Ookami Zen (DONE)

[Ookami Zen]

Basic Information

Ookami Zen
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No Bloodline
Male
5'11
210 lbs
16 Year of age

Chaotic, Good
Taki-No-Kuni
Hidden Waterfall 
Genin

Taijutsu Master

Traits

Armed Together 

Rank: "C" 

Skill: Teamwork Trait 

Effect: User and an ally with this trait think the same way in battle. 

Special: --- 

Drawback: --- 

Description: User and an ally with this trait think the same way in battle. The both have fought together for a while and can guess what the other is thinking and reacts as one. Once per day, the user may choose to act on the ally's base movements for 1 round. This does not replace the user's original movements. This trait replaces 1 Freebies. 

Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies. 


Dismantle Order
Rank: "C"
Skill: Social Trait
Effect: Must be Chaotic: Through the code of freedom the user has learned to detect those that support law with ease.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: If the user follows this code, their appreciation for unfettered social freedom allows them to locate supporters of law with supernatural ease. User can use Detect Law. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

B.I.N.G.O. Agent
Rank: "C"
Skill: Regional Trait
Effect: User spent a portion of their childhood working for the B.I.N.G.O.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: You spent a portion of your childhood working for the B.I.N.G.O. User has quite a bit more spending cash than most others of their age as a result, and start with x2 the normal amount of starting gold. In addition, their reputation remains strong and any transactions they make in their home city are always beneficial to the user; items they sell net them an additional 10% profit, and items they purchase there are 10% cheaper than normal. This discount also applies to your starting gear. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.


Natural Drunkard
Rank: "C"
Skill: Trait
Effect: The moment alcohol touches the drinker's lips they instantly go under the effects of "Hammered".
Special: ---
Drawback: Unable to learn endurance techniques dealing with drinking Alcohol.
Description: The moment alcohol touches the drinker's lips they instantly go under the effects of "Hammered" gaining the benefits as well as the drawbacks of the effect. The user does not fall out of "Hammered" unless they fall unconscious from taking a series of too many blunt hits. The effects last for 1 hour in which they instantly sober up. The user can instantly fall out of the "Hammered" effect by taking "slashing", and "piercing" damage. The user stays in the effect of "Hammered" through elemental and chakra attacks as long as the effects of the damage does not include "slashing", or "piercing damage.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

Inventory
Main

• Polearm x2: Quadrastaff - Glaive

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Polearm (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Piercing, Staff/Spear
Effect: A close combat weapon in which the main fighting part of the weapon is fitted to the end of a long shaft.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Two-Handed Weapon. These weapons do +10 Amour Points of Damage. A large weapon normally longer than 1.2 m (4 feet). These weapons are only suitable for melee combat and cannot be used for ranged combat. Examples of a Polearm: Nagamaki, Naginata, Quarterstaff, and Glaive. If the user learns Wield Oversized Weapon the user is able to wield the weapon 1-handed.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 8,000 Ryo

Secondary

Scroll - Tiny (Contains both main weapons)

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Scroll: Tiny (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Secondary, 1 per Slot, Book, Scroll
Effect: A roll of parchment or paper for writing or painting on. This scroll has a 10 Capacity.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A scroll is a heavy sheet of fine vellum or high-quality paper. The sheet is reinforced at the top and bottom with strips of leather slightly longer than the sheet is wide. Scrolls are usually fitted with reinforcing rods at each end rather than simple strips of leather. To protect it from wrinkling or tearing, a scroll is rolled up from both ends to form a double cylinder. (This also helps the user unroll the scroll quickly.) The scroll is placed in a tube of ivory, jade, leather, metal, or wood. Most scroll cases are inscribed with Seals which often identify the owner or the Jutsus stored on the scrolls inside. The Seals sometimes hide traps. The Center Rod of a Small Scroll 8 inches in length while it is 1.8 inch in diameter; the paper is 0.436 millimeters thick making the roll 10 feet of paper an outer diameter of 2.5 inches.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Book Shop.
Cost: 1,250 Ryo

