Harson the silent

[Harson the silent]

Name: Harson Galipo
Age: 16
Height: 6 feet
Weight: 140lbs.
Gender: Male
Alignment: Neutral Good
Birth Country: Thunder
Village: Sand
Special:

Ninjutsu specialist
Taijutsu specialist
Suiton no Jutsu (Water Release Skill)
With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Water. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Water Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.

Secondary Weapons:

3 Kunai knife 3 slots
5 senbon 1 slot
1 windmill shuriken 4 slots
12 shuriken 4 slots
2 smoke grenades 1 slot
8 exploding tags 2 slots

Primary Weapon:

Long Sword (Overview)
Rank: "C"
Type: Main
Effect: Swords that slash hack, dice and anything else within this genre that reaches a certain length.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: Any bladed weapon that is longer then three feet, to about four feet. These weapons range from any types of blades such as the the long Sword, the Claymore, the Falchion. Any of these weapons or any weapon that fits within the length is considered as a long sword.
Limit: These types of weapons may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop
Cost: 4,000 Ryo

Personality:

He has been queit since his childhood because he was poor and nobody talked to him so he just figured he wouldn't talk to them either. You wouldn't think he is because he is poor, but he is smart and he is just because a boy at the ninja academy taught him things at night and over 16 years he has learned a great deal of things to remember. His wisdom was developed during his schooling. He is friendly to the people who at least try to be nice to him. If there is a problem he will think it thruogh very well and come up with a solution if he can. His personality also consist of helping others if they have a problem.

Appearance:

He wears a gray shirt that is ragged looking and worn and has a symbal shaped like a kunai knife that has a shadow over it. He also wears blue jeans that have many pockets for storing knives, shuriken, exploding tags, and smoke grenades. His hair is blonde and has a spot on his forehead that is perfect for a ninja headband. His eyes are the color of crystal clear water. He has a birth mark on his left cheek right next to his mouth that looks like he didn't wipe his mouth after he had eaten.

Bloodlimit:
NinJutsu Techniques:

Chakura Kyuin Jutsu (Chakra Absorption Technique)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user is capable of draining a small piece of the opponent's chakra by pushing their arm off, making sure that they are close to the opponent.
Special: ---
Drawback: The user must have some sort of ground, or must be within close range of the opponent. What this means is that they must be at least couple of feet from the opponent in a maximum range, or they must have hold of something that is pure chakra such as chakra strings.
Description: The user focuses their own chakra within their body and pushes it towards their very hands. As the user does so they create a somewhat "vacuum" like effect within their own chakra along the palm of their hands. What this occurs is when the user grows close to the opponent and does a punching like motion the opponent will feel a small amount of chakra escape from their very own body and be used towards the user's own special like force. This can be used to further the strength of the user with their own chakra supply.
Limit: Anyone is capable of learning this technique.


Soshuha (Manipulating Attack Blades)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The user is capable of performing their very chakra down along the very ground. Doing so the user then takes the time to concentrate and begins to lift small blades such as Kunais, or knifes up into the air just a meter and a half up high. The knunais are then are just held there for a brief moment in which is targeted towards the target at hand.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: This technique can not be pushed any further then stated. It can not be re-thrown, can not be directed, turned or any other type of situation. There is no way to redirect these or change directions.
Description: When the user lifts the very blades up into the air, this technique is used to where they give a push towards the blades to hurl them towards one direction. This technique however can not be used for re-directing, and this technique is only capable of pushing forth in at least a ten meter of distance.
Limit: Universal NinJutsu Technique

Kawara Shuriken, ÍßÊÖÑY„‡ (Roof Tile Shuriken)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A technique where the user hurls Roof tiles towards the opponent, concentrating the chakra along the technique making the shurikens stronger then normal.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A Jutsu similar to that of the Manipulating Attack Blades Jutsu with similar principle. The user concentrates and performs their technique on the tiles as they spin the tiles towards the opponent. In addition to being able to control the tiles individually, the user is capable of pressurizing the tiles with their chakra creating a more stronger tile then before.
Limit: Universal NinJutsu Technique

Jutsu Sh¨­, ÐgÏû, (Technique Neutralize)
Rank: "D", "C", "B", "A", "S" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: This jutsu cancels or impedes the occurring of the opponent's technique. It uses the same amount of chakra as the jutsu it intends to cancel.
Special: "Hand Seals"
Drawback: You must know the technique that the opponent is doing. In order to stop a certain type of technique the user must know the rank for that technique. This means in order to stop D you must know D. In order to stop S you must know S.
Description: A strong technique that has been passed down from ninja to ninja just in case of a ninja is being attacked by a technique that may go against the person and that they know the technique. The user must know the technique in order to stop the technique in question. When a technique is already out in play the user is unable to stop the technique. The user must try to stop the technique during the preparation of the technique. A very helpful technique indeed if the opponent attacks with a technique that has a long preparation. In order to stop a D Rank Technique the user must learn the D Rank version of this technique. In order to stop a C Rank Technique the user must learn the C Rank version of this technique. In order to stop a B Rank Technique the user must learn the B Rank version of this technique. In order to stop a A Rank Technique the user must learn the A Rank version of this technique. In order to stop a S Rank Technique the user must learn the S Rank version of this technique.
Limit: To learn A and S Rank Technique you must be either a NinJutsu Specialist or GenJutsu Specialist.


