Yamato Himura [FINISHED]

[Yamato Himura]

Basic Information

Name: Yamato Himura
Bloodlimit: N/a
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 165 lbs
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Alignment: Neutral
Birth Country: Fire
Village: Sound
Special:

[/b] (Chakra molding)
Muay Thai
Krav Maga
Bojutsu[/ul]


Traits:

Without a Past
Rank: "C"
Skill: Social Trait
Effect: User knew they were going into a world where none go unscathed, and there is no turning back, so they decided to forsake their past in order to protect their loved ones.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: User knew they were going into a world where none go unscathed, and there is no turning back, so they decided to forsake their past in order to protect their loved ones. They have no old friends or family to go in times of need, yet at least they remain safe from the enemies finding and taking their wrath out on them. User gains a +5 trait bonus to Forgery, and Language skill checks when used to forge documents. User gain a +1 per die roll when learning a Language Skill. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

Jaded
Rank: "C"
Skill: Combat Trait
Effect: The user has seen horror and death as far back as they can remember.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Maybe they are unfazed by the gruesome, or have become a cynic as a defense against the dark realities of the corners of the world. User gains a +2 trait bonus on Saves against Fear. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

Weapons


Primary Weapon:

Secondary Items:

Non-Weapon Items

Camera Vision
Rank: "B"
Type: Secondary, 0 per Slot, Gadget, Surveillance, Vision
Effect: A vision relay that records images, either as a still photograph or videos compacted in goggles
Special: ---
Drawback: Recording lasts only as long as the amount of space is available.
Description: A vision relay capable of recording or taking still photograph images. The basic camera vision is able to hold up to 24 hours worth of High Definition video recording. Every still photograph that is taken will take away 1 minute within the 24 hours. After the recording is finished the user will have to either replace with new Camera Feed, or delete the already recorded video in order to allow more room to record. Feed may record and stop by user's decision. Each record and stop creates a file for the Camera feed that allows the user to erase individual files instead of the whole Video Feed.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Gadget Shop.
Cost: 5,000 Ryo Each

Thermal Vision
Rank: "B"
Type: Secondary, 0 per Slot, Gadget, Surveillance, Vision
Effect: An electro-optical image intensifying vision relay that detects visible and near-heat signatures, intensifies the signatures, and provides a visible image of the signatures.
Special: ---
Drawback: Difficult to distinguish two objects of same size and shape.
Description: A vision that perceives thermal radiation and do not need a source of illumination. They produce an image in the darkest of nights and can see through light fog, rain and smoke. It detects heat signatures that are located around within field of vision. The hotter the image the more light is produced. Only capable of seeing through a single wall as it is completely solid unlike fog, smoke, and rain.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Gadget Shop.
Cost: 5,000 Ryo Each

Wireless Radio (2, 1/8 slot) 2000
Rank: "S"
Type: Secondary, 16 per Slot, Gadget, Surveillance, Transmitter
Effect: A radio transmitting device that sends signals through electromagnetic waves.
Special: ---
Drawback: Limited Range in transmitting information.
Description: Picture A Device that has a Velcro strap along the neck with a voice activator along the throat. An ear piece is connected from the vocal piece to the ear in a small cord. It's a radio that transmits signals by sending electromagnetic waves with frequencies below those of visible light. They can then be received by other radios in the form of sound or a wide array of signals in order to make sure important information is protected. When rolled and compact, 16 Wireless Radios are able to fit inside 1 slot. The range between two Wireless Radios is 1,000 meters (Communications for a single thread.)
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Gadget Shop.
Cost: 16,000 Ryo per Slot, or 1,000 Ryo Each

Character Depth

Personality:

Appearance:

Background:

[Yamato Himura]

Muay Thai

S Rank:

A Rank:

B Rank:

C Rank:

D Rank:

