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Bone Claws
Rank: "D"
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: The user pushes the knuckles of their fingers a little outwards and quickly exerts out three claws from the indents of the knuckles into three like claws.
Special: ---
Drawback: Calcium builds up every time the user releases the claws.
Description: The user exerts outwards three claws from their inner part of their skin that is located near their knuckles. The bones along their fingers and the muscles along their fingers push out the bones in a hardened shape form. The bone solidifies making it seem like three large like claws as the claws are pushed out in a distance of approximately eighteen inches in length.
Limit: Kaguya Bloodlimit, Must know Bone Pulling

        In the largest, most open area available, Takeni decided to begin training. His old sensei had originally promised to teach him a technique called, "Bone Claws", however the old man has most likely passed by now. Focusing on the task at hand, Takeni took in his current surroundings. A small stream flowed on his rightside with small fish following the swift current downstream to whichever body of water it would reach next on its journey. Several trees dotted the landscape, however the area was quite open for mountain country. It seemed to be the perfect place.

        Before his training started, Takeni decided to stretch. Reaching out, his bones cracked; it'd been a while since the boy had trained. The Bone Claws technique was one of the first time's the traveler would have used his bone pulling ability. Under these circumstances, it would be either extremely difficult or extremely painful; there was even a small chance that both conditions would be met.

        On the riverbank, with his arms stretched forward, he began to practice the technique. At first, focusing on bones creating and protruding from his knuckles. Creating the bones was easy, but as they began to leave, he'd not yet mastered the art of moving his skin out of the way. The new calcium material jammed its way out of his fingers, leaving Takeni awestruck and in a state of agonizing sufferance. The pain was so intense that the child couldn't even focus on growing the bones any farther.

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        After hours of more training and torcher, Takeni decided to try one last time before quitting for the time being. Slowly and painfully, three white blades protruded from each hand in between the fingers. After about thirty seconds of focus, there they stood. From knuckle to tip, the blades were roughly sixteen inches in length. Sharpened to the likeness of a sword, the blades became stuck when swung into a tree's bark. It took several minutes to free himself from the wooden prison. Lastly, the boy rinsed the bones in the nearby stream, then slowly focused on returning them to his body. It appeared he'd gotten better, however, he still preferred his Tantō.

[Nekomata Minh]

I'm going to let it slide this time. You had a wonderful start but, then you timeskipped the important part: What they learned. I didn't get to see how it is they learned the mistakes from their first try. It was just:

Try, fail
(timeskip)
And so now that the spent some time with it...
Pow! Blades

See how odd that is? XD
Next time I won't be so generous if you fluff that again. Trust me. It was a good post but, it missed those important bits. Training can fun, but you still gotta give me something. Anyway...

+10, Learned

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Hessendan (Finger Bullets)
Rank: "C"
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: A technique that enables the user the capability of contracting the muscles and nerves within their body to where it begins to build pressure within shooting them off with such speed to pierce the human body and some minor defenses.
Special: ---
Drawback: Whenever used the user undergoes the capability of disease under effect increasing the calcium within their body which makes them closer to dieing unless gaining medical treatment.
Description: A technique that launches finger bones in a projectile like form. The Muscles and the nerves contract against one another greatly to where they somewhat spiral in within the body. When the user constricts their fingers in such a way, they begin to push the bullet outwards as the bullet begins to gain pressure from the way it is constricted until the bone is projected out of the human body spiraling at high speeds being sent off towards its target.
Limit: Kaguya Bloodlimit. This is the basic of basics and must be known in order to use other Jutsus of the Bloodlimit. Must know Bone Pulling

        After learning the art of the bone claw, Takeni was still unsatisfied. He was only left wanting more; though with the pain and suffering he endured, it's hard to imagine why. In the previous training, the shinobi wannabe endured sharp bones protruding from all over his body. This was especially a prevalent problem in areas known to be especially sensitive to the human body. Half of the time, the skin wouldn't move out of the way, or the bone was too dull and forced its way out, causing mind numbing pain to Takeni. Once, a wide, cylindrical bone ejected from the boy's tailbone in a quite unsightly manner. This is but a taste of the trials of learning the bone claw technique.

        Now with the ability to create bones of a specific shape, the Kaguya attempted another basic, yet effective move. The quite obviously named technique was called 'Finger Bullets'. Once again his body built up calcium and transferred it to the hands, however, this time the bones were meant to be created on the fingertips. After a few moments of focus, the bones began to protrude from the tips of his fingers, however instead of shooting out, they slowly made their way, pulling the skin as they moved. It felt as though Takeni's skin was being pulled slowly by a winch.

        Several more attempts were made at the jutsu. Many either involved bones shooting from random portions of the body, or slowly bursting through the skin; both of which caused extreme pain. On a few occasions, a bone bullet shot from Takeni's crotch and killed a small squirrel or a bird. Though he couldn't save the animals, he could most definitely improve his craft.

        Hours later, he'd gotten much better, but the craft was far from perfected. Now the bones shot at high speeds, yet the area was unpredictable and the speed was uncontrollable. As though in protest or mutiny, several times the bullets shot from one calf into the other, causing yet more searing agony. Even more often, a small calcium pellet shot through the wrists, killing the occasional worm or insect. This onslaught of small avians, mammals, and insects continued for what seemed like ages.

        Finally, Takeni managed to shift the bullet to shoot from a single fingertip of each hand. It was a small, almost insignificant improvement, however is quickly blossomed into a ten bullet barrage. At this point, takeni began to shoot in very specific directions, sometimes shooting himself to save the lives of animals. It seemed the technique had become quite easy for the up and coming ninja.

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+10.

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[[OOC: Will return to training once Takeni is in another place. He is now leaving Kaminari.]]