Nobuo 1 [training]

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Nobuo sat outside her house. 

Mekuraban Seal Drawing/Placement
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu/TaiJutsu
Effect: The before the user can write the Mekuraban seal on a person or anything, they must first learn the special way how to draw the seals.
Special: Requires Ink and some sort of painting or marking tool just to learn. When used in battle this technique requires a mixture of blood and ink.
Drawback: None
Description: Before the user can use the Mekuraban seals, they must first master the correct way of drawing the seals. This technique is rather easy to learn, as the proper way of drawing a Mekuraban seal is only slightly different than regular kanji drawing. The user must draw the kanji so that the ink stays wet for the most amount of time possible, and runs so that the kanji drawing won’t lose its power.
Limit: After learning this technique, the user will not have to learn it again to utilize any other Mekuraban Seal.

Nobuo sat outside her house and with ingle fingers and a little needle in his hand pricked his finger as he had seen a hundred times. From it blood, ever so dark and rosy beaded up on his finger like dew on a leaf. It bubbled up and Nobuo squeezed the dot into his prestirred bottle of ink. 

Calmly and and carefully he then took a small piece of cloth and ripped it from his pants. Taking it and dipping it slowly into the bottle as he stared simply at the door. The door was a simple wooden door, made to keep the cold winter days out and the cold in. The knob made of a light metal as to not freeze in place, with a simple key hole, which when locked would stay in place. 

Nobuo walked up carefully to the door and mixing the ink and blood in the container he held in his black hands inspected the drawn brown coating it had. Smearing the front of the door, he began drawing, ever so simply the simple symbol he had been thinking of in his mind. A sideways eight, written in his blood ink. 

Focusing on his work, he draw it slowly, and not rushing made the symbol in one stroke. His fingers nimble, not wasting a single drop of the ink and blood mixture. As he dew the sign on the door, he looked around and made sure no one was watching, making sure even if they could see they didn't care what he was doing to his own door.

He wanted to be sure he could pull it closed and open it as any moment like a puppet master. But first he had to finish what he was doing. He then walked around his little shack and without speaking a word again drew the symbol on his back door. Positioning the symbol in the same place, the edge unseen where the door latches, as to escape immediate detection.

With that he again walked around to the far side, and jumping on the roof, painted again the same symbol the sideways eight like sign. It had to bee draw as so it didn't drip or run, the stroke staying all together as so little brush hairs didn't break the even and strong, like a chain. As he drew the seal on the roof, a dog barked, breaking the silence. Nobuo hated dogs, he looked around and found the source of the barking and shot the dog a look. The dog stopped barking. 

When Nobuo was a child he used to kill dog and cats because it made him feel good. He liked they way they feared him when he was stabbing them. The shock culminating with fear gave him shivers. But right now he wasn't going to kill anything. Right now, he was going to finish this seal, and as such he refocused on making sure his stroke and pressure was perfect. 

Nobuo didnt like like doing something more than once. He was too calm and collected for that, and he didn't want to have to deal with the pain of trying something again, though if he had to he was not the type that would bemoan having to do slightly more work. He though of this while he jumped down from the roof, and landing in the snow, which seemed to be constant in this part of the world, crunched under his feet. 

Having written ten the seals on the door and window, Nobuo continued by walking inside, taking off his boots and opening again the scroll he had stolen from that woman. It listed the procedures he would have to go through to make sure he could use his new seal. He made one more seal on his packet of cigarettes because he wanted to make sure those were always in reach, and popped on into his mouth as he thought. 

This is last one was better than the first three seals he had written and it took him almost no time to write it. He didn't care for abilities that slowed him down. Things like JUTSUS with too many handsigns and whatnot were not his friend. 

With that Nobuo took another look at the scroll, taking a puff of smoke, which had filled his lungs and breathed out the sweet toxins in his body.

[Celaena Kamyuja]

Plus seven be mindful of fluff. Just straight into training, and you should be fine.

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Nobuo took his Kunai in hand and draw on it as well. Making sure he was copying down the stroke straight and true. The fluid motion of sweeping across the blade. He practiced drawing the symbol on the kunai and also on a shuriken a well. He wanted something that would stick into his opponent and weigh them down if struck.

He just had to draw it a few more times, this time with added speed and precision. He didn't want to have to pause when he was fighting just to draw on the symbol. So again he retraced the strokes. Making it one simple nice fluid motion. Touch, down, curve up, peak, down and connect. Again he pulled a peice of paper and drew on the back of it: Touch, down, curve up, peak, down and connect.

After the paper, Kunai, and shuriken, Nobuo stood up, dusting his pants off from the dust he had somehow managed to unsettle and moved the peice of paper to his bookshelf. Just in case, he draw the symbol highlighting this amount of pressure, curvature and ink needed on the side of the page before filing it away.

Taking one extra moment to make sure he was doing it right, he picked up another kunai, flipped it behind he back and in one quick motion, dipped his finger in the mixture, and swabbed it accords the blade, making sure to connect the sideways eight symbol and not make one side heavier than the other. Faster than he had done it before he tossed it to the other hand, and this time drew it on the kunai with the same hand he was holding the Kunai with. That way he would not have to trade hands.

