Tieren's Training

[Tieren]

“Alright time for some training at last. Hopefully no random person will come after me. Now what should I learn?” Tieren said as he walked through the woods outside the Cloud Village. The air was brisk as a storm had just ended and it was nearing nightfall. He continued walking around as he looked through a scroll containing a lot of lightning ‘C’ ranked jutsus. “Let’s see, Oh this sounds good, and it definitely fits Drijedo.”

Raiton: Raikou no Ken
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Allows the user the ability to send small jolts of electricity into the opponent with every hand-strike and arm block for three turns. Can be used in conjunction with most Taijutsu that deal with hand-strikes.
Special: Snake
Drawback: May backfire if user attacks a water clone or other water type barrier etc.
Description: User takes in a very deep breath and holds the snake handsign breifly while their chakra is diverted to their arms. With every punch or other hand strike, the user's chakra is sent out into the opponent's body in a small burst that is electrified. It doesn't cause paralysis immediately, but the strikes do accumulate and it adds to the power of each strike. Basically, you hit harder and you shock as well. A smaller shock is sent out whenever the user blocks an attack with their arms. It is significantly less severe, but it does cause discomfort to the opponent.
Limit: Lightning Release

(0/30)

“Hmmm, maybe I should head home and try it on Father. This seems kinda tough to do by myself.” He said as he started the long road home. He was also trying out his new jumping technique as he went. He needed to master it so he might as well work on it. By thrusting his staff into the tree, he gave himself a place to stand. He then flipped around his staff, landing on the top, then jumped back off, pulling his staff with him. After doing this about 20 to 30 times, he looked back and saw the holes his staff had made in the trees. ‘Oops, didn’t think of that. Oh well, it works better ther just plain jumping, and its more fun.’ He thought as he then continued to follow that technique. If anyone care about the trees, they will just use a jutsu to fix the hole. It wasn’t his problem anymore.

After he ran out of trees, he had to rely on his speed to get him the rest of the way home. He eventually made it home. “I’m home. Father, are you here? I need your help with something.” He said as he took off his shoes and ran into the kitchen to see his mother cooking dinner. “Hey Tieren, how was your day today? I hope you haven’t been started any trouble today.” She said, worrying like any mother does. “Mother, I am a ninja now, stop treating me like a kid. Oh and by the way, I met my only teammate. His name is Kyuzu Mangekyo. He has the same dream that I have, to be the Raikage, so he is my friend and rival. Isn’t that cool? Oh and do you know where Father is?” He asked, anxious to begin training. “He had to go on a mission, he might not be back for a while.” She said, “Why? What do you need him for?” “I need to ask him if he can help me with training. Oh well. Hey, I know! I’ll go to the Drijedo dojo and ask Master Oplieate if he can help me. I’ll be home later, just save some dinner for me. Bye!” He said as he got his shoes back on and ran out the door. “Wait! Oh he’s gone already.” His mother said.

Tieren continued all the way until he got to the southern dojo of Drijedo. He presented his yellow Drijedo belt to the guards and was let in. He walked up to Master Oplieate and said as he bowed, “Master, I come asking a favor. As I am a ninja now, I must do training to get more jutsus, and there is one in particular I would like to learn. Would you be willing to assist me in my training?” The dojo master said, “Young one, you have gone through a great deal to be allowed to wear that headband of the Cloud Village. I am very proud of you. I will assist you if you join me in meditation. Your training will go much more smoothly if your senses are at their highest capability.” “I will join you master.” Tieren said as he started meditating with his master.

When they finished, 15 minutes later, Tieren read up on how to perform this jutsu. “Alright, I am ready to do this. Are you ready master?” He said getting in his Drijedo stance and awaited to train. “I am ready. Come at me!” Master Oplieate said. Tieren held the snake handsign as he said, “Raiton: Raikou no Ken!” He felt the chakra gather in his arms and then went after his master with his index and middle fingers, the common strike for Drijedo. He attacked the pressure point in his upper arm to paralyze that section of his arm. He could feel the chakra go through his fingers into his master’s body, but also felt a slight tingling in his fingers as he did. He pulled back noticing he missed the pressure point and attacked again, this time focusing more on concentrating his chakra. He went for the same pressure point as before and this time, he connected with the pressure point and appeared to do the jutsu correctly as he felt electricity surge through his finger tips and into his master’s arm. Feeling somewhat weakened from this, he decided to release the jutsu and take a rest. His master went to grab the elixir that would heal his pressure point, even though the sting from the electricity was still there. “You missed the pressure point the first time. Why is that?” His master asked. “Because I did not activate the San-Da-Dee beforehand. I am weak, allow me to rest and meditate more.” He requested walking back towards the resting room of the dojo.

While in the resting room, Tieren thought to himself ’Why didn’t the jutsu work the first time? What did I do wrong?’ He decided to rest and regain his strength there instead of going home right away.

[dragonfire]

+2

Focus more on the training.

[Tieren]

30 minutes later, Tieren finished resting and decided to continue his training. “Master Oplieate, I am ready to continue my training. Let us go again.” He said to his master. “Lets. Come at me!”