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Scroll: Map: Local
Rank: "B"
Type: Secondary, 1 per Slot, Scroll, Map
Effect: A city map is a large-scale thematic map of a city (or part of a city) created to enable the fastest possible orientation in an urban space.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Local; nearby landmarks. Local Map's dimensions are 40 inches by 24 inches. City Maps list Major, and Minor Roads of that city. City Maps list Point of Interests in City. City Maps list the Buildings of the City. City Maps list Major and Minor Trade Routes, and Regions that reside in the City. City Maps lists the Oceans, Bays, Major and Minor Lakes, and Major and Minor Rivers that reside in the City. The Maps may be folded and can fit inside Map Holders found in Vests.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Book Shop within that City.
Cost: 3,000 Ryo Each

Scroll: Map: Regional
Rank: "A"
Type: Secondary, 1 per Slot, Scroll, Map
Effect: A small-scale map of an area covering at least 5 or 10 degrees of latitude and longitude but less than a hemisphere.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Regional; nearby towns, cities, etc. Regional Map's dimensions are 40 inches by 24 inches. Regional Maps list the City Capitals, and "D", "C", "B", "A", and "S" Rank Cities of the Regional. Hidden Villages may only be listed in Regional Maps. Regional Maps list Point of Interests in Regional. Regional Maps list Major and Minor Trade Routes, and Regions that reside in the Regional. Regional Maps lists the Oceans, Bays, Major and Minor Lakes, and Major and Minor Rivers that reside in the Regional. The Maps may be folded and can fit inside Map Holders found in Vests.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Book Shop within that Regional.
Cost: 5,000 Ryo Each

Scroll: Map: National
Rank: "B"
Type: Secondary, 1 per Slot, Scroll, Map
Effect: A map of a specific Nation (Country).
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: National; entire kingdom. National Map's dimensions are 40 inches by 24 inches. National Maps list the City Capitals, and "B", "A", and "S" Rank Cities of the Nation. National Maps list Major Trade Routes, Regional Locations, and Regions that reside in the Nation. National Maps lists the Oceans, Bays, Major and Minor Lakes, and Major Rivers that reside in the Nation. The Maps may be folded and can fit inside Map Holders found in Vests.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Book Shop within that Nation.
Cost: 4,000 Ryo Each

Scroll: Map: Continent
Rank: "B"
Type: Secondary, 1 per Slot, Scroll, Map
Effect: A map of any of the world's main continuous expanses of land.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Continent; entire continent. Continent Map's dimensions are 40 inches by 24 inches. Continent Maps list the Nations, City Capitals, and "A", "S" Rank Cities of those Nations that reside within the Continent. The Continent Map also states the Oceans, Bays, Major Lakes and Near By Islands associated to the Continent. The Maps may be folded and can fit inside Map Holders found in Vests.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Book Shop within that Continent.
Cost: 3,000 Ryo Each

Scroll: Map: Known World
Rank: "B"
Type: Secondary, 1 per Slot, Scroll, Map
Effect: A map of any of the world's main continuous expanses of land.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Known World; entire Known World. Known World Map's dimensions are 40 inches by 24 inches. Known World Maps list the Continents, Nations, and City Capitals, of those Nations that reside within the Known World. The Known World Map also states the Oceans, Bays, and Near By Islands associated to the Known World. The Maps may be folded and can fit inside Map Holders found in Vests.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Book Shop.
Cost: 3,000 Ryo Each

**Taking the village incentive

[Ookami Zen]

In Depth info.

Apperance

Standing significally taller than most, this induvidual is easy to notice. His long blonde hair defines him best of all. The sun reflects in his golden locks. His green eyes show kindness and compassion for all - soft and kind unlike the enviorment in which he grew up. Veil is rarely seen frowning, which is why no one could really say he has a different expression than a soft one on his oval face.

His body is built in a very athletic manner. Rather than building mass or muscles, Veil focused mainly on his speed and flexebility, going for a more of a free spirit kind of body - which allows him to use various styles of combat, and easily transition from one to another, since mostly, he would be agile and very light on his feet, thus making any movement an easy one. With his feminine figure, it's easy to mistake him for less strong than most, while in reality his technique and hip movement, along with his flexibility makes up for what he misses in muscles.

As far as attires go, Veil is a free spirit, wearing clothes that are comfortable. Baggy pants and a kimono, that usually slides down, leaving him in his undershirt, revealing his athletic features to the world. Noticible earing or piercings are on his ears - having each one pierced and a few other holes to put in some fun shapes he finds interesting, with that he has his bottom lip pierced as well - usually connecting his ear piercing with his lips with a chain of sorts. No tattoos nor any distinguishing scars as of yet. When dressing, he picks out the first thing he sees in the morning, going on randomally dressing in random kimonos - they're easy to put on and take off.

