Rotchi Kurinora (3/3)

[Sansho Kunshi]

Name: Rotchi Kurinora
Age: 13
Height: 5'11
Weight: 160 Lbs
Gender: Male
Alignment: Neutral Good
Birth Country: Wind
Village: Sand
Special:

Puppeteer Specialist
Craftsman Specialist
Ninjutsu specialist
Taijutsu specialist

Releases:
Wind
Lightning

Secondary Weapons:

6 Kunai(6 slots)
15 Shuriken(5 slots)
8 Exploding Tags(2 slots)
4 Smoke Gernades(2 slots)

Primary Weapon:

Puppet Name: Hisogarda (Hiso for Short)
Class/Size: C-ranked standing 7 ft. tall
Grade: B-Grede material
Slots: 20 slots
Weapons:
1 kunai launchers in hisogarda's Left palm (5 slots)
Shuriken launcher in its mouth(5 slots)
1 flame thrower in Hisogarda's Right palm (5 slots)
Description:Hisogarda is a C rank puppet made from B-ranked material, that Rotchi's father made for him when he entered the academy. Hisogarda is a human like puppet with waist length black hair held in a pony tail that stands 7 ft. tall, roughly 200 Lbs. Rotchi's father probably made the puppet so tall to resemble Rotchi. Rotchi stained the puppet a dark brown and carved the sand village symbol on its forehead. Hisogarda has long slender arm and legs that are reinforced at the joints in order to add support to the long limbs. Rotchi covered Hisogarda in a thin blue cloth, that has no defence aspect but purely decorative. A leather pouch hangs from Hisogardas' neck under the cloth filled with water. Rotchi usually has Hisogarda carry supplies for him.
Cost:
1100 for puppet
200 for 1 kunai launcher
200 for 1shuriken launcher
200 for 1flame thrower
1700 in total

acceptance
http://www.narutofor...mp;thread=1199643247

Personality:

Rotchi is a very happy person, trying to make friends with all he meets. He beleives that to be negative towards another is to be too ignorant to get to know them. Rotchi is a delight to be around around good guy. His sparkleing personality has won the attention of many girls in the academy but Rotchi has never been eager to be in a relationship, as he's been detached with women as he never knew his mother.
Though Rotchi is a very eager boy who can be easily excited he never loses his cool in a combat situation, he always listens to order even if he disagrees. His father always taught him to respect a supior.

Appearance:

Rotchi is a slender boy with a slight build. He's very tall for his age, just under six feet. He has shoulder length black hair with dark blue eyes. He's always thought his father got the inpiration for Hisogarda from himself. Rotchi sports a series of blue and black robes, with the Sand Village symbol sewn into the back with gold. He wears 2 pouches on his right leg with his secondary weapons in it and he carries a scroll on his left leg containing Hisogarda. Though Rotchi is a tall twig of a boy he is rather hansom, catching the eyes of many girls in the academy.

Bloodlimit:
NinJutsu Techniques:

Puppet Creation Light Weight and Medium Weight
Rank: C Rank
Skill: ---
Effect: With knowledge of this skill a user has the capability of either creating or repairing a puppet within the Light Weight or Medium Weight Division.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: By forging, and by time consuming a person has the capability of creating puppets. The puppeteer takes time time to find the materials needed in order to create the puppet that they wish to create.
Limit: Is the start and foundation of Puppet Creation

Ningyoutsukai Seigyo Keii Chuui Kajuu (Puppeteer Mastery Light and Medium Weight)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: ---
Effect: Enables the user the capability of using a puppet within the Light and Medium Weight Division with great Ease and without Hassle.
Special: ---
Drawback: ---
Description: With this type of skill a puppeteer has full understanding of how puppets of the Light and Medium Weight Division work. They are capable of using the puppet with full effect, they are capable of understanding every component of the puppet to where they are capable of using the puppet to any extent. This is the starting usage of the division that allows the puppeteer to enable of certain types of techniques that help a puppeteer survive such as Henge, Shunshin, and other types of techniques.
Limit: This is the basis and knowledge of puppetry. Without this the user is unable to use their puppets, must also know a knowledge of Twenty Slots of Puppetry.

Kugutsu no Jutsu, (Puppet Technique)
Rank: "C" ; "B" ; "A" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The Ability where the user controls a puppet with strings of chakra. The puppet is capable of attacking an opponent with any weapons hidden inside of it. This technique is effective from long distances since the chakra strings can extend; they are also invisible, so the puppet can be used from a hidden location.
Special: Must be a Puppeteer
Drawback: Must be learned multiple times in order for the distance to increase. The more objects or Puppets used, the distance decreases, this means that if you have two puppets with a hundred meters of distance each puppet can go at a maximum of fifty meters each.
Description: The user is capable of controlling a puppet depending on the distance of the puppet. If the puppet surpasses a certain distance then the chakra strings simply disconnect leaving the puppet down along the floor. The Chakra strings can not be seen by regular eyes but those who have the capability of seeing chakra can truly notice such a technique. When first learned the technique allows the user a maximum of ten meters of distance. After each time learned the user can increase the distance of Ten Meters. When the user reaches up to a hundred meters then it is harder for a user to gain more distance so the training would go up to a B Rank training as the distance increases Ten Meters every time learned. After three hundred Meters, then the training becomes more difficult once more as the training ranks up to A Rank, at this moment the distance is unlimited.
Limit: Must be known multiple times.

