Reniel Seitetsu

[Reniel]

Basic Information

Name: Reniel Seitetsu
Bloodlimit: N/A
Height: 5'9''
Weight: 150 lbs
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Alignment: True Neutral
Birth Country: Oto no Kuni
Village: Takigakure
Special:


Clan Specialist

Taijutsu Specialist

Ninjutsu Non-Specialist

Genjutsu Non-Specialist

Miscellaneous

Weapons

Primary Weapon:

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Rank: C
Type: Main, Piercing/Slashing, Sword
Effect: Swords that slash hack, dice and anything else within this genre that reaches a certain length.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A sword with a blade that ranges between 1 and a half feet to 3 feet. These swords can be any types such as the Short Sword, or the Tanto, Baselard, Cinquedea, Gladius, Kodachi, Xiphos or even the Mechete.
Limit: These types of weapons may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop
Cost: 2,000 Ryo
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Secondary Items:

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• Hira-Shuriken x 30 (2 Slot)
• Grenade: Smoke x 4 (4 Slots)
• Grenade: Incendiary x 4 (4 Slots)
• Kunai x 10 (5 Slots)
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Non-Weapon Items

Character Depth

Personality:

Work Hard, Play Hard

Just Five More Minutes Please...

Cake, Cake, Cake, Cake, Cake

Batting For Both Teams

Don't Judge A Book By Its Cover

That Short List Of Dislikes

Appearance:

Background:

Early Age

[/s] lifestyle so they weren't completely tied down to one country. So off they went in search of new beginnings. Reniel remembers bits of pieces of the journey from Oto no Kuni to Taki no Kuni, although nothing of substance. Just lots of grass, mountains, and wilderness. Nothing worth recalling but then again, those were some good times.

After settling down in Takigakure, the family started a new life. Reniel was starting to come of age where he learned the beginnings of the clan's jutsu, basic manipulation and whatnot. But as he grew older, a select group of people were always being praised and that was the ninja. Enamored with the idea of being praised for his talents, having his abilities tested, and doing something different every day, Reniel requested that he begin studying at the Academy in hopes of becoming someone well-respected. Talk about loving attention.
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Academy

[Reniel]

Seitetsu

Multi-Rank

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Koutetsu Katansei (Steel Malleability)
Rank: "D", "C", "B", "A", "S"
Skill: Clan Ninjutsu, Supplementary
Effect: This is the basis technique for conforming and manipulating the Steel within the body.
Special: Must have the same rank of this technique as the rank of Clan techniques that the user wishes to learn.
Drawback: Without this technique, the user is incapable of moving.
Description: A basic understanding of how to utilize chakra in a manner that allows it to seep into the user's steel body and change it. This is the primary basis of all techniques within the Clan, and as such it is a requirement to learn this technique to the same Rank of any Clan technique that the user wishes to obtain. An example would be, if the user wanted to learn a "C" Rank technique, they would need the "C" Rank of this technique. If they wanted to learn an "A" rank Clan technique, they would have to learn the "A" Rank of this technique first.
Limit: Must be a member of the Seitetsu Clan.


Karada Sumiyaka (Body Speed)
Rank: "D", "C", "B", "A", "S"
Skill: Supplementary
Effect: Allows the user to learn to move at speeds equivalent to their Difficulty Class.
Special: ---
Drawback: Must learn the technique for every rank of Koutetsu no Karada or else the user will suffer from movement penalties.
Description: This specialized form of training is given to those individuals within the Seitetsu Clan. Upon becoming an individual with the Steel Body technique, the user's own speeds will dramatically suffer. This training allows the user to act as if they were unaffected by the steel transitions within the body, allowing them to fight normally. Each Rank of this technique reduces the Difficulty Class Movement Penalty imposed by the Steel Body technique by one Difficulty Class, meaning that if the user only has the "D" Rank of this technique but switches to "B" Rank Steel Body, then they will have their movements reduced to the point that they would move as if they were two Difficulty Classes lower than they were, instead of three. If they have the "C" Rank Steel Body, then they will suffer only a singular class deduction with the "B" Rank Steel Body, and the "B" Rank of this technique would allow for no Difficulty Class Movement Penalty for the "B" Rank Steel Body.
Limit: Must have the corresponding rank of Koutetsu no Karada.


