Shippai No Kaz

[~ Kazaru ~]

Name:Shippai
Age:8
Height: 4' 2"
Weight: 57.8lbs
Gender: Male

Alignment:Neutral,chaotic

Birth Country:

[/b]- A cool, forested nation covered with cliffs and lakes. Rivers lead into waterfalls all across the country. A few mountains dot the western border. Hidden pools of water and deep caves are found the most commonly in this nation.[/color][/ul]

Village:

[/b]- A proud ninja village built into a hidden clearing behind a waterfall. The village is defended by rock walls on all sides, and made up of twisting wooden buildings and towers. The only entrance is the waterfall that feeds the many streams in the village.[/color][/ul]

Special:

• Ningyoutsukai (Puppeteer)
  • Chakra Ito
  • Kugutsu no Jutsu
• Ninjutsu
  • Raiton
  • Fuuton
  • Suiton
• Genjutsu
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• Taijutsu
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• Clan
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• miscellaneous
  • Puppeteer Crafting
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Character Bio/Personality

Bio: All life seemed to be drained from the sky as this child was born. The sadness and even malice of the world was too strong and heavily affect him even as a baby. His tears flowed constantly like that of the waterfalls of Takigakure. He cried constantly fearing everything and everyone even his own mother and father. He only found solace when they allowed him to be in his crib alone. Yet the crying never stopped when they approached him, but the tears eventually stopped as he became introverted towards his parents and relatives. He kept himself reserved and cried whenever anyone tried to go near him.

At the age of five years old he was abandoned by his parents, the rumors of the child being a evil circulated and was feared to destroy there prestigious image. He was named Shippai which means fail or failure, He cried tears wishing and wanting his parents to take him back but they disappeared from him. He felt something new during that moment in his life it was rage,anger,sadness, and depression. He wanted love yet all he found were the coldness of the streets he now had to remain on. He tried and failed to enroll himself in the ninja academy of Takigakure so he could have a warm place to stay. His sadness and depression grew and grew through the months and days he spend in the cold streets. his cries couldn't be heard as he always layed near a trash can for even a bit of warmth.

As he grew to the tender age of seven two years after he was abandoned he had started to carve using a kunai he had found. The family he had lost he tried to remake with the small pocket carvings he creates out of regular wood materials he cut from trees. They were his heart and soul he made them resemble the little kids who wouldn't play with him. They feared he was and oni(devil) for the fact he was abandoned for being evil by his parents. The only person he ever talked too was himself which had given him a weird mannerism to be extremely quiet and thinking allot. It was the only thing keeping him from going insane from the loneliness he felt inside. He wanted to kill the parents who abandoned him and then have them love him from hell. Yet as time passed by his carvings grew more and more becoming more realistic, so much so a hidden sand ninja who was visiting the land of waterfalls wanted to buy his sculptures.

Shippai refused the man for they were his family the only thing that resembled a life to him. Yet the man showed him something which would change Shippai's life. Puppeteering the man brought one of Shippai's sculptures to life the following evening. He had taken and tinkered with the wood sculpture turning it into a full fledged puppet. It moved and danced around the boy causing tears of delight to escape his eyes. From that day onward he learned to gain the abilities to control and create puppets from the man it took hard work and even he hasn't fully mastered it given his year to train. Now at eight years of age Shippai now controls his own puppet creations and wishes to become a genin for Takigakure. He wishes to rise the ranks and become the Kage of Takigakure so he can properly punish his parents for abandoning him and any and all parent who ever dare abandon there children.

Appearance:
Shippai has mesmerizing yellow eyes that are seductive even if he doesn't notice it. The pupil is a piercing light yellow while the scalera is normal and white. His eyelashes are longer then a boys giving him a more feminine look towards him. His hair is snow white with not a single strand colored differently. He wears his hair in bangs that he likes to place over his left eye for no particular reason. He loves his luscious and beautiful hair for the fact it's so long having never had it cut or trimmed, The hair he has exceeds shoulder length, he likes to keep his hair tied into a pony tail so his hair all around looks shorter but in the back it extends down much longer.

