A sandy knoll by the beach. (training,private)

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Raiton: Raikou Kenjuu no Jutsu - Lightning Release: Lightning Revolver Technique

Rank: C Rank

Skill: Ninjutsu

Effect: A higher powered variation of the Raikou Yama no Jutsu.

Special: "Handseals".

Drawback: --

Description: Concentrating their chakra to more of a pinnacle point and gathering it in a singular mass, the user can shoot a concentrated ball of lightning with speed equal to that of a weapon being thrown. Unlike Raikou Yama no Jutsu, this can carry some serious damage potential, leaving second degree burns and can penetrate up to one inch of human flesh. The full charge takes four movements to prepare, with one movement removed each class the user is above C.

Limit: Must know Raiton: Raikou Yama no Jutsu

Shiki was sick of sitting around on the ship. Gathering up his belongings Shiki decided to go for a stroll on the beach. Shiki figured it was time to stop training his blood limit for a bit. It was time to get back into his groove. Get back to his roots really. It was time for this storm born to sink his teeth into some more lightning releases. Shiki figured now was the time to get some more training under his belt. Gathering up his back pack Shiki wandered to the end of a sand dune on the beach and placed his backpack on the edge of the sand. After a small amount of rummaging Shiki sorted through his gear and pulled out his book on Lightning ninjutsu. 

Flipping through a few of the pages Shiki started looking for interesting Jutsu that he could pick up. He didn't want to do anything to crazy right now. Just something that could be expanded on later if need be. Flipping through a couple of pages he saw a jutsu called "lightning raven" Shiki wasn't very interested in learning that one again. Shiki flipped through a few more pages and eventually found a jutsu called "Lightning Revolver." This... Seemed promising. So this one seems to build off of the lightning bullet technique. It's just a more powerful six rounded attack. 

Shiki made a couple of quick hand movements and ended by extending his dominant hand outwards ready to cast the lightning bullet jutsu. Shiki let the bullets form on his finger tips and fired a couple rounds into the ocean. The small marble sized bullets flew into the ocean and were enveloped by the salty foam of the crashing waves hitting the shore. There was a small plinking noise as the water splashed as if several small rocks were launched into the water. The Jutsu was executed flawlessly. The problem was that it was not the form of the Jutsu that Shiki wanted to use.

The shots needed to be bigger, faster and be coursing with a lot more power. To put it into simpler terms Shiki needed something with a stronger caliber. Shiki used his hand seals again this time making the motions a little more complex as he made sure to make the blast larger as he readied it. Gathering lots of Chakra into his arm Shiki readied himself to release the Chakra. Shiki felt the chakra form into his arm. Activating his bloodlimit Shiki was able to see the lightning form around his arm as he readied the shots.

Shiki looked at the spherical lightning form around his arm. It would be invisible to the naked eye. But simply by examining the electric waves coming from his arm Shiki was able to get a better understanding of his Chakra nature. There were six shots of lightning that was in a small rotation around his arm. Shiki realized that these orbs themselves would be the projectile. If Shiki were to release the energy like it was now the orbs would be too small to cause the real damage that Shiki wanted to do to an opponent. 

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Gathering up more energy Shiki watched the spherical balls of lightning increase in diameter and the energy began to pick up in potential energy in his arm. Shiki felt his arm become electrified and full of energy. It was like his arm was covered in a massive itch and releasing the jutsu was the only way to properly scratch it. Shiki could barely hold it anymore. The lightning wanted nothing more then to expel itself from his arm and strike out in the direction he wanted to send it from. Extending his arm outwards Shiki pointed his fingers out like he was firing a gun.

Shiki felt the energy arcing back and forth between the tip of his thumb and the front of his pointer finger. The lightning was being condensed and held in between his fingers and waiting for a release. Shiki pointed his finger outwards at the incoming waves. In particular he found a wave that was getting ready to crest and crash. Before the water turned into a white foamy mist Shiki shot his hands outward and aimed at the center of the wave. 

Shiki felt the recoil as the lightning was pushed out of his hands. The electrified ball of lightning crackled and flew through the air at a fast intensity. The electrified round hit the center of the wave and blew through the back end of the water. Pushing though at least 6 inches of the water. Shiki felt the lightning orbs around his arms rotate as the shot was fired. The next round moved and centered itself in between his thumb and his pointer finger. Shiki had the next shot "chambered" and ready to be fired.

Shiki had five more shots left in his arm. Reading his arm for the next wave of recoil Shiki aimed for the center of the next cresting wave of the set. Summoning forward a large amount of determination Shiki fired another round at the wave. The water busted through the wave itself and came out the back end. The lightning fizzled out of the back end and dispersed into nothingness as it lost its velocity. The next round chambered in between his fingers once again. Shiki readied himself for the next wave. Firing the next two rounds in quick succession Shiki felt the recoil effect the second shot. It flew a good couple inches above the first round and hit the wave.

Gathering his chakra Shiki realized it was time to compensate his next few rounds to make sure that he didn't miss his next couple of rounds in a pinch. Shiki was getting ready to fire the next couple of rounds at the next cresting wave. However, just as the wave was getting ready to crash several silver fish jumped out of the crashing wave and went airborne. Without missing a beat Shiki fired his remaining rounds at the wave causing two rounds to go flying at the jumping silver fish. 