[/b], "C"
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: A Horizontal Elbow Strike.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture The Boxer swings up the tip of the right elbow to the opponent's jaws and steps the right foot forwards. This trick is used for attack, defense, or escape. It is of importance that the user keeps their guard high and tight when executing elbows. User should never reach for the elbow strike. Should be thrown at clinch range. When using the elbow attack, user's elbow should be between 45 and 90 degrees angle away from the head. When the user learns the "C" Rank version the user hits with the sharp pointy bone part of the elbow that causes cutting damage against the opponent. When learning the "C" Rank version the effects carry over to other elbow strikes in Muay Thai. To Protect Wipes the left arm or throws the left arm to the left. (If User knows Horizontal High Elbow Strike (Elbow #1) in Krav Maga, the user does not need to learn this Technique.)
Limit: Must learn from a Muay Thai Master.

Prapai Lom Singkorn (Straight Punch)
Rank: "D" Rank, "D" Rank Variations
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: A powerful, straight punch thrown with the rear hand.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Picture The Boxer Throws the straight right punch and twists the body by that punch, stepping with the right foot forward. The Boxer must consider about the distance between him and the opponent. The target is the chin or the heart of the opponent. This trick is used for attack, defense, or escape. If used for attack use both left and right alternately. The Straight Punch is one of the heaviest punches in all of Muay Thai. It can be used in attack and defense. If used properly it can stop your opponent right in his tracks. However if used at the wrong moment it may put the boxer in a difficult situation because if the punch misses the target the boxer will have wasted a lot of energy and will be left exposed to a counter attack. The strength of this punch comes from moving the foot forward and from the transfer of force from the leg to the moving body and finally to the fist. To further enhance the power in his punch the boxer must twist his hips, waist, and shoulder while punching. The result is a very powerful blow that draws upon the boxer's weight, the muscles of the feet, legs, hips, waist, and shoulders, and the proper technique in releasing the punch for its forcefulness.
[/ul]
E Rank:

[Yamato Himura]

Krav Maga

S Rank:

A Rank:

B Rank:

C Rank:

D Rank:

E Rank:

[Yamato Himura]

Bôjutsu

S Rank:

A Rank:

B Rank:

C Rank:

D Rank:

E Rank:

Basic Stance
Rank: E
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: The basic stance for Bôjutsu techniques.
Special: None
Drawback: None
Description: The user holds their dominant hand under the staff near the middle and their other hand over the staff near the middle. The staff is diagonal and the lower end of the staff is on your weaker side.
Limit: Must have a Bôjutsu Training Scroll or Bôjutsu master.

Forward Stance (freebie)
Rank: E
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: The user stands in a way where an opponent facing his/her front would have to travel through the user’s staff in order to attack the user.
Special: None
Drawback: The user is move vulnerable from behind.
Description: The user stands sideways and holds there staff at one end with the other end pointing out, the staff is almost held like a spear. This makes the user able to jab quickly and directly and any weapon shorter than the user’s have a hard time getting to the user.
Limit: Must have a Bôjutsu Training Scroll or Bôjutsu master.

[Yamato Himura]

Skills

RESERVED

[N A T S U M I]

Moving to submissions.
As a tai master, are you chakra molding, or no?
Apart from that, looks fine; 1|3

[KoKoKo]

[b]Basic Information[/b]

[b]Name: Yamato Himura[/b]
[b]Bloodlimit: N/a[/b]
[b]Height: 5'8"[/b]
[b]Weight: 165 lbs[/b]
[b]Age: 24[/b]
[b]Gender: Male[/b]
[b]Alignment: Neutral[/b]
[b]Birth Country: Fire[/b]
[b]Village: Sound[/b]
[b]Special:[/b]
[ul]

[b]Taijutsu Master[/b]
Muay Thai
Krav Maga
Bojutsu[/ul]


[b]Traits:[/b]

Without a Past
Rank: "C"
Skill: Social Trait
Effect: User knew they were going into a world where none go unscathed, and there is no turning back, so they decided to forsake their past in order to protect their loved ones.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: User knew they were going into a world where none go unscathed, and there is no turning back, so they decided to forsake their past in order to protect their loved ones. They have no old friends or family to go in times of need, yet at least they remain safe from the enemies finding and taking their wrath out on them. User gains a +5 trait bonus to Forgery, and Language skill checks when used to forge documents. User gain a +1 per die roll when learning a Language Skill. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

