Ritorutsume A-S

[Talon]

Basic Information

[/b] Ritorutsume “Tsu” A-S
Bloodlimit: N/A
Height: 5'6
Weight: 98 lbs
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Blood Type: -O
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Birth Country: Oto no Kuni (Land of Sound)
Village: Otogakure (Hidden Sound Village)[/ul]

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Base Movements: 3
Base Hand Seals: 20
Base Seals Reduction:--
Base Armour Points: 30
Base Will Saves Natural Resistance: 2
Base Fortitude Saves Natural Resistance: 1

Medical Specialist
1: Medic (70/500 Tp)
2: Dian Xue Shu (0/500 Tp)
3: (0/500 Tp)
4: (0/500 Tp)
5: (0/400 Tp)
6: (0/400 Tp)

Genjutsu Specialist
1: Figment Perception(10/500 Tp)
2: Phantasm Perception(30/500 Tp)
3: (0/500 Tp)
4: (0/500 Tp)
5: (0/400 Tp)
6: (0/400 Tp)

Ninjutsu Non-Specialist
1: Ice (0/500 Tp)
2: Water (20/500 Tp)
3: Wind (0/400 Tp)
4: (/400 Tp)

Clan Non-Specialist
1: Art of the Bard (175/500 Tp)
2: (0/500)
3: (0/400)
4: (0/400)

Miscellaneous[/ul]

Equipment

Primary Equipment

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Secondary Equipment

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Apparel

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Character Depth

Personality

Appearance

Background

[Talon]

Abilities

Academy Techniques

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Traits

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Skills

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Techniques

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Medical Techniques

Genjutsu

Clan Techniques

NinJutsu

[Ryutatsu "Sakurai Sword"]

This is on my wrong account be here is some help. So overall great job. Just a few fixes, spacing up in the beginning is still pretty bad. I can't tell were your freebies end and where you start using your starting TP begins. How much TP or whatever are you putting into the skills that you listed? It affects how many dice we are rolling for Skill point levels. You have figment perception listed twice in all that. It helps if you make use of bold, underline, or color options to separate your different sections for organization purposes.

[Talon]

All of those issues should be amended now, including what was discussed in chat.

[Spectre of the Falls(Kuroki)]

1/3

[Cadoc]

2/3
Gauntlet, Rope, and wire are incorrectly categorised as secondary when they are primary. With by my count you having 12,025 in primary of 13,000 and 15,430 in secondary of 30,000.
Please be advised that any leftover allowance will not be transferred over to your starting ryo.

[Shallistera]

Let me know if you're Ok with your items, then just PM me for the last approval

[Talon]

equipment has been moved over to its proper place. With new totals, I've added 3 smoke pellets and a knife to my inventory.

Not too worried about the left over allowance, considering this kids background I wouldn't expect to him to have much of anything anyway.

[Shallistera]

3/3