Skill: NinJutsu
  Effect: With this technique the user is capable of controlling sand within a certain distance. With this the user is capable of determining how well they are capable of using a technique, and how much the technique is worth. Without this as the starting basis the user is uncapable of using their Sand Techniques to their fullest potential.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: This is to be considered as a skill tree, each time the user learns a certain is the difference between how well the user is capable of using their technique and controlling sand within a longer and longer style of distance.
  Description: The user pours their chakra into the ground along the sand. By doing so the user is capable of grabbing the Sand pushing it upwards, downwards, or even to the sides. When the user first starts off by learning the D Rank version of this technique the user is capable of controlling Sand within a Radius of Ten Meters. When the user learns the C rank the user is capable of controlling sand within the radius of Twenty Five Meters. When the user learns the B Rank version of the technique the user is capable of controlling sand within a radius of Fourty meters. When the user learns the A Rank version of this technique the user is capable of controlling Fifty Five Meters of Sand. Finally when the user is capable of learning the S Rank version of this technique the user is capable of controlling a distance of Seventy Five meters in Radius of Sand. If the user wishes to progress further they must learn in a B Ranking fashion to be capable of controlling an additional Five Meters.
  Limit: Must have the Sand Release
  
  
  
  
• Shield of Sand (Shield of Sand)
  Rank: "B", "A", "S"
  Skill: NinJutsu
  Effect: Whenever the user is about to come to harm, a shield of sand will automatically surround and protect him.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: Depending on the user's rank depends on the strength and speed of the technique.
  Description: The shield is capable of withstanding considerably strong attacks and projectiles, and can be hardened to a point where it's stronger than many creations. The shield is so strong that it has earned the name "Absolute Defense" (絶対防御, Zettai Bōgyo). The sand will react regardless of the user's will, even protecting them from self-inflicted injuries. User may also completely surround them in the shield to further increase the defensive capabilities. Strength and Speed of Technique depends on the rank of the Technique.
  "B" Rank - Capable of stopping 8 movements. Capable of stopping "C" Rank techniques.
  "A" Rank - Capable of stopping 10 movements. Capable of stopping "B" Rank techniques.
  "S" Rank - Capable of stopping 12 movements. Capable of stopping "A" Rank techniques.
  
  Each Class the user is higher than "C" the shield's strength increases by 1 Rank giving a full capability of stopping "S"+"C" Rank techniques. The amount of movements is an accumulation over the amount of enemies attacking. This is a mastery and doesn't take up much Chakra when activated. User may activate or deactivate this anytime they wish. Activating takes up 0 movements.
  Limit: Must have gained 500 Training Points in Sand for "B" Rank Automatically. Must have gained 1,000 Training Points in Sand for "A" Rank Automatically. Must have gained 1,500 Training Points in Sand for "S" Rank Automatically.
  
  
• Suna Bunshin no Jutsu (Sand Clone Technique)
  Rank: "D" "C"
  Skill: NinJutsu
  Effect: The user is capable of creating clones by using the sand around them. Depending on how much sand the user has, and how well the user is capable of using this technique is dependent on how many clones the user is capable of creating. The C Rank version of this very technique allows the clones movement, and basic attacks such as punches and kicks, but no techniques. When first learned the user is capable of creating up to five Clones, this is for the D Rank Version. If the user learns the C Rank version they are capable of creating two clones. Each time learned for the D Rank Version of this technique the user is capable of creating two clones. Each time the user learns a C Rank version of this technique the user is capable of creating one extra clone.
  Special: "Handseals"
  Drawback: For D Ranks The Clones that are created are basically useless, only used as a destraction, only used to stand and can not be used to attack. The user can not learn more C Rank Versions of this technique then that of the D Rank Version of this technique.
  Description: If the user has an abundance amount of sand along the ground the user is capable of focusing their chakra along the sand to where they are capable of controlling the sand's structure to create a vast amount of clones if capable.
  Limit: Must have the Sand Release, Must know the Sand Control of D Rank. For every Ten Clones equals ten meters of Sand Needed.
  
  
• Daisan no Me (The Third Eye)
  Rank: "D"
  Skill: NinJutsu
  Effect: A technique that allows the user the capability of using their sand to where they can create an eye. This eye of sand is used for spying purposes and information gathering purposes. A simple technique known within the Sand Regiments.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: When the user uses this technique they are unable to use one of their eyes. The user will need to be capable of seeing and the mind is unable to process so many images. Lack of better words the user litterally uses his own eye to see by using Sand. When the user learns this very technique the user is however only capable of using this technique within the distance of how well he is capable of controlling Sand.
  Description: The user creates a simple eye that is in the color of brown. The sand is condensed to the point it solidifies and looks like that of an eye. The user keeps a small string of sand that is lined with chakra in order to allow the user to still see.
  Limit: Must have the Sand Release, Must know Sand Control.
  