He has pout like lips that are nice and semi-full seemingly fixed in and eternal pout of the anger and sadness he still contains. His nose is nice and narrow nothing spectacular just regular and nice. His body is feminine as well seeing as he has no muscle tone or even a semblance of muscles on his entire body which causes him to be embarrassed when around other boys yet he doesn't know why. His clothes are usual having been given hand me downs from the sand ninja, he wears black colored denim-like jeans with black shinobi sandles. His shirt is a regular white shirt with no symbols or anything more surrounding it. The most unique pair of clothing he has is his cloak. It was completely black and it covered most of his body only allowing part of his jeans and shinobi sandles to be shown from the waist down, and allowing only his nose eyes and hair from the neck up.

He has a few freckles on his face that he tries to hide with the best of his abilities. He also has straps attached to his pants bandaged and such so he can put a bag of ninja tools or kunai holder on his side. He has a sash a powder blue sash that he uses to hold his puppet, the sash connects to the out side through slits cut for the sash to go through in the cloak. Shippai is never seen without his puppet Soru he has gained a love for the puppet seeing as it's his only true family. He carries it attached to the sash with him everywhere he can.

Character Saying:"Love....does that even Exist? "

Personality: Shippai isn't well versed in the world since he was abandoned. He hides behind what some would call a creepy smile, He's angry at everyone in his village for not accepting him. There unreal fear of him being evil has caused him to be shunned by the children and ignored by the adults. That has caused a rift to appear within him. He is depressed all the time the sadness can be felt within each word he speaks. Rage and anger plague his insides with a murderous intent to kill the very people who left him alone to die. He cares very little for others and there problems seeing as he thinks his problems are more important.

He would only help someone if I'd help him get stronger seeing as that's all he wants, to get stronger then take revenge on his parents. Any and all objects in his way he will forcefully or murderously remove for the sake of his plans. He is and intelligent youth methodical in all of his schemes, he wishes to surmount so much power that he can take control of his village and become the kage of takigakure. His twisted emotions stem from his loneliness and his life living on the streets. He had no money and regularly had to eat from garbage cans just to stay alive so kindness of any kind will be taken in and instant.

He enjoys sodas and water very much if he can get his hands on them. His favorite word is Why, and he wishes with all his heart and soul to kill his parents. To be honest his goals may change in the future as he grows but for now he only wishes for the death of those who tried to kill him. He doesn't know honor nor does he seek to know of it. He will gain power at all costs to anyone around him even if someone has too die. He uses the facade of his old introverted and timid ways in order to catch people off guard to when he wishes to hurt them severely.[/size][/font]

[~ Kazaru ~]

Puppets

Lonely Soul Soru

Yinga & Yangi

[~ Kazaru ~]

Releases

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Rank:"C"
Skill:NinJutsu
Effect:---
Special:---
Drawback:---
Description:With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Lightning. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Lightning Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit:---[/ul]

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Rank:"C"
Skill:NinJutsu
Effect:---
Special:---
Drawback:---
Description:With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Water. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Water Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit:---[/ul]

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Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this skill, or release, the user is now capable of using, and performing techniques that deal with the element of Wind. This means that any NinJutsu or specialized TaiJutsu that deals the Wind Release will need this in order to be performed correctly.
Limit: ---[/ul][/size][/font]

[~ Kazaru ~]

Jutsu(Techniques)

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Rank:"C"
Skill:NinJutsu
Effect:Chakra strings are a technique usually used by puppet users to allow them to control their puppets in battle.
Special:---
Times Learned:First Time
Drawback:Must learn multiple times.
Description:The user is capable of controlling a puppet depending on the distance of the puppet. If the puppet surpasses a certain distance then the chakra strings simply disconnect leaving the puppet down along the floor. When first learned the user is able to control a puppet within the distance of up to 10 meters. Each time learned the distance increases by 10 meters. When the user reaches 200 meters there's an additional 10 Training Points needed to learn the technique. When the user reaches 400 meters there's again an additional 10 Training Points needed to learn the technique. These extra points do not go down by Class. User may learn an unlimited amount of times.
Limit:Must be a Puppeteer.