Raiton: Raikou no Ken
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Allows the user the ability to send small jolts of electricity into the opponent with every hand-strike and arm block for three turns. Can be used in conjunction with most Taijutsu that deal with hand-strikes.
Special: Snake
Drawback: May backfire if user attacks a water clone or other water type barrier etc.
Description: User takes in a very deep breath and holds the snake handsign breifly while their chakra is diverted to their arms. With every punch or other hand strike, the user's chakra is sent out into the opponent's body in a small burst that is electrified. It doesn't cause paralysis immediately, but the strikes do accumulate and it adds to the power of each strike. Basically, you hit harder and you shock as well. A smaller shock is sent out whenever the user blocks an attack with their arms. It is significantly less severe, but it does cause discomfort to the opponent.
Limit: Lightning Release

(2/30)

This time before activating the snake handsign right away, he wanted to use his San-da-dee first. He activated the ram handsign to trigger the San-da-dee, then he shouted “SAN-DA-DEE!” His eyes turned a bright yellow, his pupil shrunk, and he obtained a single circle in his eye as he said the words. ’I see the pressure points in his body, Now lets go for the same one as the first time.’ He thought as he got in his Drijedo stance.

He then used the snake handsign and shouted again “Raiton: Raikou no Ken!” He could feel the chakra gather in his arms, then head toward his protruded fingers. He then lunged at his master, focusing his chakra solely on his fingers. He connected with the pressure point in his master’s upper arm, and released the chakra and electricity in to the arm. He saw his master’s upper arm go limp and jumped back, still focusing the chakra. ’Okay, I got that one now for the other arm. He thought keeping his focus.

He lunged forward again and tried to attack his other arm. As he connected with his master’s other arm, and the pressure point that was there as well, he felt a sharp pain sear through his arm, as if it had just been cut the whole way through. He immediately jumped back and stopped the focus of chakra to that arm. ’What was that? I think the chakra backfired and hurt me. It also seems to have paralyzed my whole arm for a short while. I have to be more careful’ He thought as he got back up and got in the best stance he could considering the circumstances.

He then realized that he can do this attack one more time. Since he messed up on hitting his master’s other arm, He decided to go after that again. He had one free arm, and he had been concentrating his chakra into that arm only. He lunged toward his master again and pressed hard into his master’s arm. He could feel the chakra go into his body and hurt him. He also saw this arm go limp, showing him that he had done it correctly. He then released his focus and sat down, injured, and winded. His master asked what happened and Tieren told him. He then decided to go back into the resting room to let his arm heal itself.

[spamato]

+5

[Tieren]

After he realized that he could move his arm again, he decided to go back out and continue training. “Master I am ready again” He said to Master Oplieate as he got in his stance. “Alright, Come At Me!” Master Oplieate said.

Raiton: Raikou no Ken
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Allows the user the ability to send small jolts of electricity into the opponent with every hand-strike and arm block for three turns. Can be used in conjunction with most Taijutsu that deal with hand-strikes.
Special: Snake
Drawback: May backfire if user attacks a water clone or other water type barrier etc.
Description: User takes in a very deep breath and holds the snake handsign breifly while their chakra is diverted to their arms. With every punch or other hand strike, the user's chakra is sent out into the opponent's body in a small burst that is electrified. It doesn't cause paralysis immediately, but the strikes do accumulate and it adds to the power of each strike. Basically, you hit harder and you shock as well. A smaller shock is sent out whenever the user blocks an attack with their arms. It is significantly less severe, but it does cause discomfort to the opponent.
Limit: Lightning Release

(7/30)

As with the last time, Tieren used the ram handsign to invoke the san-da-dee. “San-da-dee!” He said as his eyes turned yellow, gained his single circle, and his pupils shrunk. He then used the snake handsign to invoke the jutsu he is training to learn and said, “Raiton: Raikou no Ken!” He focused his chakra into his arms and then sent it down to his fingertips. He then focused on hitting the pressure points on his master. ’Alright, I got the upper arms, now lets go for the lower arms.’ He thought as he lunged toward his master. He went for the right arm first. Having to concentrate his chakra for two jutsus was very taxing, but his chakra control had to be good in order to have the san-da-dee in the first place. He aimed straight for the pressure point this time and connected as he saw his master’s lower arm go limp. He jumped back and prepared to strike once more.

He looked directly at the pressure point in his master’s lower left arm and prepared to strike there. He lunged forward once more. AS he realized that it was coming up, he raised his own arm and struck his masters arm directly on the pressure point. He could feel the electricity go through his masters body. He then pulled away and jumped back, proud that in a short time he got rid of both his masters’ arms. He then had to figure out what to attack next. “ I am pleased with you Tieren, you have improved much since when you first began. Now if I can guess correctly, You have one shot left. Where will you strike next?” Master Oplieate said, pleased with Tieren’s training.

It was a good question, but he figured next would be the legs. ’Hmmm. I wonder. Would it work if I attacked both his legs at the same time? Its worth a try.’ He thought with a smile. He decided to go for it and lunged toward his master again. This time, instead of only swinging one arm around to attack, he swung both up and struck the pressure point in both of his master’s legs. As he connected with the pressure points in both of his master’s legs, he felt that pain go through his arms again and both of them were now paralyzed. He jumped back as his master collapsed since his legs were now paralyzed. As his master asked someone to get the elixir to heal his pressure points, Tieren collapsed and fainted, the pain being too much for him.

