~Jouki Kazeraikou~ (Revamp)

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Basic Information

Name: Jouki Kazeraikou
Bloodlimit: Ryuugan
Clan: Kazeraikou
Height: 5’ 7”
Weight: 135 LBS
Age: 14
Gender: M
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Birth Country: Umi No Kuni
Village: Kika Island Village (Non Ninja Village)

Special

Mastery:

GenJutsu Specialist

Able to go into 6 Perceptions, May Master 4 of the 6 Perceptions.
Perceptions not mastering user may only go into it for 300 Training Points.
May use 250 Training Points into Universal GenJutsu.
        -Genjutsu
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TaiJutsu Specialist

Able to go into 6 Fighting Styles, May Master 4 of the 6 Fighting Styles.
Fighting Styles not mastering user may only go into it for 300 Training Points.
May use 250 Training Points into Universal TaiJutsu.
        -Taijutsu
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Clan Non-Specialist

Able to go into 4 Clans, May Master 2 of the 4 Clans.
Clans not mastering user may only go into it for 250 Training Points.
May use 100 Training Points into Universal NinJutsu, GenJutsu, or TaiJutsu.
        -Kazeraikou
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NinJutsu Non-Specialist

Able to go into 4 Releases, May Master 2 of the 4 Releases.
Releases not mastering user may only go into it for 250 Training Points.
May use 100 Training Points into Universal NinJutsu.
        -Suiton (Mastering)
        -Fuuton
        -Raiton
        -Katon (Future) (Mastering)

Miscellaneous:

• Ritualist [Augmentation]
• Miscellaneous Slot
• Miscellaneous Slot
• Miscellaneous Slot
• Miscellaneous Slot
• Miscellaneous Slot
• Miscellaneous Slot
• Miscellaneous Slot

Weapons

Primary Weapons:

• Claw (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Piercing/Slashing, Claw
Effect: Claws attached to Gauntlets to add slashing or piercing damage.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +4 Amour Points of Damage. A weapon that either gives claws to a gauntlet, or a blade(s) are attached to a horizontal handle that projects out from the fist when held. These weapons allow the wielder to hold things in their hand while using a Clawed weapon, however the user cannot use the claw and a weapon in the same hand at the same time to attack. Since these weapons are basically variants of Gauntlets they cannot be disarmed unless they are removed from the user's hand. Examples of Claw Weapons: Bagh nah, Katara, Pata, Push Dagger, Roman Scissors, Tekko, Claws, and Tekagi-shuko.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 3,000 Ryo Each
Buying: Two

• Greaves (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Bludgeoning/Piercing/Slashing, Greaves
Effect: A defensive and offensive armour used as a weapon or protection for the user's legs.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +3 Amour Points of Damage. Metal or armoured leg protectors that allow the user to deal lethal damage with their legs as unarmed strikes. A strike with a greave is otherwise considered an unarmed attack. The opponent cannot use a disarm action to disarm a user with greaves on unless they remove the greaves completely.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 2,500 Ryo Each
Buying: Two

Secondary Weapons:

Shuriken, Hira (Overview)
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: Secondary, 15 per Slot, Piercing, Shuriken
Effect: A shuriken is a small piece of metal with sharpened edges, designed for throwing.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +2 Amour Points of Damage. The Range Increment of this weapon is 5 meters. Although they are thrown weapons, shuriken are quick and easy to draw, thus allowing the user to draw such weapons without the need of a movement. A shuriken can't be used as a melee weapon. Hira-shuriken are constructed from thin, flat plates of metal and generally resemble popular conceptions of shuriken.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,500 Ryo Per Slot or 100 Ryo Each
Owned: 4 Slots and 9 Remainder

Kunai (Overview)
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: Secondary, 2 per Slot, Piercing/Slashing, Knife
Effect: A kunai is a tool derived from the masonry trowel.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +4 Amour Points of Damage. The Range Increment of this weapon is 5 meters. A kunai has a blade that is about less than 1 foot in length. The user gains a +10 bonus on Sleight of Hand Skill to conceal a knife on their body.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,000 Ryo Per Slot or 500 Ryo Each
Buying: One Slot