Surotto Etoku‚­(Slot Understanding)
Rank: "C" ; "B" ; "A" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: Slot understanding is the understanding of Slots, the more slots a puppeteer knows the more puppets they can control. This means that if a puppeteer wishes to control a Large Puppet they must know Forty Slots. This means that if a user knows Eighty Slots they can control one Huge Puppet, or One Large Puppet with Two Medium Puppets, or Four Medium Puppets.
Special: Must be a Puppeteer.
Drawback: Must be learned multiple times in order for the person to use more then one puppet. The more puppets you know the smaller distance you have when using The Puppet Technique. A limit though is stopped by how many puppets can be controlled. A Normal Puppet master is only capable of controlling up to Ten Puppets at a time, this means one puppet per finger. The only way a user is capable of controlling more then ten puppets at a time by chakra strings is if they use the Hitokugutsu (Human Puppet) on them self.
Description: A puppeteer automatically knows twenty slots, this enables them to control One Medium sized Puppet or two small sized puppets. The more you go into Slot understanding the more you can control. Each time learned the user learns five more Slots. When the user reaches up to a hundred slots, the it gets harder for a user to use multiple objects and the training raises up to B Rank. When the user reaches up to three hundred slots, then the training goes up another rank of A Rank as the training becomes endless after that.
Limit: Must know Ningyoutsukai Seigyo Keii
Chuui Kajuu (Puppeteer Mastery Light and Medium Weight) Along with this. Must be learned multiple times.

Isshi no Otoshina (String Entrapment)
Rank: C Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: This technique uses chakra strings to trip, bind, or otherwise interfere with the movement of an opponent. Instead of attaching the chakra strings to a puppet, the user can attach them to any other object, including their opponent, to restrict movement or buy time for an escape. Another simple description is that the user simply creates the chakra strings anywhere he wants in order to create traps for people to trip in. One can even simply wrap the chakra strings to his or her unsuspecting opponents and make them trip right away
Special: Must be a Puppeteer
Drawback: When using multiple strings for multiple objects the string distance is divided by how many objects you wish to gather. This means that if you wish to grasp ten objects, or people and you have only one hundred meters of distance, then you can only grab the people or objects if they are within ten meters from the person.
Description: ---
Limit: Must know Kugutsu no Jutsu, (Puppet Technique)

Kugutsu Henge (Puppet Transformation)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Changes the appearace of a puppet into whatever the user desires, making it useful for confusing an opponent.
Special: A small surge of chakra through puppet strings
Drawback: If striked with force, the puppet converts back to normal
Description: Just like the academy technique, Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Skill) except applied to the user’s puppet. The puppeteer invisions what he/she wants their puppet to transform into and then performs the hand seals. Once the puppet is transformed, it is unable to perform any attacks until it returns back into its usual appearance. The user can also transform their puppet from a distance, as long as it is in the user’s view.
Limit: The transformation cannot be larger than 10 feet. (ex: You can’t transform your puppet into a bridge to crush people under it.) Must be a puppeteer.

Raiton - Raikyuu (Lightning Ball)
Rank: "D" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: Creates a ball of lightning used to where the technique is capable of being hurled towards the person.
Special: "Hand Seals"
Drawback: The user is unable to move while using this technique.
Description: The user does an amount of handseals as they quickly concentrate on the chakra along the palm of their hands. The technique is used to where they create a small ball of lightning to where the user is capable of hurling it towards the opponent. This technique is weak however and is only capable of paralyzing an oponent for approximatly one round no matter how strong the opponent may be.
Limit: Lightning Release

GenJutsu Techniques:

basic academy jutsu

TaiJutsu Techniques:

basic academy jutsu

History:

Rotchi was raised by his father Youriki, a master craftmen and puppet maker. Youiki has raised Rotchi since his mother died from illness when he was 3. Rotchi loves his father, he looks up to him and wishes to make Youriki proud. His father has trained Rotchi to build/repair and operate puppets since he was a young boy. Rotchi and his father live on the outskirts of the hidden sand village near the village gate. Youiki turned the top floor the their home into a workshop some years ago so he could work from home Rotchi helps his father fufill puppet orders that he gets, he has been doing such since he was small. in fact watching his father make puppets is what sparked Rotchi's interests in puppets.