While he was out, he had a flashback to when his brothers started leaving home to go to the other 4 villages, leaving him and his brother who stayed in the cloud village behind.

“Tieren, Let go! I have to get going. The hokage in the leaf village is waiting for me.” Said his brother Buran who ended up moving to the leaf village. “Don’t go! Without you guys, I have nobody to talk to.” Tieren said, now 10 years old. “We have to go, the mizukage is waiting for me.” Said Afleat who left to the mist village to help out the ninja there. “ But if you leave, who will help me with my training. Father is always gone on a mission, and Mother didn’t become a ninja, so she cant help me.” He said still crying and holding onto Buran. “Look, we don’t have time for this. I have to get to the kazekage in the sand village.” Said Wandir who moved to the sand village. “NO!!!! Don’t leave me!” He said, now bawling his eyes out. “Look, let’s go. We don’t have time for this. I have to get to the Tsuchikage.” His brother Chiro said who moved to the Stone village. “NOOOOOO!!!!!!!” Tieren screamed as his brothers except for Buran left. “Let Go!” Buran yelled as he kicked Tieren off and left. Without saying a word, Hirocho, The brother who stayed in the cloud village left to go get a mission from the Raikage. Tieren continued crying as he cried out for his brothers to come back.

He then could hear himself crying in real life and saying come back as his master started shaking him violently saying “Tieren! Wake up!” Tieren snapped out of it and could still feel tears running from his eyes. “I remembered the day my brothers left. It was such a sad day. Do you mind if I go be by myself for a little while and rest?” He asked. “Go ahead.” Said his master. He walked into the resting room, still crying and remembering that horrible day.

[nokemono]

+6

[Tieren]

’I cant believe that memory had to come back. I hated them for it. And I also haven’t been able to see them since then. They haven’t replied or anything. Why wont they talk to me anymore? When I have learned more jutsu and gained permission to go to other villages, I will visit them and find out what happened the past five years. Oh well. Shape up Tieren! Its time to finish training. I can move my arms now so I have to learn this thing.’ Tieren thought as he wiped the tears from his eyes and got up to finish training. “Master, I am sorry for my actions earlier. Can we finish my training?” He asked. “Yes, Lets go!” Master Oplieate said.

Raiton: Raikou no Ken
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Allows the user the ability to send small jolts of electricity into the opponent with every hand-strike and arm block for three turns. Can be used in conjunction with most Taijutsu that deal with hand-strikes.
Special: Snake
Drawback: May backfire if user attacks a water clone or other water type barrier etc.
Description: User takes in a very deep breath and holds the snake handsign breifly while their chakra is diverted to their arms. With every punch or other hand strike, the user's chakra is sent out into the opponent's body in a small burst that is electrified. It doesn't cause paralysis immediately, but the strikes do accumulate and it adds to the power of each strike. Basically, you hit harder and you shock as well. A smaller shock is sent out whenever the user blocks an attack with their arms. It is significantly less severe, but it does cause discomfort to the opponent.
Limit: Lightning Release

(13/30)

After activating the Snake handseal, like usual, He felt the chakra go to his hands and said “Raiton: Raikou no Ken!” . He then performed the Ram handseal and said “San-Da-Dee!” His eyes turned yellow, and he could see the pressure points in his master. Since he had already done his masters arms thoroughly, He decided to go for the legs again. He wanted to try the two handed strike again so he rushed forward and brought both arms directly into the pressure points in his master’s upper leg. He could feel the chakra and electricity go into his master. He then realized that it had worked as he didn’t feel any pain in his arms this time.

He leaped back to contemplate his next move. He decided that he would do another two handed strike on his masters upper arm. He wanted to perfect this technique. So he rushed forward and brought both hands down into his Master’s upper arm. He felt a little pain but could see that his master’s arms had gone limp. He knew that he had hit them, but then jumped back as his master fell over, the paralysis in his legs finally kicking in. He slowly walked forward, and realized that his master couldn’t move to attack him if this was a real fight.

He immediately attacked his master’s lower arm’s. He used his new two handed strike and got rid of both with one hit. He saw the arms go limp, and realized that this jutsu is starting to get easier. He decided to walk toward the resting room to allow himself to use the jutsu again. About halfway from the resting room, He felt a sharp pain go through his arms. This time worse than the last. He fell down and lost consciousness again. A new memory came to mind this time. This one was of when his father almost died due to the fact that he had a very tough mission. As he walked into the house, Tieren, 8 years old now, ran to the door saying “Fathers home! Fathers Home!” He then made it to the door and dropped the gift he was going to give him. As he stared at his father with a scared look, his mother walked in the room and dropped the dish after seeing her husband. He was very badly bloodied, and had a Kunai or Two stuck in him. Tieren’s mother immediately called for a messenger bird to fly to the hospital and let them know that an emergency patient was about to come in. Then 2 of his brothers grabbed him and ran off to the hospital, two others grabbed his mother and ran off, and the last brother grabbed Tieren and ran to the hospital with him. When they got there, no one was able to see how his treatment was going. Soon after, a doctor came out and told the family that he wasn’t going to make it and that they could go and say goodbye. They decided to go in one at a time. Tieren was the last. After all of his family went in, he went in to say goodbye. As he got in there, he started to say goodbye, and then his fathers hand dropped. Tieren freaked out and started screaming for a doctor. The doctor made him leave and they realized that he was dead. Tieren ran in there screaming “NO! HE CANT DIE! I DIDN’T GET THE CHANCE TO SAY GOODBYE!” He then grabbed hold of his fathers hand and started crying. He then heard “Why are you crying my son? I would never leave like that.” His father had woken up. Tieren then said “But I thought you had died?” “And miss you become a ninja? Never.” The memory then ended and he found himself crying in real life. This time, Instead of asking for permission to go to the resting room, he just ran in there crying, but grateful his father was still alive.

