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[JiMmIyZ - Hel]

Raiton • Raikou Yama No Jutsu [Lightning Release • Lightning Bullet]
Rank: D-Ranked
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The users fingertips begin to glow a light blue as they fire off lightning bolts from the fingertips.
Special: Tiger, Serpent, Dragon
Drawback: After being used multiple times they begin to numb the user’s finger making it very difficult to use weapon’s such as Bows, Swords, or even Kunai. Can be trained multiple times to increase the amount of times that it is capable of using without making finger’s numb
Description: Once the user has performed the required handseals the user will outstretch his hands and his fingers. Chakra will be rapidly gathered their and suddenly each finger will begin to emit electricity. The user will then move their hands back and fling them forward releasing the Lightning Bullets at the opponent. The Bullet’s look like small marble-sized balls of lightning with is giving off a constant discharge. The balls travel as fast as a person can throw a kunai or shuriken.
Limit: Lightning Release

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Amarante entered a small clearing in the village’s training grounds where she could be alone and train in peace. She was preparing to learn the lightning bullet jutsu; it would come in handy if she was out of shuriken or kunai she figured as well as being good for a lightning and water style jutsu combination. It was the reason she learned both types of releases in first place after all.

Facing a tree which was about seven feet away, Amarante stood shoulder width apart and braced herself. First up was to create the hand signs, remembering the signs indicated in the scroll she ‘borrowed’ from the Kusa library before she was chased out of town, she made the Tiger, Serpent and Dragon sign then pulled her right hand backwards, stretched out her fingers and quickly pushed forwards. The result was a small spark from her right hands fingers, which left it feeling a little tingly, while the left hand electrocuted her a little bit. “Oww! I guess I have to push out both hands to use this jutsu” she concluded to herself.

Armed with this new knowledge she prepared to perform the jutsu again. Forming the hand signs again, she pushed out both hands this time and the result was sparks of electricity that pushed out about an inch from her fingers and an even greater tingling sensation in her fingers. Not discouraged, as of yet, Amarante once again performed the hand signs for the jutsu but once again failed to properly perform the jutsu, the tingly sensation now annoying her.

After a few more tries, and failures, Amarante had some success. Two small marble like balls flew from her index fingers and hit the tree she was aiming at, though at a slow rate. Pleased with this small success, Amarante shook some feeling into her now very tingly fingers and made the hand signs once again. Taking her time to build up her chakra she pulled her hands backwards and then once again pushed them forwards. To her delight, ten marble sized balls of electricity flew from her fingers and slammed into the tree.

Letting out a small squeal of enjoyment, Amarante decided that the lightning bullets weren’t moving fast enough. The scroll said that they would move at a rate of speed equal to that of a kunai or shuriken which she could throw much faster. Exhaling, she once again prepared to form the hand signs to perform the jutsu, which in itself was a difficult task. Her hands were already pretty numb; she doubted she would even be able to hold a kunai properly. After forming the dragon hand sign she moved her hands backwards and then pushed them forwards faster then she had previously, assuming that pushing forward faster would result in faster ‘bullets’.

Successful in increasing the speed of the lightning bullets, Amarante watched as they slammed into the tree at a rate comparable to the speed of a kunai. Pleased with her success she once again tried to shake some feeling into her now very numb fingers. “I guess that’s it for today” she assumed. Although she felt as though she could train a bit more she thought better of it. Her hands being as numb as they were, there was an increased chance of her hurting herself if she continued to train.

Sighing, Amarante lowered her head and then quickly smirked. “Oh well at least I’ve got a new jutsu under my belt” she exclaimed as she walked back towards the town, out of the training fields. She didn’t know exactly where she was going, maybe home, but she knew that she was happy. And that’s all that really matters.

(OOC: first attempt at training, hopes I did it right The 'borrowed from the kusa library thing there I wrote because everyone had a reason as to why and how they had come to know of the jutsu, eg: Parents etc. so I came up with that for my reason.)

[ladynatsumi]

That jutsu you have indeed, congrats!