Jaded
Rank: "C"
Skill: Combat Trait
Effect: The user has seen horror and death as far back as they can remember.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Maybe they are unfazed by the gruesome, or have become a cynic as a defense against the dark realities of the corners of the world. User gains a +2 trait bonus on Saves against Fear. This trait replaces 1 Freebies.
Limit: Must start with Character; replaces 1 Freebies.

[b]Weapons[/b]


[b]Primary Weapon:[/b]

[ul]Polearm Bo
Rank: "C"
Type: Main, Piercing, Staff/Spear
Effect: A close combat weapon in which the main fighting part of the weapon is fitted to the end of a long shaft.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Two-Handed Weapon. These weapons do +10 Amour Points of Damage. A large weapon normally longer than 1.2 m (4 feet). These weapons are only suitable for melee combat and cannot be used for ranged combat. Examples of a Polearm: Nagamaki, Naginata, Quarterstaff, and Glaive. If the user learns Wield Oversized Weapon the user is able to wield the weapon 1-handed.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 8,000 Ryo[/ul]

[b]Secondary Items:[/b]

[ul]Kunai (Overview) (6 total, 3 slots)
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: Secondary, 2 per Slot, Piercing/Slashing, Knife
Effect: A kunai is a tool derived from the masonry trowel.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +4 Amour Points of Damage. The Range Increment of this weapon is 5 meters. A kunai has a blade that is about less than 1 foot in length. The user gains a +10 bonus on Sleight of Hand Skill to conceal a knife on their body.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,000 Ryo per Slot, or 500 Ryo Each.

Shuriken, Bo (30 total, 2 slots)
Rank: "C" Rank
Type: Secondary, 15 per Slot, Piercing, Shuriken
Effect: A shuriken is a small piece of metal with sharpened edges, designed for throwing.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A Light Weapon. These weapons do +2 Amour Points of Damage. The Range Increment of this weapon is 5 meters. Although they are thrown weapons, shuriken are quick and easy to draw, thus allowing the user to draw such weapons without the need of a movement. A shuriken can't be used as a melee weapon. Bo-shuriken are throwing weapons consisting of a straight iron or steel spike, usually four-sided but sometimes round or octagonal in shape.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Weapon Shop.
Cost: 1,500 Ryo per Slot, or 100 Ryo Each.


[/ul][b]Non-Weapon Items[/b]

[ul]Apparel:

Utility Belt Type 2

Gadgets:

Goggles w/ Camera Vision, Thermal Vision  (1, .5 slot) 11000
Goggles
Rank: "C"
Type: Secondary, 2 per Slot, Gadget, Apparel/Surveillance, Spectacles
Effect: Protective eyewear that usually encloses or protects the area surrounding the eye in order to prevent particulates, water or chemicals from striking the eyes.
Special: ---
Drawback: May hold up to 4 kinds of Surveillance Vision.
Description: There are different types of Goggles. There are different types of Goggles such as Cold Weather Goggles, Swimming, Power Tool Goggles, Blowtorch Goggles, Welding Goggles, Laboratory Goggles, and Aviation Goggles. Goggles are often worn as a fashion statement in certain subcultures, most often as part of the cybergoth subculture. They are usually worn over the eyes or up on the forehead to secure 'falls'. Goggles have enough carrying capacity for 4 types of Surveillance Vision. Does not fit in Scroll size Slots. May be Glasses.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Gadget Shop.
Cost: 2,000 Ryo per Slot, or 1,000 Ryo Each[/ul]