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Learned

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Nobuo hiccuped and turned back to the desk, now some odd numbered seals written all over the house. Sitting back down he read over the scroll copying the handseals, mimicking the chakra output and released the skill. Nothing happened. Nothing, happened because had not chosen a specific target. Annoyed he had not seen it beforehand, he huffed and picked up his cigarette and relit the end, not wanted to waist the crumpled stick of tabac. 

Sucking in he left the stir of smoke in his lungs, relaxed and breathed out. Feeling a little better, he remade the handsigns and making sure he didn't forget to designate a target as he made the signs. He chose the one on the window, the window left open for the experiment. As released the jutsu and let the chakra go, the window slid down the frame a small ways and stopped. The seal glowing for not but a single moment. 

Figuring he had to either hold the chakra or feed it more he decided to try again. First he made a connection with the seal using chakra link, then made the handseals, hoping to succeed this time. This time as he released the jutsu he kept the link flowing, allowing his pool of energy to fade a bit, as he let it like water light up the seal.

The seal did indeed light up, but the flow was too weak and gave out over a moment of effort. Trying this time again, still on the window he focused. He selected a small D rank level of chakra, as he had learned as a child, and fed it to the skill like a beast and spell, and released. The seal lit up like a purple lightbulb and the window slammed shut. He walked over to the window and tried to pry it up but found it heavy like a 400 pound rock or something. The seal continuing to glow, and the lock complete.

He then focused on the door where he had hidden a seal in the spot where the door and the door touched. Making the handseals, he used the jutsu again and though he could not see it he chucked his body against the door in an attempt to force it open. 

As he slammed his 150 or something pounds into the door, his body crumpled like a paper airplane hitting a wall. The door was solid heavy. He would need a lot more strength than his body weight to move the door. Trying the lock he found that it would turn, but the hindges were so strained he could not open it without great effort. Something he didnt care to try just then. 

Wanting to try one more thing, he flicked the kunai, the one he had just drawn on with his thumb, and tossed it lithely at the back door. It stuck solid. then he used his jutsu. making sure that the kunai was his target. After he had done so, the door, along with the kunai gave a small heave and shrugged on the loose hinges of the shake he had claimed as his own. 

Nobuo learned that he could use the kunai to make things heavier, not just making the one thing heavy. If it was connected it would work. He then drew the seal on his own jacket, placing it in the right sleeve as he was left handed, and used the jutsu. suddenly Nobuo struggled and collapsed to the ground. Overcome with he weight, not on his coat, but on his own body.

He was surprised because, well it wasn't connected to him. Not wanted to feel like a ton of bricks, he unzipped his coat with some major effort, and didnt feel the weight go away. The seal had gone directly on him. Frustrated slightly, but not impatient to escape, the put his hands in a kai position and released himself from his trap. He was pleased with the skill. it could be very useful. but he wanted to try two more things.

He grabbed the piece of paper he had written on and rolling it into a ball, ate it. The seal was written was written on the paper when he ate it, and as long as it wasn't torn it should still work in theory. He made the handsigns, and activated the jutsu. Suddenly there was a great weight that seized him again.

Falling to his knees, nobuo made the handsign again and released himself. His body returning to normal, his fingers move nimbly, and he was freed. Perfect. He might need that just in case. Never know when you might have to forcefeed someone a seal written on a grain of rice. or make himself sink in water or need to stand against wind. 

Lastly he took a piece of paper, and activating the seal stuck it to the pillow he held and watched the bed. The pillow became heavier and made the bed groan under the weight. 

Perfect Nobuo said, and finished what he was doing. 

Mekuraban Seal Activation

Rank: D

Skill: Ninjutsu

Effect: The user will learn exactly how to activate the Mekuraban seal they are utilizing.

Special: Handseals after the Seal is placed: Dragon, Dog, Boar

Drawback: None

Description: After the user applies the Seal, they can wait as long as they want before actually activating it, adding a strategic value to any seal of the Mekuraban. After applying the seal the user must learn the handseals and the amount of chakra needed to activate the seal that has been drawn.

Limit: After learning this technique, the user will not have to learn it again to utilize any other Mekuraban Seal.

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[Yoshi [Lynx!]]

Please move the technique you're training to the top. I'd also highly suggest segmenting it off, as it is right now, it looks essentially like your paragraphs. I'd also appreciate if you combined some of your paragraphs. All the segmenting creates awkward breaks in the reading.

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Alright. I'll fix it in the next post. Thank you for finally getting to this.

