MYK: The second Chance

[Nekomata Minh]

Name: Minh Young Kim (Nicknames: Minh, Minhy, MYK)


Age: 19


Gender: Female


Desired Position: Assistant


Experience Co-Admin/ Global Moderator for another recently made proboards site but, it isn’t much. Basically I have done most of the category, and board organizing for my Admin. So far it has been really dull around the forum but, I am decent with the controls in the Admin Home Panels and such.


assassinscreedlegend.boards.net/


Most of my staff training comes from here and, my own site that I still needs work.


world-of-anime-rpg.proboards.com/

Role-Play Experience and/or Event


Roleplays:


narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/105427/mission-quiet-ness-travel-rp?page=2#scrollTo=957403



narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/103407/iwagakure-tower?page=12&scrollTo=957975


narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/104349/double-trouble-training


narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/104432/searching-vision-travel-junko-fumiko


narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/10940/village-gates


narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/104344/reading-book-cover-mission-concluded


Events:


narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/105422/occupy-iwagakure-event


narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/105218/halloween-party-ooc


OOC:


narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/90564/iwagakure-ooc?page=25&scrollTo=957912

Additional Comments: Here is a link to my past and first ever staff application:


narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/104899/myk-rent


Links to threads where I: tried to help, failed to help, or is currently trying to helping:


narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/105535/scrolls


narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/105586/airontoku-jutsu?page=1&scrollTo=958087


narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/105276/reactivate-account-character-app


narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/104994/kimura-aburame-character-submission


narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/104935/lethals-character-submission


The outcome of that:


Quote from staff via PM: I am speaking in reference to your 'tip' for Lethal since I do not know if you will look back into that thread. Please refrain from giving any such advice in the future. Having an acceptance does not aid in the acceptance process. Each staff member looks over a bio for any mistakes regardless is they have no acceptances or two, whether it was a head mod or an assistant who gave the acceptances. I will not give you a warning for this, but do not give this sort of tip again.

My response: Ah I see. Ok then I will make sure to remember that thank you


narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/104591/hello-nfrp


narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/104542/konichiwa


narutoforumrp.proboards.com/thread/104488/worried-new-face




The reason I posted all these links above is to just show my progress in trying to be assistant. So you know I hope this isn’t too much. I just want to show, that I am not giving up on this and, I am serious about being given the position.


Reasons I think I should be accepted: Despite my foolish and, random nature I promise to take the job seriously. I aim to help the forum as much as I can so either way I plan to keep going. I am active, full of wonderful intentions to help anyone in need no matter how stubborn they may be and, most importantly willing to commit to this position's responsibilities. Even if I get denied again, you better believe I will keep trying to get better chances of being accepted next time. Test me all you want, I won't give up until I pass no matter how hard the challenge. Even if being an assistant ends up being a minor staff job I don't care. It is something I want to do, and something I know I can do well if I at least try. I love helping people so there is really no way I would pass up this opportunity to do such a think officially.


Reasons I think I should be Denied: I will admit, It was probably a month or so that I wasn't trying to look for support threads to help out in or, character apps to give advice on. Odds are there isn't much here for you to see my knowledge of the site as well which is important overall everything else.

I am also sure there might be something I may still need to research on. Still I have the confidence to get accepted eventually. So really I am using this thread to see where I am progress wise. I want to see if I made a step forward or not. So if I DO get denied like I said before. It will only drive me to do better. As of now I am also preparing to be mentored by Ikiryo in anything I may need to know. So I will be getting help at least.

[KoKoKo]

Going to put a stopper here as I would like to ask a couple questions quickly

Question 1: What do you have to say about the following Bio:

Basic Information

Name: Jugo Protean
Bloodlimit: Jugo
Height: 7ft4in
Weight: 350 lbs
Age: 15
Gender: FMale
Alignment: Good
Birth Country: Land of Nature
Village: Hidden Star Village
Special:

Weapons

Primary Weapon:

