The Kuroskui Techniques

[kurushimi]

[OOC: Training thread I'll need a moderator to keep track of my pointage. I am learning:
Hi no Hagane (Wings of the Sun) NinJutsu
Type: C-rank, Offensive, Long range (10+m)
Kurushimi sends a powerful wave of electric energy out from his hands. It has been known to cause rockslides and other damages to surroundings as well. This is the only eletric-based jutsu that Kurushimi uses without the use of his swords

I will need a total of 30 points to do this]

Kurushimi returns to this island yet again to train. He has taken the time from his previous training to visit his family. Though his clan is of missing nin, he still stays in contact with them and learns the family's techniques. On his most recent visit Grandfather deemed it was time to learn another of the Kuroskui Family's secret Jutsus.

Kurushimi followed his grandfather to the forest and watched as he preformed the Jutsu, the Hi no Hagane. The jutsu's power was amazing to him. the energy seemed to cut through the forest like a hot knife through snow. The appearance now let him know why it was called the Wings of the Sun. When the technique is executed the wave almost looks like a pair of wings forming from his grandfather's body, and their strength is like that of the sun.

With this in mind Kurushimi sets out to learn this technique. He still carries the godscythe on his back though he is now adjusted to it's weight and size. He finds an open area and begins practicing. He molds his chakura into his hands and concentrates it there. Since his previous training here he has become quite good at this. Next he adds the electrical current inherent by the Kuroskui family to the chakura. Again, his skill at this technique is great because of his training with it.

He begins the training by extracting the electrified chakura and forming itin his hands. it takes much of his skill to do this he isn't yet used to molding pure electrified chakura with his hands yet. A small ball of chakura forms between his hands, but he is only able to maintain it for a small amount of time.

So this is why it's so hard to control.

This is the goal of the day's training. To sustain the Chakura ball. He trains for hours on end, forming and electrifying the chakura, then extracting it from his hands. Practicing show imporvement by the end of the day as he is able to easily manipulate the chakura in his hands, but the extraction still takes a lot of focus. Even after the extractioni he must still maintain the chakura flow outside of his body. By nightfall he is able to sustain the chakura utside of his body long anough to mold it into a sphere almost the size of His Raiyku, but at a great cost. At the end of his first day of training his chakura is nearly exhausted and he is very tired.

[kurushimi]

Kurushimi awoke the next morning feeling the effects of his last day's training. He had tha strangest feeling in his body. It wasn't just a normal kind of feeling, he was tired not only in his muscles, but his chakura felt tired as well. As he looked at his hands, which hurt the most at this moment, he saw where burns had developed from the immense amounts of chakura he had been using. His observations give him an idea and he set off to train again.

He feels his muscles expand as he stands realizes that his chakura isn't the only thing that needs exercise. He stretches before he begins the day's training and runs a lap or two. Now that his body was prepared he was ging to get to work. He begins to focus on his chakura and draws it into his hands. he concentraits hard on his chakura, but not just how much he forces into his hands. He concentraits of keeping a steady amount of chakura flowing through his hands instead of pushing it all into them at once, like a river's current instead of a waterfall's force.

Using this as a warm up for is chakura he begins to increase the flow and build up more powerful chakura into the technique. After his chakura reached his desired powerlevel he begins to extract the chakura from his hands, changing thew chakura's current at his will. It is hard at first, but with practice he is finaly able to draw a steady stream of chakura from his palms and mold it into pure material energy. Now he had it, he expanded the streams until they met in between his hands and fused together, now the chakura flow began to waver. The stream of chakura breaks and the technique with it.

Kurushimi is bothered by what has just happened and begins trying to understand what went on.
It's like they destroyed each other instead of connecting to each other. This has to change, if I cant connect the strands, then I wont be able to let chakura flow into the technique.
He understands now. the flow of chakura interrupted it's self. If the current in a pond goes in the same direction throughout the entire pond, then the current on one side of it would be flowing in the opposite direction of the current on the other side. when he connect the two flowing strands their movements cancelled each other out.