Two of the rounds went flying and both hit the flying silver fish. The fish reacted like it was shot by a small caliber fire arm. The round blew the head of the fish off and the second round clipped another fish directly in the center of its body blowing its guts out into the crashing water. The fish was charged and electrified instantly becoming charred. The burnt fish washed up on the shore covered in a salty brine as the fish were killed outright. The electrified blast of energy was surely a powerful move. Shiki felt his finger tips as they were slightly numbed from the Jutsu. Rubbing them together Shiki folded up his book and put it in his bag.

[Madame Loki]

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Kyori Keiko (Distance Training)
Rank: E, D, C, B, A, S
Skill: Kekkai Genkai Training Method
Effect: Allows the user the capability of having a wider-ranged Sutatikku Nagare.
Special: ---
Drawback: The training of these techniques are unaffected by difficulty class.
Description: Allows the user’s Static Current ability to effect a larger area. Every time this ability is trained, the user is then allowed to manipulate charges at a longer distance. The additional distance is dependent upon the rank and number of times this technique has been learned.
E Rank increases the number of meters that the user is capable of manipulating by one for each time that the training is learned. Must be learned two times.
D Rank increases the number of meters that the user is capable of manipulating by one for each time that the training is learned. Must be learned three times.
C Rank increases the number of meters that the user is capable of manipulating by two for each time that the training is learned. Must be learned five times
B Rank increases the number of meters that the user is capable of manipulating by three for each time that the training is learned. Must be learned ten times
A Rank increases the number of meters that the user is capable of manipulating by four for each time that the training is learned. Must be learned fifteen
S Rank increases the number of meters that the user is capable of manipulating by five for each time that the training is learned. The S Rank may be learned an infinite number of times.
Limit: Must know Sutatikku Nagare (Static Current).
Learned 3 times

Shiki stood at the end of a sandy knoll and gazed off at the horizon of the sea. Shiki had only seen the ocean for a first time a few months ago and had fallen in love with it since then. Shiki couldn't wait to get back on the open waters and chase that horizon. Shiki had no idea what lay beyond that majestic horizon. Shiki couldn't wait to have that salty mist of water in his face as he moved once more across the big blue and chase that setting sun all the way to the next adventure. Shiki sat down and let his weight sink into the sand as he watched that brilliant crimson ball set into the distance.

Shiki gave a longing gaze into the distance. This was the moment that Shiki came all the way to this part of the shore for this particular moment. She sun was getting to the point where you could watch it set without having your eyes being burned out of your sockets. Shiki gave a small relaxing sigh of a man who had finally settled down for the end of the day. Shiki made a few quick handseals and let the power of his bloodlimit wash over him. His eyes reacted to the change in chakra brilliantly. His vision sharpened as the bloodlimit took his physiological effects on his body.

Shiki lied back and gazed at at the setting sun with a new set of eyes. His pupils had formed up with four small circles that had formed in a square pattern in the center of his eyes. Shiki watched as the sun began its marvelous descent to the horizon. Shiki gazed out and began to watch the setting sun. The electromagnetic waves coming off of the sun was brilliant of its own right. There was so much to take in all at once. Shiki loved how brilliant the sun looked slashing against the darkening purple of the sky behind him.

In front of him it was like someone had lit the sky on fire. It had come alive in a bright explosion of orange and fiery reds that flushed the sky. Along the horizon the glassy ocean reflected the bright light of the heavens above on its own endless expanse of surface. The water's many ripples caused the water to appear like it was a mirror image of the sky that had been cracked and was subsequently moving and flowing. There was so much more that Shiki saw with his bloodlimit. Several colors that were unable to be seen by the human eye.

Watching all the wave lengths from his sandy knoll on the beach Shiki reached into his bag and grabbed a rather large glass bottle. Pulling it out Shiki pulled out the cork stopper and took a healthy swig of rum. Letting the drink burn his throat Shiki leaned back into the sand and felt his cheeks grow rosy from the drink itself. Shiki grabbed the bottle by the neck and turned it vertical taking two more heavy swings. Putting the stopper back in the bottle Shiki let fell back and let his hair hit the sand. Looking at the sky in pure wonder Shiki closed his eyes and fell asleep.

[Madame Loki]

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Raiton – Kazanrai no Jutsu (Thunder Style – Particle Storm Mist)
Rank: A
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Storm size is seventy five meters. Vision is obscured, and the shocks are inescapable.
Special: 'Handseals'
Drawback: By default, the storm remains in place for five turns, but it can be blown away by ‘S’ ranked Fuuton and swept away by ‘S’ ranked Suiton. Does not differentiate between friend or foe. Can only be used twice per thread due to the toll it takes on the user.
Description: With this technique, the user summons forth a bright bolt of lightning FROM THE SKY which strikes the battlefield, and upon striking the ground, it blinds everyone present for a moment before revealing the true purpose of this jutsu – a sea of grayish dust is ever present, blanketing the battlefield. This ‘mist’ is actually Raiton particles spread forth all around, serving to blind shinobi with regular vision, confuse doujutsu as they’d see nothing but bright lights due to the immense amount of chakra present, and finally, constantly shock whomever is trapped within. Every two seconds, all within the storm will be shocked for ‘C’ ranked damage; those carrying metal on them or those susceptible to Raiton due to their blood will have that damage increased to ‘B’. Lastly, at all times within the storm, a loud crackling noise can be heard, confusing regular hearing unless the user is adept at the Sound release.
Limit: Raiton no Jutsu