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Itosen Dagekimi (Thread Wire Shock Sword)
Rank: C
Type: Main
Effect: A unique sword that cuts, slashes, and hacks with both the wire and the blade.
Special: --
Drawback: --
Description: The Itosen Dagekimi is a normal katana of average length and sharpness, but for a single exception: A razor sharp wire is wrapped around the katana, extending from the bottom of the hilt all the way to the tip of the blade. The blade is polished steel and the hilt is traditionally black with white trimmings. The wire is attached to the bottom of the hilt, and ends in an unattached, razor sharp point at the tip of the sword. The wire is five meters long at full extension.
Limit: Can only be purchased in Kumogakure.
Cost: 7,500 Ryo

Itosen Habanami (Thread Wire Spark Sword)
Rank: C
Type: Main
Effect: A unique short sword that cuts, slashes, and hacks with both the wire and the blade.
Special: --
Drawback: --
Description: The Itosen Dagekimi is a normal wakazashi of average length and sharpness, but for a single exception: A razor sharp wire is wrapped around the wakazashi, extending from the bottom of the hilt all the way to the tip of the blade. The blade is polished steel and the hilt is traditionally black with white trimmings. The wire is attached to the bottom of the hilt, and ends in an unattached, razor sharp point at the tip of the sword. The wire is three meters long at full extension.
Limit: Can only be purchased in Kumogakure.
Cost: 6,000 Ryo

Secondary Items:

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Wire 15 meter
Kunai x 10
Shuriken x 10

Non-Weapon Items

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Weapon Bag

Character Depth

Personality:

Appearance:

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Background:

Techniques:

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Partial Transformation
Rank: "C"
Skill: Supplementary
Effect: A basic technique that allows the user to transform a limb or more under the effect of the Protean blood.
Special: ---
Drawback: May be learned 7 times. (2) Legs, (2) Arms, (Torso) Front, (Torso) Back, Head
Description: This technique allows the user to transform a limb using the effects of the Protean blood that resides within them. This is simply a "prerequisite" technique. When first learned the user may only transform 1 limb (arm or a leg). Each time learned the user may transform an additional limb. Example: If the user knows this technique twice, they may transform 1 arm into a Shield, and the other into a Blade, or both into Shields as long as the user knows the required techniques. It takes "C" rank worth of Handseals in time to transform individual limbs.
Limit: Must be a Protean.

Armour
Rank: "D", "C", "B", "A", "S"
Skill: Supplementary
Effect: While in this form, they take less damage, but the added density results in loss of movement speed and overall agility.
Special: ---
Drawback: The user loses 3 movements while in Armour. Armour disables the ability to Glide.
Description: Picture: Picture: Picture When used a large amount of biomass is shifted throughout the body of the user, molding it into a protective suit of black-biomass armour. The Armour is considered one of the best defenses for a Protean. While in this form, the user takes less damage, but the added density results in loss of movement, speed, and overall agility. Unlike the Shield, which completely negates minor frontal damage at the cost of having a temporarily finite ability to absorb punishment, the Armour significantly reduces all-round damage taken by the user without losing effectiveness. A technique that is ideal for close combat, allowing the user to go toe to toe with the strongest foes without quickly succumbing to large amounts of damage. When first learned this technique gives the Armour a hardness of a 10 against all Damage. Each time learned the hardness of the Armour increases by 5 giving a max of a Hardness 30 at "S" Rank.
Limit: Must be a Protean. Must know Full Body Transformation

Wall Run
Rank: "C"
Skill: Supplementary
Effect: Wall Running is one the advanced movement ability, the Proteans were capable of performing, due to their evolved leg musculature.
Special: ---
Drawback:
Description: Picture In order to wall run, the Proteans shifted their biomass to their limbs to grant them greatly augmented strength, speed, and agility, in effect giving them the ability to run along nearly any surface. Their speed and agility increased greatly while their movement abilities evolved. They were also capable of using their biomass strength to allow them to perform a much slower, more controlled wall climb, which is useful for precision, accuracy and stealth when scaling buildings. Note: This technique does not take up Chakra Walking techniques.
Limit: Must be a Protean. Must know Partial Transformation (2x).

Glide
Rank: "C" (Always at least 40 TP)
Skill: Supplementary
Effect: Glide is a locomotive ability developed by the Proteans. This ability is used to travel a particular distance with sufficient boost.
Special: ---
Drawback:
Description: Picture The Proteans shift their biomass throughout their body to grant them a lighter weight than normal, giving them the ability to glide for an extended period of time before descending to the ground at normal gravitational speed. The user is able to glide for 1 full round at a time. Glide can be used to bridge gaps between buildings or to reach airborne enemies. Glide can be used to its utmost potential with the combination of Airdash. When used in combination with Airdash or Airdash Double, occasionally landing on a high structure for a boost the user can literally fly from one end of an area to another. So if a user Glides for a full round and performs an Air Dash they may continue to Glide once again for another full round.
Limit: Must be a Protean. Must know Full Body Transformation.

