Kim Barnpard

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Basic Information

Name: Kim Barnpard
Alias: Roxanne
Bloodlimit: none
Height: 5’4
Weight: 143 pounds
Age: 21
Gender: female
Alignment: lawful evil
Birth Country: Sand
Village: Grass
Special:

Weapons

Primary Weapon:

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Secondary Items:

Non-Weapon Items

Character Depth

Personality:

Appearance:

Background:

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Herbalism

Hābu Gyazā (Herbal Gathering) (Rural)
Rank: "B"
Skill: Supplementary
Effect: User gains the knowledge of Gathering, and Extracting Herbs found in a Region without harming themself.
Special: ---
Drawback: User must learn this technique multiple times. User must learn this technique once per Region.
Description: User understands and knows how to take a dangerous herb whether it is harmful or helpful and take the herb, extracting, and gathering without harming the effects of the Herb. Every human is capable of learning types of herbs in regions found in the countries they are from. A user may only learn two regions before going into Herbalist Specialist. The Regions a user may learn are regions they were brought up in which are the countries they are from, or the Hidden Village that their country is in. By knowing this technique the user knows how to extract solutions of herbs without harming themselves in any way found in one Region.
Limit: Must know Herbal Knowledge for the region they are trying to go into, Anyone is capable of learning unless they reach their limit, then user must be an Herbalist. Must learn off of the Hābu Gyazā Bukku (Herbalist Gathering Book).

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Puppetry

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Minny Vaulps
Death of a child
Total Training Points:1000

500 Training Points
E -
D -
C -14
B -1
A -
S -

1500 Training Points
E -
D - 3
C - 20
B - 1
A -
S -

3000 Training Points
E -
D -
C -
B -
A -
S -

5500 Training Points
E -
D -
C -
B -
A -
S -

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Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Bbujiekuto) (Summoning Technique (Object))
Rank: (E), “C,” “A,”
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A summoning technique that allows the user to summon an object/weapon/puppet the same rank and one rank above as the rank the user knows in the technique.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: Must have a scroll and seal.
Description: Picture 1-A; Picture 1-B, Picture 1-A; Picture 1-B A technique where the user uses a seal on a Scroll to summon an object they have. The object who is being summoned must have the same seal as well in order to be summoned. User is unable to summon where other seals are located. The Person is the medium and you need that person in order to bring someone in. Once the object has been summoned the seal disappears. In order to summon an object “E” Rank or “D“ Rank, user must learn “E” Rank Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Bbujiekuto) (Summoning Technique (Object)). In order to summon an object “C” Rank and “B“ Rank, user must learn “C” Rank Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Bbujiekuto) (Summoning Technique (Object)). In order to summon an object “A” Rank and “S“ Rank, user must learn “A” Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Bbujiekuto) (Summoning Technique (Object)).
Limit: Universal Nin, Unless Weapon Specialist, or Puppeteer

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Themes

Main

Battle

[Draven]

you have to sacrifice your two grand masteries to become a Taijutsu master puppeteer.

[Draven]

You double posted your TP chart, get rid of the first TP chart since those links don't work anyway.

Your previous bio has been moved to Here Thus your previous bio link does not work.

You still need to add sacrificed a fighting master as well for puppeteer.

Space out Improved rapid shot, away from rapid shot.

Highlight or underline the rank/ranks learned in Death Spiral. I am assuming your Death Spiral should be up to a B rank since your TP chart reflects 2 B ranks anyway.

Your TP chart adds up correctly.

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i cant delete the second tp char >_> heero removed that ability >_<;

fixed the other stuff

[Draven]

Ask for a bio clean-up once this is accepted to get that taken care of.

You still need to put "(C)" around the C rank in Death Spiral.

Fix your links for your chart.

Other than those once their changed:

1.2

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fixed.

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Please put a unit next to your weight.

Are you a chakra molder as a Taijutsu master? Gotta clarify that for me. Also please simplify your specialists, it makes it more helpful for the reader or a new member should they want to seek guidance from older members.

More appearance. Your current list hardly describes your character at all when you really think of it.. Sorry dear..

Aside from that, everything checks out.

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fixed

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I think with the addition to paragraphs and specialist the count starts over?

1/2

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Tad more personality, you still don't meet the minimum.

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fxed

[Draven]

small fix's

2.2