Shiki awoke on the shore of the beach to the waves gently kissing his feet and the soft sound of gulls flying overhead. Reaching his hands out he felt the glass neck of a bottle that he had nursed on until the evening. Shiki rose his head still a little groggy from his sleep and was accompanied by the faint head ache and cotton mouth that came from drinking from a bottle of rum throughout the entire night. Shiki stretched and dusted some of the sand of his head. There was sand in his hair and Shiki loathed the feeling. Dusting a bit of the sand from his hair Shiki stood up and decided to go to take a dip in the water.


Shiki looked around and saw that the beach was empty. This small atoll was far away from the main island and had nothing on except a few palm trees and sand. Taking off his pants and his button up shirt Shiki stepped into the water letting it rise up his calfs stopping for a brief moment and then continuing to step into the water until it was around his waist. Eventually he simply arched his back and dove into the water. Letting his head get submerged Shiki began to pull himself along the sandy bottom of the beach.


Holding his breath and diving under the water Shiki looked around the tidal range and saw all manner of creatures along the sandy floor of the tidal area. Shiki took several long strides underwater and swam closer to the floor. After a couple seconds Shiki felt his lungs starting to cry out of air as he began to swim towards the surface of the water. Breaking out of the surface of the water Shiki filled his lungs with the sweet life providing air from the world above. Feeling the hot sun on his face as he broke from the water bellow Shiki caught his breath and began to tread water.


After getting all the sand off his body Shiki used the chakra in his palms of his hands to stand up slowly on the surface of the water. Letting the water start to bead off of him Shiki felt the warm ocean water start to bead and roll down his skin. Shiki needed to dry off now. Forming some quick handseals and holding the rat sign Shiki let a wave of electric energy course through his skin. His lightning coursed from water droplet to water droplet. The heat form each individual droplet began to increase and slowly evaporated.


Standing on the surface of the water was a little bit difficult. It wasn’t like training on the flowing currents of the mountain streams in Kumogakure. The rivers tended to be quick moving making it a lot harder to stand on then a still pool of water. But here on the ocean the very wave pools were constantly in motion and in a perpetual flux. Large cresting waves were being cast at the shore resulting in Shiki constantly having to alter the amount of chakra he had to maintain in his feet was a tedious task. The waves would rise and fall with Shiki’s chakra and it felt like we was rocking on a boat.

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Giving an uneasy smile Shiki and struggled to get his feet from avoiding slipping back into the water. His feet would sink into the water about 6-8 inches and Shiki had to keep constantly stepping on the surface and continuously slowly sinking into the floor. Shiki realized that this was a good time if ever to practice his chakra control on. Feeling every nerve ending on the bottom of his feet was difficult. His feet were very calloused from the constant wear of boots and constantly walking. It was difficult to accurately feel where his feet where in regards to the water.

Applying the chakra rather haphazardly Shiki kept having to flux between having too much chakra in his feet causing the water to ripple and vibrate violently. The resulting ripples would cause the water to spigot and splash form the disruptive power coming through the water. The resulting water coming from the surface of the water caused massive amounts of small droplets to be sprayed up his legs and getting his skin wet once again. That or Shiki would put in far too little chakra and have his leg sink back into the briny ocean water.

Shiki struggled with the task for a little bit before a sizable wave came along totally destabilizing his chakra control. With the crest of the wave arriving right where Shiki was standing Shiki was lifted from standing vertically to standing completely horizontal as the water curled. Losing his balance and taken by complete surprise Shiki was knocked backwards and sent falling with his back towards the oceans surface. Landing with an enormous splash Shiki hit the water not holding his chakra active to avoid landing on the water with it as strong as concrete.

Shiki was suddenly underwater. With salt water all around Shiki accidentally sucked in a mouth full of briny sea water before he stopped his breathing. Although Shiki had fallen in love with the sea and spent that last two months aboard a pirate vessel. He found himself incredibly uncomfortable in the water. The water here was so warm, it was like he was swimming in a bath. A salty bath that when the water got in your eyes would cause a lot of discomfort. On the mountains of Kumogakure falling into a stream in the courtyard was a pleasant affair.

The water would be cold and refreshing. In fact during the winter months falling into the waters could be dangerous from hypothermia. The water would be cool and refreshing. Coming straight from a natural spring in the mountains the water would be filtered by miles or rock and volcanic soil keeping the water clean and fresh. Accidentally drinking some cool mountain water wasn’t actually a bad thing. But this sea water was dangerous. The waters themselves burned and would turn a man insane if he drank from the sea.