Non-Weapon Items

Flint (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Secondary, 20 per Slot, Gadget, Survival, Tool
Effect: A rock device created to use as a source for creating a spark.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture Flint is a hard, sedimentary cryptocrystalline form of the mineral quartz, categorized as a variety of chert. It occurs chiefly as nodules and masses in sedimentary rocks, such as chalks and limestones. Inside the nodule, flint is usually dark grey, black, green, white, or brown in colour, and often has a glassy or waxy appearance. A thin layer on the outside of the nodules is usually different in colour, typically white and rough in texture. Scrape tool with any knife (or sharp object, like a rock) to create small magnesium shavings. Ignite shavings with built-in sparking insert. Start hundreds of fires with a flame source of 5,400°F. Safe; fireproof in solid form. Carry in a pocket or attach to bag with included chain loop. It's measurements is 3 inches by 1 inch by 0.5 inches and weighs 1.4 ounces.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Gadget Shop.
Cost: 2,000 Ryo Per Slot or 100 Ryo Each
Buying: One Slot

Compass Prismatic (Overview)
Rank: "B"
Type: Secondary, 6 per Slot, Gadget, Survival, Compass
Effect: A hand compass used by surveyors which is equipped with a prism that allows the compass to be read while the site is being taken.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture The prismatic compass is a sophisticated device designed for highly accurate navigation. The prism sighting arrangement allows the user to read the compass bearings while sighting distant objects. The dimensions of the Prismatic Compass is 2.12 inches by 2.12598 inches with a depth of 1.25 inches. Without a Compass there is a percentile chance the user will not be able to determine True North depending on their Geographical location.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Gadget Shop.
Cost: 6,000 Ryo per Slot, or 1,000 Ryo Each (Bought in Character) (1 Compass)

Gas Mask Filter: E
Rank: "S"
Type: Secondary, 1 per Slot, Gadget, Survival, Filter
Effect: Gas mask filters are used to remove poisonous chemicals and deadly bacteria in the air when breathing in.
Special: ---
Drawback: Once the filter has been saturated with hazardous chemicals, it ceases to provide protection and the user may be injured.
Description: Picture This gas mask filter stops gas particles of Nearly Impossible Value. Mask Filters have a diameter of 2.5 inches and a height of 4.3 inches while weighing 0.7 lbs. This filter allows the user to stay submerged in water and breathe normally as if they were breathing air. Listed below states how strong the filter is and how well it goes against airborne Pathogens.
• Conventional Usages - Lifespan of filter for conventional breathing is 16 hours.
• Common Airborne Pathogens - Every minute breathing in Common Airborne Pathogens takes away 15 minutes of the Conventional Usages (Lasts 64 Minutes).
• Un-Common Airborne Pathogens - Every minute breathing in Un-Common Airborne Pathogens takes away 20 minutes of the Conventional Usages (Lasts 48 Minutes).
• Rare Airborne Pathogens - Every minute breathing in Rare Airborne Pathogens takes away 25 minutes of the Conventional Usages (Lasts 38.4 Minutes).
• Very Rare Airborne Pathogens - Every minute breathing in Very Rare Airborne Pathogens takes away 30 minutes of the Conventional Usages (Lasts 32 Minutes).
• Nearly Impossible Airborne Pathogens - Every minute breathing in Nearly Impossible Airborne Pathogens takes away 40 minutes of the Conventional Usages (Lasts 24 Minutes).
• Water Breathing Capability - Every minute breathing in water takes away 30 minutes of the Conventional Usages (Lasts 32 Minutes).

