Death Shall overcome this Race(Training)

[Solus]

Evil...

+4

[Nara Sithis]

He dropped to one knee again, his was really tired yet his dreams to not give up and presume his goals, has given him hope to not give up and push himself beyond the limits. A normal Genin woud have rested, what he was doing was insane, he needed to master this B rank ninjutsu, weather he liked it or not. And then get rest.

He got up, and begun to form hand seals. As that was done, he raised his hands up and again the water raised at the same level it was before, sweet poured from his face, blood poured from his nose, from the drainage of the Charka he was holding, yet the only thing that kept him on his feet was his Lust for power, Jardiniere rush, and goals for world domination. He slowly attempted to swift handseals, his eyes closed, and he dropped towards the ground face first unable to feel or sense anything the boy was unconvinced. Everything seemed a blur, he had awaken two hours later.

As he opened his eyes he gasped for air, trying to get a hold of himself. he had Recovered more charka, but not all, He recovered 17%. It would be enough to finish this attempt and master the jutsu, he got up and spoke."I was not expecting that." he said towards himself, as that happened, he breathed slowly, and Begun to form handseals, after forming handseals, the water that dropped towards the ground had risen up.

As it had risen up he begun to mold it and raise the water higher from the ground, the taste of blood entered his lips and into his mouth, from before, he tasted it and spoke."The Taste of blood how yummy." He said, drinking his own blood that was now dried blood from his nose, he molded the charka from his body towards the air, as the water lifted upwards, and formed the Former Raikage a naked and perverted version of Ayame, while he beheaded her. Before he dropped the water, fell down on his ass to rest.


(66/80)

[Solus]

+8

[Nara Sithis]

His breathing increased rapidly. He was not wondering what just happened to him but observing his streetlights and weaknesses. He looked up into the sky, and spoke."One more time shall do it."He said slowly, before standing up, he knew that if he used Jutsu he was not used to and overdo himself he will pass out, so he knew by practicing his stamina, charka, and charka pool will raise which will forward his way of training not only this by other jutsu as well to a perfection level, that he thought of not that it would be perfect in other people's view's.

He begun to form hand seals, his hands, slowly going from a slow speed to a rather rapid but still slow to fast speed pace, his charka was being focused towards his body points in his fingers, making his body glow in an aura, he closed his mind in order to slow himself down around the cobra part to breath slower so he would not past out. Over heavy breathing and very fast moving heart pace.

He also did this in order to calm himself and clear his mind so he was bettering himself from over extrication and over use of charka, his body begun to glow Darkish aura, to blueish, the blackish aura was not charka or any of that sort, it was his mind expectation how his true natural was, when it switched to blue aura that emitted charka aura. He formed the rat seal and the water raised from the ground into the air. As that had just happened, he would sigh slowly and speak." It looks wonderful." He said slowly, as the Rain drops formed into the current Raikage, and Sithis beheading him and solving his head into his ass and out though his spine cord.


(74/80)

[Solus]

~learned

[Nara Sithis]

SPOILER: Click to show

Mokuton: Nenten Eda No Jutsu (Twisting Twigs Technique)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user creates twisting twigs and small branches to ward off an enemy.
Special: Handseals “Snake” “Hare” “Horse”
Drawback: None
Description: The user will do the handseals and gather chakra around his wrists and lower forearms. Small branches and twigs will sprout from that area and move towards the enemy. The technique can’t really hurt someone besides being poked in the eye. It is mainly used as a way to ward the enemy away or to distract them.
Limit: Mokuton Jutsu

He decided to take a break. After 24 hours, he had taken a break and rested, ate, drunk and recovered he begun to look at the sky and think over what he should learn next. And got up and slowly begun to think, after he had thought, and finished thinking he would begin to form seals needed for the jutsu. He begun to focus charka on his hands and then into his forearms. And begun to form into little twigs, and begun to sprung up into spores.

And begun forming into a line of wood and going it's way and towards the tree before spinning around it and going side ways. After that was done, it would dismount from his fore arm and slowly make it's way down towards the ground after that was done, he sighed, and begun forming hand seals again and then releasing charka into his hands and forearms, making the spores come out and go towards the tree, before poking it and falling down on the ground.



(0/10)

[N A T S U M I]

+2

[Nara Sithis]

He looked up towards the sky, and then towards the ground and spoke. "I will rule the world once I am the Raikage, and will make this country in a form of distraction.I WILL RULE THE WORLD!!" HE said, slowly, and begun to form hand seals, his hand motion was slightly faster he was already a perfect ninja in his own mind. After he formed the hand seals, he clapped his hands and he released charka out into his forearms, and small branches begun to form as in a wood source and go towards the tree, yet they disappeared and fell apart. It would seem he was either over doing it or going to fast with the jutsu, either way he was right and they were wrong, They being, his illusions of by passing death and obtaining immortally meaning never to die of old age.

