Dageki Takumashii

[soomoku]

Name: Dageki Takumashii
Age: 12
Height: 5 foot 2 inches
Weight: 115 pounds
Gender: male
Alignment: Neutral good
Birth Country: Yukigakure
Village: Yukigakure
Special:

Secondary Weapons:

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Limit: These types of weapons may be capable of being bought inside any Weapon Shop
Cost: 800 Ryo Each.[/ul]

Personality:

Appearance:

NinJutsu Techniques:

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Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Earth. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Earth Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

# Fuuton no Jutsu (Wind Release Skill) <--- Freebie #2
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Wind. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Wind Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Katon no Jutsu (Fire Release Skill) <--- Freebie #3
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Fire. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Fire Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---

Fuuton Kaze no Senbon (Needles of the Wind)
Rank: "D"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: User hurls a mixture of senbon needles in the form of wind to cut into the opponent.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: The ninja gathers air with his hands and mixes it with chakra, by doing this he transforms them into sharp and deadly needles. The needles are almost invisible so it is hard for the enemies to see them. This technique may be blocked by large objects, however something small such as a sword, or a staff will allow the needles to seperate still moving towards the object it was originally sent to. Not a powerful technique as the user is capable of hurling up to ten senbon wind needles that gives out minor cuts. However this could be used as a more of a set up technique to allow the user to perform a more dangerous technique.
Limit: Must have the Wind Release

Fuuton: Eiei Arashi no Jutsu (Wind Release: Dragging Tempest Technique)
Rank: "C", "B"
Skill: Ninjutsu, Offensive
Effect: Creates a fast moving burst of wind that attacks the opponent from behind and attempts to drag them forward.
Special: "Hand Seals" to perform; Ram seal to activate.
Drawback: In order for the technique to reach full strength, the user must perform it and then allow it to build up before releasing it.
Description: A powerful Wind-based Ninjutsu technique, Eiei Arashi attacks in a very non-conventional manner. After the user has performed the correct handseals, they will release their chakra out into the atmosphere, allowing it to flow behind the opponent. Depending upon the amount of time spent charging the technique, the user becomes capable of releasing a strong burst of wind to the opponent's back with the intention of dragging them forward. With the "C" Rank of this technique, the technique may be charged for three turns. For each turn that the technique charges, its total capable traveling distance increases by five meters for a maximum of fifteen meters and its pulling strength increases by fifty pounds for a maximum of one hundred and fifty pounds. At "B" Rank, the technique is capable of charging for up to five turns. For every turn that the technique charges, its total traveling distance increases by ten meters and its' pulling strength increases by one hundred pounds, for a maximum of fifty meters and five hundred pounds. These amounts increase by an additional five meters / fifty pounds a charge if the user becomes a master of the Wind Release.
Limit: Must have the Wind Release.

Doton Soushi no Jutsu (Rock Creation Technique)
Rank: "D" "C" "B" "A" "S"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A technique where the user takes the time to formulate, or create Rock in order to use other types of techniques for great usages.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: Must be learned more and more in order to be capable of performing better, and capable of producing more Rock like formations for other types of techniques. Cannot be used on Sand
Description: What occurs is that the user takes the time to push down into the ground their own chakra. As the user does this the user takes the earth like materials found within the ground which is the components of soil as they begin to formulate and harden them all around in order to create harden rock like materials. The user may slam their hands against the ground in order to use this technique or just by pushing their chakra down to the ground. A user can gain the capability of grabbing onto the very ground and molding a piece of earth into a hardened like rock. The more the user learns and the higher the Difficulty class the user becomes the more they are capable of mastering this type of technique. When first learned the user is only capable of formulating rock into the size of their hand. When the user learns the "C" Rank, version this type increases to five meters in radius. Each time learned after that, the distance increases by ten feet giving a total distance of thirty-five meters in a radius distance. For each Difficulty class the User is the larger number this distance becomes. Each Difficulty class after C The distance increases by Ten meters. This means that if a user becomes S Rank in Difficulty Class and learns the S Rank Version of this technique the user is capable of formulating Rock within a Seventy-Five meters Radius.
Limit: Needs the Earth Release