Limit: These items may be bought inside any Gadget Shop.
Cost: 8,000 Ryo

Scroll: Map: Known World
Rank: "B"
Type: Main, Book, Scroll, Map
Effect: A map of any of the world's main continuous expanses of land.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Known World; entire Known World. Known World Map's dimensions are 40 inches by 24 inches. Known World Maps list the Continents, Nations, and City Capitals, of those Nations that reside within the Known World. The Known World Map also states the Oceans, Bays, and Near By Islands associated to the Known World. The Maps may be folded and can fit inside Map Holders found in Vests.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Book Shop.
Cost: 3,000 Ryo Each (Good Quality - No Price Mod) (Bought In Character)

Utility Belt Type 2 (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Tailor, Slot Holder, Holds 15 Slots (0 for Items of Scroll Length), Harness
Effect: A Belt comprised with multiple vertical clips attached to a belt for easy access and easy removal.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture, Picture Composed of a Kevlar strap and metal buckle, lined with rubber lacing on the back, the utility belt houses 13 Single Speed Loader pouches, which vertically clip onto the outside of the belt. The buckle itself contains a miniature camera and two-way radio. A secondary compartment behind the length of the belt is used to house 1 slot supply of hira-shurikens. Near the buckle is a modified Speed Loader Pouch that holds 1 slot of Thermal Capsules. The Speed Loader is modified to always keep a Thermal Capsule ready and when one is used another comes in place. Each of the 13 Speed Loader pouches contains various tools integral to what would be needed for the mission ahead, and are interchangeable with other Speed Loader pouches depending on the needs for the mission.
Limit: These type of items may be bought inside any Tailor Shop.

Character Depth

Personality:

Adventurous. Jouki has always enjoyed traveling. His family traveled often as his parents were both guards for the Umi No Kuni Daimyo. Jouki insisted that his parents allow him to accompany them, so they taught him a few basic ninja skills at a young age and the daimyo allowed it. Even so, on the treks that the young shinobi journeyed he was never satisfied in his hunger to discover more of the world.

Ardent. When there is something that Jouki enjoys, he'll pour his heart and soul into it. He finished an entire series of Shojo Manga in a day once. You could easily say he's a fanatic. Binging is not an uncommon sight of those closes to him. In the most extreme cases, Jouki will spend days at a time on one thing, only stopping for brief periods of time to exercise and eat. Immediately after the essentials for survival are finished, he'll hole himself back up.

Independent. As much as he loved his family and his home, Jouki refused to be tied down unless he wanted to. If someone gave him an order without making it seem like it was his own decision, they could be certain that the boy would refuse. Eventually, his parents caught on to this and from that moment on spent time carefully planning how to ask their son for his help. When in training at Umi No Kune, Jouki spent most of his time refusing to do as his instructors asked. Even so, his instructor took a long while to catch on.

Observant. Throughout his childhood, even though he never awakened the Ryuugan, Jouki made a game of closing his eyes randomly and trying to recreate a situation in his head. It was a simple pleasure, yet a great one. Jouki would never admit he wanted to be a shinobi when he was growing up, but he constantly replayed situations in his head and tried to remember exactly what was going on around him without the use of his senses. Often having to stop randomly and wait for Jouki, his friends grew tired of this seemingly useless habit.

Stubborn. During his ninja training, giving up was not an option for Jouki. Often his instructor would step in during training due to his lack of agreement to participate combined which his refusal to quit. All Jouki would do is dodge his opponent or close his eyes and TRY to dodge. When learning the tree climbing technique, the curious boy would simply find a nice looking branch and hang on it until his instructor decided to let him learn at his own pace. Whether this is a strength or a weakness is yet to be determined.

Appearance:

Face. Jouki has a heart shaped face. His widow's peak is hidden by his long black hair, but it is surely there. The contours of his cheeks slim down until they reach his thin, almost pointy, chin. His skin is lightly tan, but best described as "fair toned". In times with extreme exposure to the sun, Jouki's skin tone likens to that of a lobster's exoskeleton. Though he may not seem it, Jouki can get very sensitive if his appearance is poked fun at too much.

Hair. Jouki has medium-long straight black hair. It's much longer on the sides in front of the ears and rarely changes unless blown by the wind. The front has a small "wedge" of hair that covers an area between his eyes. Found on the crown of Jouki's head is more straight black hair flowing in all directions. From the back, the hair appears to be neck length.

Eyes. A dark navy blue, Jouki's eyes often seem dead. He never seemed to show much emotion, though he knew he felt it. Even upon the death of his grandfather, Jouki's eyes never shed a tear even though his mind was in agony. These soulless eyes also had yet to discover their Ryuugan. Many in the Kazeraikou clan had began to doubt that Jouki even possessed the ability.