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Katon - ningenteki houka bakudan (Fire release - Human firebomb)
Rank: "D" "C" "B" "A" "S"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The Jutsu leaves a seal on an opponent depending on the rank will blow up causing to begin with causing little damage.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: Can reduce the user to no chakra if he does not explode the seal.
Description: When the user completes the hand seals for this jutsu. A pentagram with the Kanji for fire appears in the Centre. It looks as though it is made of orange ink. where as it’s just pure chakra. When this jutsu is first learned, it uses the Chakra from the seal and the seal alone to cause and explosion. As the rank and thus the power increase. More of the users chakra is absorbed but also the person who has the seal placed on them has there chakra drained to fuel the Jutsu. At S rank, it can if placed in the very centre of the person cause there body to explode. This jutsu at higher levels mixes with the opponents chakra causing it to explode. If used too much or too many of the seals are placed then the user suffers chakra depletion and will suffer the effects of a seal themselves or will be knocked out.
Limit: To go above "C" the user must have at least 300TP in fire Jutsu for "S" rank the user must have over 600 fire TP and 800 TP in total to show that they have the chakra control.
D class
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Going back to his book, He looked at the next few lines on the paper. He wanted to make sure his house was protected in case he needed to bring someone here. That and the drawing and experimenting with seals was interesting to him. So flipping the pages he had ripped out of a book at the library, he turned to tyhe one he wanted. Human firebomb.

Taking time to trace the lines on a piece of paper before he got started flowing chakra into something he steadied his hand again. First was a circle, that took him a couple of tries. The first one wound up looking like a sad oval, and the second one looked more like a silly bird head. The third one he drew took though, and so feeling he had it down, made a few more quick circles. these circles would serve as the building blocks fro what he was going to make: exploding fire seals that drain charka. Putting his pen back on the paper he draw a few stars off to the side and made sure the balance was right. He wqas suprised he could actually draw some fairly decent stars. Not like he was an artist, but he felt alot better about the stars than the circles. He then took those stars he had made, and drawing them inside of the circles made a pentagram. The pentagram would capture the chakra he put into the seal, then he would touch it with his fire release and ad his element to it. 

Easier said than done. He made the first few handseal tentatively. not willing to commit partially, and the other because he wanted to get them right the first time. One seal after the other his chakra was pulled up and out into the seal, and then touched it with the fire element in his system. As he did such the fire seal appeared in the center of the pentagram. The first seal then turned bright orange. lighting up the little peice of paper, until BOOM!!! Nobuo had fulled it with too much chakra and had succeeded in blowing up the left half of his desk. Nobuo picked himself up off the floor, grabbed another piece of paper off the fridge and sat back down, little splinters of wood sticking out of his arm. 

Taking more care to write it well, he made the circle nice and round, one clean line. Then the star in the middle. He then took a breath in and calmly started up again. Wincing slightly as he finished the handseals he saw the fire symbol 'HI' light up in the center of the pentagram again, then for a moment Nobuo wavered and the seal blew up again. This time the shock kicked him back into the wall and knocked his head into his shelf. Nobuo rubbed his head and rolled himself up onto his knees, realing and then stood back up. This stupid jutsu was beginning to bug him a lot.Yet he pulled the chair from off the floor, grabbed another peice of paper and wrote on the now charred desk.Then, taking a breath recognised he had wavered, made a mistake, and set back to work, not going to let a burned face and splinters in his arm stop him just yet.

Outside the dog continued to yap, and Nobuo tried to drown him out by focusing on the task at hand. Finally he drew the circle and star again, made his handsigns and set back to work, filling the seal with fire touched chakra and making sure he could stop it in time. As the fire kanji began to show up and make everything orange, Nobuo grabbed it and slowed the flow down to a mere trickle. of energy. The seal, he learned was feeding off his chakra like any fire would need to do. He allowed the robbery of his energy by a trickle and then looked at the orange glowing seal. He grabbed a cigarette and touched it to the paper and noticed it was not hot to the touch but still gave off trace amounts of light. that would mean he would have to use it carefully when in battle, as people tended to spot big glowing things stuck to their forehead.

Walking now with the seal Nobuo felt the drain of chakra and not wanting to stop his training, he quickly began to repeat the symbol, star, circle, and chakra flow into two more peices of paper, made sticky by tiny little bit of adhesive. He then ran out the door, feeling the trickle of chakra on the three seals and walked right up the the still yapping down stuck on it's chain. Nobuo walk closer and the dog growled threatening to bite him, nipping at the air. As he stood there he looked around and made sure he was alone. This was going to be a fun close to the evening. He walked forward, right in the dog's range and let it bite his hand. Smiling the dog tore into his hand, and as he did so Nobuo stuck the glowing orange seal to the top side of the dog's mouth. The dog didnt notice and Nobuo pulled out a Kunai and stabbed the dog in the nose. The god let go and Nobuo walked away. Returning to his room, wrapped his hand and let the flow of chakra continue to draw his energy. Then looking out the window smiled at the still howling and yapping dog.

Then Nobuo stopped the chakra.

BOOM! the dog's head erupted iand his head blew up. The poor thing. People must had heard the explosion and Then urged him to cause the next one to blow, the kunai he lft in the dog's nose, now at it's headless corpse's side exploded. The dog's ribcage was torn open. Then Nobuo folded the last seal up like a paper airplane, and flew it to the dog's remaining body. With one flash of extacy, and the feeling of pure pleasure he lit up the last seal, getting rid of the remains. people now running around corners to see what had been done. They would find nothing, nothing but another dead dog. Nobuo smiled to himself feeling like he was on top of the world, and walked back to the remaineder of his deask and dew one more seal on the wood, blowing it up, and ridding himself of the useless piece of furniture. nbsp;