Antenoni's secret spot (finished, closed)

[Kin ,Tomonari]

Name: Shinbigan Hakudatsu no jutsu (in english "sense deprivation skill")
Rank: "C" or "B" rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: This jutsu uses chakra to block the user's chosen sensory nerves, nullifying any abilities that affect that sense, the C rank includes all senses save for touch, as that system is considerably more complex and extensive, requiring more control and skill to use, this jutsu provides protection against GenJutsu that affect certain senses or require a specific active sense to affect their target. The C rank lasts for as long as the user's chakra does, and for every sense blocked, the cost is doubled
The B rank amplifies the remaining active senses to compensate for the loss of other senses, and allows the sense of touch to be nullified. The B rank lasts a maximum of 10 turns and the chakra consumed is increased by 50% per sense dulled
Special: "handsigns"
Drawback: The most obvious drawback to a jutsu that deprives the senses is the loss of the sense chosen, more drawbacks include temporary(2 combat rounds to days) weakness in recently or consistantly deprived senses, and if used on more than one sense at a time, B rank also comes with extended loss of sense(2 extra combat rounds per sense) without any benifits of the jutsu, and in the case of touch, causes sluggishness or paralysis with more than one use
Description: after preforming the required handsigns, the affected areas become pale, and with use of the eye style, the pupils fade into the iris and glaze over, as though the eyes were dead. If touch is dulled, then the entire body looks like a living corpse, often shocking an opponent who hasn't seen this jutsu. Returning the senses to normal changes the pale coloring of the skin back to normal and/or refocuses the eyes
Limit: anyone can learn this jutsu, anyone who knows it can teach it

0/30 TP

Antenoni trotted into his secret place in the village. "Finally, with that long registration over I can get back to my training. That new techique is going to be a great plus when I go up against a GenJutsu user." He reached into his pocket and pulled out a blindfold, earplugs, and a noseclip. After he was sure he had them all in place correctly, he starting channelling chakra to try and copy the effect that the accessories had on his senses. A little more...A little more... A drop of sweat was starting to form on his forehead. After believing he had molded sufficient chakra into copying and replicating the effect, he removed the blindfold and opened his eye. Unfortunately, his only result was that his vision was blurred enough that he hit his head on a tree while regaining his focus. "Crap! If this is all I can do I'm better off trying to learn that drunken fighting style I've been reading about." After regaining his balance, he made and held a rat handseal. Once more, come on now. He drew as much chakra as possible directly to his eye, forming it in the same way the blindfold worked. As he drew up more and more chakra, he could feel more sweat building up on his forehead. His eye was starting to burn because he was holding the chakra too close to his face. Now or never... "Sense Deprivation Jutsu!" He opened his eye to recieve a painful burn from the chakra focused almost on the surface of his eye. His hands broke the seal and covered his eye in a vain attempt to rub out the pain and accidentally backed into a tree, hitting himself on the back of the head and causing him to pass out.

[Kin ,Tomonari]

Antenoni's eye flickered open, still bloodshot and teary from his stupid positioning of chakra. That is the dumbest thing I've done in days...what am I doing wrong with this jutsu? He jumped back up to his feet and gingerly rubbed the bump on his head. Geez...How am I ever going to be any good at Taijutsu if all it takes is a little whack on the head to knock me out. I'm just way too sensitive... He froze mid-thought, immedietely reforming the rat handseal, but this time, he tried to focus the chakra behind his eye, forming a small wall of chakra at his optic nerves. This time, instead of defocusing or burning, he got a loud buzzing sound from inside his head, and the tree in front of him started getting dimmer, he couldn't distinguish the kunai marks he had left from days of training in the academy. But, that was as far as it got, because the buzzing changed to burning again. He dropped the seal again and started rubbing his eye vigorously. "Ah crap, what did I do wrong this time!"

[kajou]

+ 2
+ 2

[4/30]

[Kin ,Tomonari]

4/30

Atenoni picked up the items he had to create the jutsu again and put them on. Perhaps a little combat training without these senses might be in order, who wants to have a jutsu they can't use correctly? He felt around for his beating tree, finding it, he started up with a few kicks, hitting far off his normal target points. Then he moved to punching, also much more off-target than usual. Now for the hard part. He felt his way around the tree to the part where he held to start his endurance course. This time though, he had to feel his way around the course. He set off at a walking pace, hands outstreatched. He reached his first checkpoint, a smaller sapling of a tree. He made a left turn and increased his pace slightly, hopping up when he felt less solid dirt under his feet. His feet touched down on a branch, but he lost his balance and fell. "This is gonna be a lot harder than I thought," he said as he removed the blindfold and walked back to the starting tree. "Left turn at the sapling, the ground had an extra thick grass patch there. The grassless dirt before the first jump altered my jump a little, gotta remember that next time."

