Private Training Field

[drkenigma]

  00/30



  Hiro walked through a small clearing   in the forest which had a good area of flat ground next to a  lake."Ahh perfect "Hiro smiled  to him self before he took  a few steps forward facing the lake closing his eyes."Alright focus my chakara" he said taking a step on to the lake  forming the needed hand seals and pushing  his hand down towards his water focusing  his chakara "Water style:water Prison Jutsu"Hiro said as  he formed a  small sphere of water  for a split second before  it exploded sending water flying every where.

    Hiro looked down  "I have to keep trying " He formed the needed hand seals once again. "Water Style: Water Prison Jutsu " this time  the sphere was slightly larger then the last  and held it for  about 10 seconds this time before it  explodes sending water all over Hiro. His hair at this point dripping wet   along with his clothes. "Have  to keep going "He panted  trying  extremly hard to focus his chakara ..."Water Style: Water prison Jutsu " the sphere was the same  size as last time holding for  10 seconds longer before  exploding  once more  this time sending him  flying across the lake landing   by one of the trees... 

    Hiro laid there for  about a minute  before forcing him self to his feet and back out on to the lake. Forming  the  hand seals  once again ..."Water style: Water prison jutsu " he said  holding out his left arm forming  another prison about    a  a few centimeters  larger in circumference then the last  holding it for  30 seconds this time  before  its  just dissipated..."I'm not letting this get the best of me  this time...


  Once More he   used the hand seals needed for this ninjutsu  "Water Style: Water Prison jutsu"  as the sphere formed Hiro noticed that it finally was at the proper size. Holding it for exactly sixty seconds before   the water    fell back to the lake  Hiro plunged in to the water forgetting to focus the chakara in to his feet. Quickly he  focused his chakara to his hands he pushed   up to pull his self  back up.

"Again" He said this time determined to master this jutsu "Water style water prison Jutsu" he pushed his hand out  forming the  water prison he closed  his eyes  focusing   thinking to him self fifteen...thirty...forty-five.." counting the seconds hitting the minute mark before he gave out from extended use of  chakara  for the  day. Hiro sat at the edge of land laying back sweat dripping off his  face...


learning : Suiton – Suirou no Jutsu (Water Prison)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Technique that may be used in order to trap an opponent by creating a prison made of water. The water is used so that the opponent may drown within the water if the opponent does not know how to escape forth.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bushin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Limit: Water Release

    

[Gohan]

8/10
Just need a bit more length, otherwise not bad!

[drkenigma]

08/30

Hiro stood up after a small break closing his eyes waiting a minute before stringing a few hand seals quickly before softly saying “ a short break. “I can do it “ He smiled eager to get back to the grind he walked out to the lake slowly Water style: Water prison jutsu “ then pushing his left hand down to about two inches from the water. The water began to tremble around his hand forming a sphere of water.Hiro thought back to his classes in the academy which taught of chakra control he steadied his breathing keeping a steady stream of chakra flowing to keep the prison secure. After a few moments had passed the water prison bursts..”im getting better but i still need to work harder” He muttered before stringing the hand signs together once more leaving a small space between his hand and the water he focused his chakra slowly into his hand making sure the surge of chakra was focused on his palm.

The water shook and the inhabitants of the lake frantically trying to get away from the commotion. the water started to rise in the form of a spherical prison.Hiro continued to keep his eyes closed so he would not distract himself from focusing the prison held steady for about two minutes before the water around it rippled thus causing the prison to quake from the added pressure of his chakra as he begun to apply a bit too much chakra to the prison causing it to bust once again.

Hiro’s eyes shot open as he analyzed what had just happened.”focus focus focus”he repeated to himself as he formed the hand signs once again making the water form into a prison “hold it “ he said to himself as his left hand trembled ever so slightly causing the sphere of water to ripple about..”I-I-I have got to hold it “Hiro said to himself as he grit his teeth as he was pushing himself to the absolute limit as he focused even harder than before to stabilize his chakra into the water prison .after five or so minutes the prison broke splashing everywhere almost simulating the effects of rain ..”almost there I can’t quit now..Thats it I have an idea!”Hiro smiled ear to ear before forming the necessary hand seals before and he placed his hand down on the water making it travel a shorter distance to form the water prison as the prison formed slowly he pulled his hand black making the size of the water prison expand whilst holding its shape and not breaking to the security of the prison.