[/ Toki /]

+ 6

[The Care Bear!!]

+7

20/30

[Tieren]

’ I guess I should be grateful that memory came back. I almost forgot that day. It was as if my being there brought him back to life. I should feel special for that. Oh well back to training.’ Tieren thought as he got back up and wiped the tears from his eyes, put a smile on his face, and walked back out and said “Shall we continue?”

Raiton: Raikou no Ken
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Allows the user the ability to send small jolts of electricity into the opponent with every hand-strike and arm block for three turns. Can be used in conjunction with most Taijutsu that deal with hand-strikes.
Special: Snake
Drawback: May backfire if user attacks a water clone or other water type barrier etc.
Description: User takes in a very deep breath and holds the snake handsign breifly while their chakra is diverted to their arms. With every punch or other hand strike, the user's chakra is sent out into the opponent's body in a small burst that is electrified. It doesn't cause paralysis immediately, but the strikes do accumulate and it adds to the power of each strike. Basically, you hit harder and you shock as well. A smaller shock is sent out whenever the user blocks an attack with their arms. It is significantly less severe, but it does cause discomfort to the opponent.
Limit: Lightning Release

(19/30)

Tieren activated the Ram handsign and said “San-Da-Dee!” His eyes turned yellow and he saw Master Oplieate’s pressure points. Then he activated the snake handsign and said “Raiton: Raikou no Ken!” He felt the chakra go to his fingers as usual and then needed to figure out where he would hit his master at next.

He looked throughout his masters body and decided to go for his lower leg. He rushed forward and attacked the pressure points in both of his masters lower legs. He saw the legs go limp and then his master fell over. He noticed that his master was simply there for the training and not even attempting to fight back. He kinda wished he would, but then realized that he would rather finish his training and fight him after he was done. He walked back and looked at his masters body, lying on the ground.

He needed to tell what he would attack next. ’Lets see, I have attacked his upper arms, lower arms, upper legs, and lower legs. The only things left that I can see are his wrists and his ankles. Lets take care of those, then I can just go for whatever I feel like.’ He decided to go for his wrists first so he swung down at his masters body and attacked his wrists. This made his masters hands go limp and now useless. He then immediately swung his hands down and struck his ankles which made his feet go limp and useless. He wondered if pain would come this time. But instead of pain this time, a blast of electrified chakra came out of his hands and struck his master. His master winced but had felt worse. However, he was unable to move his whole body, and someone gave him the special elixir of drijedo. Then Tieren was blasted back and passed out.

A new memory came to his mind and he couldn’t tell what it was at first, but then realized that it was when his mother had become ill and Tieren couldn’t see her for a month. It was after his brothers left, and his father had prevented him from going to the hospital so that way he wouldn’t catch what she had. Everyday he begged his father if he could see her, but it was always the same thing. He tried everything to get his father to let him go, but he wouldn’t allow it. What was even worse is that the day she was put into the hospital, Tieren and his mother had gotten into an argument and his last words to her before she was put in the hospital were “I HATE YOU!!!!!!!!” He felt horrible that he couldn’t apologize to her, but when she finally got home, he ran into her and wouldn’t let go as he said that he was sorry over and over again. His mother didn’t even know why he was apologizing until he explained it to her. After he did she forgave him and they went off to go and make something special to give to his brothers when they came back for a visit. It is still sitting in Tieren’s room as they never came back since they left. He has to stare at it everyday and feel a hatred to them for not coming back. He woke up from his state of unconsciousness and stormed into the resting room and continued his hatred for them.

[nokemono]

Sorry love, only saw 3.

+3

[Tieren]

'They will pay for not returning. They cant just leave and never come back. I cant let them do that. When I get home, I am sending a messenger bird right away to them, telling them that Mother needs to see them. She might break down any day now because they haven’t returned. Whatever, I can’t deal with them now, I have training to get back to.’ Tieren thought as he got back up, attempted a smile and walked back out. “Are you sure you wish to finish training?” Said Master Oplieate. “Yes, I am. I am truly sorry for what has happened. More and more memories come to my head and make me sad or mad. I hope to not have that happen again.” I said getting ready, “Can we continue?” “Alright, let’s go.” Said the Master.