With the blindfold replaced, Atenonai pushed off at a much faster pace. "Thick grass...here!" He swung to the left quickly and slowed somewhat. As soon as his foot pushed in the dirt, he lept up to the branch again, where he successfully kept his footing. "Next I run along the branch and push off to the right." He ran out along the branch and felt it start to bend, so he slid onto the right and pressed the branch back, where he lifted off and reached another tree with his hands. He flipped to place his feet there instead and bounced off to go down to the ground. He stopped and removed the blindfold again, deciding he had enough of that training for now. "Back to chakra molding." He made a quick rat handseal and went back to molding chakra into blocking his sight. He took some of his chakra and put it back into his optic nerves. His sight started disappearing again, dimming more and more. "Maybe if instead of slowly thickening the chakra, I move the chakra around my optic nerve and suddenly create a fully formed wall instead." His sight returned as he pulled away all his chakra and started building it up. He sucked all of it in the way of his nerves in a second, totally turning his sight out. "Ok, thats one. Now I've got to figure out smell and sound." He dropped the seal and rested for a few minutes.

[Kin ,Tomonari]

Atenonai stood back up and checked the sun and sighed, "It's just about time for her to show up. Maybe a minute." He was startled by a voice behind him, "Still can't finish a full training regimen before I get here, can you? I can barely believe your related to me." A tall, slender young woman wearing a Leaf missing-nin's forehead protecter came out of the bushes behind him, she had the same brown hair as Atenonai and was wearing a chunin uniform. "Seishin, you always show up late so you can say that, and you know it." He chuckled a little bit when he said that. He turned and she asked, "Did you finally figure that jutsu out, Migi? You're short one eye so it should only take half as long as mos-""Shut up!" he yelled, "You know I hate that name and I hate it when you talk about my eye!" She giggled, "Thats what makes it so fun to do." He sighed loudly, "Just get to the training."

He took his place 10 feet from her and started channelling chakra, his sister laughed again, "Well, you obviously still haven't mastered it yet, try channelling the chakra you have in your brain to stop signals from the brain instead of using up extra chakra to block it before it gets there." She continued, "If you do this you preform a genjutsu on yourself and your chakra flow can't be manipulated externally." He quickly tried putting this into practice, bringing back the buzz in his head like last time, but this buzz was softer, more easy to stand, and when he opened his eye, everything was totally black. "It worked! Thanks, sis!" He could hear her slowly making her way towards him, saying "Good thing you don't know how to close hearing yet, or you wouldn't stand a chance with what's about to happen to you. He heard the sound of wind whistling along an arm to his left and he put up a hand to block the attack, unfortunately, he forgot how tough she was, and he was still sent sprawling on the ground. He kept up his jutsu however, and quickly got back to his feet. "What was that for?" She giggled again, "No bad blood, I just wanted to have a little fun first. Ok, now I'll let you try to train sightless. First, find and strike me." He nodded and quieted himself, listening for the slightest breath, searching for the slightest trace of scent, anything. He heard faint breathing behind and above him. He took a moment to make sure and spun around, tossing a shurikan towards the sound, but he heard the sound of metal biting into wood and then the laugh-filled disapproval of his teacher. "Hahaha! You didn't even hit the right tree, kid!" He heard this voice to his right and threw a second shurikan in the direction of that voice, this time hitting metal. He gave a proud smile and puffed his chest out, and with an air of confidence, said "Is this all you got, sis? I could do this all day." He quickly realized he couldn't hold the jutsu for much longer and released it. "Oh really, from what I see you just ran out of chakra. Rest up and I'll be back in a few minutes, I'm itching for some of my old favorite eateries, I haven't been to any in weeks. See ya later, little brother.

[kininata]

((+3TP and +5TP. 12/30))

[Kin ,Tomonari]

12/30

Atenonai sat resting on the grass. He looked up at the sky, it was about noon, and there were a few dark clouds overhead. He shifted his gaze downward and looked around him, there was one very old tree that he always used for projectile training, and it had plenty of scars on it, most of them were spread in a wide circle around it. He thought back to his academy days when his sister was always willing to help him with his training. She looked a lot like she did today, with the exception of the cut across her protector that missing-nins have. Lucky for him, she decided that her brother deserved to get the family's best training, and all of their special family-made jutsu as well.