+10

Add tech to bio and add TP to TP count^^

[JiMmIyZ - Hel]

Suichuu (Underwater)
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Allows the user stay underwater for some time.
Difficulty Class
o D Rank Difficulty Class - 20 minutes
o C Rank Difficulty Class - 40 minutes
o B Rank Difficulty Class - 80 minutes
o A Rank Difficulty Class - 120 minutes
o S Rank Difficulty Class - 180 minutes

Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: After returning to surface the user must rest half of the time used underwater. As example, if the user has stayed under for 20 minutes, he’ll have to rest 10 minutes before the jutsu can be used again.
Description: Simple technique used by channeling chakra to mouth, lungs, ears and eyes. With chakra moved to mouth and lungs the user gathers air from the water and is able breath underwater, chakra guided to ears protects from the aching caused by pressure, lenses of chakra protecting eyes work like swim goggles.
Limit: Anyone can learn it, the techinque doesn’t even need a scroll, smart ninjas should be able to figure out the process on their own.

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Amarante returned to the training fields. It had been a few hours and feeling had returned to her hands and fingers but she didn’t feel like practicing any lightning type jutsu so had decided upon training with some water style. But what jutsu should she try and learn?

Rubbing the bridge of her nose in annoyance, she walked over to the river/stream, which was conveniently placed in the training fields. Staring at it she imagined what type of jutsu mist village shinobi would use. Still staring, Amarante got an idea. She remembered hearing about shinobi who would focus chakra into their lungs to increase the amount of time they could spend under water, sometimes for hours at a time.

Intrigued by this, she decided to give it a shot. Removing some of her excess clothing as well anything that could be ruined by her spending time underwater, she pulled out a small stop watch and began timing, then dove into the stream and began to hold her breath. Beginning to focus her chakra into her lungs she began to notice that this was putting a bit of pressure on her ears, eyes and even on her mouth. Thinking of how to rectify this she decided that she may as well try focusing some chakra into those parts of her body.

As she was doing this though, she eased up on the chakra focused in her lungs, resulting in her needing to go back up for air. Gasping as she emerged from under the water she made her way back over to the stop watch she had left back at shore as it was not water proof. Two minutes forty seven seconds, it read. Not long enough, she reprimanded herself and submerged herself into the water again.

Now working in conjunction, expelling chakra evenly and simultaneously through her mouth, ears, eyes and lungs, Amarante began to take air in air for the water around her and was able to stay submerged in the water for even longer. It was a fairly difficult process but one she was adapting too. Once feeling the need for more air, she emerged from the water once again to check how long she had been under. Twelve minutes and thirty nine seconds. Good she attained but she felt as though she could stay under longer. She had heard that the world record for the longest amount of time spent underwater without a breathing apparatus or jutsu was fifteen minutes and she felt that in order for the jutsu to be a success she would need to stay under for longer then that.

So after a breather, she once again submerged into the water, with every intention of staying under for longer then fifteen minutes. Time seemed to go slower while she was under. She was able to see some fish swim by and everything seemed calm, she began to loose herself in the environment. Before long however the urge to breath once again took her; and she had to go up for air. Wheezing, Amarante went over to the stop watch and read the time it recorded. Twenty minutes exactly. She was proud of herself, she had managed to beat the world record and she was content with that.

Drying off in the sun she wondered what jutsu she would train next…?

(OOC: Hopefully that makes it P.S. Thank you Cytheria)

[JiMmIyZ - Hel]

Would like someone to evaluate plz

[✗ Kaeor ✗]

+10

[JiMmIyZ - Hel]

Suiton: Chiisaimizubakahatsu (Tiny Water Explosion)
Rank: “D”
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: Creates a small wave of water that rushes towards an opponent.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: N/A
Description: The user performs the handseals described in special. There, they release chakra into the water and send a small tidal wave (about five feet tall) towards the opponent. The water moves at a speed of about ten miles per hour, so a direct hit from the water can be painful, but not life-threatening.
Limit: Water Release



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Having just finished learning the underwater jutsu fifteen minutes ago, Amarante was wondering what she should try learn next. Going over some of the scrolls she had ‘borrowed’ from the library at Kusa she came across one that seemed to be at her level. The ‘Tiny water explosion’ jutsu. It seemed easy enough and also appeared to be a stepping stone to higher level jutsu, all that she really needed was a fairly large water source, which she had curtesy of the training grounds lake/stream, she wasn’t sure exactly which it was. If it was anything it was a small lake or maybe a river? She didn’t know and then quickly dismissed the trail of thought from her mind to focus on the new jutsu.