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Rank:"C"
Skill:NinJutsu/Supplementary
Effect:Allows the user to effectively control puppets with lesser chakra strings allowing greater control per puppet.
Special:---
Times Learned:First Time
Drawback:Must learn multiple times. Is able to learn 5 times max.
Description:When the user learns this technique they will reduce the amount of chakra strings needed to control a puppet. When user learns twice they will be to control Small Puppets with 1 Chakra String, Medium Puppets with 3 Chakra Strings, Large Puppets with 5 Chakra Strings, Huge Puppets with 9 Chakra Strings, Gargantuan Puppets with 11 Chakra Strings, and Colossal Puppets with 13 Chakra Strings. User must learn this Jutsu 3 times in order to control a Gargantuan Puppet. User must learn all 5 times in order to control a Colossal Puppet. After learning twice user will be able to control Small Puppets with 1 Chakra String regardless of continuous learning.
Limit:Must be a Puppeteer. Must know Chakra Ito (Chakra Strings)[/ul][/ul]

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Rank:"D", "C", "B", "A", "S" Rank
Skill:NinJutsu
Effect:A wind technique using winds to lift and control a certain amount of weapons or people using powerful and at some points violent winds after utilizing the wind release. However, this can only be done to a certain extent. Special:"Handseals"
Drawback:Must be learned multiple times, last handseal must be held for the technique to work. Once the seal is broken the technique will end.
Description:Performing the necessary handseals, the user will affix their wind release chakra and summon a small to large amount of powerful wind around a certain number of objects. At this point they can be suspended and controlled, moved through the air. However, the ability and amount of things possible to be moved varies along the rank learned for the technique. The winds if commanded can be very dangerous at any point in time, however it may only maim or move. When first learned at "D" Rank, the user is capable of having lifting a total of 10lbs. When dealing with weaponry, the weight of each weapon will be added together to result in the max; same with shinobi. When "C" Rank is reached the user is capable of lifting 50lbs. At "B" Rank, 200; At "A" Rank, 500; and finally at "S" Rank, 1000lbs.
Limit:Must have Wind Release[/ul]

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Rank:C
Skill:Ninjutsu
Effect:A lightning jutsu that travels along the ground towards an enemy.
Special:Boar, Ram, Snake
Drawback:Can only travel across earth and water. There is a maximum range of 10 meters and can be dodged if seen approaching.
Description:After forming handseals, the user creates a wave of electricity in their hands and shoots it into the ground. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.
Limit:Must know Lightning Release.[/ul]

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Rank:"C" Rank
Skill:NinJutsu
Effect:---
Special:"Handseals"
Drawback:---
Times Learned: first time ( limit 5 bunshin)
Description:Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited; however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state. When first learned the user is capable of having or capable of creating up to Five Clones. Each time learned the user learns this technique the number of Clones is capable of increasing by one. The maximum amount of clones is Ten for the Difficulty Class of D Rank. For each Difficulty Rank Increase the number increases by five of maximum but learning is still one per learned.
Limit:Water Release[/ul][/size][/font]

[✗Gohma✗]

Alright, here we go.

First, You don't have an alignment and you can get one here.

Second, you have a butt-bag. Which means you have 15 free slots that you can fill with secondary items of C-rank or lower. You can find the secondary weapons here

Third, you need at least three paragraphs on non blood limit users, for appearance.

Fourth, You have three freebies, and freebies are considered releases, perceptions, fighting styles, and clans. You have three, but I believe you thought that your techniques tied in with that as well; they don't.

Fifth, you are allowed five techniques if you are a non blood limit user, and you only have two, so go ahead and add three more.

Welcome again to NFRP~

Edit: You also don't have a main weapon now that I mention secondary. You can obtain a main weapon here.