The sphere held its shape for a little over 3 minutes this time as Hiro began panting sweat dripping from his brow the water dropped and the prison broke he fell to his knee as he had once again used up a huge chunk of his chakra trying to perfect the jutsu.”maybe i need to learn to control my chakra better “hiro said in between panting


learning : Suiton – Suirou no Jutsu (Water Prison)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Technique that may be used in order to trap an opponent by creating a prison made of water. The water is used so that the opponent may drown within the water if the opponent does not know how to escape forth.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bushin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Limit: Water Release

[Celaena Kamyuja]

+2. Learned.

[Deleted]

cough. going to overrule sita here, for your benefit. seeing as how its a c rank and all.

calling it a +7

[drkenigma]

15/30

Hiro walked to the lake forming hand seals and pushing his left hand by the water forming a prison. The prison stayed in position for twenty-five minutes before hiro started panting and losing his focus causing him to focus a huge burst of chakra into the bubbling causing it to explode in all directions the force of the explosion sent hiro flying several feet on shore slamming him into a tree..”M-man that hurt”Hiro said staggering back to his feet he shrugged not wanting to admit defeat her power through the pain and formed the needed hand signs “water style: Water prison Jutsu “ he muttered as the water seemingly glided up over his left hand creating an almost perfect prison Holding it for a solid thirty minutes he felt the bubble began to quake so he eased up his chakra which caused a sort of waterfall effect…”this is difficult “hiro said panting as he was nearing his limit.

“must keep going “hiro said going back to the middle of the lake forming hand seals and pushing his hand down by the water closing his eyes to enable him total focus he felt as the water formed to the shape of the prison. Hiro Hummed softly as he held the prison only seconds longer than last time once again having the awareness to ease his chakra to let it drip down.Hiro fell to his knee once more being physically exhausted by the insane amount of chakra he was using up


“No I can’t stop here !”hiro said again quickly stringing together more hand seals he closed his eyes again forming the prison holding it there he smirked as he continued pushing a small amount of chakra to the palm of his left hand and focused an image in his mind of what the actual prison needed. “Must hold it “he thought to himself. The water sphere began to pulsate and move around for a small period of time before hiro gains control of it closing his eyes he smiled as he controlled his chakra making sure to regulate how much was going in to the prison trying his hardest not to let the bubble burst.


After holding the bubble in place for forty minutes again slowly the sphere of water began to bubble causing a fish to jump up from the water hitting Hiro’s hand making him lose the jutsu making it pop.”crap”hiro said falling to his knee panting. Hiro smirked as he stood up once again walking on to the middle of the body of water stringing together the needed seals pushing his hand down by the water the water began bubbling and slowly formed around his hand keeping his hand steady Hiro closed his eyes focusing all his effort on keeping the bubble. After 20 minutes of holding the bubble it blew up sending hiro back a few feet before he gained control “I got an an idea “he smiles biting his thumb slowly causing blood to drip and he drew a swirl on the palm of his left hand in blood before performing hand seals pushing his hand down towards the water forming the spherical water prison closing his eyes. Holding the prison for a good amount of time before Hiro clapsed to his knee.

learning : Suiton – Suirou no Jutsu (Water Prison)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Technique that may be used in order to trap an opponent by creating a prison made of water. The water is used so that the opponent may drown within the water if the opponent does not know how to escape forth.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bushin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Limit: Water Release

[Celaena Kamyuja]

+8. Good Read. I utterly enjoyed it!

Now you have 23/30 lol. Keep it up!