Performing the hand signs the scroll had indicated, Amarante placed her hands onto the surface of the water and expelled her chakra while envisioning a wave sprouting forth, the result being a small wave about a foot high. Happy that she actually showed some sign of success her first time trying the jutsu, Amarante tried the jutsu again. Although it appeared that she may have spoken a bit to soon. This time she had only created a wave about three thirds of a foot high. Attempting the jutsu again she poured more chakra into the technique, successfully creating a two foot wave.

Focusing a larger amount of chakra this time as she formed the hand signs, she performed the jutsu again, successfully creating an almost five foot high tidal wave which crashed into the shore on the other side of the small lake, as she had decided it to be, but accidentally washing up some fish onto the shore. Screaming, Amarante apologised to the fish “Oh my god, I’m so sorry!” and swam over to them so she could place them back into the water.

An accidental death avoided, Amarante swam back over to her side of the lake and caught her breathe. Thanking of the Jutsu she just taught herself she thought that she should probably check to make sure she really did learn how to perform it and ensure it wasn’t a fluke.

Quickly going through the hand signs once more she practiced the jutsu, creating a four foot wave this time, said wave crashing onto the previous shore, not disturbing any fish thankfully. A little disheartened that it wasn’t as large as the wave she had made previously she once again performed that jutsu, creating another five foot wave. She continued to practice the jutsu a few more times, luckily managing not to wash any fish ashore, until she was confident that she had learnt the jutsu to an adequate level.

Wiping the sweat from her forehead she picked up her things and decided to call it a day. She had dispensed most of her chakra and was now fairly tired. Tomorrow she decided she would train some more but for now, sleep was the only thing on her mind.

(OOC: I wanted to train the water clone jutsu at the same time as learning this jutsu but wasn’t sure if I was allowed. Someone MSG me about that please Thanks Kaeor, for grading)

[unforgiven]

You are as long as you meet the requirements and +8

[JiMmIyZ - Hel]

Suiton: Chiisaimizubakahatsu (Tiny Water Explosion)
Rank: “D”
Type: Ninjutsu
Effect: Creates a small wave of water that rushes towards an opponent.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: N/A
Description: The user performs the handseals described in special. There, they release chakra into the water and send a small tidal wave (about five feet tall) towards the opponent. The water moves at a speed of about ten miles per hour, so a direct hit from the water can be painful, but not life-threatening.
Limit: Water Release

Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu (Water Clone)
Rank: "C" Rank
Skill: NinJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: ---
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited; however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state. When first learned the user is capable of having or capable of creating up to Five Clones. Each time learned the user learns this technique the number of Clones is capable of increasing by one. The maximum amount of clones is Ten for the Difficulty Class of D Rank. For each Difficulty Rank Increase the number increases by five of maximum but learning is still one per learned.
Limit: Water Release

Water explosion Jutsu: 8/10
Water clone Jutsu: 0/30


It was the next morning and Amarante returned back to the training spot by the river/lake she was training at yesterday. She had taught herself the Chiisaimizubakahatsu technique then but was still unsure about her competency with the jutsu.

Sure she could perform it but it took a heck of a lot more chakra then she thought it would. Maybe she wasn't performing it correctly? She had remembered what her old academy instructors had said about performing jutsu, that it takes precise chakra control to be able to manipulate a jutsu properly. But how could she train it?Suddenly an idea came to her, the water clone jutsu!

The water clone jutsu would divide her chakra so that it would be better to train the jutsu like she wanted. Pleased with this idea, Amarante performed the correct hand seals and created as many clones as she possibly could. The end result being that she created five of them. "Great now we can work this jutsu out right!" she exclaimed. "Three of you go over to the other side of the lake and pair up with the three of us that remain on this side!"