Suiton - Suiryuudan no Jutsu (Water Dragon Projectile)
Rank: "B" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: Creates a massive sized like Dragon to attack the opponent when used upon.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: ---
Description: Suiryuudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a long string of hand seals which then causes a column of water in the form of a dragon to rise from the water and then strike their target.
Limit: Water Release

GenJutsu Techniques:

No Genjutsu available.

TaiJutsu Techniques:

Shishi Rendan, 獅子連弾 (Lion Combo)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: A Technique that is similar to that of Front Lotus with great Variations towards the technique, and yet not as dangerous to where they launch an opponent in the air, using an amount of combos on the enemy forcing them down to the very ground.
Special: ---
Drawback: Must launch the user into the air.
Description: What occurs is that the user attacks the opponent to launch them up high into the air. As they do so the user jumps afterwards to form up ahead of the opponent. The user then quickly kicks to his left side of the opponent striking the opponent's chest like area, but this is used as a diversion. The first attack is used in order to be blocked as the user quickly does a backhand strike towards the opponent's face, then a one straight punch to the gut of the opponent which sends then towards the ground. The user then finishes with a spinning kick where the user slams their left heel against the center of the opponent just as both hits the ground. This technique however may be changed up slightly to where a user may hit another location of the body, but the initial true hit of the heel is what makes this the Lion Combo.
Limit: Must be a TaiJutsu Specialist.

Jabbing No Jutsu
Rank: D
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Jabs chakra focused fingers into the enemy's tummy.
Special: Tiger handsign.
Drawback: Most likely can only be used once, because the enemy will never fall for it twice.
Description: The user will form the tiger handseal and yell something like, "now for my secret jutsu!", when he's really lying. the enemy will normally try to stop the user before he can use it. when the opponent, if the opponent goes in for a close range attack, the user will focus chakra toward their hands, at the last second. he then jabs his fingers, still using the tiger handseal into the enemies stomach.
Limit: None

Tsurutsuru Kobushi (Slippery Fist)
Rank: E
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: A low stance that relies on upward motion and momentum.
Special: None
Drawback: Most of the user’s attacks are ground based, limiting their airborne range.
Description: A fairly underrated stance that was developed in Iwa sometime ago. Due to the crouched position the user must take to perform this, many ninjas and other interested people find it uncomfortable and unwieldy. This stance focuses on heavy movements based on focused momentum behind every blow. Users of this stance have found it helpful to wear shoes and gloves that slide easily on many surfaces, but still do not slide off of a target.
Limit: None

Gouken no Kamae (Iron fist stance)
Rank: E
Skill: Taijutsu
Effect: Once in this stance one’s speed and strength increases due to positioning of muscles and limbs.
Special: None
Drawback: None
Description: Not exactly a technique, but a fighting style. It packs tons of speed and power and relies on the user's physical strength and fitness. It is also the prime holder of the majority of Konoha's elite taijutsu techniques. Standing with one arm behind their back and one extended, the user is ready for a quick strick with their fists and feet. This leaves them open for quick spins and jumps that will power their attacks.
Limit: none

History:

He is called Harson the silent because when he was a boy he was very poor and started to steal. Nobody could hear him coming or going. His father bought and sold property and made a good deal of money but was having afairs with other women so Harson's mom left his father. One day while Harson was in the city pickpocketing people, a group of ninja came and stormed through the city looking for him. He ran with all of his might yet somehow they caught him. He was impressed by their skill for no one could ever catch him till now. They showed him the error in his ways. He was jealous of their skill and envyied them, so he decided to become a ninja and be the greatest.

[Koori.]

Alright. Im going to need paragraphs for appearance AND personality. 2 4-5 sentence per paragraphs please. Also, your secondary weapons are a bit messed up.

Round House Kick is not a Taijutsi technique, look through the Index at fighting styles for Taijutsu.

Take out Chakra spin, nope, cant learn it unless from the master.

Also, Three paragraphs minimum on History is required.

[Harson the silent]

yes sir!

[namiko]

If I am reading this correctly, your secondary weapons state 12 and you are allowed to have 15. To clear up the "mess" as Koori-san has put it, please include the number of slots for each weapon as well as how many per slot. I know it's quite confusing this way. So here is an example:

Say you want a Kunai and three of them. Instead of putting the word Kunai three times just do something like this:

Kunai (1 per slot]-3

That says the exact same thing as putting the word three times and it eliminates confusion.

Aside from what Koori-san has said about the personality and appearance, please kindly bold your rank learnt for chakra neutralize because it is more than one rank. If you want to learn up to C rank for that technique than you have five jutsus but if you don't, then you are capable of learning one more jutsu of your choice.

Also, please state clearly in Special what your three releases are. It will make life somewhat easier. You are allowed one more majoy specialist and three minor/miscellaneous specialists.

[Sayuri "Cupcake"]

Hmm... I'd like to make a little modification to Koori's 4-5 sentances, and make that atleast 5-6.

[Harson the silent]

im sorry i havent been able to get on and im trying to fix it.

[👺 Usiel]

Just bold the D in Jutsu Sh¨­, ÐgÏû, (Technique Neutralize) within the ranks and you got my 1/3

[//Talo//]

2/3 Like Heero said, bold the D in there. I see the "I currently have D" but it's easier to just have it bolded. "text"

[Harson the silent]

I did that because i don't know how to bold it. I mean if it were microsoft word or something no problem but this is different.

[Masakuni]

Place {b}{/b} around the rank, only with [ and ] instead of { and }. ^_^

[Harson the silent]

finished.

[Okami]

3/3

[Masakuni]

Moved back by request.

[Masakuni]

-yawns- (1/2)

[//Talo//]

=_= {2/2}