# Ice Cling (Koori Bou)
Rank: "D"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Allows the user to be able to walk, run, and jump on ice without slipping.
Special: Ram
Drawback: ---
Description: By focusing chakra into their feet, the user is able to walk, run, or jump on ice without slipping. This can also be done with the hands if the user executed a backflip or a handstand.
Limit: Snow village only.[/ul]

GenJutsu Techniques:

TaiJutsu Techniques:

History:

[ladynatsumi]

Since you are not wanting any Genjutsu, can you please state that on your profile too. Like in Spec, you can write Genjutsu Non Spec and in the Genjutsu section write down either None or N/A^^

For your secondary Weapons, can you state the slots properly please? Your way is difficult to count.

As for your primary weapon, you'll need a overview of it. Just writing what it is won't do I'm afraid.

Need more Personality and appearance.

You can have one more freebie which can either be releases (ninjutsu), perceptions (genjutsu) or fightning stances (Taijutsu).

And if your character has a BL (Bloodlimit), you can have a total of three free starter techs. But if he doesn't have a BL, then you can have five free starter techs to begin with. Note: Techs have to be C ranked and below.

And can you please put your history, appearance and personality into paragraphs please? It makes it easier for us to read^^

PM me as soon as you have made the changes. And you have a very nice bio^^

Good luck and take care^^

[ladynatsumi]

For your fightning style, copy and paste the stance from it and replace the style's name with the stance in the taijutsu section.

Daichi Kangoku No Jutsu (Earth Prison Technique)
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Raises Earth in a circle radius around the person of the user's choice. It can have a maximum base diameter of 3 meters.
Special: Hanseals, Hold Rabbit
Drawback: The earth prison is not closed at the top, so it is possible for the victim to escape.
Description: Earth rises up around the targeted person quickly to a maximum height of 10 feet, trapping them inside. At D rank this technique is little more then a distraction or simple defense, only able to absorb a simple "D" ranked attack before it crumbles. Only the part that is attacked will collapse, unless the structural integrity of the entire prison is compromised. At C rank it becomes much harder and resists attacks better, but with persistence victim can break free (1 C rank). At B rank the prison is extremely hard and thick, made of solid rock. It is very difficult to break and will reflect most ninjutsu techniques back upon the victim. Although this attack is only B ranked, its is extremely tough and will stand up to most jutsu, including all B ranked techniques. Piercing jutsu will be most effective in breaking the wall.
Limit: Earth release, C rank requires rock creation "C", B rank requires rock creation "B".

You need rock creation technique to have this technique.

Can you fix those for me and then PM me once you're done and I'll come and check it again savy?

Thanks for your PM through

Take care^^

[Elgar]

For Rock Creation C Rank you need the D-Rank version. Also bold the lowest rank of Dragging Tempest. And what is your 3rd Freebie. I see Wind, and Earth. And finally add a bit more history





Post 2: You need the whole tech for Earth Prison. As in all the ranks. Also to have it you need C-Rank Rock Creation. If you want it then you will have to take D, and C-Rank taking up 2 tech spots.

[Deleted]

dont delete levels of jutsu, so rock creation needs to show D-S. You just need to use like bolding or underlining to show which rank you have.

also you dont need to fill in the reason for change

[ladynatsumi]

For your thrid freebie, you can use a stance from the fighting style that you want to learn.

& do the things that Kurenai and Naka have said and send us another lot of PMs. Once that's done, accepting should come next^^

Good luck!

[Beltran]

1/3

[ladynatsumi]

2/3; Very nice and well done. Just one more now. PM Solus^^

Good luck!

[eclipse]

3/3.