All the clones began to rush over at once but upon noticing this, decided to just play a game of 21 to decided who would go over. A bit unnecessary but then again most of the things that Amarante would do are unnecessary, so it all works out. When the three clones were over the other side of the lake, Amarante called out. "Right now everyone, use the Chiisaimizubakahatsu one my mark. 3. 2. 1. Now!" Upon her cue each one flipped through the required hand signs and cast a three foot wave against each other.

The waves met in the middle of the lake/river/stream and clashed against one another causing the water to spray up into the air and ripple. No doubt any nearby fish were gone by now, scared away. Pleased by her effort as well as her clones she called out again. "Alright guys, again. 3. 2. 1. Now!"

This went on a few more times until the clones were shooting waves at about five feet high at one another. "Alright guys one more time come on!" Amarante called. "3. 2. 1. Now!" The clones all flipped through the hand signs as fast as they could and shot out a five foot wave towards each other. Spraying up into the air once again upon contact, Amarante thought it would be best to call it a day now. "Alright guys that's it. You can dispel now."

Upon receiving nods from her clones, they proceeded to melt into water. Amarante was pleased with her progress and decided to give the jutsu one last try on her own. Slowly going through the hand signs Amarante cast the jutsu shouting out its name. The end result was a five foot wave going towards the other side of the river/stream while using much less chakra this time.

"Great, I should use water clones more often!" Amarante exclaimed, making her way out of the training zones and back into town.

(OOC: Not sure how many points it takes to upgrade the water clone jutsu again so someone MSG me if you know. Just assuming 30 because it's a C rank jutsu. Thanks for grading unforgiven)

[unforgiven]

Can only learn one at a time. +2 for Water Explosion

[JiMmIyZ - Hel]

Ka Jig Khai
Rank: "D"
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: The Boxer can throw a right knee to the left rib of the opponent for a counter.
Description: Picture The Boxer Throws the straight left or swing left first to the chin, nose, or the eyes of the opponent. Then Hurry to attack with another trick. This trick is used for attack, defense, or escape. To Protect: The Straight Fist: Throws the right punch, if to protect the swing fist. Moves the right arm to the right side.
Limit: Must know Jod Muay

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Amarante entered the training grounds, finding another open clearing with no one around all the while admiring the abundance of trees the village was famous for… Well… Being the Village Hidden in the Leaves. She had decided to work on her Taijutsu today, she felt as though she was lacking in that area and she also thought she was beginning to put on some weight, to her disgust.

Electing to try and learn the Ka Jing Khai technique she stretched and then did the one thing anyone training Taijutsu does first. She ran. She only ran about two hundred metres before once again stretching though. “It’s important to warm up properly” she announced aloud to herself before continuing to run another two kilometres. After her jog she began to do some push up’s for a little while.

Judging that the Ka Jing Khai was a punching technique, working out the upper body was a no brainer although she knew better then to exclude the lower and mid body in her training and after a few sets of push ups continued to do some sit up and squats. After feeling a bit tired from training she was doing, she decided to work on her form.

Taking the Jod Muay fighting stance, Amarante slowly began to move her arms as if to punch someone, checking her bone alignment. Feeling as though it was at a decent enough level she quickened the pace, but not too much so she could check over the leverage she put into her punches. Using her abdominals as a base point, Amarante pushed out some slow straight punches which quickly grew in pace until she began to envision herself shadow boxing.

She envisioned herself throwing a straight punch to an opponents jaw, the non-existent opponent countering with a right knee to the stomach which she skilfully dodges by back stepping, escaping. She then envisions her self throwing the same punch again, this time following up with the Pra Yaikai (swinging elbow).

Feeling satisfied, Amarante is then discouraged by her training. Sure shadow boxing would be sufficient for learning Muay Thai technique of this level but for more advanced technique she would need a sparring partner, or at the very least a boxing bag, but who would spar with her? Dropping to the ground, legs cross and fingers to her chin, she began to contemplate this dilemma. Who would she be able to spar with she wondered…?