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Shiki let himself back float on the water a bit letting the gentle rocking of the ocean rock him back and forth. It was like he was being rocked to sleep. Except he was very much not asleep and rather frustrated by this turn of events. Letting out a frustrated snort Shiki felt himself losing control of his chakra again. His attention was slipping. Trying to find something to focus on to keep his mind in check was the next hardest part. Sitting on the water Shiki let his mind drift back to his last week aboard the ship.


Shiki sat there remembering the soft touch of her skin. The smell of her hair and those soft, warm eyes of hers sent Shiki back into the day dream. Shiki remembered her in his arms longingly staring off into the clouds. A particularly rough wave lifted Shiki out of his day dream and slammed him into a frothy wall of salty brine. Shiki felt the water crash down on back and shoulders. Charging up a large amount of lightning Shiki began to arc the lightning across the surface of his skin. Shiki felt his skin grow numb as the lightning spread out.


Shooting from droplet to droplet the arcing lightning expended just a small amount of chakra as it evaporated the water on his skin. His skin grew a slight tingling sensation as the lightning arced on and off his skin harmlessly. The voltage moving through his skin was getting picked up and repurposed through his body as he channeled the current along his skin. Steam came off his skin as the water was evaporated and the resulting mist came off his body charged with electricity. Shiki watched with a bit of interest as the mist had small bursts of electricity coming off of it.


“hold on a minute.” Shiki had a bit of a plan for his next jutsu idea. Standing back up on the sea water Shiki collected himself and took several steps back towards the beach. Feeling the soft sands underneath his feet as he curled his toes. Shiki ran his new idea in his head. What if he could create mist… or rather a fog from his lightning. All the particles in the air could be electrically charged to have lightning coursed through them to create a massive area of effect jutsu. The premise seemed simple but Shiki could already imagine just how much chakra this move would use.


Shiki took a towel from his pack and finished the drying process laughing as his hair stood up from the static electricity. Shiki could feel the static charge in his hair as he stood on the sands. Channeling his chakra he made a couple quick hand seals and activated his blood limit. As his static field came alive Shiki waved his hands over his head. Using his bloodlimit Shiki forced the static energy from his hair to his finger tips and let the red sparks shot from his fingers. Shiki readied his stance on the beach and prepared himself to try out a new idea.

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Shiki threw on some small clothes consisting of a mesh fabric that covered his body allowing for him to still remain cool despite the humid temperature. Shiki felt the tropical sea breeze kiss his body and move through the fabric of his clothing. Gathering up a substantial amount of chakra Shiki to charge up a massive lightning bolt inside of his body. Shiki thought about how the lightning would have to act against the water in order to make the Jutsu work the way he envisioned it. The lightning itself would have to have a special property to it to make it work.


Shiki knew that the lightning would need to hit the water with such an intensity that the water would become vaporized and cause a mist. The mist would need to be excessive so the lightning blast would need to hit with enough heat and enough intensity to create the mist and get it to spread in such a way that the area of effect would be useful. Shiki took a moment to conceptualize how much more energy he would need to hit the ground with to make the air that static. Shiki visualized the lightning casting from his fingertips at the water.


Shiki imagined the lightning hitting the water from his finger tips and the resulting steam that would come from the water’s surface and cascade into the air in a moist explosion of steam. Shiki thought for a few moments. If this jutsu was going to work the lightning bolt needed to hit the surface at a 90 degree angle. So now the plan would have to have the water to come down from the sky or be launched from an airborne position. Shiki imagined being up in the air to call in lightning from his body to launch at the surface at the water. Shiki pondered this for a moment.


There was going to be so many handseals that Shiki would have to cast. The amount of airborne time Shiki would need to have in order to make all the handseals would make this impossible. Shiki imagined the amount of chakra that would need to be formed to make this happen and realized too that he would need to be still in order to create that much electricity to make a fog. Shiki needed to come up with a new plan. Perhaps… Perhaps casting the electricity into the air and having it rain down from the sky. The idea of launching the lightning in the air seemed feasible but…


Shiki visualized the But shooting a lightning bolt into the air was going to add a level of predictability to the jutsu. Perhaps if there was some way to summon down a lightning strike loaded with his chakra without actually having touched the lightning himself. Shiki thought about the logistics of performing such a jutsu and realized the benefits of it immediately. The ability could catch someone by surprise and the use of the ground as a point of contact from the sky would create a blast the likes of which that could a cloud of mist that could make up the main area for his jutsu.

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Shiki imagined the lightning being called down from the clouds and hitting the oceans surface. The water hitting the ocean as strong as it could possibly be brought down. The resulting explosion of steam and mist would kick up enough water to obscure everyone’s vision of the spot of impact. Shiki did some simple figuring after determining his strength level he could probably make the mist from the lightning strike stretch out at least 75-80 meters from the spot of impact. Determining where the lightning was going to be called down from was going to be tricky.


It wouldn’t be as simple as just casting a bolt of lightning down from the sky. There was going to be a very difficult task of figuring out just where exactly the lightning was going to strike by determining the availability of cloud coverage. The bolt of lightning would need to land and hit the ground in question. Hmm… Shiki thought a little bit harder about the Jutsu. The ground. Surly there must be some way for Shiki to be able to cast this jutsu over the ground. Even being on a pirate ship there was no real reason to learn a jutsu that lacked in such practical application.