When Rotchi decided to enter the ninja Academy Youriki suprised him with a puppet. He made him a tall puppet to match the boys natural heigth, Youriki made the puppet with long black hair and dark blue human like eyes. When Rotchi was given the puppet he was extatic, practising and tenkering with the puppet everyday. He named the puppet Hisogarda, he stained Hisogarda dark brown and carved the Hidden Sand village's symbol in its forehead. Rotchi consider Hisogarda a true friend even though he never replies when Rotchi talks to him. Rotchi has recently graduated from the academy, his fathers proudest day, and is waiting to be placed into a genin squad.




any critique and critisisim is accepted, im expecting to have to change somthing.

[adero]

choose 2 releases

you get one mastery or 2 specialists, under the specialist thread (look under the thread where chars are created its stickied.)

as for your puppet you cant start with defense cloth, please follow the template in the index.

[Sansho Kunshi]

alright i updated my character
*hopes its good enough*

[Sansho Kunshi]

sorry for the double post but I added more to his personality

[//Talo//]

Bold the "C" on the multi ranked jutsu please.

[Sansho Kunshi]

which jusu?

[Matsu]

Kugutsu no Jutsu, 傀儡の術 (Puppet Technique)
Rank: "C" ; "B" ; "A" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: The Ability where the user controls a puppet with strings of chakra. The puppet is capable of attacking an opponent with any weapons hidden inside of it. This technique is effective from long distances since the chakra strings can extend; they are also invisible, so the puppet can be used from a hidden location.
Special: Must be a Puppeteer
Drawback: Must be learned multiple times in order for the distance to increase. The more objects or Puppets used, the distance decreases, this means that if you have two puppets with a hundred meters of distance each puppet can go at a maximum of fifty meters each.
Description: The user is capable of controlling a puppet depending on the distance of the puppet. If the puppet surpasses a certain distance then the chakra strings simply disconnect leaving the puppet down along the floor. The Chakra strings can not be seen by regular eyes but those who have the capability of seeing chakra can truly notice such a technique. When first learned the technique allows the user a maximum of ten meters of distance. After each time learned the user can increase the distance of Ten Meters. When the user reaches up to a hundred meters then it is harder for a user to gain more distance so the training would go up to a B Rank training as the distance increases Ten Meters every time learned. After three hundred Meters, then the training becomes more difficult once more as the training ranks up to A Rank, at this moment the distance is unlimited.
Limit: Must be known multiple times.

Surotto Etoku スロットえとく(Slot Understanding)
Rank: "C" ; "B" ; "A" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: Slot understanding is the understanding of Slots, the more slots a puppeteer knows the more puppets they can control. This means that if a puppeteer wishes to control a Large Puppet they must know Forty Slots. This means that if a user knows Eighty Slots they can control one Huge Puppet, or One Large Puppet with Two Medium Puppets, or Four Medium Puppets.
Special: Must be a Puppeteer.
Drawback: Must be learned multiple times in order for the person to use more then one puppet. The more puppets you know the smaller distance you have when using The Puppet Technique. A limit though is stopped by how many puppets can be controlled. A Normal Puppet master is only capable of controlling up to Ten Puppets at a time, this means one puppet per finger. The only way a user is capable of controlling more then ten puppets at a time by chakra strings is if they use the Hitokugutsu (Human Puppet) on them self.
Description: A puppeteer automatically knows twenty slots, this enables them to control One Medium sized Puppet or two small sized puppets. The more you go into Slot understanding the more you can control. Each time learned the user learns five more Slots. When the user reaches up to a hundred slots, the it gets harder for a user to use multiple objects and the training raises up to B Rank. When the user reaches up to three hundred slots, then the training goes up another rank of A Rank as the training becomes endless after that.
Limit: Must know Ningyoutsukai Seigyo Keii
Chuui Kajuu (Puppeteer Mastery Light and Medium Weight) Along with this. Must be learned multiple times.

Those two justu are the ones that need to have the C rank in bold or underline.

[Sansho Kunshi]

oh ok, no problem

Edit-done, sorry bout that

[Sansho Kunshi]

anyone check my character out yet?

[psyche]

Has you puppet been through customs?

[Sansho Kunshi]

hmmm, no ill do it now

[psyche]

Do that then, everything else looks fine. Once your puppet has been approved make sure to add the link of the approved puppet. And make sure to follow the template. ^-^

[Sansho Kunshi]

K, thread made in customs
Edit-updated puppet to proper template

[Yun.]

Okay, once your puppet is approved, I'll give my 1|3.

[adero]

once your puppet is approved put a link in here from that accepted custom.

[Sansho Kunshi]

yea im waiting on a third vote for my puppet.

[yara]

As Adero said before your only allowed to have 1 mastery or two specialist, you cannot have both, change it.

[Sansho Kunshi]

oh my bad, didnt even see that. changed it

[Sansho Kunshi]

sorry for the double post but my puppets been approved
www.narutoforumrp.proboards75.com/index.cgi?board=acceptedpuppetryjutsus&action=display&thread=1199643247

[adero]

provide it under primary weapons... and remove the old shoddy version from your bio.