(OOC: Oh, got'cha unforgiven, please ignore the clone jutsu training then and also, sorry if this is the wrong way to train Taijutsu but training Taijutsu seems pretty confusing to me. If someone could MSG me with a little advice, it would be appreciated

[// One]

Learned.

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[JiMmIyZ - Hel]

Intra Kwang Jak (Throw The Lengthily Punch)
Rank: "D"
Skill: TaiJutsu
Effect: ---
Special: ---
Drawback: To Protect Move the straight left hand above the head.
Description: Picture The Boxer holds up the right fist in the front, straighten the arm, steps the right foot forward then strikes the punch down to the neck or the nose of the opponent. This trick is used for attack, defense, or escape in the distance of fists.To Counter Throw the left swing kick to the opponent's right rib, if the boxer is a left handed fighter, reverse the descriptions from right to left.
Limit: Must know Jod Muay

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Excusing the sparring partner dilemma from her mind, Amarante decided to continue her Taijutsu training. Choosing to stick with her upper body, she elected to try out the Intra Kwang Jak technique. Finding a low riding branch, she began to complete some pull ups, three sets until exhaustion.

Next she decided it would be best to strengthen her wrists and forearms, punching power involved having these muscles strong so the power wouldn’t be hindered. Getting into a push up position, Amarante pushed herself up onto her fingers. It hurt but she pushed on through the pain, it would all be worth it later on. After a few sets of these to exhaustion, Amarante elected to work on her foot work.

Taking up the Jod Muay fighting stance, she began to pace herself backwards and forwards, Side to side and then backwards and forwards over and over again. Continuing her work on her foot work, Amarante began to throw some punches while moving and once again fell into her shadow boxing while moving on from her foot work.

Intra Kwang Jak began by raising the right fist to the front. The next step was to straighten the arm, then step the right foot forward and finally to land the punch. Slowly going through the movement, Amarante envisioned herself landing the punch onto the nose of her opponent. The opponent in turn would swing a left kick to her ribs. Noticing this she would practise back stepping to escape the opponents attack.

Quickening her pace, Amarante began to feel comfortable with the movement she was learning. A grumble from her stomach let her know it was about lunch time so after a few more run throughs of the technique, she decided it would be best to go get something to eat.

(OOC: Again training Taijutsu isn’t exactly my thing, I think I choose a pretty difficult one to utilise but oh well.)

[// One]

Learned.

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[JiMmIyZ - Hel]

• Raiton - Rakurai Shuryuu (Lightning Style - Lightning Stream)
Rank: "D" - "C"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user creates a steady stream of electricity against a single target.
Special: Ox - Monkey - Dog - Dragon
Drawback: "D" Rank require both hands. "C" Rank requires one hand.
Description: After forming the needed hand seals the user will create a fist sized orb of electricity and thrust it at a single target as a steady stream of electricity. At "D" Rank the lightning is only capable of knock a target back and inflict minor burns, and could reach a maximum range of 5 meters. At "C" Rank the lightning is able to cause first degree burns and numbness to the affected area, and reach a maximum range of 10 meters.
Limit: Lightning Release



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A little hesitantly Amarante decided to work on some lightning style jutsu when she returned to the training fields. It wasn’t as if she didn’t like using lightning style, in fact she really loved it. It was just that she didn’t feel like being numb for hours again. It was fairly annoying the last time it happened. Rummaging through a small back pack (full of the scrolls she borrowed’) she brought with her she found one that seemed promising.

It seemed something like the lightning ball jutsu she had previously learnt, only instead of throwing a ball of lightning; this jutsu required a steady stream. Deciding to try her luck she performed the hand sign the scroll had indicated. Ox, Monkey, Dog, Dragon and then released the chakra that she built up while thrusting her hands forward. The result was a gold ball sized stream of lightning extending from her for about three metres. “And here I thought I’d accidentally throw a lightning ball” she thought aloud to herself.

Preparing to attempt the Jutsu again, Amarante took a deep breathe and then took her time forming the hand signs building up as much chakra as she could. The end result was a right sized orb of electricity but it didn’t stream line like she wanted, instead it went out like a lightning ball jutsu. “Guess I spoke to soon, I did accidentally create a lightning ball” she once again spoke aloud to herself.