[drkenigma]

23/30

“I am so close I can feel it !”hiro said rising back to his feet and once again holding his position at the center of the lake. creating the needed seals to perform the jutsu “Water Style: Water Prison Jutsu “ he muttered as the water began to rise before ever so slightly around Hiro’s left hand forming a spherical prison of water that was as hard as steel. “Let the chakra flow to my hand. Apply a steady stream to the water then hold “ Hiro guided himself through the process of making the prison. Hiro had already seeming learned how to hold it for varied amount of times now he wanted to learn how to release it safely.


Hiro slowly moved his left hand from the prison pulling back the chakra in his hand causing the prison to cascade down either side of his arm in a waterfall fashion. “Again.” Hiro grinned as he did more hand seals making sure to refocus the chakra to the point of his palm. “Water style: Water prison Jutsu “ he said holding his hand near the water letting his hand gather around his hand keeping the prison in its spherical shape..”Next lesson moving my body while keeping my arm in place” Hiro directed himself as he tried jumping up and down but on the second jump lost balance and dropped the prison.

“Well that was awkward” Hiro rubbed the back of his head laughing at his clumsiness. He smirked a determined gleam in his crystal blue eyes. “Water Style: Water Prison Jutsu” Hiro said forming the hand seals and placing his hand by the water letting it glide seamlessly around his hand to form the impenetrable prison made of water which was almost steel like.” Hold it hold it hold it “ Hiro slowly repeated to himself as a way to remind himself what needed to be done and how it needed to be done.

Hiro was at the point in his training where he was confident in his ability to perform his jutsu consistently but he was now concerned with getting other things to work with this jutsu like dodging. Hiro Jumped up and down a few times concentrating on putting all his effort into keeping the prison up. With each jump the prison wavered. “gotta keep all my chakra in the right spot “hiro said closing one eye trying to maintain control over the Prison.


The prison maintained its shape for a short time before Hiro pulled his left hand back out of the prison dropping all the water back down to the lake causing a decent sized splash..”aww man I just dried off no fair” Hiro jokingly pouted. Hiro stood there for a minute before he had an idea he grabbed a rock and walked back out to the lake he looked down at the water noticing a school of small fish swimming he threw a rock down at them causing 2 of them to jump up ..Quickly Hiro did the hand seals and put his hand down trapping the fish into the water. “it worked “he smiled as he dropped the prison catching the fish with kunai taking it ashore for an after training snack.

learning : Suiton – Suirou no Jutsu (Water Prison)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Technique that may be used in order to trap an opponent by creating a prison made of water. The water is used so that the opponent may drown within the water if the opponent does not know how to escape forth.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bushin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Limit: Water Release

[Yoshi [Lynx!]]

+7

You're getting better, keep it up!

[drkenigma]

10/10 (is it ok if i stick with the D -Rank for now)

“i guess working on mastering escape skills wouldn't hurt”.Hiro said looking at the water. Closing his eyes hiro focused chakra to his eyes , mouth ears and lungs doing a few quick hand seals before jumping in to the water swimming down a bit deeper looking around for about 30 seconds before he had to swim back to the surface he focused chakra to his hands and feet to hold himself above the water while he did the string of hand seals again then he jumped back into the water once more swimming under the water for about forty seconds before surfacing.” why not make this fun “he smiled as he noticed a tree that had branches hanging over the lake he walked over to the tree climbing it. standing over the lake he strung together the needed hand seals focusing the chakra to the needed spots before he dove into the water swimming around under the water for about fifty seconds this time before he felt his chakra slip and he started struggling he quickly did the needed signs under the water focusing the chakra to his ears,eyes, mouth and lungs gaining control allowing him to swim to the surface.


Hiro pulled himself ashore for a few minutes to catch his breath before he stood up doing the hand seals and focusing the chakra to his body he jumped into the water swimming around for a minute before intentionally letting go of the jutsu so he could reapply it under water making it much harder to perform the hand seals and concentrate the chakra he smiled as he swam about the lake some more finally coming up for air after about five minutes he went ashore taking his shirt off leaving only his fishnet shirt. he jumped to his feet again doing the hand seals running on to the lake then jumping in focusing with all his might only getting about five and a half minutes under water again before having to resurface readjust his chakra flow.