Physique. Tall, Thin, Malnourished. These are all words that could be used to describe Jouki. Most often, his parents doubt that he eats anything other than Ramen and Gyoza Dumplings. Though he's thin and not exactly strong, Jouki is extremely quick and agile. This may be one of his only marketable skills. He did deliver food for several of his younger years. Consequentially, Jouki became hooked on the very ramen and dumplings that he delivered. Jouki's chest is very undefined and his shoulder blades slightly protrude from his thin back.

Apparel. Jouki does not often deviate from his traditional style. He is seen wearing either black or white unbuttoned shirt, jeans, and a plethora of armbands. Jouki is never without his "utility belt" which was the only accessory he would be forced to wear. On top of providing a function, this adds a sense of differentiation to his style. Jouki's shoes are generally a pair of functional, black flat bottomed sneakers. Perhaps most important to him is the black cross necklace given to him by his grandfather. He was told that many generations ago, a Daimyo of Umi No Kuni gave it to an ancestor of Jouki's for saving their life. The necklace has been passed down in his branch of the family by the men ever since.

Background:

Family History: Jouki's parents used to live in Kaminari No Kuni serving the Daimyo as guards. Fairly soon after they started a family friend and trusted member of the court of the Daimyo becan acting strange. Brushing this off, the two continued with their duties. One morning, they awoke to polearms across their throats held by Anbu Falcons. Without thinking, Jouki's parents quickly did their best to escape. Breaking the polearms was easy, however outrunning the anbu was obviously extremely difficult. Travelling the land, while still being chased, they reached the border of Kaminari No Kuni and quickly headed for a land that they thought would be safe to get married, Umi No Kuni.

Early Life: Though he doesn't remember most of it, Jouki’s parents often speak of his infancy and time as a toddler. It was told that even though his family is specialized in weather based ninjutsu, Jouki was always fond of fire. This being odd, his parents went on and on about it during gatherings. This is how he obtained the name Jouki which refers to the japanese word for “Steam” which resembled his heritage by the sea and his affinity for fire. This was also the period in which Joukin's parents began working for the Daimyo of Umi No Kuni as there were very few shinobi in the land. The two ninja were welcomed with open arms and began work as guards.

Childhood: Early on in his childhood, Jouki began travelling with his parents. At this time, the boy learned a few basic ninja techniques just to be able to do his part. Due to this early exposure, Jouki has always been well mannered in the presence of those who command it, this may have even saved his life in the years following a time or two. As he travelled, a wooden ocarina became a past time of Jouki's's and quickly grew into a passion.

Umi No Ryu: When he turned eight and wanted to become a ninja, Jouki's parent's had trouble finding a sensei for Jouki. There didn't seem to be a ninja village nearby. After several weeks of searching, his parents finally found a shinobi known around the area for teaching the ninja art to young ones. The man was most likely in his early sixties, but he could still perform the basic skills needed by a gennin level shinobi. For weeks this shinobi trained Jouki and the kid didn't even know his name. Finally, since the old man was learned in the water style jutsu, Jouki took to calling him Umi No Sensei.

Path to Gennin: Ninja training posed another issue for Jouki as he refused to follow directions. He knew that he had the ability, yet he wouldn't perform. Mostly due to the aching pain that the ryuugan had yet to awaken. His instructor decided to ask his parents whose only idea was that they hadn't given him much of a Kazeraikou heritage due to their move. Deciding it was time, the instructor asked Jouki's parents if they could begin teaching him Draconic in hopes of inspiring him.

The teaching inspired Jouki to train and he quickly graduated at the age of ten. Strangely enough, the ryuugan awakened inside of Jouki the day he got his first mission. It was a simple one; the mission was to find a lost pet around the village. When searching, Jouki gained the ability to see farther when he strained his eyes. Thinking it was nothing, he went on with the job, however, when Jouki found and returned the lost pet, people stared at him. He quickly found some metal and looked at his reflection. The chibi ryuugan had finally awakened. His was strangely enough black. This made sense as the ryuugan's color is determined by one's feelings at the time and Jouki was depressed, ironically, about not having it awaken. This seemed to be the start of something great for Jouki and he began handling tougher missions.