Trying the Jutsu a couple more times she recognised her problem, she was just bursting the chakra out all at once instead of maintaining the flow. Annoyed that it didn’t click with her after reading the name of the jutsu, Amarante reprimanded herself and then attempted the jutsu once again. Building up as much chakra as she could as she made the hand signs, she expelled the chakra once more, although this time she tried her best to maintain the chakra flow she had created. Managing to keep the stream going for five seconds, she was happy with the progress she had made with the jutsu.

Continuing to practice, she was able to continue to lengthen the time she was able to keep the stream maintained and the length if the stream, though now she was pretty tired. Trying once again she performed the hand signs in rapid succession. Ox, Monkey, Dog, Dragon and then shouted the name of the technique “Lightning style – Lightning stream!” At her words she thrust her hands forward and created an orb of lightning the size of a fist which stream lined for a distance of five metres.

Wiping the sweat from her forehead, Amarante congratulated herself on her success, packed up the scroll and left.

(OOC: Only training the D rank version of this technique. I want a good range of techniques. Quantity over quality etc. And thanks for grading Jack)

[unforgiven]

You need to learn the D rank first anyways.

+7. Use more mess ups and not just like mixing the techs but like failed uses of it like it explodes in your face or stuff like that from the start.

[JiMmIyZ - Hel]

• Raiton - Rakurai Shuryuu (Lightning Style - Lightning Stream)
Rank: "D" - "C"
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: The user creates a steady stream of electricity against a single target.
Special: Ox - Monkey - Dog - Dragon
Drawback: "D" Rank require both hands. "C" Rank requires one hand.
Description: After forming the needed hand seals the user will create a fist sized orb of electricity and thrust it at a single target as a steady stream of electricity. At "D" Rank the lightning is only capable of knock a target back and inflict minor burns, and could reach a maximum range of 5 meters. At "C" Rank the lightning is able to cause first degree burns and numbness to the affected area, and reach a maximum range of 10 meters.
Limit: Lightning Release



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Entering the training rounds, Amarante stretched herself out, trying to get in the mood to train. Failing to do so, Amarante made a last ditch effort and created the Ox, Monkey, Dog, and Dragon hand seals and cast Lightning stream technique. However upon using the jutsu, it only pushed out a distance of about three meters and was only half the size of a fist. 'Hm I cast it better yesterday. Why didn't work right now?' she questioned. 'Probably just not as adept with the jutsu as I thought.'

She decided that it was probably best if she practiced it again and so took up a position while facing a tree. Ox, Monkey, Dog, Dragon. "Lightning style - Lightning stream" she called while trusting her arms towards a tree, five meters ahead of her. The jutsu fizzled out again before hand though, only reaching a distance of four meters this time. On a plus side though it was the size of a fist again, a small victory in the least.

Amarante took a moment to consider what she was doing differently this time in comparison to before. 'Maybe I'm not holding the chakra for long enough or maybe I'm just not putting enough in' she pondered. Assuming that it was just her getting impatient and firing the jutsu to early, she formed the hand signs (Ox, Monkey, Dog, Dragon) again and held the jutsu a little longer before casting this time. Bad idea. She held the jutsu only a second longer then she normally would have but the result was when she cast the jutsu it back fired against her, knocking her off of her feet and burning her hands a little.

"Ow, ow, ow, ow!" she squeaked, pressing her hands against her stomach. "Well that wasn't it" she assumed. "Maybe I'm not doing anything wrong and I just need a little more practice." Performing the jutsu normally again she cast a stream of lightning that reached four and a half meters. "Yeah I just need some more practice" she told herself, forming the hand signs again.

She practiced the jutsu normally a few more times until she was able to cast a jutsu of five meters in length, with it also being the size of a fist, five times in a row. After doing so, she began to perform the jutsu once more. "Now if I cast it right this time, then that's it. It'll be the last time I practice the jutsu today" she told no one in particular. Taking a deep breath, Amarante snapped to life and performed the hand signs (Ox, Monkey, Dog, Dragon) as fast as she could, throwing forth another stream of lightning of five meters in length.