Camera Vision
Rank: "B"
Type: Secondary, 0 per Slot, Gadget, Surveillance, Vision
Effect: A vision relay that records images, either as a still photograph or videos compacted in goggles
Special: ---
Drawback: Recording lasts only as long as the amount of space is available.
Description: A vision relay capable of recording or taking still photograph images. The basic camera vision is able to hold up to 24 hours worth of High Definition video recording. Every still photograph that is taken will take away 1 minute within the 24 hours. After the recording is finished the user will have to either replace with new Camera Feed, or delete the already recorded video in order to allow more room to record. Feed may record and stop by user's decision. Each record and stop creates a file for the Camera feed that allows the user to erase individual files instead of the whole Video Feed.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Gadget Shop.
Cost: 5,000 Ryo Each

Thermal Vision
Rank: "B"
Type: Secondary, 0 per Slot, Gadget, Surveillance, Vision
Effect: An electro-optical image intensifying vision relay that detects visible and near-heat signatures, intensifies the signatures, and provides a visible image of the signatures.
Special: ---
Drawback: Difficult to distinguish two objects of same size and shape.
Description: A vision that perceives thermal radiation and do not need a source of illumination. They produce an image in the darkest of nights and can see through light fog, rain and smoke. It detects heat signatures that are located around within field of vision. The hotter the image the more light is produced. Only capable of seeing through a single wall as it is completely solid unlike fog, smoke, and rain.
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Gadget Shop.
Cost: 5,000 Ryo Each

Wireless Radio (2, 1/8 slot) 2000
Rank: "S"
Type: Secondary, 16 per Slot, Gadget, Surveillance, Transmitter
Effect: A radio transmitting device that sends signals through electromagnetic waves.
Special: ---
Drawback: Limited Range in transmitting information.
Description: Picture A Device that has a Velcro strap along the neck with a voice activator along the throat. An ear piece is connected from the vocal piece to the ear in a small cord. It's a radio that transmits signals by sending electromagnetic waves with frequencies below those of visible light. They can then be received by other radios in the form of sound or a wide array of signals in order to make sure important information is protected. When rolled and compact, 16 Wireless Radios are able to fit inside 1 slot. The range between two Wireless Radios is 1,000 meters (Communications for a single thread.)
Limit: These items may be bought inside any Gadget Shop.
Cost: 16,000 Ryo per Slot, or 1,000 Ryo Each

[b]Character Depth[/b]

[b]Personality:[/b]

[ul]Yamato is a pretty calm dude.  He grew up in a unique manner, and that made killing and death just a thing for him.  A life is a life, and that's all that it is.  He's difficult to upset, but it's difficult to make him physically happy.  He's been through a lot, and he just doesn't show emotion or let things bother him as much as they would other people.  So, overall, Yamato is pretty chill, but it's in a disturbing way.  

But, let's say you make Yamato mad.  You won't know it.  His facial expression won't change.  However, he's going to be a lot more dangerous.  If he's mad, he's focused on one thing: eradicating whatever pissed him off.  He's working on that, though.  It may be difficult to make him mad, but he knows it's not healthy to destroy everything that makes him mad.  So, he's working on anger management, but he's just started, so you should probably expect the worse.

Then there is happy Yamato.  He rarely cracks a smile, and when he does one is probably the safest they are around him.  Yamato grew up around death and killing, and he didn't take the joy those around him derived from ending others.  Instead he just did it.  He has very rarely felt true joy, and that's been very damaging to his psyche.  In a way, he's attempting to conform to normal society, but he's somewhat stunted.  While he knows what is acceptable, he hasn't
bothered to understand why.  That said, he knows what happy is. He just does not show it very often.
[/ul]

[b]Appearance:[/b]
[ul]
Yamato is average height, and is very muscular.  His muscles aren't bodybuilder large, but they are very well defined.  He regularly shaves his head, but he doesn't always trim up his beard.  Usually, he keeps his beard full, and it is a natural red color.  His eyes are green, and they look like they've seen awful things.  Yamato definitely has a thousand stare at times from the things he has experienced in his past.