Personality

Growing up somewhat of a nuisance, Kami had a little bit too much of a free spirit. He disliked anything that could chain him down and make him settle. He always wanted to travel and wonder around the world. Freedom is the only idea that kept with him through his childhood and to his adulthood - turning him in a person who loved nothing more than the outside world, and with a smile on his face, he always loves to go out and enjoy nature.

Since he dislikes anything that ties him down, he was forced by his parents to go study martial arts, to perhaps teach him to respect others. He didn't like it at first since it was limiting his freedom, but soon grew to love it since it didn't limit him but rather taught him valubale lessons about freedom. Studiying the philosophy of martial arts, Kami learned that being free meant going with his own truth to the end. Which is why he keeps his kindness at all times.

Although kind and loving, he loves gloating and enjoying his victory. It gives him a special feeling. He would even handicap himself when facing an opponent just to be able to enjoy the victory even more - after all, freedom is about laughing and having fun, and he couldn't have more fun than winning in battle. He loves it enough to keep a smile on his face during every second of the fight - even when losing. As long as he fights - he's free.

Adding to his free spirit is his unpredictable trail of thought. No one knows what he may be thinking, no one knows what he'd say. No one knows what will be his next action, which is why everyone can count on him to always surprise and say some eandom comment about something no one could even relate to the subject. One could even say a logical trail of thought wasn't his strength.

Background

Born to Taki, Kami was always drawn outside. Going out to play up late or trying to sneak out of the village always got him into trouble. Be it with the guards at the gate who grew frustrated with him or the older kids who always caught him running about and ruining their palns. It was only natural for people to begin talking and try to come up with a plan to subdue the beast and tame him. Perhaps even work on his free spirit sort of nature in a way that would benefit them all.

The guards at the gate decided that perhaps he could grow to become a ninja for the village - which will allow him to both travell like he wanted and also help the village out by doing all sorts of missions. That however didn't play out so well because his parents did not want to pay for the academy, but only wished to keep him close to home - probably the reason he was so keen to travel and see the world.

Since no one would pay for his academy lessons, a good man decided to set him up with a job that would help him both earn some money and learn about the outside world. Giving him the opportunity to become a B.I.N.G.O. agent allowed Kami both to earn some money and a name for himself. It also provided some opportunities to travel sometimes. With the promise his academy training would allow him to travell more, the village was able to deal with the little trouble maker for a while and Kami was satisfied with his travells.

The boy's parents however did not like the idea of their son moving out and becoming a ninja. This was why they suggested a different idea - trying to teach him something else, trying to calm his spirit and let him learn how to calm himself. What started out as an annoying activity for the boy, turned into something more. While at first, thinking the martial arts lessons he was taught were annoying, Kami grew to find it liberating, since he could lose himself in a fight and enjoy it very much - which only fed the passion to become a shinobi and travel the world some more.

During his martial arts training, Kami was introduced to a style that one would think most fit to a random person such as himself. The drunkard boxing style was something Kami realy enjoyed and actually took naturally to it once implimenting his own character into the style, going randomly with his attacks, yet never really understanding how to have this randomness implimented with strong attacks while moving so fluently. Of course, it all changed once he actually got drunk.

During one of his days Kami encountered one of the guards who used to bring him home to his parents. Since the boy was soon to be aged 16, the guard thought it would be not too bad to buy him a drink and sit with him. However, once Kami tasted the liquer, he got fuzzy. He couldn't walk straight and he couldn't keep himself out, always craving another drink. The feeling of being drunk was new and exciting, and once someone tried to take away his drink, his body moved naturally to get the person away, using the same techniques he had learned before. 

Luckily enough, he had learned of this and realized what a damaging effect it might have and decided to practice drunkard boxing alone, without liquer and without anyone around - teach the art himself and perhaps that way turn into a powerful weapon or maybe get himself under control in order not to attack allies. 

Once he finally joined the academy, he was blended in with everyone. Not too noticible, only a kid with an exceptional love for fighting. His chakra manipulatin was a joke, and all he could really do was fight his heart out. So naturally it took him a while before he graduated and joined a 3 man team with two others who seemed to hate one another - leaving him to be the one who would always try to being them together and have a good team effort. Maybe he'd even make them like one another? Who knows...