He begun to form seals again, again focusing his inner charka walls and inner center, into his body and out into his hands and forearms, after that was done, he would begin layer out the branches that would form from his arm, into spores of wall long sticking wood, that came out of his forearms, and made there way towards the tree, to attempt to poke it while the left side of the branch evade the first tree and attempted to hit the second.

(2/10)

[Elgar]

+2

[Nara Sithis]

Ryuo sighed and spoke softly." Death do us part." He said slowly, as that was done. He would begin to perform handseals once that was done, he clapped his hands, and begun to form and alter his charka network, around his body. And into his fore arms, he extended his hands and branches begun to spurt out and make there way towards the Tree. One was aimed at the first tree, the other in the Other tree, after that was done, He let go of the jutsu as the branches fell.

HE would again begin to form handseals in order to perform the jutsu while he was doing this, he would then begin to clap his hands and focus his charka into his hands as it was then summoned into the forearms, after that was done, He would then both branches from both his arms to poke the tree.


(4/10)

[Elgar]

+1

Should make longer posts for more points

[Nara Sithis]

He looked at the sky, and spoke." D rank jutsu, got me pulped up for learning this early in the morning." He said slowly, towards himself, as he begun to form handseals as that was done, he would clap his hands, and then send out charka into his forearms, and distinctive it out in the air, the branches would begin to form from his forearms, and are sent towards the tree. Both aimed, at the tree, to attempt to poke it. Once that was done, and the tree was poke, with a small force, but not enough to harm it, Sithis choose to give more charka to it, and attempt, to go forward, however what happened. Was common sense, instead of going though, the tree being Obliviously stronger then the Jutsu, broke the branches.

He sighed, as the branches then fell from his hand, as that as done, he would begin to form hand seals again, this time allow more charka to go towards it first, then once clapped his hands, and extended them towards the air, the branches from the forearms, formed. And made there way towards the Tree with great speed and parches even power, once hit they would stay there for a while before finally breaking.

He sighed again and looked at the sky as he spoke." It seems the jutsu is useless unless you want to poke someone, or someone foolish enough to fall for a an easy distance." He said slowly. He for the last time begun forming handseals, as that was done, he clapped his hands And extended his arms as branches of wood came out of his forearms, and aimed at the tree, once hit he allowed the branches, to dismount from his forearms, and fall on the ground.


(5/10)

[← KIRA →]

+4

[Nara Sithis]

He sighed and then begun to form hands seals, he looked at the tree and spoke." I got this done, Black Thunder Power, and Ayame's Babies." he said slowly, after that was done, would clap his hands, and then slowly, begin to contraction and focus his inner energy around his body towards the Forearms of his Arms, and then branches would slowly begin to form as that was done, it would then begin to extend out into a wood line, and be aimed at the tree, once that was done, it would then begin to hit the tree, one of them, and then break, and the other one poked the tree lightly and then broke, he sighed and spoke." Well, that's all he wrote." He said slowly.

(9/10)

[Solus]

~learned

[Nara Sithis]

SPOILER: Click to show

Raiton: Hidora, 雷光: 紫陽花, (Lightning Style: Hydra)
Rank: B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user creates a massive dragon of lightning to strike the foe.
Special: “Hand Seals”
Drawback: This technique is extremely loud and unsuited for stealth.
Description: The user forms the hand seals, focusing chakra into their hands. They then thrust their hands forward, releasing the lightning chakra forward. A long, sinuous dragon-like being of crackling blue-white lightning will spring forward from each of the user’s hands, twining around one another. They will extend towards the target at high speed, for a maximum range of thirty meters. When they reach the target they rear up and split from one another, crashing explosively into and around the target, creating a crater five meters in diameter. These hydras cause extreme shocking akin to severe second-degree burning on the target, as well as applying a fair amount of explosive force caused by the generated pressure wave.
Limit: Must have Raiton.

Today he was going to learn yet another technique, this time, a more highly Classed one, his first Offensive B rank jutsu. And Lightning based to, he looked at the sky, and spoke." Well it will so come to an end." he said slowly, as that happened, after he said those words he went slowly, towards the ground and sat on his butt legs crossed, and placed both of his hands on top of his knees. The Rushing of the air hitting his face giving him a nice clean breeze along the face, as a flap hit. He smiled and nodded. His mind was in one thing focused, and was not thinking of anything, he also had his mind clear comptroller. But he can only do it to a certain Heidegger and not for a while. He stood up, and slowly sighed, He then begun to form handseals. And sent charka into his Hands, And extended his palms, nothing happened though, which was rather strange.. He did feel a self shock just happen towards himself which was rather strange. He shook his head, and then sat back down, to think over what he had done.