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Techniques

Jutsu:

~Chibi Ryuugan (Little Dragon Eye)
Rank: "C"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The power of the Ryuugan Doujutsu is unleashed, allowing the user to see the elements of Lightning, Air, and Water up to a certain distance and increase general seeing distance of one's eyes.
Special: ---
Drawback: Cannot see out of natural line of sight, takes a negligible amount of Chakra to maintain. Cannot pierce Genjutsu.
Description: The first stage of the Kazeraikou Doujutsu forces a temporary change of the user's eyes. The iris and pupil of the eye become one and change to a color decided at the first awakening depending on their mood. The color is like a cloud and swirls around the user's eye when looking around. Small lines of white will flash across the eyes like lightning bolts and continually do so as long as the eye is active. With the First stage of the Ryuugan Doujutsu unleashed, it allows the user to see the elements of Lightning, Air, and Water within normal viewing parameters. One's natural sight is also enhanced giving the capability of 2x zoom capabilities. The user sees the elements as three new, vibrant, and opaque colors that mesh perfectly with their normal vision, giving the user the ability to see the three elements without hindering their normal vision in the slightest. Of course normal vision can hinder this special sight, as the user cannot see through walls or other things as normal.
Limit: Must be a Kazeraikou, must have Raiton, Fuuton, Suiton releases.

~Arashi no Kiero (Channeling of the Tempest)
Rank: "C", "B", "A", "S" ("B" Rank Additional)
Skill: Ninjutsu/Supplementary
Effect: After activating the Ryuugan, the user will be able to channel lightning, water, or wind chakra into each hand.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: Wastes a D Rank amount of chakra each turn.
Description: By learning to channel their unique chakra into a normal Raiton, Suiton, or Fuuton jutsu the user is capable of controlling where it begins. After completing the handseals used for the jutsu the user channels one element of chakra to each hand. (IE: Lightning and Water; Water and Water.) Others are able to see the element from each hand because they exude the element given to them. This is used for the other jutsu of the clan and simply having this jutsu active wastes chakra each turn. To learn the clans techniques they must have the corresponding rank of this jutsu. An additional B Rank training can be done any time after the B Rank version of this technique to remove the handseals needed. Though the same amount of time applies to get the channeling to succeed.
Limit: Requires at least Chibi Ryuugan

~Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu/Supplementary
Effect: Allows a Non-Ninja the ability to perform Advanced chakra techniques.
Special: ---
Drawback: Non Ninjas must learn in order to learn Advanced chakra techniques. Ninjas gain this technique for free in the beginning however does not add into Character Class like other starting techniques. Does not work on Animal Companions.
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed. Allows a user to learn up to "C" Rank Chakra related Techniques.
Limit: Universal NinJutsu Technique.

Suiton No Justsu:

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Suiton: Yuugyo No Jutsu (Water Release: Art of the Fish Swimming About in Water)
Rank: "D," "C," "B," "A," "S"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user creates small fish made purely of water in a large body of water. By holding a certain handseal the user can cause the fish to explode.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: None
Description: The user, when standing very near or upon a body of water, gains the ability to create a small number of fish below them. The user must form handseals and send his or her chakra into the water to form the fish, once that is done the user has control of the fish for no more than three posts before they dissipate back into regular water. The user, once the fish have been created, is able to control the fish and cause them to swim toward a target and leap from the water. At "D" Rank the user can create up to three fish, and each of the Fish have the same explosive power as an Exploding Tag. At "C" Rank the user can create up to six fish, and each of the Fish have the same explosive power as an Exploding Tag. At "B" Rank the user can create up to ten fish, and each of the Fish have the same explosive power as two Exploding Tags. At "A" Rank the user can create up to fifteen fish, and each of the Fish have the same explosive power as two Exploding Tags. At "S" Rank the user can create up to twenty fish, and each of the Fish have the same explosive power as three Exploding Tags.
Limit: Water Release