Hiro got up again heavily panting before focusing his chakra “Eyes,Nose ,Ears,Mouth,Lungs “he quietly reminded himself as he dipped into the lake taking the time he had to explore a bit. Getting about seven minutes this time hiro resurfaced once again feeling the physical strain he was putting on his body he got up once again doing the seals and jumping in to the water he swam around a bit before suddenly his chakra gave out having exerted too much chakra to the specific points. he started flailing about as he also had physically pushed his body too much.After a few minutes of struggling Hiro stopped moving slowly started sinking. A vision coming to him of the lessons on chakra control he had at the academy which seemingly gave hiro his second wind he noticed he came to noticing he was drowning he quickly did the hand seals and focused the last bit of chakra remaining into the specific points in his body and swimmed ashore pulling himself away from the lake rolling on to his back coughing up water on to the ground trying to regain his breath.


Suichuu (Underwater)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Allows the user stay underwater for some time.
Difficulty Class
D Rank Difficulty Class - 20 minutes

C Rank Difficulty Class - 40 minutes

B Rank Difficulty Class - 80 minutes

A Rank Difficulty Class - 120 minutes

S Rank Difficulty Class - 180 minutes

Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: After returning to surface the user must rest half of the time used underwater. As example, if the user has stayed under for 20 minutes, he’ll have to rest 10 minutes before the jutsu can be used again.
Description: Simple technique used by channeling chakra to mouth, lungs, ears and eyes. With chakra moved to mouth and lungs the user gathers air from the water and is able breath underwater, chakra guided to ears protects from the aching caused by pressure, lenses of chakra protecting eyes work like swim goggles.
Limit: Must have Water Release

[Gohan]

+10

Sure, after you complete one technique you can start another.

If you ever end up abandoning learning Technique A (without completing it) and start learning Technique B, you lose all progress with Technique A. So as long as you don't do that, you're good.

[drkenigma]

00/30

“If I want to be accepted into I gotta train harder”Hiro said focusing chakra to his feet and stepping on to the lake doing one single hand seal “Water style: Hidden Mist Jutsu”Hiro muttered as a slight fog rose above him only covering about five feet in either direction of him. This mist slowly dispelled. “Ok that didn't work out to well “ Hiro remarked again before performing the seal. Hiro closed his eyes focusing on controlling the mist …”oh crap I can’t do this with my eyes closed”Hiro opened his eyes looking around seeing the mist. The mist was very subpar to say the least he was able to see pretty much everything.

“Water Style: Hidden mist jutsu “ hiro smirked as he mist gathered around the medium sized lake. this mist was much denser than before and held a tiny bit longer. after a few minutes passed the fog started to ease in and out of density before fully disappearing.”Again “ hiro said forming the seal before the mist slowly rose starting at his feet and slowly becoming more dense. Hiro smirked as he held the fog adjusting his eyes to the mist he had just created “that’s definitely gonna take some getting used to “ hiro remarked before performing the seal once more the water below him began to quake as the mist gained density hiro focused more more and more becoming visible. Holding the mist slightly longer than last time before it began to waver and lose density.

The Mist fell down like a pouring rain storm as Hiro had focused too much chakra into the jutsu causing the mist to become more like rain than a mist. “I can’t give up not until I am good enough to do it…”Hiro said forming the seal once again now focusing on covering a larger distance for the hidden mist jutsu. The mist made it to about the trees but that caused the density of the mist to suffer greatly causing it to be less effect. On top of the density the increase distance meant Hiro was outputting more chakra into the jutsu. Hiro fell to his knee. Hiro looked down at his reflection in the water.

“I will never become stronger and attain my goal sitting around all day “ Hiro said forcing himself back to his feet “Water Style: Hidden Mist Jutsu “ hiro said making the sign as the mist reached to the trees once more Hiro focused all his chakra. Hiro noticed the density getting thicker. “I think i got it “hiro grinned but let go of his focus dispelling the mist. “I think I’m spent here”hiro collapsed to his knees panting heavily.