Raiton: Raikou no Ken
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Allows the user the ability to send small jolts of electricity into the opponent with every hand-strike and arm block for three turns. Can be used in conjunction with most Taijutsu that deal with hand-strikes.
Special: Snake
Drawback: May backfire if user attacks a water clone or other water type barrier etc.
Description: User takes in a very deep breath and holds the snake handsign breifly while their chakra is diverted to their arms. With every punch or other hand strike, the user's chakra is sent out into the opponent's body in a small burst that is electrified. It doesn't cause paralysis immediately, but the strikes do accumulate and it adds to the power of each strike. Basically, you hit harder and you shock as well. A smaller shock is sent out whenever the user blocks an attack with their arms. It is significantly less severe, but it does cause discomfort to the opponent.
Limit: Lightning Release

(22/30)

Tieren used the ram handsign and said “San-Da-Dee!” His eyes turned yellow as he gained the ability to see his master’s pressure points. He then used the snake handsign and said “Raiton: Raikou no Ken!” His arms filled with electrified chakra which he then deferred that chakra to his fingertips. He then gazed over his master’s body and wanted to see what he would hit next.

He decided to go for the wrists and ankles again as something happened during those two that made him lose consciousness the last time. He ran forward and swung both arms up and hit his master dead on in his pressure points that were located on his wrists. He sent his electrified chakra into his master’s wrists and saw him wince from the pain. ’Got him that time!’ He thought as he leaped back and saw that his master’s hands were now useless.

He then felt like trying to do something different. He pulled his staff from his back and, still keeping the jutsu active, used his staff like a pole vault by leaping in the air over his master’s head and getting behind him. He then dropped his staff as he landed. Now back-to-back with his master, he swung around quickly and struck his master in his ankles. His master fell down and felt a little bit of pain from being injected with the electrified chakra. He leapt back and pondered his last move.

Now with only one attack left, he had to figure out where to hit. He had remembered that there was one more place that he hadn’t hit yet, his torso. There was only one pressure point that he could see on his master in his torso, which was actually on his back. There was one pressure point that up until now he hadn’t been able to do any damage to, but he thought that if he used this jutsu in combination with it, it might work. He picked up his staff and flung himself high into the air and above his master. He let go before falling all the way and spun in the air to kick his staff away. He then got ready to hit the pressure point in his master’s back. He landed his index and middle fingers right on this spot and launched an immense amount of electrified chakra into his master. His master started to shake violently with the electricity going inside him. ’He developed something new, and finally learned a way to hit that pressure point. I have to get him off of me and when he is done resting, I think I can teach him two more jutsus.’ Master Oplieate thought as he swung around flinging the now unconscious Tieren into the resting room.

Tieren knew a new memory was to arise, but as to what, he did not know. It turned out to finally be a good memory, the day he showed off his new cloud village to his Mother and Father. It was one of the few times that his Father turned down a mission so he could stay home. He walked slowly into his house and acted as if he hadn’t passed his exam. “Honey, what’s wrong? Did you pass?” Said his mother. ’Oh no, that face usually means something bad had happened. I don’t think he did.’ Thought his father. “Well I have a little bit of information to tell you. I wont be able to be home that often because…” He said pulling his headband out from behind his back, “I am finally a genin of the Cloud Village!” A big smile came across his face as he told his parents this news. His father, after exchanging congratulations, took Tieren outside and taught him the Raikou Kakuhan. It is now one of the jutsus that Tieren uses the most. As he regained consciousness, he smiled and cried tears of joy for once. He was glad his father finally turned down a mission for his sake.

He realized that instead of training he would read up on the scroll on this jutsu. He continued reading and started getting a better technique in order to use it. He wanted to prove to his master that he is getting better. He also wrote in on the side his added techniques the Two-Handed Strike, the Pole-Vault Technique, and the Chakra Increasing Technique. He wanted to add new techniques to every jutsu he learned. He decided that if he didn’t rest, however, he would be incapable of showing his master what he had done. So, he decided to sleep meditate and prepare himself for his next training session.

[kajou]

28_30

[Tieren]

Tieren finished his meditation and decided it was time to finish his training. He walked out of the room and walked up to his master. “Do you want to do more training on the Raiton: Raikou no Ken?” Master Oplieate asked. “Yes, once more then I think I will have it down completely.” He said getting ready for his last training session with this jutsu.

Raiton: Raikou no Ken
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Allows the user the ability to send small jolts of electricity into the opponent with every hand-strike and arm block for three turns. Can be used in conjunction with most Taijutsu that deal with hand-strikes.
Special: Snake
Drawback: May backfire if user attacks a water clone or other water type barrier etc.
Description: User takes in a very deep breath and holds the snake handsign breifly while their chakra is diverted to their arms. With every punch or other hand strike, the user's chakra is sent out into the opponent's body in a small burst that is electrified. It doesn't cause paralysis immediately, but the strikes do accumulate and it adds to the power of each strike. Basically, you hit harder and you shock as well. A smaller shock is sent out whenever the user blocks an attack with their arms. It is significantly less severe, but it does cause discomfort to the opponent.
Limit: Lightning Release

(28/30)

For the last time for this jutsu, Tieren activated the ram handsign and said “San-da-dee!” His eyes turned yellow and he could see the pressure points in his master’s upper arms, lower arms, wrists, upper legs, lower legs, ankles, and back, which he could finally hit it and actually do damage to it. He then activated the snake handsign and said “Raiton: Raikou no Ken!” He felt the electrified chakra go to his fingertips and he pondered where to hit.