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Oboro Bunshin no Jutsu (Mist Clone Skill)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: Allows a user to create clones out of Mist.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ----
Description: A technique which creates clones with the properties of mist. Although the clones are unable to inflict damage on an opponent, any physical attacks attempted on them pass right through. Depending on the user's class level is dependent on how well and how much the user is capable of performing at one given time. If the user is "D" Class they are capable of performing four Clones at once. If the user is "C" Class they are capable of performing eight clones at once. If the user is "B" Class they are capable of performing sixteen clones at once. If the user is "A" Class they are capable of performing thirty two clones at once. If the user is "S" Class they are capable of performing sixty four clones at once. If the user is to be considered a non NinJutsu specialist the number is reduced by two for every class level that the user becomes, and if the user is a NinJutsu Master the number increases by two for every class level they become.
Limit: Water Release

Freebies:

Suiton no Jutsu (Water Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Water. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Water Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Fuuton no Jutsu (Wind Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Wind. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Wind Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Raiton no Jutsu (Lightning Release Skill)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Lightning. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Lightning Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Lair Snake
Rank: "C"
Skill: Regional Trait
Effect: User spent their formative years bowing and scraping the presence of a Dragon, witnessing the glory of the vast hoard and squirreling away a few bits of coin for themselves.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: User gains a +5 trait bonus on Appraisal Checks, and their starting wealth is x2 of their normal amount. Incentive Ryo does not apply to this multiplication. Starting Ryo must be added after multiplication. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

Blood of Dragons
Rank: "C"
Skill: Heritage Trait
Effect: Long ago, your ancestors' blood mixed with that of dragons.
Special: ---
Drawback: Cannot gain any other Ancestry Traits.
Description: User gains a +5% trait bonus on Observation checks, gain Low-light vision, and gain a +2 Heritage bonus on saves against sleep and paralysis. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.


Draconic Language
Rank: "D"
Skill: Skill
Effect: A language spoken by Dragons and Reptilian Humanoids.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: It is believed that Draconic is among the oldest, if not the oldest language of the world. Because of this, nearly all other languages can trace some roots back to this primordial tongue. Each time learned user gets 1 die roll to increase the skill.
Limit: ---
Skill Level: 3/125

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Moving.

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[Seira Kimura]

Just something I thought should be pointed out, but one of the techniques you chose, Jisei, can only be used by ninja of the cloud village, so only Kumogakure, as stated in the limit. Also, you should leave all the ranks intact on the jutsu, such as Arashi no Kiero. You would only be able to learn the D rank, as you have to know that before the C rank, and Bloodlimit characters only get three techniques.

Edit: Also, you automatically get a free 15 slot apparel item, the eligible ones being one of which you choose. You wouldn't need to spend your allowance on that.

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Feb 26, 2015 23:55:33 GMT -7 Seira Kimura said:

Just something I thought should be pointed out, but one of the techniques you chose, Jisei, can only be used by ninja of the cloud village, so only Kumogakure, as stated in the limit. Also, you should leave all the ranks intact on the jutsu, such as Arashi no Kiero. You would only be able to learn the D rank, as you have to know that before the C rank, and Bloodlimit characters only get three techniques.

Edit: Also, you automatically get a free 15 slot apparel item, the eligible ones being one of which you choose. You wouldn't need to spend your allowance on that.

I changed it last minute and was considering changing again, but I'd need approval. I wanted to be a shinobi from an island with no official shinobi village. I'll definitely remove Jisei and add the rest of the ranks.

[KoKoKo]

Please high light the rank known of the multirank techniques

also under village to e clear can you just put non nin

then 2.3 i think

[Father 'Suke]

Before I give you a 3/3 can you do a couple things for me.
1. Can you adjust the prices to their original and beside the names of each weapon put the amount you are buying. I noticed some of the prices were changed.
2. Can you label in the releases to the specialist slots and so on. Such as for Ninjutsu you'd put under it your four releases. Also as you are a nin-non specialist you will also have to pick which two you are not mastering.
3. Put 3/125 beside your Draconic Language (die roll performed here)

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Anything Else?

Feb 27, 2015 15:39:57 GMT -7 Father 'Suke said:

[Father 'Suke]

3/3

Wait a sec, doing another review

3/3

while a nin-master you don't have to sacrifice a GrandMaster Misc Slot to master your bloodlimit.