[~ Kazaru ~]

Puppeteering:

Isshi no Otoshina (String Entrapment)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A skill that allowed the user to entrap, trip, or interfere movement against the opponent.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: A technique used to grasp hold, or trip opponents or objects. This technique is used to restrict movements and buy some time to escape or perform a more powerful attack. This technique is for support purposes. Depending on the user's ability to perform Chakra Ito (Chakra Strings) depends on the length of this technique.
Limit: Must be a Puppeteer. Must know Chakra Ito (Chakra Strings)
Training Points: 30

Raiton:

Raiton: Sakurai (Lightning Style: Cherry Blossom Lightning)
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user creates a mass of blue-white lightning petals.
Special: "Hand Seals"
Drawback: Not a complete technique, but a set-up for others.
Description: The user forms the hand seals, focusing chakra around them. They then mold the chakra into several hundred blue-white sakura petals of lightning in a three-meter radius around the user, like the Sand of a Saton user. These petals float gently around the user's body. Each one gives out minor shocking, but together they can give strong shocks and burns akin to a C rank shock. The petals last until the user chooses to dispel them. The user can control these techniques in a fifteen meter radius around them.
Limit: Must have Raiton.
Training Points: 30

Raitoningu Sanmai
Rank: A Rank
Skill: Nin
Effect: User is able to absorb a lightning attack for a brief moment while using it against an opponent win increased power.
Special: None
Drawback: User is incapable of performing more then eight times a day or else user falls dieing by a heart attack.
Description: The user's body's chakra is ready at anytime the user need it to. When hit by any lightning the user is able to absorb the lightning as their own for chakra. When the user is hit by any form of lightning (Includes Jutsu or Natural) the user is able to absorb the lightning as their own, they can transfer the lightning they absorb into more chakra for them or may have the option to combine that with a jutsu they have that have the same principles of what they absorb to increase the strength of the rank. By doing this the user is unharmed by any damage that it was suppose to be done to them when they where hit with the lightning.
Limit: Lightning Release Skill (Raiton no Jutsu), Must have 500 TP in Raiton no Jutsu. Once you obtain 500 TP in Raiton no Jutsu, this is automatically learned.

Fuuton:

Fuuton Kaze no Senbon (Needles of the Wind)
Rank: "D"
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: User hurls a mixture of senbon needles in the form of wind to cut into the opponent.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: The ninja gathers air with his hands and mixes it with chakra, by doing this he transforms them into sharp and deadly needles. The needles are almost invisible so it is hard for the enemies to see them. This technique may be blocked by large objects, however something small such as a sword, or a staff will allow the needles to separate still moving towards the object it was originally sent to. Not a powerful technique as the user is capable of hurling up to ten senbon wind needles that gives out minor cuts. However this could be used as a more of a set up technique to allow the user to perform a more dangerous technique.
Limit: Must have the Wind Release
Training Points: 10

Suiton:

Pressure Jet
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: User shoots a stream of water towards the opponent.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: Easier to dodge at longer distances.
Description: A simple jutsu utilizing the water release. User performs the hand seals Snake, Dragon then transfers charka to their throat, creating a steady stream of pressured water from their mouths, that then hits the opponent for D rank damage. The jet stream has a maximum range of 10 meters and travels in a straight line. Speed is equivalent to throwing a kunai.
Limit: Water Release.
Training Points: 10

Suiton - Suirou no Jutsu (Water Prison)
Rank:"C" Rank
Skill:NinJutsu
Effect:A Technique that may be used in order to trap an opponent by creating a prison made of water. The water is used so that the opponent may drown within the water if the opponent does not know how to escape forth.
Special:"Handseals"
Drawback:---
Description:Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bushin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Limit: Water Release
Training Points: 30

610 - 1500 Training Points

[Defiant]

Moved and 1/3

ALTHOUGH his puppet isn't accepted yet, I'm still giving this my acceptance, and we can just hold off on the 3/3 till someone gives it an OK so he's not stuck in submission for eternity.

[JiMmIyZ - Hel]

2/3

Like Blue said, wait up on that third acceptance.

[← KIRA →]

You need to give a miscellaneous slot up for Puppeteer Crafting for being a puppeteer. What three mastery slots are you giving up to be a puppeteer?

[~ Kazaru ~]

I'm giving up my genjutsu,ninjutsu, and clan slots am I suppose to cancel out 3 from each or just 1 from the three?

[Ancestor Febrie]

1 mastery from each.

[~ Kazaru ~]

Ok fixed everything that was needed to be fixed.

[Zeth Zatachi]

That isn't much a big fix. I'm not starting him over, 3|3