Koutetsu no Karada (Steel Body)
Rank: "D", "C", "B", "A", "S"
Skill: Ninjutsu, Supplementary in Weapon Form.
Effect: Determines the durability of the user's Steel Body.
Special: "Hand Seals", supplementary in Weapon Form.
Drawback: The more durable the body is, the less speed that the user has. The speed is of the user is reduced by one Difficulty Class from their current Difficulty Class for every Rank of the technique that the user has active. If at any point the user's Difficulty Class for movements reduces below "D" Rank, they will be considered to have zero movements per turn, unless they are performing the required handseals to obtain a lower Durability.
Description: The Koutestu no Karada, or the Steel Body, is the understanding of just how powerful the user's steel has become. The Steel of the body is capable of resisting up to one strike of the same Rank as it before becoming injured. This technique, while not in weapon form, can be modified around, due to the fact that the lower the ranking, the faster that the user is capable of moving with less training. When the user has transformed into Weapon Form, they will automatically take the highest rank of this ability in order to state their durability.
Limit: Must have Koutetsu Katansei of the same rank.


Koutetsu Seigo (Steel Conformity)
Rank: "D", "C", "B", "A", "S"
Skill: Supplementary
Effect: A basic understanding of the number of weapon-like modifications the user is capable of creating upon themselves at one time. Also denotes the amount of time it takes for the user to transform parts of their body into weaponry.
Special: ---
Drawback: Must be learned multiple times for the user to gain true power through the technique. The user is not capable of making specialized weaponry, like exploding notes or light bombs, only normal weapons.
Description: This ability is a way to gauge the number of weapon-like modifications that the user is capable of creating upon their body at once. The higher the Rank, the higher the number of modifications the user is capable of creating, as well as the larger the size. Beyond that, the higher the rank of this technique, the faster the user will be able to modify their body into different weaponry. Small weaponry is considered things like kunais/knives, shurikens, and makibishi. Medium weaponry is considered things like one-handed swords, small shields, drills, saws, etc. Large weaponry is considered things like two-handed swords,

"D" Rank- Allows for up to 5 different small-weapon modifications, or up to one medium-sized modifications. Takes 3 seconds for small weapons, six seconds for medium.
"C" Rank- Allows up to 10 small, or two medium sized modifications. Takes 2 seconds for small, five seconds for medium.
"B" Rank- Allows up to 15 small, three medium, or one large sized weapon. Takes 1 second for small, four seconds for medium, six seconds for large.
"A" Rank- Allows up to 20 small, four medium, or two large sized weapons. Small weapons are transformed instantly, medium sized takes three seconds, and large takes five seconds.
"S" Rank- Allows up to 25 small, five medium, three large, or one gargantuan weapons. Small and medium sized weapons are transformed instantly. Large sized weapons take three seconds to transform, and gargantuan weapons take six seconds to transform.


Bukitai no Jutsu (Weapon Form Technique)
Rank: "D", "C", "B", 'A", "S"
Skill: Ninjutsu, Supplementary
Effect: Allows the user the ability to utilize specific Bukitai techniques to shift their body into weaponry.
Special: Must have gained knowledge from the Koutetsu no Karada Ritual.
Drawback: Required to be learned before the user can perform any other Bukitai techniques.
Description: Bukitai no Jutsu is the basis of combining all the forms of knowledge gained from the Koutetsu no Karada Ritual. With this technique, the user will gain the capability of performing Bukitai (Weapon Form) techniques of the same rank of this technique. As the user gains more knowledge into this technique, they will be capable of performing stronger and stronger Bukitai techniques. At any point, the user is capable of returning their body to its' regular shape for a "D" Ranks worth of chakra.
Limit: Must have received the Koutetsu no Karada Ritual.

D-Rank

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Bukitai: Naifu (Weapon Form: Knife)
Rank: "D" Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Allows the user to transform parts of his or her body into knife-type weapons.
Special: "Hand Seals"
Drawback: The size of the knives must conform to the "Knife" type Weapon Overview. The user's transformation strength is dependent upon their rank of Koutetsu no Karada, Koutetsu Katansei, and Koutestu Seigo.
Description: The first of the Bukitai, or Weapon Form, techniques that is usually learned. Naifu, or Knife, allows the user to transform a part, or parts, of his or her body into a weapon that fits that "Knife" Weapon Overview. A common manipulation of this technique allows the user to turn all of his or her fingers into knives and attack with the fingers becoming sharp claws. Another manipulation of this technique would be to use Steel Genesis and Steel Release to fire off a barrage of Kunai from the user's fingers towards the opponent. These are considered 'small' transformations.
Limit: Must have had the Koutetsu no Karada Ritual performed upon the body.