Shiki thought about all the conductive elements that could be found present in the ground. Minerals and other sort metallic and conductive dusts were present in soils and minerals. Perhaps if the lightning were to come down with enough force Shiki could create something much more similar to a dust storm. Breaking the stones, soil and dust into particles. Once those particles are in the air Shiki could use his chakra to create lightning that could shoot between the particles to electrify the dust. The dust would be able to shock and blind people as people were trapped inside of it.


Yeah… This is sounding more and more useful the more I think about it. Shiki summoned forwards his chakra and focused on a point of contact further along in the water. Looking at the point on the oceans surface Shiki could feel the electromagnetic wavelengths emanating from the point where the lightning was going to be called down upon. It lit up the water from the area within his blood limit. Looking on at the glassy water the bright sheen of the chakra impression on the water glowed brightly.


Shiki wasn’t exactly sure what hand seals he needed to use to create this jutsu. But as he was becoming more proficient with his training and how to move and shape the lighting nature Shiki realized that he already had a pretty good idea on how to shape the lightning’s form to fit his needs with this jutsu. Starting with the dragon sign Shiki more or less just started to free style his hand seals as he tried to define the jutsu based off of his idea. Going through a slow and methodical process Shiki summoned up a series of handseals.

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Shiki gathered the chakra inside of his torso letting the chakra in his body convert itself slowly into its nature transformation. Shiki was getting significantly better at converting chakra into lightning element. Shiki couldn’t help but think that all this recent success had come from constantly pushing his Kyoudo ability and stretching the limits of his bloodlimit. Shiki was becoming more and more in tune with this element. Shiki thought back to a month ago and where he stood with his progress. Back then he was already considered a master by most standards.

But back then was nothing. Shiki realized now that even where he currently stands his ability over this element was nothing compared to where it needed to be. There was still a whole variety of jutsu that were simply beyond Shiki’s ability at the moment. Letting the lightning sit in his chest Shiki took a moment to sample the lightning inside of him by letting it course through his nervous system. Using his body to examine his own lightning was a way for him to understand where his strength was on that particular day.

Shiki felt a wave of calm energy course through him as he readied himself. The emotions that came through his electric current were those of longing. Shiki wanted nothing more then to get stronger not just for himself but to protect the people he wanted to protect. Shiki’s mind wandered back to her face and the stormy night on board his ship. Shiki remembered the thunderous lightning and the moment he had lost her. Shiki felt the lightning in his body take on a cold feeling. Black bolts of lightning began to arc out of him as he was still channeling his energy.

Shiki was almost ready to release the jutsu and he felt the lightning craving to jump out of his body and do his will. Shiki felt the pressure building up in his face as the lightning was arcing through his nervous system. It was like being overwhelmed with the sensation to sneeze. Holding the energy back was intoxication and rocked Shiki’s body with a wave of tingling pleasure. Shiki was torn in between wanting to release the jutsu and holding the electricity in. Shiki let the lightning fill his body slowing between all his active nerve endings.

Shiki closed his eyes and visualized the area in front of him. Shiki imagined the lightning coming down from the sky and striking the surface of the water. Shiki imagined the water being stuck and knocking the particles of water up into the air. From there the water molecules would be dispersed and the lightning would shoot in between them glowing and lighting up the fog itself. If Shiki used the lightning to create a much light as possible to light up the fog. If Shiki created a wave of light and electricity it could blind and stun everyone trapped inside of the fog. Shiki pictured the expansion of the fog and realized exactly what dimensions it had to be.

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Shiki thought about how the fog would need to behave dimensionally in order to make It the most useful. To put it simply there was only going to be so much mist that Shiki could create at once form one lightning bolt. That would come from how much energy he could put into that single lightning bolt. Shiki knew there was a limit to the voltage he could put into the lightning bolt at once. Meaning that no matter how Shiki condensed the lightning to come down to hit the water or to hit the ground. Afterwards the amount of force would cause the fog to grow.


The fog would need to be as wide as it could possibly be to prevent anyone from escaping the Jutsu. Shiki needed the fog to be tall enough to catch someone who simply tried to jump or shunshin out of the fog. More importantly it needed to be wide enough to catch anyone who tried to run out of the jutsu. From its center someone would need to move 38 meters in either direction to escape the jutsu. More importantly the jutsu would need to be able to entrap people inside of the mist. Shiki would count of the blinding stream of chakra for that.


The chakra inside the particle cloud would be a pure incarnation of lightning chakra so someone trying to see through the cloud with any sort of chakra sensing jutsu or dojutsu would be caught completely useless. Shiki remembered the girl at the Chunin exams and her magic eyes. Deception was part of the ninja world. Not being able to hide away from an enemy’s gaze was obviously a disadvantage. The ability to conceal himself within a cloud of his own energies would give him a lot power in a battle between several ninja.