’Alright I have created 3 new techniques to use with this jutsu. I think I will do exactly like last time and attack his wrists normally, then jump over him using my staff and attack his ankles, then jump above him again but drop and attack his back. Sounds like a plan to me. It will give me more practice on the techniques I plan on using most of the time.’ Tieren thought as he rushed forward and used his Two-Handed Strike to attack the pressure points in his master’s wrists. He felt the chakra go into his master and his master’s hands became useless. He then jumped back and got ready for his next move.

’Now for the ankles with the Pole-Vault Technique.’ He thought as he pulled his staff from his back and jumped over his master’s head and stood back-to-back again with his master. He tuned his body 180 degrees and swung his hands down to attack the pressure points in his master’s ankles. He injected the electrified chakra into his master and saw him fall over. He then leaped back, grabbing his staff as he went.

’And now for the finale! He thought as he jumped high into the air above his master. He let go as he was directly above him and spun to kick his staff away. ’And no losing consciousness this time!’ He thought as he fell down on his master and struck him straight on the pressure point in his back. He then forced a lot of chakra out of his hands and into his master’s back. His master shook violently and Tieren saw that he had done it again. He then said “Hey You! Can you get him the elixir? I have to rest. That was the last training session I was to have with that jutsu.” He then walked into the resting room, proud that he finally didn’t lose consciousness. He then decided to sleep meditate and as he slept he dreamt of all the memories he had during this training.

[kajou]

Add it to the thing called a bio!!!!

[Tieren]

After coming out of the resting room, Tieren walked up to Master Oplieate and said “I think I will go to find out what I want to train for next, thank you for all your help.” Master Oplieate then said “Wait Tieren! I have something to give you.” He walked back into a small room and grabbed a scroll which on it had the symbol for the San-Da-Dee. He then said “Read this scroll and then I will allow you to practice this jutsu on me. It is called the Attsuuten hanatsu and it will allow you to heal a pressure point that was hit already. Head into the resting room and read over that.” Tieren took the scroll and said “Thank you master, I will do that.” He then walked into the room and read the scroll.

An hour later, after reading the scroll over and over again, he walked back out and said to his master “I am ready to start, can we do this?” “Of course, Come at me!” His master said.

Name: Attsuuten hanatsu (Pressure point release)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Revives an attacked pressure point
Special: Ram, Horse, Snake, Tiger
Drawback: Uses a lot of chakra, can only use twice between 15 minute meditations
Description: One performs the handsigns and then hits the pressure point that was attacked. Then a slightly less damaging form of chakra is inserted into the body of the one trying to be healed. The less damaging chakra negates he paralysis that was inflicted on the certain part of the body that was attacked, being completely healed within 3 to 7 minutes. You can use this jutsu on yourself or on friends. Some pressure points cannot be healed such as the 5 secret pressure points and organ pressure points.
Limit: San-da-dee, must learn from drasani clan

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Tieren used the ram handsign and said “San-Da-Dee!” He was able to see his master’s pressure points. ’Hmm, which to attack first? It said I can use this twice between 15 minute meditations. So I have to attack a pressure point first, perhaps the upper arms would work for my first hit?’ He ran forward and swung his right arm up and then attacked the pressure point in his master’s right upper arm, which he then spun around and attacked his master’s left arm in the same spot. He then jumped back and thought again.

He then thought to himself as he figured out what handsigns he needed. ’Hmmm, which ones do I need again? Oh yeah, Ram, Horse, Snake, then Tiger’ He then performed the handsigns as he thought of them and said “Attsuuten hanatsu!” His index and middle fingers glowed a bright yellow and he could feel his fingers surge with chakra. ’Hmmm, I think I did this right. Now lets try this, I think I just have to hit the pressure points again.’

He ran forward and struck his master’s left upper arm. He tried to send the chakra into his masters arm and push his fingers in as hard as he could so that way he could get to the root of the pressure points. He could feel a slight tingle in his hand which, according to the scroll, was supposed to happen. He then rushed back and held the jutsu in order to make sure he did it right. In about three minutes, his master was able to move his arm completely.

Since the first strike was completely correct, he decided to attack the other arm with the pressure point release. He ran forward and struck his masters right arm. He pressed hard and forced the chakra out into his arm. That tingle came again and he knew it worked. He jumped back and had to figure out what to do next. He immediately started meditating, not waiting to see if his master’s arm had healed or not.

During his short meditation, a new memory came back. It was a good memory as it was when he had met his new teammate after he had become a ninja. His name is Kyuzu Mangekyo and the ended up becoming rivals shortly after they found out they were on the same team. They became rivals because they both wanted the spot of Raikage at some point in their life. It was kind of a fun day as Kyuzu had pulled him around for a little bit before they found out they were on the same team. They even sorta started training that day too, but not much had happened there.

His mental clock then told him 15 minutes had ended. He got up and asked if training could continue.

He used the ram handsign and said “San-Da-Dee!” which allowed him to see the pressure points on his master. He then rushed forward and decided to attack his masters lower arms this time. He swung his hand around and struck his master in both of his arms. He then had to jump back so that way his actual training could continue as he had done this part many times.