Hiro stood up once more pushing himself beyond his absolute breaking point. “Water Style: Hidden Mist Jutsu “ hiro said focusing hard filling the area of the lake with a thick mist.” gotta keep this density “ Hiro said Clenching his teeth focusing the final bit of his chakra to holding the mist up holding it for three minutes before he dispelled it and walked to land to get some rest as he had wore himself out training

Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Skill)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: A Skill where a user uses the water around them to create a massive mist to fill around the user.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A skill which creates a very dense fog that descreases the surrounding visibility to near zero. It produces an environment perfect for a silent assassin who follows an opponent through sound. This mist can not be blown away by any type of Wind Jutsu.
Limit: Water Release

[Celaena Kamyuja]

+7
Try and explain how you are creating the mist OK?
7 out of 30. Seems scary but it’s not really once you get the hang of it.

[drkenigma]

07/30

“I won’t let this get the best of me “ Hiro said standing up and focusing the small amount of chakra to his feet walking on to the water slowly concentrating his chakra to his feet and walked on to the lake. Hiro did the single hand sign to perform the jutsu chakra flowed through hiro’s body causing the mist slowly rise up from the water. The density was rather thick compared to what he had been producing throughout his training of this jutsu. this mist faded in between being see through and being dense the jutsu faded full within two short minutes .. “W-why why can’t I get it” hiro said focusing as hard as ever . Hiro made the needed hand seal “Water Style: Hidden Mist Jutsu. all around Hiro and the lake formed a dense mist which even he himself could barely see through.”The way i see it is I have to work one hundred and ten present harder than normal “hiro said standing on the water. the Mist slowly lifted as hiro released his chakra as slow a she could making sure not to put too much chakra into the mist.

The mist reached the edge of land Hiro kept his body still as he focused on density rather than distance of the mist.For hiro there was three parts to his training. part one involved getting the mist to keep density while standing on the water then part two was increasing the distance of the jutsu while standing on the water.Than comes part three having to be able to be on land and channel the mist from a near by body of water. “Come on Don’t give out now “ Hiro panted as he slowly did the single hand seal.”Water Style: Hidden Mist Jutsu “ Hiro said as the water around him bubbles slowly allowing a mist to form starting at his feet then rising slowly to his waist… “thats it keep going “Hiro panted slowly as it raised once more hiro held his posture but his body began to feel the effects of his extensive training. He fell to his knees the mist quickly dissipated.Hiro shook his head shaking off the fatigue to the best of his ability.


“this is extremely taxing on my body I should only use this in dire circumstances “Hiro said analyzing his output of chakra ..”Water style: Hidden Mist Jutsu “ Hiro said slowly as he formed the hand seal making sure he was pushing a steady stream of chakra to form the mist seeing as how he only can make the mist on or near a body of water which made this a very situation jutsu for escape.Hiro steadied his breaths slowly as he didn't want to lose grip of the jutsu. How ever Hiro’s chakra was quickly depleting. As seen by the mist waving in and out of visibility before he fell to his knees slowly panting sweat dripping from the his nose notably hiro was exhausted and on the verge of passing out.

Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Skill)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu

Effect: A Skill where a user uses the water around them to create a massive mist to fill around the user.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A skill which creates a very dense fog that descreases the surrounding visibility to near zero. It produces an environment perfect for a silent assassin who follows an opponent through sound. This mist can not be blown away by any type of Wind Jutsu.
Limit: Water Release

[Father 'Suke]

+8; 15|30
Better, much better.

[drkenigma]

15/30

Hiro stood up after a small rest having almost exhausted all his chakra he smiled as he wanted to move to training near a body of water now.” this part is gonna be much harder “Hiro said forming the hand seal and focusing a bit of chakra into forming the mist which could be seen rising from the lake only a few short feet away hiro focused more chakra then he had when he was standing on the water to cover for the distance that was being lost from standing farther away. The mist was nothing to tell stories about as Hiro wasn't able put forth enough chakra to hold the density at this distance. Hiro began to pant heavily as the mist dispersed around him . He once more did the hand seal letting the mist weave around his body focusing a bit more chakra into the mist this time it was slightly more dense this time but how long he could hold it would be the real test.