An idea came to Kurushimi now, he had a way to fix the problem. Instead of flowing the chakura from the top to the bottom of his body, he flowed it from the right to the left side of his body. This would keep the chakura in his hands flowing in the same direction at that point. Again he built up the chakura and pulled it out of his hands, ang again it grew untill it conected. This time, however, the strands increased power instead of losing it. The sudden increase in chakura flow, and the force at wich it was pulled caused Kurushimi to lose control of his chakura and the flow broke.

The day had almost ended now. Night will soon be coming and Kurushimi's chakura was beginning to expire. He built a fire and began to cook his evening's dinner while he thought about the day's training.
As far as progress goes, I didn't make it much further today.... but I can feel myself becoming stronger in every aspect of my body. The godscythe's training and use has built my physical body up tremendously, I probably have twice the stamina I should have and greater strength than that because of it. Now, this training has been strengthening my chakura. Already my chakura has begun to build up, it lasted much longer today before it ran out, and i didn't overuse it either. But i still need to fix this problem in the technique. I'm sure it's all about the flow.....

[kurushimi]

His thought and meditation on the jutsu carried late into the night and Kurushimi falls asleep analysing his failed technique. His dreams are of turmoil and destruction caused by a river that flows out of control. He watches as the river flows smoothly and is blocked by the dam, but the river's (chakura) flow stops suddenly and almost dissapears. Then, All of the backed up water rushes suddenly to the barrier wall and hits it with a great force. The impact is so great that even the great dam's walls cannot hold the river back and the water breaks through. He watches as the flowing river destroys the town beneath the barrier. Within a matter of momens hundreds of lives are taken or destroyed and the town is left in ruins as the river returns to it's normal state under a larger course.

Kurushimi awakens from his dream to find that it is not yet daylight. the rising sun slowly creeping over the horizon and casting it's fiery glare upon the sea. The night's dream still fresh in his memory and the images of the scenery ran through his brain. What had he just seen? Was is just a nightmare of death and destruction? It seemed like there was more to it. His mind drifted on slowly as he drank his morning's tea. Eventually he was ready to train.

He started again today with a quick stretch and some exercising to get his body prepared for the struggles of the day's workout. After he was ready he began on focusing his chakura again. Just as the day before he flowed the (water) chakura through his body and into a flowing pattern. He extracted the chakura from his hands and connected them, and again the flow became supercharged and Kurushimi lost control. The training went on like this for a while and he slowly began to get better. Despite all of his hard efforts Kurushimi still could not contain the connected flow of chakura for more than a few seconds.
He began to study his moves again
What is it that makes this chakura so hard to control?
When i think about it the technique really isn't that much diferent from the Raikyu.
Perhaps there's just something I'm not understanding here.

Then he remembered his grandfather's lesson more clearly now. He had shown him a wire wrapped up in his hand before using the technique. Perhaps that was the key.
He reched into his puch and pulled out about 5 feet of wire and held it in his hand. He focused his chakura and mixes in the electrical current just before pushing it from his hand into the wore. The wire's conductivity charged it full of chakura and electricity quickly, so quickly that the energy came streaming from it's end. The shock nearly hit Kurushimi's own foot.

Yes, I think that's it

He spooled the wire this time before grabing hold of it's end and held the spool of wire in his fist. He began to concentrate the electrified chakura into his hands again, but he ran into yet another problem. The wire's conductivity released the energy before he could make a powerful enough flow.
Just like Raikyu
He concentraited on his chakura again, but he didn't release it into the wire. Instead he let it build up this time into both of his hands but not releasing from his body. He built the electrified chakura until he could hold it no longer, then he released the energy from both of his hands unto the wirwe simultaneously. the flows of chakura enterd into the wire and contacted each other, their forces pushing against one another. Kurushimi now released one of the ends of wire and swung his hands apart, releasing his control of the chakura.

With the wire swinging through the air like a whip the chakura exploded from it's concentrated state and shot throu the wire. Because of the wires conductivity and the force behind the rushing chakura the energy shot out of the wire and created an arc in the air. His chakura control wasn't the greatest so the arc didn't go far, but hi jutsu's were beginning to take shape.