He then used the Ram, Horse, Snake, then Tiger Handsigns and said “Attsuuten hanatsu!” He then looked at his master’s lower arms and saw the pressure points there. He decided to rush forward and try to continue his training. He ran forward and struck his master hard in the lower part of his left arm. He forced the chakra out of his fingers and felt the tingle in his arm as it should be. After jumping back to regain his composure, he thought about his next move.

He knew that he had to hit he other arm so that would be next. Afterward, he would go ahead and rest for a while to regain his chakra. He ran forward, aiming straight for lower part of his master’s right arm. He forced his fingers into the pressure point and forced his chakra out as he felt a tingle in his hand. He released the jutsu and stepped back a little bit, bowed and asked “May I go rest?” His master replied “You may, you seem to be able to pick this jutsu up quickly.” Tieren bowed again but didn’t say anything as he walked back toward the resting room to heal himself up again.

[nokemono]

+7

[Tieren]

Tieren came out of the room after resting and regaining his chakra. He only needed one more time to train with this, so he wanted to make it count. “Master, let us continue.” HE said as him and Master Oplieate got ready

Name: Attsuuten hanatsu (Pressure point release)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Revives an attacked pressure point
Special: Ram, Horse, Snake, Tiger
Drawback: Uses a lot of chakra, can only use twice between 15 minute meditations
Description: One performs the handsigns and then hits the pressure point that was attacked. Then a slightly less damaging form of chakra is inserted into the body of the one trying to be healed. The less damaging chakra negates he paralysis that was inflicted on the certain part of the body that was attacked, being completely healed within 3 to 7 minutes. You can use this jutsu on yourself or on friends. Some pressure points cannot be healed such as the 5 secret pressure points and organ pressure points.
Limit: San-da-dee, must learn from drasani clan

(7/10)

Tieren used the ram handsign and said “San-Da-Dee!” Then he looked at the pressure points on his master’s body. He decided that he wanted to see if a two-handed strike would work with this jutsu like it did with the Raiton: Raikou no Ken. So he decided that he would try it, he would attack the legs with that and then he would use the Raiton: Raikou no Ken to attack his back and attempt to heal that one as well. He rushed forward and struck both of his masters legs. His master fell over as his legs were now useless. In order to attack his masters back, he needed to use the jutsu he just learned, so he used the snake handsign and said “Raiton: Raikou no Ken!” He felt the chakra go to his fingers as he flung himself high into the air and landed right on his back while striking the pressure point. He let loose some chakra, and his master felt the pain. He then leaped back to think of his next move.

He released the Raiton: Raikou no Ken, and then used the 4 handsigns required for the pressure point release. ’Ram, Horse, Snake, then Tiger’ He thought as he then said “Attsuuten hanatsu!” He felt his chakra head to his fingers, and then they glowed a bright yellow. He then had to focus his chakra even more then he had before as he needed to the last two times. He walked up to his master, lying on the ground, and made sure his chakra was well focused. He then took both hands and stabbed his master in the legs with the jutsu. He felt a tingle in both hands, as was expected.

He then wanted to get the last one over with. He picked up his fallen staff then jumped up high into the air like he did when he first struck the pressure point. ’Hope this works!’ He thought as he landed on his master’s back and pressed very hard into his back with both hands. He felt a lot of chakra go into his master, but he didn’t feel the tingle. He felt himself losing consciousness so he quickly said “Please, don’t take the potion to heal your back. Let me heal it when I wake up.” At the last second he saw his master nod, and then, he was out.

As far as he remembered, this state of unconsciousness was uneventful to say the least. He got up shortly after, but felt a little rejuvenated. He looked at his master, still unable to move, as his back had been struck. ’He listened to my request? I didn’t expect that.’ He thought as he got up and grabbed his staff. He had to so it this time for sure. He used the 4 handsigns; Ram, Horse, Snake, then Tiger; and said “Attsuuten hanatsu!” He saw the bright yellow chakra on his hands, and focused it as much as he could. He flung himself high into the air and landed on his masters back while thrusting his hands into his masters back. He forced a lot of chakra out and this time felt that tingle that he should have felt last time. He waited about 4 minutes and his master was able to get up. His master then said “Congratulations, I believe you mastered that technique. When you awake from resting, I have one more technique to teach you. But it is harder then this one was.” ’ And I might even upgrade you in your drijedo skills.’ His master thought. Tieren bowed and walked off to the resting room, proud of what he has done.

[Yun.]

+3

Learned

[Tieren]

Tieren got up and walked out of the resting room. He walked up to his master and asked “Master Oplieate? You said you had a new jutsu for me to learn. Can you tell me what it is?” Master Oplieate looked at Tieren and said “Ah yes, well I hope you are well rested. Here is the scroll for the next jutsu. This is one that you can learn multiple types in all the elements, but I will be training you in the lightning element. This is called Attsuuten Ikkounoken. It will create a sword of about 1 and a half foot in length and about 1 centimeter in width. Now go read this scroll to learn more about it.” He then handed the scroll to Tieren and pointed to the resting room to allow Tieren to go there. Tieren took the scrool, bowed, and walked into the resting room.

