Sky Snaps

[Zeth Zatachi]

Gravecreeping

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Purple Rise

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Random Cloud Shot (Same place as Purple Rise)

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Mad Gummy

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Sleeping Pussy

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[Kelsey Knight]

To lazy to log on my main account... New pictures!

Down 2 Earth Beauty

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Simple Tree

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I would love for my works to be critiqued!! Thank you!

[Zeth Zatachi]

Edited Beautiful Death (Gravecreeping)

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I edited this based on the advise given to me by critiques on flickr, whatcha think? Better than the original?

[Rarilue]

yeah the edited grave pic is better cuz it isn`t like this long thing with just something in the middle.

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I`m not sure what your aim is for with the shots are but if for like a thing to look at in a magazine: the purple rise pic is really nice but the bottom parts pretty much ruin it also that telephone pole. If not so much then some of the things like those white parts you see at each side. Though really you can just get rid of the bottom to put all the attention to the lovely sky.

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The random cloud shot is really nice but gotta say that telephone pole ruins it. Also what kinda distracts my attention is those two tress you see that are leafless cuz they don`t rly go along with the other tress that has green on them.

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The mad gummy one is actually pretty funny. If I had to say something it`ll be that knife at the top corner, it`s not really the best place to have it at. Having some gummy glazed on it is nice but where the object is placed is "ehhh". That thing (idk what it`s called) on the right is fantastically positioned also with a nice touch of pieces from the gummy. What else I`d say about this is the table or w/e it`s one, at the right edge of the pic..idk what that is either stuff from the bear or a bit of damage of the table. It just doesn`t really fit there, it may be nice if there were others around it to give more as a feel of the background but it`s just like..there standing out.

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the kitty pic is great, I`d just crop it just a bit at the top, left, and a little bit more at the right more then you would at cropping the left.

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the grass growing out of the water pic looks good just two things; at the lower left near the corner you can see a white line and idk what that is. I mean for me I didn`t notice it at first but now that I know it`s there it`s kinda distracting. The 2nd thing is the concrete on the top..I.. I just don`t really know about it but it just feels... just something about it. I`d say cropping out a bit. I`d go with cropping it till you get to the tip of the grass that is on the right of the tallest grass. I thought that it be nice to see all the grass completely but it`s just grass and it`s only one so you don`t really need to see the whole thing I guess.

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the simple tree pic, the telephone pole or w/e it is on the left kinda ruins it same thing at the right almost at the lower edge it`s like a pole or tree trunk or something. At the left bottom corner there is like a glare line I guess, or maybe just a tree but still can`t really tell and it just seems to be just a short white line. Other than that it looks pretty good. This may just be me but I`d edit that space where the telephone pole is on the left to have the trees a bit taller.

All the pics are good actual shots regardless. You want to be a pic editor or something? or a photographer? if wanting the perfect actual shot I`d do less editing as possible cuz it`s kinda like lying that you actually show it and shot, don`t want a picture to look rl different then the shot you took. Unless if you`re simply wanting to have a good picture to look at then editing is okay I guess.

[Kelsey Knight]

Thanks for all the opinion! Wow so much to read I don't plan on being a photographer or photo editor one day but I do enjoy it when I see the chance, I like capturing the world's beauty on camera. That means I also like to do the bare min. for editing, cropping and color correction is really the max for me... anything past that is ruining the reality. I also have problems with seeing the telephone pole and the trees there, but I really didn't frat big on it, I guess to me it kinda shows in such an ugly environment you can just look up and see one of the world's greatest sights. Also there is a wheat field growing on a street off that... I'm waiting for a day just before a storm when everything is that strange brightened yellow so I can take the most amazing picture of it haha... Thanks for the opinion!

OH! And that Gummy bear one I actually finished a Biology lab early so I started "playing doctor" I guess on the three gummy bears until two were all bits and one was decapitated... also I had my Sony Handycam with me so I was like... "Wait a minute... I wanna get this on camera... I think it would be pretty awesome!" So I did... Don't know what was up with the lab table lol

[Rarilue]

ah I see, that`s real nice. and no prob bro xD