[👺 Usiel]

First Post: 6 TP
Second Post: 5TP
Third Post: 6TP

Seventeen TP out of Thirty.

[kurushimi]

[OOC: thanx for the modding]

The next day's training had a new feeling to it. His technique had succeeded, but barely. At least he knew what to do now, even though it took most of his energy to do the technique and every ounce of his concentration. He got up from his makeshift bed and prepared for his training.

He stood in the forest feeling the breeze on his face and listening to the sound of the world.
This is it. Today I will perfect it, today I will make the technique mine.
Kurushimi took the wire from his pouch and spooled it into a circle. Then he thought for a minute. Instead, he took the wire and held it into both of his hands. He began to concentrate his chakura and begin the flow through his body. He added in his electrical energies and focused on his control of it, then he pushed the electrified chakura through his hands and into the wire. The wire willingly accepted the energy and the chakura's flow was complete. The chakura gained in speed and power as he sent it rushing through the wire and he saw the technique begin to take shape. He released his left hand from the wire and swung it around through the air. He watched as the chakura and electricity was sent through the woods, or almost. Even though the strength of the technique was more powerfull, the wave of electricity and chakura barley went any further than before, it may not even have gone further.
Not quite what i was looking for. I'll have to try again.

Again Kurushimi took the wire in both hands and concentrated on his chakura. And again he electrified the chakura before sending it through the wire. The chakura flow grew stronger and the technique began to form in the wire. Kurushimi added more chakura to the flow and again it grew stronger.
It has to work this time, There's enough chakura flow in there to create seven Raikyu's. Hell, this wil probably level the whole forest.
Kurushimi whipped the wire around and watched the wave of chakura go streaming through the forest. The wave stretches out acrost a distance and strikes a mark in a nearby tree. The energy cuts deep into the tree and leaves behind a heavy scar. The tree smokes from the electricity in nthe chakura. It's an ugly site, yet the tree still stands even though it was only about ten feet away.

"DAMN!!!"
That tree should have been blown away, along with half of the trees around it. What am I doing WRONG!!

Kurushimi is really starting to get pissed off now and that usually means somebody it going to get hurt.
He takes hold of the wire once moreand concentrates on his chakura. He feels it begin to flow and adds in the electricity. Once he has enough to create a current he sends it through the wire and feels it flow quicker.
Now i've got it
When he feels the flow begin he sends forth all of his remaining chakura and supercharges it with vast amounts of electricity. The flow of electrified chakura is powerful, so powerful that Kurushimi can feel the stress of it in his body.
I can hold out a little longer. I have to make this work.
Kurushimi pushes every ounce of energy into the technique and prepares to release his wrath, but before he gets the chance the wire snaps from the stress of the technique. The sudden break in the flow releases the chakura untethered from his control. This amount of chakura uncontrolled is devastating and the break causes a chain reaction which leads to a powerful explosion. Instead of the technique becoming a wave of energies flowing throuh the air it is made into an almost bomb like state. This "chakura bomb" explodes and severe damage in incurred. Kurushimi is thrown from the blast and he hurls backwards through the air, flipping and truning violently. he comes to a sudden stop when he hits a tree which breaks and falls to the ground beside of Kurushimi.

He lays there on the ground unmoving, the wire still in his hand. If one were to inspect him thuroughly they would see that he had been knocked unconcious, though they wouldn't know whether it was from the blast or the tree. Kurushimi is lucky to be alive, though he lays on the ground unconcious. He training ends here for the day, rest is crucial now, even if he doesn't do it willingly.

[kurushimi]

It is night.
Hours have passed as kurushimi lay on the ground unconcious.
He wakes up to see the area around him changed and destroyed. As he begins to stand a sharp pain shoots through his body and he flinches at it. With another look around he sees the tree lying nearby and the stump of where it used to stand.
What did i do here
Kurushimi sits on the ground and thinks back on the day's training.

i remember training my Hi No Hagane. And i remember it screwing up all the time. It needed more energy so I pushed everything I had into it. Then I released it and.... No, that's not right. I never released it.