  
• Suberi Suna Nami (Sliding Sand Wave)
  Rank: "D"
  Skill: NinJutsu
  Effect: Not a very powerful jutsu in the least, this technique is mainly used to stop oncoming attacks or to psyche out the opponent. Depending on how strong the user is depends on how strong the sand is on defending attacks. If the user is A Class the user is capable of stopping attacks of B Rank Status in one round but must keep pouring more chakra if they wish to keep it up. This technique however is usually used as a one type of thing, this means that each time an attack occurs the sand falls down to the ground.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: Not very strong. Only as strong as the user. Lightning attacks can push through. For
  Description: The user throws his hand to the side as if calling the sand to follow, it forces the sand on the ground to fly up in front of the user to either attack or defend against oncoming jutsus. This sand is not very strong and will easily be broken down if hit by a powerful jutsu and will revert back to the ground. The sand rises to about the size of a normal human body and will revert back to the ground right after being called upon.
  Limit: Must have the Sand Release, must know Sand Control
  
  
• Sand Needle Storm
  Rank: D,C,B
  Skill: Ninjutsu
  Effect: Sand turns into senbon like structures and fire towards opponent.
  Special: Monkey,Boar,Dog,Rat
  Drawback: Needles dissipate after hitting target and so doesn't stay in wounds to cause further discomfort.
  Description: Sand rises and turns into senbon and fire towards opponent, they travel roughly 15ft straight towards target, at rank d-c there pathway can't be altered by rank b they can turn about in roughly 45 degree angle max while moving to target.
  Rank D - max 7 needles
  Rank C - max 15 needles
  Rank B - max 30 needles
  Limit: Sand Release, need sand source,sand control rank d for d-c, rank c for b.
  
  
• Doujou Kirikae no Jutsu (Soil Conversion Technique)
  Rank: "C", "B", "A", "S"
  Skill: NinJutsu
  Effect: When the user does not have sand for them to use in a vast amount for Jutsus the user is capable of taking what sand that they do have to convert materials around them to create more sand. Depending on the type of rank the user is capable of learning this the user is capable of converting different types of material. The higher the rank is the stronger the material the user can convert. When first learned the user is capable of using components from the ground of soft soil to transform into sand. The user is capable of converting two meters of Sand per post when they learn the C Rank version of this technique. When the user learns the B Rank version of this technique the user is capable of transforming small rocks into sand and is capable of creating sand within three meters per round. When the user learns the A Rank version of this technique the user is capable of transforming hard rock into sand and is capable of converting within four meters per round. The S Rank version allows the user to convert sand from concrete and even weak metals into sand as well as the capability of converting sand within five meters.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: The largest drawback is that it takes time to be capable of doing such a thing as well as it takes an abundance amount of chakra in order to perform this technique. This technique should be used only if the user needs to use as a last chance for a large move. Also the user must know certain ranks of Sand Control in order to go into this tree.
  Description: ---
  Limit: Must have the Sand Release. To Learn C Rank user must know C Rank Sand Control. In order to learn B Rank the usr must know B Rank Sand Control. In order to learn A Rank the user must know A Rank Sand Control. In order to learn S Rank the user must know S Rank Sand Control.
  
  
• Suna no Yoroi (Sand Armor)
  Rank: "C"
  Skill: NinJutsu
  Effect: A Think layer of sand that wraps around the user so then they gain the capability of using it as a defense against on coming attacks. The sand is durable, and quite flexable as well that fits neatly around the very user. It may not be as protective as the Sand Shield technique but it helps those that are in need. The Sand Armor is only capable of protecting the user against attacks launched by those who are equal in Class or lower in Class.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: A technique that has many drawbacks. The user looses an extremely numerous amount of stamina when they have this placed upon them. If the user is a NinJutsu Master they are capable of having this technique up and running for ten posts, and rest for two posts before they use it again. If the user is a NinJutsu Specialist this technique lasts for only Five Rounds and rest for five posts if they wish to use it again. And if the user is a Non NinJutsu Specialist this technique lasts for two rounds before the user becomes to hot and fatigued and rest for ten posts before they are capable of using it again.
  Description: A technique that is wrapped around the user's body and sticks on their skin, clothes while hardening greatly. The sand forms into the color of the clothing as well, to show those that attack do not know that the user has a sand armor around them.
  Limit: Must have the Sand Release. Must know Sand Control. This technique takes up a total of 10 Meters Radius.
  