He heard her leap up to him and stood up, saying "Took you long enough." "Oh, come on little brother, you know how much I love Rona's Ramen. And besides, if you were sitting there, NOT training, then you probably still aren't at 100% to do this, so, I think I should take my leave for a while..." He sighed angrily, "Fine, fine, I'm glad you're back, sis, what do I learn next?" Next is a good one, I need you to try to block smell, while I preform a GenJutsu to affect your sense of smell and sight. Ready...setgo!" She performed a few handseals and Atenonai immedietely started his jutsu to block his senses before he could feel the effects of the genjutsu. Before his sight went out, he managed to relive his father's death, and his father's disapproving gaze. A small tear formed in his eye before it closed up. And he smelled something he hated immensely, the smell of the dead. He franticly tried to extend his chakra to the hearing center of his brain, but to no avail. The tear in his dead eye grew and rolled down his cheek. He hated that smell. He finally dulled it enough to keep himself from losing his cool, and he heard her speak, "Good first try, kid, you're finally getting this thing." Now, I know you want to get a good handle on your other skills too, so lets do some general endurance training, we can start with a good clean sparring match.

Seishin and Atenonai stood a few feet apart, stances ready, and rushed at each other, Seishin rolled a few degrees to the left at the last second, dodging Atenonai's attack. While he was turning around, she did a swift sweeping kick, knocking him down. She jumped to her feet and put her hands on her hips, waiting for him to get up. He got up a few seconds later with a high jump, using the sun to block her vision of his attack plan. He thrust his arm out at her and she sidestepped away. He used his hand as a pivot and started a 360 degree spin with his legs split, which his sister barely dodged. "Whoa, you're getting better, bro. That's the closest you've gotten to hitting me yet. He lifted himself up, breathing heavily from the fast movements of the fight. Seishin then rushed him and fired a barrage of punches and kicks. He was barely able to keep up with her at first, but after the first few hits, he started taking hits repeatedly. She finished her combo with a strong kick that sent him into a nearby tree. When she realized he had passed out, she laughed again, "That kid really needs some training. But while he's out...another visit to Rona's Ramen can't hurt." She grinned and ran off into the village.

[Kin ,Tomonari]

Atenonai woke up in a daze for the second time that day. He groaned and felt around the back of his head for where he hit. "Geez I hit the same place twice, isn't that considered a concussion?" He looked around for Seishin, but, realizing she wasn't there, he angrily got up and punched his open palm, "And she left again, probably went to that stupid ramen shop for seconds. Oh well, I guess I can do some training without her for a while." He started doing some target practice on the old tree in front of him, hitting pretty close to the center most of the time, and when he was on his last shurikan, the voice of his sister startled him again, and he threw it into the bushes on accident.

"I'm back. You seem to be enjoying yourself. Oh, and, nice shot, you really hit that bush on the money." She giggled at that last remark. "Yeah, yeah, I missed and it's so hilarious. Just don't go knocking me out next time." She became serious right away, "Ok Migi, this time you're going to have to block everything, because you will fight a genjutsu user someday, and this is going to be your only way out. When everything else is unreliable, you can always trust what you can touch. If it works, I am going to tap you on the shoulder twice to see if it worked." He made the handseal and lost his sight and smell, then he tried to add his hearing, but to no avail. "What's wrong? I can't block any more than two! What aren't you telling me?"

[/ Toki /]

+ 5 + 3 {20/30}

[Kin ,Tomonari]

She tapped his shoulder twice and he stopped trying to use the jutsu. She sighed quietly, "Look, if you're gonna complain so much, next time all I'm going to tell you is what the jutsu's name is." She put her hand on his head and started to explain, "Every sense you block takes twice as much chakra to do, so when you tried to block all three, you probably didn't have enough chakra left. But now that I'm sure you can do it, lets get to the rest of what you need, the training to fight blind, def, and scentless. The easiest way to do that is to get hit first and then try attacking in the direction the attack came from as fast as you can.

Seishin nodded to him, it was time to try to do the training. He decided he would use his blindfold and the noseplug, and only use the jutsu on his hearing, he wanted to save his chakra for the fighting, when he would really need it. He waited for her first attack, but not for long, he felt her leg pressing into his side. Where is it coming from, he thought. Behind! He caved to the kick and went down onto his hands, where he pivoted around to do a sweeping kick at where he hoped she was. His foot swung at air, and he lost his balance, falling flat on his face. If he could hear, he would have heard his sister rolling on the ground laughing. He managed to get up and wait for his next try at it. He felt a fist on his shoulder and tried to grab it with his hand before he got pushed back, and when he did, he put his other hand on it and jumped up and, hopefully, over the attacker, trying to lock her arms behind her back. "Ha! I finally got you!" He squeezed a little tighter and the hand turned into water. Water clones! I hate those things. And I finally had her too. He stood totally still again, waiting for another clone to attack.

[Kin ,Tomonari]

Atenonai felt a hand press against his chest and a leg connect with his knees and he sprung into action. He slid down his wrist blades and fell backwards. He swung his right leg out and felt a solid object, which quickly gave way. He twisted his body around and dug his blades into the other clone. Cloth turned to water and he pulled his weapon from the dirt. "Ok, sis. I think you can stop with the clones, I'm not that weak." A split second later he felt himself flying from an attack he didn't even remember feeling, so he took off the blindfold and caught himself before he hit anything.