Shiki could even potentially use this jutsu when fighting multiple opponents at once. Keeping them trapped and ensnared in a shocking particle mist that would blind and destroy them over a long series of time. Shiki thought about the size of the jutsu and realized that it would be able to create a fog large enough to cover the entire length of his ship. In a pinch if Shiki ever needed to get a whole lot of filthy degenerates off his ship he could use this to keep his ship free of parasites. The metal nodes on the ship would do amazing things.


The metal nodes would take on the waves of shocking voltage and course the electric energy through the wooden area of the ship and turn the ship into a literal insect trap. Electrocuting anything caught within the insides of the ship via the copious amount of copper nodes found within the ship. There was so much dormant metal objects running throughout the ship that having an active current would be fatal to anyone trapped inside the ship. As the way things were going in his life it feels like its more important to say anything.

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Shiki finally let the lightning release from his body calling down a massive bolt of electricity from the sky. The bolt of lightning came down in a flash of thundering brilliance. Like fired from a cannon the ball of lightning struck the surface of the water in a massive blast the likes of which sent a preliminary shockwave from the surface of the water sending a massive wave of water from across seas surface. Sent out in all directions the massive wave created by the lightning bolt was sent out in all directions from the initial point of impact.


The bolt of lightning incinerated the waters surface creating a massive amount of mist and steam were created and sent into the air. The lightning pierced the water a certain amount of depth before diverting it’s path of travel along the water horizontally. Spreading a massive amount of steam up in the air. The lightning heated the water up to the point of steam before stopping the expenditure of heat and began to travel through the mist. The lightning cast itself in waves traveling up and down the particles of the cloud as it began to travel to and from the fogs limits.


The fog itself spread out quickly erupting from all levels of the ground. It was expanding quickly like a wave of silently encroaching death that was traveling across the surface of the water constantly expanding outwards at an alarming rate. The mist began to crawl at an alarming rate over the textures of the sea and over the waves themselves effortlessly. The encroaching wall of mist was terrifyingly charming as it moved closer towards Shiki. Shiki nervously took a few tentative steps backwards just in case the Jutsu moved a little but further then he expected.


Shiki watched with fascination as the wave of lightning charged mist glided over the water’s surface and zapping back and forwards between itself. It looked like there was an incredibly intense lightning storm cascading in and out of the fog in front of him. His eyes flickered back and forwards watching the frequency of the lightning move back and forwards between the lightning charged fog. Smiling Shiki was captivated with the frequency. It was strange seeing a cloud that was so charged with electricity it was actually providing light.


This bright cloud of floating lightning finally stopped moving stretching out just a few meters past 75 meters from the point where the lightning struck originally. The shape of the fog was constantly changing here or there by a meter or two as it struggled to hold its shape. Shiki was actually really relatively concerned about how quickly this cloud came to be created. Shiki took a few moments to gather a bit more chakra in his body and focused it in his eyes.

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Shiki released the sensation and let the control from his eyes take on a completely new light. Looking into the field of lightning was actually incredible. Despite not being able to sing things normally now Shiki could see in detail through the fog itself. Shiki was looking through the fog and seeing the waves from the sea’s surface. Shiki could see where the lightning chakra was coming into contact with the objects inside of the fog bank. Every object was illuminated brightly and defined by the electric current inside of the fog.


It was like being able to see every part of the waves crashing. Every aspect of the fog was able to be felt with his static field. Shiki could only imagine that this is what having that crazy byakugan dojutsu that the strange ninja in the Chunin Exam had. That person could see through walls and even through people. It wasn’t nearly as useful obviously, it had its own use in this sense. With this Jutsu in combination with his bloodlimit Shiki could see everything that was inside of his fog. Shiki could only imagine the other uses this could have.


Shiki imagined perhaps being trapped inside of a dark room or a cave and then being able to light up the entire cave with his Jutsu. Coating the entire cave system full of a the particle dust that would be created from the massive shock wave from the lightning coming down from the sky. It would coat the entire cave system with the electrified particle dust along the cave walls and would allow him to see every nook and cranny from inside the cave by simply looking at the electric currents as it moves through the cave.


Shiki took a minute and thought about the application of actually getting that lightning infused particle storm to rush into the cave and get it to fill the cave to allow the scenario to play out. Shiki realized a problem right away. The lightning needed to come down from the sky. That means that it can’t really happen indoors. Maybe if there was someway for the lightning to comedown from the sky into an entrance into the cave perhaps. Perhaps if he used his bloodlimit to control the lightning bolt to come down from the sky and into said cave.


Of course that would require a lot more training within his blood limit which was just in and of itself such a painstaking task to do so. Shiki could absolutely tell the benefits that come with becoming stronger with his blood limit but it obviously came with the disappointing down grade of working on the jutsu. Working on expanding the Kyoudo blood limit was a painful affair that caused the body and the mind to strain and suffer as you tried to understand more and more of the nature of lightning. Shiki decided it was best to just move on.

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Shiki felt his knees grow weak as the chakra drain took its toll. On his body. This jutsu took so much damn chakra. Shiki felt his face grow numb as he realized he was getting tunnel vision. Shiki let himself fall backwards onto the sandy knoll where he had set his gear. His head was pounding, his eyes were straining and his view of the electromagnetic energy was distorted. Just trying to keep his eyes open was making it difficult to focus. Everything was so bright.