I remember now. As I was charging it up, I pushed in everything I had. Thw wire broke..... thats all I remember. But something happened, thats obvious.

Kurushimi takes out his flask and has a little drink of it.
a little hair of the dog to get the day going right.
It's late and not much training can happen, but he'll give it a shot anyways.

He stands slowly and walks into the newly created clearing. He can feel that most of his chakura is depleted and he wont be able to do much with it.
Kurushimi looks in his hands and sees that he is still holding the broken pieces of wire in them. His hands are also burnt from the chakura and electricity that was releases upon them.
Well, this is no use to me anymore.
He tosses the wire to the ground and begins to work on his training.
i dont have much chakura left, so I should train without spending too much of it. Perhaps I'll just work on molding and flowing it instead.

He begins to concentrate on his chakura flow and starts to turn it through his body. He locks his hands together and pushes the chakura through his arms to complete a large flow. the chakura begins to flow faster and his right hand begins to hurt. the pain increases with the chakura and it's flow. After a few minutes Kurushimi stopps and inspect his hands.
Both are burnt and slightly damaged fromthe failed technique, but his right hand liiks to have suffered far more damage. Kurushimi thinks for a while about why it was that way.
After his thoughts he comes to the conclusion that because his chakura was flowing right to left, when the technique released hi right hand got the brunt of the blast because it was the source of the energy.
Now he will have to train with his left hand for a while, his right will need to heal for a while.

For several more hours he trainf on flowing his chakura through his left hand. By daylight he is able to control it with equal efficency and start the flow of chakura from his left side to his right.
Dawn begins to break and Kurushimi is exhausted in both physical strength and chakura as well as will power. He sleeps now and will pick up his training later on in the day.

[Satu Akira]

+5
+6
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11TP... ((28/30))

[kurushimi]

Kurushimi awakens late the next day. About one in the afternoon by his judgment. He's still sore from the mishap of the last day's training, but his will and perserverance pushes him to train once more. He will go for it all the way this time. He gets up and stretches out his sore and tired limbs to get himself motivated.

Kurushimi starts his training for the day and concentrates on his chakura and begins the flow through his body. After he adds in the electrical current a thought occurs to him. His wire's broken and he can't connect the flow. But then he thinks further into it.
What if I just use my hands to conect the flow?
He continues the flow and pushes the energy into his palms to create an energy manifestation. Once the energy has charged up enough he releases his attack and braces himself for any ill aftermath.
The techniquea almost works. Instead of a wave of energy bursting from his hands a blast comes from his right palm. It hits Kurushimi in the left hand, but the flow of energy just absorbs it into his body again.
That was close... to close. I need to perfect this technique before i hurt myself again.

Kurushimi thinks for a while about how to control the technique better.
Finally he comes up with an idea. Instead of using his entire body to create the flow, why not use just his arms. that way he can create two flows anf better control it.
Kurushimi begins to concentrate on his chakura, it takes every ounce of his focus to create the two seperate chakura flows. After a moment of heavy concentration he feels the chakura form and move throughout his arms. He adds in the electrical current.
Now it's time to beat the odds
Kurushimi puts in one last idea to the technique. He forms two small Raikyus, one in each hand and he puts them together in his palms. As the two chakura flows mold together he charges the technique up full strength and prepares for the unleashing.
He opens his hands, but keeps his palms held together, he outstreaches his arms and releases the technique...

It is complete.
A powerful wave of energy rushes out from his palms and shoots out before him. Kurushimi watches as the forest in from of him is leveled. Destruction rages as the technique finally comes to a mastery.

That was amazing. This technique is so powerful, no wonder Grandfather waited untill now to teach me. But it was so much different from what grandfather had shown me. Perhaps his was a variation of the technique that I have yet to master. Either way, this will be usefull in my future missions.

[fang]

+2 TP
((30/30))
That was a close one. I thought you weren't gonna make it. ;D

Jutsu learned and you can add it to your bio now.

[kurushimi]

lol yeah. I like to push my limits.
Thanx for the modding