Koutetsu Jomei (Steel Expulsion)
Rank: "D" Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Allows the user to release pieces of steel from their flesh, turning it into a projectile weapon.
Special: "Hand Seals"
Drawback: Needs to be used in conjunction with Weapon Forms.
Description: With this ability, the user becomes capable of utilizing the combination of Steel Genesis and Steel Release, as well as other Weapon Form techniques, to create a barrage of secondary weaponry to attack an opponent. The speed that the technique releases Steel from the body would be equivalent to the user's normal throwing speeds.
Limit: Must be a member of the Seitetsu Clan, must have had the Koutestu no Karada Ritual.

C-Rank

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Koutetsu no Karada
Rank: "C" Rank
Effects: Allows the user's body to transition into solely become steel, with the exception of the vital organs.
Special: The user must obtain an amount of steel equivalent to their body weight. Must find someone of the Seitetsu Clan willing to cast the ritual on your body.
Description: Koutetsu no Karada, or the "Body of Steel", is a ritual that is cast and given to the individuals of the Seitetsu Clan. The ritual is a long and painful one, with the transition of the human body's living membrane into that of a form of 'living steel', which is bendable and malleable as the user wishes it to become. The internal organs of the heart, lungs, liver, kidneys, and brain are unaffected by the technique, and a special series of internal receptors and vessels replaces the old ones, that are capable of, with the combination of the user's chakra circulatory system, treat the body of steel as if it were a regular human body. The user becomes capable of hardening and softening the Steel of his body to his or her whim, and even manipulating the shape of their body so that they can turn certain parts of their body into weapons or, even their whole body into a weapon for another person to wield. A special Miscellaneous Slot has also been created for those of this clan and the allies of this clan, which, through training, allow the user and the his ally to communicate on instinctual levels while the user is transformed into other weapons, highly increasing their fighting capabilities.
Drawback: The user is incapable of moving until they learn Koutetsu Katansei. The user becomes highly susceptible to Raiton-based techniques, taking additional damage from them (+1 Rank). The user will move slower than the average shinobi until they learn Karada Sumiyaka.

[Reniel]

Gintsuki no Seikou Mai

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Stances

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Hyouuryuu Yuki (Drifting Snow)
Rank:E
Skill:Taijutsu
Effect: The user assumes the main stance of the Hyouuryuu Yuki no You.
Special: --
Drawback: --
Description: The user spreads their legs to shoulder width, their main-foot facing forward and their off-foot facing at a right angle to the main-foot. The torso faces the diagonal in between the two feet. The knees are bent to allow quick motion with short steps in either direction. The user holds their main-hand forward, with the elbow bent and the knuckles facing forward. The off-hand comes close to the chest, with the elbow bent and knuckles facing forward. The user’s head faces the direction of the main-foot. This stance allows for quick motions back and forth.
Limit: Must learn from a Gintsuki no Seikou Mai Master.

D-Rank

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C-Rank

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[Reniel]

Bokushingu

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Stances

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D-Rank

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C-Rank

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[Reniel]

Wakizashi Kagame

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Stances

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D-Rank

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C-Rank

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[Reniel]

Kamashi "Death Scythe Style

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Stances

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D-Rank

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C-Rank

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[Reniel]

Katon

Release

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Katon no Jutsu (Fire Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Fire. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Fire Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

D-Rank

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C-Rank

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Fuuton

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Release

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Fuuton no Jutsu (Wind Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Wind. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Wind Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

D-Rank

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C-Rank

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[Reniel]

Ototon

Release

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Oto no Jutsu (Sound Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Sound. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Sound Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

D-Rank

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C-Rank

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[rabble']

You need a weight.

You need to put (future) next to ANBU.

You still have three freebies available, which are taijutsu stances or genjutsu perceptions or ninjutsu releases.

[Reniel]

1) Can't believe I forgot to fill that one out -.-

2) Done

3) Don't my choices of Katon, Fuuton, and Ototon count as my freebies? Or should I actually post the releases under their appropriate section?

Edit: I wrote freebie next to the releases. Hopefully that cleared it up.

[rabble']

You also need to post the overview for each release.

[Reniel]

Fixed.

[Holy Grail]

Appearance, add a few more lines to it, your short of the min of 3 paragraphs of 5 full lines each.

Seitetsu, now, since you took the ritual for it, you need the following four techs, three of which you do have, but as follows Body Speed, Steel Malleability, Steel Conformity, Steel Body. You need to remove Steel Genesis as it is not the one that you have to start with and put in the Steel Body in its place, please fix this~

[Reniel]

1) Added more description

2) Fixed the mistake; replaced Steel Genesis with Steel Body

[|Ayame Unbound|]

Gintsuki approved

[The Roar of the Falls]

Looks good :3 1/3

[|Ayame Unbound|]

2/3

[Mist]

3/3