Cutting of the chakra Shiki felt the dull throbbing pain in his eyes subside and become replaced

with a faint sensitivity to light. Slowly Shiki watched as the wavelengths in his vision disappeared and his vision took on a more normal appearance. The array of colors that Shiki normally couldn’t see began to slowly disappear leaving nothing but a standard color set. Shiki felt relieved as the pain began to dissipate but he was still somewhat disappointed at losing the ability to see the wave lengths. In a way Shiki had gotten so used to seeing that way that it felt like he was losing part of his vision.


Shiki felt his vision leave his eyes for a moment and he felt his eyes glaze over. It was like having someone used to seeing the world in color switch over to grey scale. The resulting look left him rather disappointed. Not just in the lack of color but in the lack of strength in his dojutsu. It was like he had come so far but his performance wasn’t where he needed to be. Shiki let his chin lower and sat leaned back into the sandy knoll. His shoulders bearing the most of his weight into the sand. Taking a deep breath and relaxing Shiki turned his eyes back on the fog wall in front of him.


Reaching back into his rucksack Shiki reached into a compartment and grabbed a green glass bottle out of his bag. Scooting back onto the shore Shiki rested his back against a palm tree and sighed a soft breath of exhaustion. Bringing the bottles mouth to his face he took a bite on the cork stopper and pulled it out with his teeth. There was a plunking noise as Shiki dropped the cork into his hands and tilted the bottle upwards taking several lengthy gulps from the bottle. The hot sensation of the rum filled his mouth and burned his throat.


Shiki was well beyond the point of shrinking from a pain like this. In fact with everything that had happened to him emotionally he was actually craving this sweet drink. Letting the drink run past his throat Shiki let the wave of bliss and numbness associated with the alcohol. As he drank he drank to forget. To make a muddled memory of the recent pain and to fight through the emotional distress that it caused him. Watching the fog crackle and glow brilliantly on the surface of the water Shiki took another heavy swig from the bottle. Shiki took a few breaths to steady himself and closed his eyes.

[Madame Loki]

+95... some of the posts were a little short. Just a tad.

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Shiki took a few moments and let the alcohol flow through his veins and effect his brain. Taking a few moments Shiki just focused on the sea breeze striking him through the palm trees coming through the sandy atoll. The wind moved several grains of sand along the sandy knoll. Along the sandy beach front. Bringing the bottle to his lips once more Shiki let the sweet taste of rum fill his mouth. Shiki wasn't sure what type of spirit this was aside from rum, but the exact type of rum brand and what not was lost to him. The bottle was about half full and Shiki felt his fingers grow numb the more he drank from it. Though he was not sure if that was from the lightning or the drink. 

Shiki set the bottle down in the sand. The lightning cloud continued to crackle and chirp as its intensity began to fade. The lightning flashed and the corresponding thunder reverberated across the sea's surface kicking up even more wind across the small sandy outcropping. Shiki smiled as he looked at the bright twinkling nebulous in front of him in pure excitement. There was something brilliant about looking at something bright and full of energy that Shiki had created with just his will and his desire to create a jutsu that was his very own. Shiki was pretty sure something like this was already in existence somewhere in the ninja world.

Shiki gave a week smile and lifted the bottle up once more. Shiki took another swig from his bottle and raised it up infront of his face. Toasting the bottle at the particle cloud Shiki continued to drink from the bottle and finally finished by tilting the bottle completely vertically and finishing the last few drips of the bottle in satisfaction. Lifting the bottle to his face Shiki coursed some lightning in between his fingers and trapped it in the glass bottle. Putting the cork back on it Shiki tossed the bottle out to sea.

[Madame Loki]

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Kyoudo Keiko (Intensity Training) x5

(d3)(C2)

Rank: D, C, B

Skill: Kekkai Genkai Training Method

Effect: Allows the user the capability of more quickly manipulating the charges in an object so that they become polarized at a greater rate.

Special: ---

Drawback: The training of these techniques are unaffected by difficulty class.

Description: A training method designed to be used in conjunction with Sutatikku Nagare, this ability allows the user the capability of manipulating charges at a faster rate in order to more quickly polarize an object. The percentile rates work in a manner of seconds, meaning that if the user has not learned this ability, they can manipulate the number of charges in an object by 10% of total polarization in one second. In order to completely manipulate an object of the user's choice they must have 100% polarized it. This means that unlearned, it will normally take a Kyoudo ten seconds to get control over one object and for every time they learn this it will take one less second.

D Rank allows for the user to manipulate charges 10% faster for each time that the technique is learned. Must be learned three times before the user is capable of learning the C Rank version.

C Rank allows for the user to manipulate charges 10% faster for each time that the technique is learned. Must be learned three times before the user is capable of learning the B Rank version.

B Rank allows for the user to manipulate charges 10% faster for each time that the technique is learned. May only be learned three times, which puts the user at 100%.

Limit: Must know Sutatikku Nagare (Static Current).