He made an embarassed smile, "Ok, I think I'll stick with clones." She giggled and formed a few more, while he lowered the blindfold again. He readied himself and this time he felt a kunai hit his weapon. He ran towards the spot he guessed it came from and swung at the air. Feeling nothing he waited again, this time he had a kunai in his hand, in case she decided he would have to block an actual hit. He felt something push into his chest, and he swung his kunai into the way as fast as he could. He couldn't put it up in time and he realized it was a rock. "If that was a weapon I would be dead right now." He rushed out in the general directon of the rock, this time his kunai connected with something solid. Another rock hit him in the back and he threw his kunai this time. He walked in the direction he threw it and felt wet ground. "Yes, I hit it! There should be one left." He stopped again and waited for the last one, but he didn't have to wait long. He was punched in the back and he couldn't respond quickly enough, so he took the hit full force. While on the ground, he was grabbed by the arms and lifted up off the ground. He was able to kick it in the chest and it collapsed, and he again fell flat on his face. He got up, took the things off and ended the jutsu, panting and sweating from the work he had to do. "That...was..." he coughed a little and swallowed hard, "That was fun!"

[Satu Akira]

+2
+3
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25/30 TP. Good luck on the remaining 5 to go.

[Kin ,Tomonari]

The sun was starting to get low in the sky and Atenonai was getting impatient. "Come on! I haven't got all day, I need this jutsu! Don't you have some easier way to do this?" Seishin grabbed a shurikan and tossed it at him. It missed, on purpose, but it still shut Atenonai up. "Now listen, you haven't given me any gratitude for teaching or helping teach you more than half your jutsu so far, so I would appriciate it if you wouldn't keep bugging me. If you do, I swear I'll give an annonymous tip that you're spying for another village." She ran at him and started fighting with him. She kicked him in the chest a few times and he was on the ground. He got up and preformed the jutsu again, this time he was gonna take on three at once and have all three senses covered. He raised his hand and closed his pinky and thumb. Then he waited.

Seconds later he felt a hand grab his face, so he grabbed the arm and tried to kick the the clone out, but it blocked the kick. A second clone sweep kicked him onto his back and he tried to stab it on his way down, but it grabbed his hand and held it down. Then the third clone crushed his stomach with its elbow. He managed to push them all away and gather himself. He felt another rock hit him in the back and he tried to hit it with a shurikan. He realized that it was a failure when he felt three different bodies beat him into the dust.

He finally got one when it kicked him dead-center in the chest. He placed an exploding tag on the leg and lept backwards, activating it. He felt the explosion and heat and a short shower of water. He cleared his eyes and didn't see anymore clones. "Sweet! I got them all with one tag." He saw his sister yelling at him and opened his ears. "-nk you can just cause an explosion in the middle of the village and no one will notice? You idiot! You can finish teaching yourself, I can't stay here anymore." She spun around and disappeared into the trees. "Crap, how can I train for this when I don't have anyone to train with?"

[spamato]

+3
27/30
Sorry..almost there though like twenty minutes of writing!

[Kin ,Tomonari]

(eh, spamato buddy, little mistake there, you put up 27/30 and +3 when the last amount was 25, im going to assume, for my benifit, that you meant 28 )

Atenonai plopped himself onto the ground and looked at the sky. The sun was just about at the trees, and he was running out of time. He stood up and one of the village MPs jumped out of the shadows, "Excuse me, kid, I'm going to assume you're the one that blew up an explosive tag. Please refrain from doing that inside the village, if you want to do that kind of training I suggest you try one of the forests outside the village." Atenonai nodded and turned away from him, making a seal. The MP jumped out of the clearing and Atenonai blocked his senses again, this time he was going to do some more environmental training.

He broke off in a sprint with one hand outstretched to feel his way around. He ran up on a tree and did a half-flip onto the trunk, springing off and touching another tree, this time he aimed up and grabbed onto a branch. He spun around and tried to hit the spot he just bounced off of with a shurikan. Then he swung up the branch onto his feet, clearing his eyes to see if he hit. "Yes! Perfect shot, I might just be able to get this yet." He blocked his eyes again and tried to do his short course in reverse. He pushed off the branch and accidently cut his hand on the shurikan he threw a moment ago. He winced a little and pushed off to the first tree, which he missed slightly, feeling only the edge of the trunk, so he had to change his approach. He dug his weapon into the tree and circled the trunk, pushing off when he got to where he started.

He stopped for a minute, breathing heavily from the amount of chakra he spent throughout the day, and the amount of instant reacting he did in such a short time. He released the jutsu and checked his hand, a thin cut that wouldn't mean anything with a good night's rest. He turned and walked back to his room, where he put on a bandage and fell into his bed.

[spamato]

oops, but yeah you where right.
+2
30/30