Name:*insert skill here*: Attsuuten Ikkounoken (*Insert skill here*: Pressure point sword)
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Creates a sword of any element that allows one to stab the pressure point in a person.
Special: Ram, Hare, Dragon, Rabbit
Drawback: drains chakra while the sword is out (max three posts)
Description: One performs the handsigns, then a long (1 1/2 foot) thin sword(1mm-1cm) protrudes from your index and middle finger. That sword is used in conjunction with the san-da-dee to stab the pressure point and make it paralyzed for longer then if you stabbed with your fingers. This sword will also provide damage to the flesh and anything else the sword passes through (muscles, blood, etc.) The elixer learned at green leval of drijedo will cure the pressure point, eliminating the paralysis. Paralysis can also be removed from 5 minutes to an hour from the point that the pressure point is hit. It depends on where the person got hit. Things like the basic pressure points (Arm, leg, hand, etc) have five to 10 minutes whereas hitting an organ can take up to an hour to heal.
Element Effect: The different elements have different types of damage done to the person. Here is a list for all the elements:

Doton (Earth): Sword made of rock. As the Blade goes in, rock fragments will scrape off and go into the blood stream and anything else it goes through
Fuuton (Wind): Sword made of spiraling wind. As blade goes in, Wind rapidly curns up the blood stream and any thing else it goes through. It can also seriously damage the skin.
Katon (Fire): Sword made of fire. As blade goes it, Fire burns flesh around the wound and heats up blood. Makes the victim feel like the spot being hit is on fire, and can give fevers if sword stays in long enough. It also heats up anything else it goes through, making it more succeptive to damage. Often used in conjunction with the ice sword to freezes and heat blood stream, damaging the blood.
Suiton (Water): Sword made of water. As blade goes in, water falls off into blood stream adding to much water to the blood and can damage electical pulses coming from brain. Often used with lightning sword to damage the brain impulses.
Raiton (Lightning): Sword made of lightning. As blade goes in, lightning burns skin around wound and heats up blood more rapidly then fire. Often used in conjunction with the water sword to seriously damage brain impulses.
Mokuton (Wood): Sword made of sharp wood. As blade goes in, wood chips fall off into blood stream and float around, possibly damaging organs and cells.
Hyouton (Ice): Sword made of sharp ice. As blade goes in, sword freezes the blood stream around wound. Use in conjunction with the fire sword to freeze and then heat the blood, damaging the blood.
Saton (Sand):Sword made of hardened sand. As blade goes in, sand grains fall off into the blood stream damaging the blood by causing clots of sand in the blood, halting the blood flow.
Oto (Sound): Sword made of Sound waves. As blade goes in, sword damages the impulses from the brain, making victim do things that they dont want to do. Messes up reflexes.

Limit: San-Da-Dee required, must learn from Drasani clan, must have the release for the element you want your sword to be

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Tieren opened the scroll and saw the many effects that can be done with this. ’Wow, I can learn this up to 9 times. One for each element. Hmmm, right now I know the Lightning, Wind, and Fire releases, so I may learn those after I am done with the lightning sword.’ He thought as he got up, looked at the handseals and technique another time, then walked out and said “Master I think I am ready to try this.” His master then said “Are you sure? Then lets have at it.” Both Tieren and Oplieate got into a Drijedo stance.

Tieren thought back to what he read in the scroll and remembered the handseals for the sword, but first used a Ram handseal and said “San-Da-Dee!” His eyes glowed with a bright yellow and he obtained the ability to see his master’s pressure points. He then performed the Ram, Hare, Dragon, and Rabbit handseals and said “Raiton: Attsuuten Ikkounoken!” He flung his hands on top of each other and swung outward, creating two long swords made of lightning. He then looked at his master and tried to decide what he would do next.

He figured he would go with his whole arm since he has 3 attacks before he wont be able to sustain it after. He made sure he was aimed directly at his master’s wrist as he thought ’Lets go from the bottom up.’ He then ran forward and swung his right sword up and stabbed his master in his right wrist, right on the pressure point. Then immediately swings his left sword up and strikes his master in the pressure point on his left hand. He jumped back and felt tired already.

’I must get rid of his arm first. Next for the lower arm.’ He thought as he aimed for the pressure points in his lower arm. He immediately rushed forward and swung upward with both hands and struck his master in his pressure points in both of his lower arms. He saw the sword go through his whole arm, and even saw his master wince in pain. He jumped back and started breathing heavily.

’One more. Just one more, then I can rest.’ He thought as he grabbed his staff and thought for a second. ’It worked with Raiton: Raikou no Ken and the last jutsu I trained for, maybe it will work for this one too. I wonder. Time to try it out.’ He thought as he ran forward and forced his staff on the ground. He swung himself up and over by use of his pole vault technique.

Now standing back to back with his master, he quickly spun around and stabbed downward into his master’s upper arm. He went straight through the pressure poin, but was almost immedieatly thrust out as soon as he saw his master’s whole arm now limp and paralyzed. He hit the wall behind him and was now nearly unconscious. He barely got the chance to say “Go ahead and heal your arms. I will continue when I awake.” Before he was out cold.