He looked up and he thought about what he had done wrong it seemed he had done it right, but on his first try he did not do it correctly because it did not release. He frowned and looked at the ground, before standing up and attempting to do it again. He formed handseals, and then begun to genetic charka into both his hands, and then thrust, out. Still nothing happened, at best all you can see was sparks coming out from his arms, both his arms, and fading. He looked around, and sighed, Before sitting down and concentrating, he stood there for serve-rel hours focusing, his energy and Charka, before standing up. Again he performed handseals, and then extending his hands sending charka into them, and thrusting his hands out, yet again nothing happened. HE closed his eyes in anger, but then calmed down.

He would perform hands seals again, this time when he did so, he closed his eyes and begun to release Lightning release charka around his body towards his arms, once that was done, he would then send an impulsive amount of charka to both his arms, extend them. And thrust out, two lightning based, lining beams came out in a form of a dragon they were very quick, and were aimed at the sky, They went 10 meters into the sky before dropped and exceeding, he spoke." Holy Crap. That's one hell of a jutsu, I must practice." He said eagerly.

(0/80)

[Naota]

+7

This was my first b rank when I joined~

[Nara Sithis]

(Nice.)

He looked at the ground and saw it swift, he spoke." It's impressive how this Universe/Planet goes on while bullcrap happens all around the planet." he said slowly. And brought his hand towards his Chin." I'm surprised the world has yet to be ended because of the consult digestive mass inflicted on the planet. And Jutsu caused. Then again I Envoy the Planet, for being strong." he said slowly. And then begun to form hands seals, he begun to regeneration, his charka into a compulsive of two, and then slowly, release his hands into the air, and give them a nice thrust, a line came up and begun to form into a dragon before it disposed, and caused a big boom, he jumped back, getting away from the cross fire." Shit that almost got me." He said slowly. Before pausing towards himself. And then performing handseals and giving two thrusts with both his hands towards the sky and gave two more thrusts, nothing came out of the hands.

He grew sinusoidally because nothing came out, so he kicked the dirt, and sat down on the ground. After that was done, he would slowly. Begin to clear his mind from the thought he had had, and then slowly begin to focus his charka, around his body, he brought his arms towards the end of his knees, and placed them there as this happened he would then slowly, get up from the position ad then speak."I WILL RULE THE WORLD AND MURDER EVERYONE!" HE said in an eager manner, before he performed handseals, and then slowly extend both his hands, and thrust ed them in ward twice, before two lighting dragon screened from both palms of his hands, and towards the sky, they were moving insanely fast, before they exploded. Again he performed the jutsu in a wrong sense he assumed.

(7/80)

[← KIRA →]

+3

[Nara Sithis]

Jan 24, 2012 21:40:49 GMT -7 @darkheat said:

Just a few tips for getting at least 5< points
1.) Make atleast 4-5 paras i do that and get 8-10 points every time. If you want 10 each time then do 5-7
2.) Get ride of the filler. You are trying to learn to do something not painting a picture for the reader, it only takes longer and is extra stuff, doesn't actually count towards your points. Of course don't make it so dull that the reader never wants to read your training thread ever again, but just stop putting so much filler.
3.) Action, Action, Action, and guess what... More Action. This is more or less the filler thing but focus on training the entire time, not getting ready, not thinking, not doing anything other than training. Of course you can throw in a sentence of filler in there every once in a while, but make it mostly the actual training.
4.) When your doing the actual training part try and drag it out but not in the bad way. When talking about what training method your doing don't just get it set up, say you did it then do like a small time skip and be done. You should be able to drag out 1-3 exercises to at least 5 paragraphs, just write about the chakra flow, the actions, just elaborate but not on the small details. It's hard to explain, but generally just focus on the actions in detail.

I am not trying to be a dick or anything in the sorts and this is only in good intentions, it just hurts me to see anyone get mainly 1-4s

(Piss off will you? If you wanted to tell me this just Pm me, other then being an ass and posting it here. Now get out of my thread. And if your post here, put Brackets now, F off kid. This thread is closed, meaning I am only allowed to post. And the admins, the one who are grading this, if you wanted to tell me just pm other wise, piss off.. Also don't post in threads that are not yours, Now F off and good day to you sir.))))

He sighed and looked sky, and then sighed. And then begun to move his hands already. He begun to slowly focus as that happened, he would then cross his hands and begin to slowly, form handseals once that was done he would then slowly. Extended both of his hands out and then slowly, give two thrusts. After that was done he would then slowly. Sigh and speak." One two three." And then two twin dragons come from his hands and exploded in the air.


(I blame you the jackass for ruining my rp mood.)

(10/80)