"Well that's it then. I think I've got this jutsu down!"

(OOC: Yeah I know I had to train the D rank first unforgiven, just you know making sure that anyone who was to read it knew that I hadn't already. The rest of my little MSG there was just food for thought really. Will remember your advice in the future as well, promise

[Ravenous]

Learned.

Btw, mess ups aren't necessary in the least bit. Mess ups are simply another way to expand the length of your posts. Sometimes it makes your character seem more human, because no one is perfect. =)

[JiMmIyZ - Hel]

Suiton: Mizutsume no Jutsu (Water Style: Water Claw Technique)
Rank: D Rank
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Causes pressurized water to wrap around the users hand, forming a claw.
Special: "Handseals"
Drawback: None.
Description: Creates a claw around the users hand which is pressurized and will allow the user to cut with their "bare" hands. Acts as if it were metal, as the water is both highly pressurized and infused with chakra. Lasts two posts, cannot form handseals with the claw "on".
Limit: Must know Suiton no Jutsu (Water Release). Must have a water source.

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Once again walking over to the river/lake/ stream (she had began to debate what she thought it was once again) in the training grounds and talking up a spot near the bank which wasn’t occupied by other shinobi, Amarante began to debate which jutsu she would learn. Wondering what type of jutsu she would need she looked over her current arsenal. She had a few kunai, shuriken, paper bombs, smoke grenades, a windmill shuriken, some Hikari and her Katana as well as some decent jutsu.

She had some decent weaponry in her opinion but other shinobi had better collections, what we she do if she happened to lose her weapons she wondered? Deciding that she should find some sort of weapon jutsu, Amarante looked over the scrolls she had brought with her. “Ah here we go!” she exclaimed while pulling out one of the scrolls. “This is just what I’m looking for.”

The jutsu allowed for a claw to be formed around the users hand by manipulating and pressurising water with chakra. Thinking this is perfect; Amarante walked over to the edge of the water, flipped through the hand signs and pushed her hands into the water, so she could mould the chakra through the water easier. When she raised her hands from the water however, nothing happened. There were no claws, no nothing. Just drops of water running down her hands. Growling in anger, Amarante sped through the hand signs once again and submerged her hands while once again attempting to mould the water with her chakra around her hands.

This time she made some small progress but the water quickly fell from her hands as she raised them out of the water, it was almost unnoticed but she knew that she had made a tiny amount of progress. Once again growling in her frustration she took a deep breathe to calm herself and then took her time making the hand signs, building up her chakra and then submerged her hands once more in her attempt to mould the chakra into the water around her hands. When she pulled them out of the water however she had made no progress once again, there was no water attached to her hands for even a second or anything.

“Oh come on!” she cried, her patience seemingly at zero today. She quickly made the hand signs once more in her frustration and then slammed them into the water once again. Quickly withdrawing them from the water she seen that the water had indeed stuck to her hands and were now shaping a claw. “Finally!” she exclaimed, though no sooner had she said that the water had fallen from her hand once again.

Grunting in frustration, she attempted the jutsu again, and again, and again, and again. Making a little more progress after each attempt. Pretty soon she noticed that the claw was remaining on her hand for a fair amount of time and after one last try was satisfied that it was long enough.

Next up was to see if the ‘claws’ were of a decent standard, meaning that they needed to be tested. Walking over to a near by tree, Amarante lashed out at, like a wild beast. Leaving a few deep scratch marks she felt as though it was at a decent standard but she also felt as though she could do better. Waiting for the jutsu to dispel, she focused her chakra into a more compacted claw and when she tested it out on the tree she found that it was a better quality. Practising this a few more times she decided to enter the final phase of her training.

Instead of dipping her hands into the water she would stand above the water and try to bring the water to her hands. Performing the hand signs for the jutsu, she expelled her chakra into the water, via her feet, and tried to bring the water upwards to her hands. It was fairly difficult at first, the first attempt creating claws around her feet but after a while she was able to bring the water upwards onto her hands without having to dip them into the water. This would be better in a fight as she wouldn’t have to bend down and dip her hands into the water instead she could just, in a way, bring the water to her.