  
• Suna Hogo Sochi no Jutsu (Sand Shield)
  Rank: "C"
  Skill: NinJutsu
  Effect: The user slams his hands down on the ground, bringing up a large amount of sand around him into the air to block attacks. This technique is as strong as the user and is strong against those who are equal or lower in class then the user themselvs. This technique lasts for three rounds but the user is capable of gaining more time with this technique if the user keeps training into the technique. The more the user learns the longer it is capable of lasting.
  Special: "Handseals" Slams their hands to the ground.
  Drawback: This technique only lasts as long as the user trains into the technique. This technique also has a very large drawback which is that the user can not be within five feet away from the technique. If the user does so the technique will then fall apart.
  Description: The sand Shield looks like a massive dome. As the user performs their seals and slams their hand down to the ground the sand rises up and covers the user in a massive dome of sand. The user is unable to see outside of the sand and would need the technique of the third eye in order to help the user. The massive dome condenses with the sand as the sand hardens greatly allowing a number amount of protection against the opponents who wish to do harm. This attack however is quite weak against Lightning attacks.
  Limit: Must have the Sand Release, Must know Sand Control C Rank
  
  
• Suna Raishin 砂の雷神 (Thunder god of Sand)
  Rank:"C","B","A","S"
  Skill: Ninjutsu, Defensive
  Effect: Nullifies all lighting jutsu of the corresponding rank for set amount of turns
  Special: "Handseals" Clap hands together
  Drawback: The opponents lighting techniques have a chance of being amplified if the user stands to close to the rods, thus causing significantly more damage to the user of the rods. The techniques can be amplified by as much as one full rank depending on how many of them (as more than one are created) the user is within one meter of.
  Description: Using this technique one can flood a field with ten miniature lighting rods, approximately five inches high, made of sand that attract lightning-charged chakra. The amount of rods one can produce is increased by five with each rank. This field can be no wider than the maximum distance at which one can control sand, spacing is entirely up to the user. Ninjutsu masters can keep the rods active for five posts with a resting period of two posts, ninjutsu specialists can keep the rods active for three posts with a cool down period of three posts, ninjutsu non-specialists can keep the rods working for one post with a cool down period of four posts. When first learned the user is able to cancel all lighting-based attacks of D-rank or below, when the user learns the B-rank version all lightning jutsus C-rank and below are canceled, at A-rank all lighting techniques below B-rank are nullified, and at S-rank all lightning jutsus A-rank and below are canceled until the rods fall apart.
  Limit: Must have Sand Release. Must have Sand control rank equal to the rank you wish to learn.
  

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Wind Release

• Slyph’s Orb
  Rank: “C” Rank
  Skill: Ninjutsu, Offensive
  Effect: Causes a small burst of wind to shoot forth from the user’s hand in the shape of an orb.
  Special: “Hand Seals”
  Drawback: The attack is clearly visible, causing distortion as the orb moves forward.
  Description: The Slyph’s Orb is a wind-based ninjutsu in which the user will project a burst of wind, shaped with chakra to resemble an orb, in a straight line towards a target. The user will perform the handseals, gathering the required chakra as they create a small vacuum around their hand. The air, once gathered, will compress itself into the shape of an orb, about six inches in diameter. It is then launched from the user’s hand by the user extending their arm forward in a punching-like motion. The orb itself will move quickly, its’ speed as the orb travels causing a great amount of distortion in the atmosphere. It is capable of easily dispersing most secondary weapons and, in fact, is capable of dragging those said weapons along with them as the orb moves forward. Capable of traveling a maximum distance of ten meters, it will travel at a speed of around 2 meters per second, and then the orb will reach its’ final destination and burst five feet in radius, creating a centralized air explosion that is powerful enough only to knock over objects weighing less than 200 lbs. The main use of this ability is to catch opponent’s secondary weapons as they launch them, or, perhaps, use after your own secondary weapons are thrown, and then cause them to be flung about in all directions at the end of the burst. If at any point the Slyph’s Orb is incapable of moving forward, the burst will be prematurely activated.
  Limit: Must have the Wind Release.
  