[Ookami Zen]

Universal

[Ookami Zen]

Zui Ba Xian Quan (Drunkard Boxing)

55 TP
Stances

• Bēizi Quán
  Rank: "E"
  Skill: TaiJutsu
  Effect: Basic stance where user stumbles around while mimicking they are holding a cup.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: This puts the character’s hand in a good position for blocking and striking, keeping the hands and arms of the user ready for a wide variety of techniques, and makes the shoulders ready for explosive movements. The wrist is in a position where it can easily strike or block, and the fingers are curled in with the index finger hooked out, which helps in trapping an opponent's arms while blocking. The arms can be used for short or long range techniques, as well as the elbows, combined with various feints and strikes.
  Limit: Must learn from a Zui Ba Xian Quan Master, or be a Natural Drunkard Boxer. Must know Bēizi Quán.
  
  
• Dokuritsu-Ho
  Rank: "E"
  Skill: TaiJutsu
  Effect: User holds their knee close to their chest while 1 hand is above their head and the other is next to their knee.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: This stance has the user holding their knee close to their chest while one hand is above the head and the other is next to their knee. This stance has 0 movement, as in the user cannot move while in this position. Also the move set within this stance is limited.
  Limit: Must learn from a Zui Ba Xian Quan Master, or be a Natural Drunkard Boxer.
  
  
• Haisei
  Rank: "E"
  Skill: TaiJutsu
  Effect: The user faces their back towards their opponent.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: The user faces their back toward the opponent. The user will tend to use this technique quite a bit because a lot of techniques ends in this stance. The user performs Bēizi Quán however is facing away from the opponent.
  Limit: Must learn from a Zui Ba Xian Quan Master, or be a Natural Drunkard Boxer. Must know Bēizi Quán.
  
  
• Kokoto
  Rank: "E"
  Skill: TaiJutsu
  Effect: The user lays on the ground, feet towards the opponent.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: This stance has the user laying on the ground on their side, the advantages of this stance are that most high attacks completely go over them and a lot of the time opponents walk unguarded to the user, the disadvantages is that the user has little movement and the move set is pretty small. When learned the user also knows Nehan-Tenshin, which is the ability to enter in Kokoto after being knocked to the ground, thus suffering less damage.
  Limit: Must learn from a Zui Ba Xian Quan Master, or be a Natural Drunkard Boxer.
  
  
• Kozento
  Rank: "E"
  Skill: TaiJutsu
  Effect: The user lays on the ground, head towards the opponent.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: This stance has the user laying on the ground on their side, the advantages of this stance are that most high attacks completely go over them and a lot of the time opponents walk unguarded to the user, the disadvantages is that the user has little movement and the move set is pretty small. When learned the user also knows Nehan-Tenshin, which is the ability to enter in Kozento after being knocked to the ground, thus suffering less damage.
  Limit: Must learn from a Zui Ba Xian Quan Master, or be a Natural Drunkard Boxer.
  

Techniques

• Tenshin-Chu
  Rank: "C"
  Skill: TaiJutsu
  Effect: User punches their opponent twice, then elbows the opponent, turning around in the process.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: A basic combo that must be carefully used as it is often predictable. User strikes against the opponent's mid-section with a left punch, and then a right punch in a drunkard fashion before bringing up their left elbow up against the opponent's chin giving a full turn as they enter into Haisei. The first 2 punches are normally performed as the user moves forward after taking a sip of drink.
  Limit: Must learn from a Zui Ba Xian Quan Master, or be a Natural Drunkard Boxer. Must know Bēizi Quán. Must know Haisei.
  
  
• Niki-Kyaku
  Rank: "D"
  Skill: TaiJutsu
  Effect: A double hop-kick. Ends in Dokuritsu-Ho
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: The user hops up in the air with their right leg while aiming their left foot to the opponent's chin. The user lands on their left leg as they stand in Dokuritsu-Ho.
  Limit: Must learn from a Zui Ba Xian Quan Master, or be a Natural Drunkard Boxer. Must know Bēizi Quán. Must know Dokuritsu-Ho.
  