Happy with the progress she had made, Amarante decided to take a nap by the water.

(OOC: Not sure If I could do that last thing or not but it just seems more efficient then dipping her hands into the water etc. Tell me if I’m wrong and I’ll change)

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Pressure Jet
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: User shoots a stream of water towards the opponent.
Special: Handseals
Drawback: Easier to dodge at longer distances.
Description: A simple jutsu utilizing the water release. User performs the hand seals Snake, Dragon then transfers charka to their throat, creating a steady stream of pressured water from their mouths, that then hits the opponent for D rank damage. The jet stream has a maximum range of 10 meters and travels in a straight line. Speed is equivalent to throwing a kunai.
Limit: Water Release.



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Waking up from her nap, Amarante looked over the scenery of the lake, it seemed so tranquil. She was thankful for the lakes/streams presence, helping her training by providing a water source. Then something clicked in her head. Most of her jutsu needed a water source! Trouble by this now obvious revelation, Amarante frantically searched through her back pack of scrolls for a water based jutsu that didn’t need a water source. Finding what she was looking for she squealed in delight “yes!” This jutsu would not only solve her problem of having too many jutsu that required a water source but if used correctly would actually provide her with said water source.

Taking a deep breathe and then exhaling, Amarante prepared herself to attempt the jutsu. Forming the snake and dragon hand signs she focused chakra at the back of her throat while inhaling and then spat forth a small, tiny stream of water said water creating a small puddle at her feet. “Didn’t work!” she scolded herself, performing the hand signs once again, she focused more chakra in her throat and then spat forth another small stream of water. “This is going to take a while” she said to herself while forming the hand signs again.

After practicing repetitively for an hour, Amarante was really tired and was pretty thirsty. She was now able to spit out a stream of water three metres in length but it was fairly slow Taking a small drink from the river she was standing by, she got ready to try again. Performing the jutsu once more she noticed that it was twice the length and twice as powerful as the one she had just performed thirty second ago. “Hang on, it couldn’t be” she spoke aloud to herself. Taking another drink from the river she was by she performed that jutsu once again, again the jutsu was a little more powerful. ‘Why?’ she wondered and then it hit her.

She was getting dehydrated from performing the jutsu over and over again. So all she had to do while training this jutsu was to stay hydrated, obvious really. So with this in mind she continued to train. Another hour went by and she was really getting low on chakra although she had made a good amount of progress with the jutsu, the stream now reached about eight metres and was pretty powerful. A few more times and she would call it a day, she told mentally herself.

Quickly going through the snake and then dragon hand sign, Amarante spat out a stream of water as powerful as she could, this time the jutsu hit a record for her and went about ten metres. Happy with herself she tried it again, spitting the stream forth as powerfully as she could it again went ten metres, as it did again the next time she tried it. “This is great, I really am getting the hang of this!” she squealed in delight. “Only one way to make sure it right now.”

Upon her words Amarante flipped through some different hand signs and summoned a water clone from the lake. “Okay clone get ready for this! Now my chakra, which was already low, is divided and I also have something to compare the jutsu’s speed against!” Nodding, Amarante’s water clone proceeded to pull out a kunai knife from its weapons pouch. “Alright throw it when I call out the Jutsu!”

The clone nodded its head in agreement and prepared the kunai. Taking a deep breath, Amarante prepared the jutsu. “Snake, Dragon, pressure Jet Jutsu!” she called, spitting forth a stream of water, the clone simultaneously throwing its kunai knife. The jutsu and Kunai knife were evenly matched in speed until the pressure jet hit its ten metre mark and fizzled out. “Yes that’s great!” she exclaimed, the clone mirroring her movements. “You can dispel now clone” the clone nodding and melting back into water in response.

Happy with her efforts for the day, Amarante decided to call it quits and then went home.

(OOC: Although not even I know where that home is… Maybe an apartment… Maybe not… Only she knows because she’s going there lol