  
  • Slyph’s Orb: Speed Training
    Rank: “C” Rank, Possible Repetition (Maximum 3 Times, completed 2)
    Skill: Ninjutsu, Offensive
    Effect: Increases the speed in which the Slyph’s Orb travels by 1 meter/second.
    Special: Dedicated training in increasing the speed in which the Slyph’s Orb moves.
    Drawback: N/A
    Description: This special training method allows the user to increase the speed in which the Slyph’s Orb can move. This means that it stands a greater chance at striking the opponent who is attempting to dodge the attack. Each time this ability is trained, increase the speed in which the orb travels by 1 meter/second. This ability can only be learned a maximum of three (3) times.
    Limit: Must know the Slyph’s Orb.
    
  
  
  Fuuton Kaze no Senbon (Needles of the Wind)
  Rank: "D"
  Skill: NinJutsu
  Effect: User hurls a mixture of senbon needles in the form of wind to cut into the opponent.
  Special: "Handseals"
  Drawback: ---
  Description: The ninja gathers air with his hands and mixes it with chakra, by doing this he transforms them into sharp and deadly needles. The needles are almost invisible so it is hard for the enemies to see them. This technique may be blocked by large objects, however something small such as a sword, or a staff will allow the needles to seperate still moving towards the object it was originally sent to. Not a powerful technique as the user is capable of hurling up to ten senbon wind needles that gives out minor cuts. However this could be used as a more of a set up technique to allow the user to perform a more dangerous technique.
  Limit: Must have the Wind Release

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Releases:

• Wind Release-70 TP (freebie)
  
• Earth Release-0 TP (freebie)
  
• Sand Release-500 TP (freebie)
  
• Sadojin bloodline-30 TP
  

[Umehara]

Nice stuff. A few things stand out, though.

• I see that you don't have a primary weapon. Is that to say that you don't want to start out with one? It won't cost you anything to have one. You can find a list of Primary weapons here.
  
  EDIT: I see your primary weapon. It's the gourd. You just placed it in another spot than what is the usual. Gotcha. You're good on that note. ^_^
  
  
• You may have 15 Slots for Secondary Weapons. Currently, you have only taken 5. You can find the secondary weapons in the same link I provided above.
  
  
• Please bold the current rank you know of any technique that has multiple ranks.
  
  Example: "D

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[Ranzu]

I am fine with the five Kunai. Also fixed the jutsus. (This post is also in reserve now for later, heh.)

[Umehara]

Hmm. 16 and 6'3 is kinda out there for me, but to weigh 374 pounds naturally is too much, in my opinion. Can you lower that to something more feasible? I understand that you're composed of sand, but that's climbing into a sketchy area.

Looks like you have everything else. I'm pleased with the length of the Appearance, Personality, and History.

Once my suggestions have been taken into consideration, I'll accept.

[Ranzu]

Apr 4, 2013 17:05:47 GMT -7 Umehara said:

Hmm. 16 and 6'3 is kinda out there for me, but to weigh 374 pounds naturally is too much, in my opinion.

Sorry about that, in middle school I was hanging around someone who was 6' tall and knew another guy who weighed over two hundred pounds. While not normal, I did see some quick growth so they may have distorted my view somewhat. In revenge though, they did not grow much more in high school. Anyways, fixed.

[Umehara]

LOL. Noted. xD

1.3

[The Roar of the Falls]

Hmmm nice... 2/3

I will just 'point' thi sout, but its not irregular for people to seek out expensive starter weapons and secondaries, then turning around to sell them for the extra ryo

Friendly suggestion, you have my acceptance though, great job

[Ranzu]

My friend, Toge, just reminded me about the points given at last Christmas. I was going to make a character in November, but real life and some power outages wanted to make sure that I did not. But he says that I might still be eligible for the points. Is that true?

[The Roar of the Falls]

Yes. Your account existed before the tp was awarded

[Ranzu]

So, can I add them to my profile if it gets accepted, yes? Is that alright?

[The Roar of the Falls]

It is, have fun ^^

[Draven]

Add it now its 500TP into one mastery. Like it all goes into a release, like sand, or all into your BL techs...ect...

[Ranzu]

I think I did what you wanted me too. Still new to all this.

[The Roar of the Falls]

Ran, what he means is, go through the index and pick ONE thing you want to select 500 training points worth of techniques in.

As a D rank D rank techs cost 10 tp C rank cost 30 and B rank cost 80. GO WILD MAN

[Ranzu]

Now then, I have done that. Anything wrong with it now?

[Draven]

List your Freebies please, the Wind, Earth, and Sand releases

your 80 TP over so git rid of a B rank, or 2 C's with 2 D's

[Draven]

Looks good to me 1.3

[❥ cannibble]

2/3

[The Roar of the Falls]

3/3 Hope youre ready to have fun