Shiki stood at the edge of the dock and looked down into the crystal blue water in the ocean below. Grabbing his bag of gear he wandered over to the edge of his ship. The ship rocked gently against the morning line that tied it to the peer. Shiki was exhausted and his chakra was already low from practicing the particle storm jutsu from earlier. But alas the gang plank on the ship was a light weight metal sheet that could only be moved with the extreme physical assertion of one or several people. Shiki used this as a method of keeping the ship safely in his possession during the duration of his time. Using his little remaining chakra he had he
mustered some of it together to activate his blood limit once again.


Fingers outstretched he opened his eyes and saw the world in its new light. The wavelengths of electromagnetic fields being created all around him was breathtaking and a bit distracting. But alas he found beauty in the way the sunlight reflected its electronic waves across the earth. Each metallic structure had its own polarity field that made the observation of such a natural phenomenon was unique. Though this vision was limited in its scope as to how long it could last. The result was non the less exciting and quite a breathtaking sight to behold. Grinning weakly Shiki felt the slight dull throb return behind his forehead.


Shiki focused on the metal gangplank and magnetized it causing it to float of the metal studs on the top of the deck. Hovering an inch off a deck of the ship Shiki pulled the metal gangplank towards him across the metal studded deck.
Lowering the repelling charge by manipulating the amount of electrons on the plank the letting the metal fall. Setting the metal down Shiki made a metal gangplank to form walk across the ship. Shiki stood at the end of the metal gangplank and focused on the metal once more. Rather then walk up the ramp he stood at the end of it and began to lift the metal sheet lift up off the ground. 

Being lifted into the air Shiki felt himself start to wobble as the metal plank moved upwards from a 45 degree angle to rising horizontal with the ship. Finally once it was horizontal it was kept hovering about an inch and a half off the deck. Finally raising his hand Shiki pulled on the magnetic field and brought the metal platform sliding across the wooded deck gliding over the positively charged deck pieces. The movement was seamless and steady. It was like Shiki was riding on a hover board. After getting towards the center of the deck Shiki released his bloodlimit's command of the metal pillar and let it slowly lower to the floor. 

After the metal sheet touched the wooded deck Shiki smiled. He had come a long way from where he once was. He was slowly getting more and more of a grips on his blood limit. He thought back to the young boy sitting in the class room making florescent light bulbs flicker and suffering the resulting migraines from it. As a kid Shiki always felt a slight resentment from his bloodlimit. It made him so different from the other kids. He was treated differently and shunned because of it. Now however he was proud of how far he has come as a result of his training and vigilance to his blood limit.  

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Shiki let his feet touch the deck of the ship and relaxed himself as he was once again on his wood and metal laden home on the seas. The ship rocked back and forth its lacquered halls reflecting the sunlight that was kissing the wood. All the metal nodes on the ship were hidden to the eye with exception to one very small pinhead sized head of metal that was firmly secured among the dark brown wooded planks of the ship. The wooded ships deck had been sanded and polished and finely lacquered giving the deck a smooth feeling against his feet. This was done in an effort to seal the pores to prevent the salt water from ruining the ship. 

Shiki looked about the ship and began to channel his bloodlimit once more. It was time to cast off from this sandy atoll in on the outskirts of the Taro island chain. First things first It would be time to weigh the anchor. By constantly shifting the positive and negative ends of a large spool the mourning line of the ship was being being constantly pulled and wrapped around a metal spool cranking the metal chain around. This moving beam wrapped the metal chains and raised the heavy metal anchor from the bottom of the sea. As it came off the ground the boat suddenly became a lot more volatile as the boat became more prone to the rocking of the sea. finally after the wench cranked several times.

The dark iron anchor reared its head from the surface of the water and it was lifted and carried out of the ocean and along the side of the ship. Slowly the ship was tugged and was lifted to the surface the water and was eventually retracted inside the ship where it sat waiting to be cast out again. Finally, after a good long moment the ships anchor was set down and the ships floor gave a slight groan as the heavy metal anchor set itself down. Finally once the task was done Shiki stopped shifting the magnetic fields of the spinning crank and set it to rest with his blood limit. The creaking noise of the metal halting was met with the new tension of the coiled chain on board the Ship.

Though the ship was now buoyant and longer anchored to the floor the ship was being rocked back and forwards while tethered to the dock. Shiki focused on the metal wires wrapping around the wooden post and began to shift its magnetic field until the metal was beginning to straighten itself and stand up and stiffen. The result was that metal wire had released itself and stiffened and was ready to be pulled back into the ship. By controlling several other spools of wire Shiki retracted the metal wire and had it coil back up on its spool. There was the noise of spinning cranks as the wire was quickly retracted and the ship was cast off from the dock. Suddenly no longer being held to the ground by the ropes.

Shiki felt the boat slowly being moved by the gentle rocking of the ocean. It was being pushed gently by the waves as the fine sea air moved through his hair. It brought the smells of salt, brine and the scents of adventure to him. His sapphire eyes gleamed with tumultuous excitement as he started making the final preparations to cast off from the dock. Normally it would take several people several and many working hands to get the ship ready to cast off and start heading out into the ocean. But with the power of his blood limit Shiki would easily be able to man this ship by himself. In fact if Shiki wasn't aboard the ship it wouldn't take off at all. The ship itself was iron clad and would be to heavy to move by a normal person.