The mist held for about half a minute before the jutsu broke he forced himself to stay on his feet feeling his body become heavy with the strain on his body he shook it off once more doing the jutsu making sure he held a steady chakra stream of chakra causing the mist to thicken around the surrounding area. Hiro’s body shook slightly as he was exerting way to much chakra he knew in his heart that this was only meant for dire circumstances in which he had no other alternative as the thicker the mist and the more area covered caused him to eat up a substantial amount of chakra.

“NO- NO - NO I haven't come this far to give up I am a shinobi of the village hidden in the leaves i will not give in “Hiro pushes himself to his feet with every fiber of his being …”Again “ Hiro performed the seal causing the water to rise around the area this time notably slower than normal as he had to exert a smaller amount of chakra since he had little chakra left the mist barely covered an arm's length.The mist stood for mere seconds as he collapsed having worn himself out. He thought back to his time in the academy where he learned about chakra and what would happen if he ran completely out.

Hiro staggered to his feet not letting anything stop him he formed the seal and from the center of the lake the mist rose slipping low to the ground and down around hiro’s ankles slowly rising to about knee length and covering the to about the opening of the forest and finally the mist rose over hiro’s head he smiled in approval as he held the mist. With each passing moment Hiro’s fatigue grew also his body began feeling heavier and heavier with each moment hiro shook more and more. Not wanting to give up but his body finally gave out causing him to pass out.


Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Skill)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu

Effect: A Skill where a user uses the water around them to create a massive mist to fill around the user.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A skill which creates a very dense fog that descreases the surrounding visibility to near zero. It produces an environment perfect for a silent assassin who follows an opponent through sound. This mist can not be blown away by any type of Wind Jutsu.
Limit: Water Release

[Gohan]

+10

[drkenigma]

25/30

Hiro stood up after resting some to recoup his chakra some. “Back to work “Hiro said cracking his knuckles before performing hand seals “Water style Hidden Mist Jutsu “Hiro smirk drawing from the body of water directly in front of him the water wavered before swirling around Hiro in mist form the mist was dense with chakra being put in to it. Hiro this time made sure to pace himself as he knew that he would over do it and seriously harm himself making his training take even longer. “Keep the flow steady and gentle “Hiro breathed slowly and steadily making sure the flow was perfect. The mist held for a moment before dispersing.

“I gotta train harder “Hiro grit his teeth focusing extremely hard channeling a large bit of chakra before making the seal. Hiro watched as the water danced about the land turning into a fairly dense body of mist which reached the entrance to the forest which was by the small plot of land which Hiro used to train.the mist rose about to the tops of the trees. Hiro quickly trained his eyes to see a bit in front of him but only about five or so feet in front of him.

The mist slowly disappeared starting from the top and slowly workings its way back to the lake. Hiro panted as the fatigue started to set in once more. Hiro shook off the feeling and made the seal once more making sure to steadily push forth tiny bits of chakra into the mist at a time making sure to push more little by little to make one hundred percent sure it was at the right distance and density. The mist was rather chilling in temperature it sent a shiver down hiro’s spine. the mist held for a short time Hiro taking the occasional breath to keep control of the jutsu before breaking it .

“I am only good for two more shots at this” Hiro remarked as he slowly formed another sign as the water danced around a bit before turning into mist and creeping slowly around hiro and the perimeter of the land and lake rising up through the branches and leaves and in between all the cracks and crevices. “Keep it keep it “hiro said holding the jutsu as he felt his chakra start to slip and the jutsu abruptly ended hiro dropping to his knees panting sweat dripping from his hair and chin.

Hiro pushes up off the ground the will to persevere and adapt was strong in Hiro he stood up out of instinct and formed the hand sign for hidden mist jutsu channeling his chakra in to it causing the mist to rise in it once again the surrounding area was covered in a deep mist nothing was visible he was even unable to see his hand in front of his own face. The Mist was stronger than any of the previous mists he summoned. by distance covered and density this was by far his best attempt at this jutsu. Hiro held the jutsu for ten minutes before hiro suddenly lost consciousness falling flat on his back from loss of chakra .


Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Skill)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu

Effect: A Skill where a user uses the water around them to create a massive mist to fill around the user.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: A skill which creates a very dense fog that descreases the surrounding visibility to near zero. It produces an environment perfect for a silent assassin who follows an opponent through sound. This mist can not be blown away by any type of Wind Jutsu.
Limit: Water Release

[Fui]

Learned

[drkenigma]

00/30

Hiro set four kunai sticking them on in the ground all in a line going further apart as they go. Hiro finally stuck his katana in the ground at the edge of the field leading to the lake .Hiro stepped back a few feet. Hiro closed his eyes steadying the flow of chakra in his body before attempting the body flicker the grass moved with the wind in the spot where he was. Hiro reappeared laying on the ground about a good two feet behind where the first first kunai was thrashing around in pain as the one side effect of the body flicker was the huge strain on ankles..

“crap”Hiro said pushing himself up to his feet returning to the spot he started in closing his eyes focusing his chakra to spots in his feet and ankle to try to lessen the damage done by the Body flicker. Hiro inhaled slowly then exhaled. As soon as he exhaled he vanished without a single trace appearing mere seconds later at the first kunai checkpoint falling to his knees instantly.”even with the added chakra to the points in my leg that still hurt horribly “hiro tried getting up but to no avail.


“I haven't come this far to fail”Hiro said using all the muscles in his body to push himself back to his feet grabbing the kunai placeholder before walking back to his starting position closing his eyes he focused a slightly larger amount of chakra than the last time. Disappearing in the blink of an eye appearing about half a foot from the next checkpoint which he had marked with kunai. Hiro landed on his knee managing to almost stay up this time around.Hiro pulled himself up to his feet going back to his starting spot closing his eyes focusing chakra vanishing once more this time appearing flat on the ground chin in the dirt mere inches from the inches from the second kunai.

Hiro panted dragging himself back to the spot where he would start he stood back up and focused chakra into his legs feet and ankles before disappearing and reappearing about and inch and a half in front of the second kunai. Hiro turned around picking the kunai back up putting it back in his pouch which was on his rear. Walking back this time further than before closing his eyes and focusing a large sum of chakra into his legs disappearing and reappearing on the third kunai then jumping off landing on his feet picking up the third kunai putting it back safely “three down two to go “Hiro smirked walking back further than before.

Hiro looked at his remaining two targets he smiled as he saw his hard work paying off but be that as it may he felt in his head he wasn't working hard enough ..”again “hiro said pushing a mass amount of chakra through his legs before saying “Poof” smirking before vanishing appearing on top of the kunai digging it further into the ground stepping off before dirt broke..”Man i'm reaching my limit here “Hiro said panting heavily as he picked up the kunai he would most likely have to take several days off to recoup from the rigorous training he was under going.


Shunshin no Jutsu - Oshi (Body Flicker Technique - Push)
Rank: "C"
Skill: NinJutsu/TaiJutsu
Effect: A Jutsu that allows a user to rush forward in almost instantaneous speed. Used to draw the user close to the opponent.
Special: ---
Drawback: May use 3 times a day. May perform 1 more each time learned. Passing amount renders the user's legs immobile due to severe pain. Unable to perform again unless gained medical treatment. Must move through an opening. Unable to maneuver around obstructing objects. Can't attack while performing any Shunshin or Variation.
Description: User is able to move forward in a straight line along the ground in almost instantaneous untraceable speed while temporarily masking the user's movements within 10 meters. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by focusing the user's chi along the ankles and foot. User mostly moves just with their ankles and feet. Jutsu takes up no movements. User may only use this Jutsu half of the movements may allow in a single round while rounding down. Example: User has 5 movements, user is able to perform Jutsu 2 times per round.
Limit: Universal NinJutsu or Universal TaiJutsu.