As for clothing, it depends on the situation.  Yamato has very little in the way of money, and therefore he has very little clothing for formal occasions.  Also, such clothing was never a necessity in his past.  Still, he has managed to buy himself a couple of nice pieces of clothing should he have to dress up.  Normally, he wears khaki cargo pants, a black t-shirt, and black combat boots.  He also tends to wear his utility belt wherever he goes so that he has tools whenever he may need them.

This is all true unless he absolutely knows there is about to be a fight.  Then he tends to add some war paint to the mix, and lose the shirt.  That is only if he has time to prepare, and of course he doesn't bother putting war paint on his face if he is caught in a fight by surprise.  Also, he's got some scars.  There is one on his face that is right under his eye.  It's vertical, and almost perfectly straight.  He has some small ones on his arms, legs, hands and feet from fighting in his younger days.  Then there is his back.  He has been whipped mercilessly, and there are many scars all over his back.

[/ul][b]Background:[/b]

[ul]Yamato grew up in the Land of Fire.  There was a small tribe of people who believed in war and killing.  The men and women grew to be killers, and they were often hired by people with large amounts of money to have people killed for them.  The tribe could kill as quickly and silently as one may have needed, or as loudly and super violently so they may strike fear into whoever may decide to cross them.  These people had their children killing at young ages.  Yamato's first kill was at five years old.  His past is littered with the bodies of many children who were his age at the time.  The tribe only wanted the strongest to survive, and they would constantly whittle the weak ones out.

Yamato always wondered lay beyond the killing and the violence.  What might the world offer besides the screams of people?  He felt he would never really know.  He was always rewarded well for killing anyway.  While many preferred the sharp blade of a sword, Yamato preferred to bash his opponents' heads in with a staff.  Him and a few others in the tribe trained with them, and they enjoyed feeling as if they knew something those who played with swords would never know.  Yamato was good with it, and he was very good at killing.  He made his family proud, and he worked very hard.  Then he met a ninja.

This ninja showed him things he never imagined. His tribe had taught him to use chakra before, but they weren't able to train him in as formal a manner as a ninja. Unfortunately, he met the ninja on a job.  The ninja was the target.  Yamato was on the receiving end of the the things being shown.  The ninja moved faster than Yamato could imagine, and Yamato committed the most egregious offense one could in his tribe.  He ran from the fight.  He was afraid.  It was the first time he had ever felt fear. Or at least since he could remember.

Upon his return, his tribe was furious.  He had brought shame to them.  They considered killing him, but felt it too great an honor.  So what was worse than death?  They whipped him one hundred times across the back.  They then banished him.  If they ever saw him again, they would torture him to death.  Yamato wandered the land for years until coming across the Sound village. He never spoke of his past to anyone, and refused to explain his scars.  He would never forget his past, but he would do his best to speak of it to no one. He was able to prove himself able in Taijutsu, and upon becoming a genin, Yamato promised himself that he would destroy his old tribe.  The Sound Village was his new tribe, and he was loyal to them, and them alone.[/ul]

[Yamato Himura]

Thanks Natsy and I fixed it. Thanks Ikiryo for helping me out with the coding issue I had!

[KoKoKo]

2.3

[Father 'Suke]

Freebies:
Without a Past [Trait]
Jaded [Trait]
Jod Muay [E]
Neutral or Passive Stance [E]
Fighting Stance [E]

Techniques:
Ka Jig Khai [D]
Pra Yaikae (Swinging Elbow) [D]
Prapai Lom Singkorn (Straight Punch) [D]
Moving in Fighting Stance [E]
Basic Stance [E]

Unless I'm missing one... You have one missing freebie you can still receive.

[Yamato Himura]

Yep. You're right. I totally forgot that you can do 6 instead of 5. I added Forward Stance to Bojutsu.  That should equal 6.

[Yoshi [Lynx!]]

With the freebies assorted everything seems good. I do want to point out that there's a couple of grammatical hiccups in your background that makes certain segments harder to read. Its not something that detracts from you being accepted, though.

I believe since there was a change I am to give you a 1/3


Well, as it is, you get a 3/3!