  
• Koten
  Rank: "E"
  Skill: TaiJutsu
  Effect: The user rolls to their feet. Rolls away from the opponent.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: A technique to move away from an opponent and create distance between the 2. A technique used to evade attacks as well while in Kokoto or Kozento. Laying in Kokoto position or Kozento position the user pushes their legs up and back in order to roll over their shoulder backwards while ending in Bēizi Quán (Must know Bēizi Quán with Kokoto) or Haisei. If performed while in Kozento the user ends up in Haisei (Must know Haisei).
  Limit: Must learn from a Zui Ba Xian Quan Master, or be a Natural Drunkard Boxer. Must know Kokoto and/or Kozento.
  
  
• Zenten
  
  Rank: "E"
  
  Skill: TaiJutsu
  
  Effect: The user rolls to their feet. Rolls towards the opponent.
  
  Special: ---
  
  Drawback: ---
  
  Description: Laying in the Kokoto position or Kozento position the user pushes forward and rolls over their shoulder toward the opponent while ending in Bēizi Quán (Must know Bēizi Quán with Kokoto) or Haisei. This technique is used to shorten distance from the user and the opponent. If performed while in Kozento the user ends up in Haisei (Must know Haisei).
  
  Limit: Must learn from a Zui Ba Xian Quan Master, or be a Natural Drunkard Boxer. Must know Kokoto and/or Kozento.
  

[Ookami Zen]

Krav Maga

Stances

• Neutral or Passive Stance //Freebie
  Rank: "E"
  Skill: TaiJutsu
  Effect: The Neutral, or Passive, stance is your natural, unprepared position.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: It is extremely useful for all aspects of training, considering that, on the street, you will most likely need to perform combatives and self-defense techniques without any preparation. Be sure to train from this position at least part of the time when working on combatives, and at all times when practicing self-defense techniques. The Stance: Stand with your feet about hip-width apart (or less), with your arms hanging to the sides.
  Limit: Must learn from a Master of Krav Maga.
  
  
• Fighting Stance  //Freebie
  Rank: "E"
  Skill: TaiJutsu
  Effect: Take this stance when preparing for confrontation. The description assumes you are right handed; if you are left-handed, simply substitute "right" for "left"
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: Stand with your feet high-width apart and take a comfortable step forward with your left foot. Keep your weight on the balls of your feet. The Toes of both feet should generally point forward, but the forward foot may turn slightly inward for better balance. Keep your hands relaxed, hold them above your chin height and a comfortable distance away from the face. Make sure your elbows are in and fairly close to your body, and your shoulders are relatively squared to an opponent.
  Limit: Must learn from a Master of Krav Maga.
  
  
• Moving in Fighting Stance
  Rank: "E"
  Skill: TaiJutsu
  Effect: Basic principle of movement while in a fighting stance is to start with the forward foot while pushing off with the rear foot, then close the step so you end up in the original stance.
  Special: ---
  Drawback: ---
  Description: Staring Position Left-leg-forward fighting stance. To Advance: Move your left foot forward while pushing off with your right, then bring your right foot forward to return to keep a stable fighting stance. Keep your weight evenly over both feet (more on the balls of your feet than on your toes); don't lean forward as you advance. To go to the right: Move your right foot out pushing off with your left, then bring your left foot in so you return to a stable fighting stance. To go to the left: Move your left foot out, pushing off with your right, then bring your right foot in to return to a stable fighting stance. To retreat Move your right foot back, pushing off with your left, then bring your left foot back, returning to a stable fighting stance.
  Limit: Must learn from a Master of Krav Maga.
  

[Ookami Zen]

Musha Shukke Fuu (The Warrior Monk's Way)

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[The Roar of the Falls]

Most everything checks out.

Would you mind adding line or two to your appearance paragraphs, thicken them up just a teensy bit, your freebies check out, you only have 4 techniques. You are allowed 5 if you wish to uh, use it up.

You also have a good bit of allowance left for secondaries if your wish to have them.

[Ookami Zen]

DONE!
One question though - The 5 missions, I just put them in my profile once I get approved? I understood that correctly, yes?

[The Roar of the Falls]

Yes between D and C ranked mission.

My approval stands, addition of items and the jutsu.

1/3

[Father 'Suke]

Alrighty, here's my 2/3. Enjoy

[Captain M]

3/3