Jet Booster Jump
Rank: "C"
Skill: Supplementary
Effect: User creates many jet-like appendages on their back to create a powerful blast. User then jumps, giving them power to maneuver in the air.
Special: ---
Drawback:
Description: Picture When using Jet Booster Jump, a large amount of biomass is shifted to the user's back, molding it into a chakra fueled pack to create powerful blasts. User is able to propel themselves, giving maneuverability while in the air. The user is able to Jet Booster Jump up to 10 meters to propel their own jump with enough distance to clear a 30 meter gap. User is able to maneuver while in the air, giving them a 2 meter maneuverability to the left, or right. The distance is small, however could mean life or death in a combat situation. The Boosters do damage equal to rank if they make contact with anyone standing behind and give a knockback of 10 meters.
Limit: Must be a Protean. Must know Partial Transformation.

Bloodpact Vision
Rank: "C" (Always at least 20 TP)
Skill: Supplementary
Effect: This technique allows the user to see anyone with the same blood as the Protean.
Special: ---
Drawback: The visual range is limited to a certain radius.
Description: Picture Allows the user to see any person that is part of the same bloodline, or anyone who has similar affects such as Ten no Juin (Cursed Seal of Heaven), Chi no Juin (Cursed Seal of Earth), and is part of the Mabuki (Demon Weapon) Clan. This sense reduces most sound, and dulls visual details to enable the user to highlight and pick out every potential target from a given environment in their location. When learned the user is able to pick out creatures similar to the user's bloodline within the distance of 30 meters.
Limit: Must be a Protean.

Thermal Vision
Rank: "C" (Always at least 20 TP)
Skill: Supplementary
Effect: Thermal vision is a type of sensory power. It allows the user to view targets and objects past smoke and/or past obstacles.
Special: ---
Drawback: The visual range is limited to a certain radius.
Description: Picture The difference between Bloodpact Vision and Thermal vision lies in what it filters out. Thermal Vision filters out smoke and other visual obstructions, while Bloopact Vision highlights creatures much more clearly. It is wise to assume a disguise and activate Thermal Vision, allowing the user to watch without being exposed. Thermal Vision is effective when used to locate intense and/or biological generated heat to see past debris, and smoke. When learned the user is able to pick out thermal signatures within the distance of 30 meters.
Limit: Must be a Protean. Must know Bloodpact Vision.

Question 2: The following is posted in support:

Question 3: What action would you take with the below situation?

[Nekomata Minh]

Question 1:
Hey Ikiryo I'll be reviewing your app.

Ok so there are some problems that need a some modifying so bare with me.

[If it was a first character App]
I am sorry to imform you this but, the protean BL cannot be used for first-time characters. So this means you will need to change this since it invalidates your techniques as well.

For the bloodlimit you seemed to have put the name of your character instead of the actual BL itself. Not only that but, the character's name is invalid. Here at NFRP you can't use the names of exsisting Naruto characters. So sadly you are going to have to change that.

Also your height and weight seems a little too unrealistic for a 15 year old. Would you please nerf that a little? By the way you put FMale instead of just male or female. Please edit this so we know what your character's gender is. Also for the alignment you forgot to add which of the three different types of Good alignments. You can choose between Lawful, Neutral, or Chaotic.

By the way you can make a costume village but, your birth place is not one of the available places on the forum. If you'd like there are also some incentive villages you can go into. By joining an incentive you gain some neat rewards to go along with your character such as extra ryo. Just so you know you can't have the med specialist and the Nin specialist at the same time its either or. You are also required to pick two Non-specialists along with one more specialist.

As for weapons you can only have those particular Primary weapons by buying them in Kumagakure which you aren't in. You also forgot to put the prices for your secondary weapons. You also have too many slots listed for your apparel item which isn't one of the starting items. So this also means you might have exceeded the primary or Secondary Ryo. For Primary you can start off 13,000 and Secondary is 30,000.

As for techniques you need the full transformation tech for a few of them to work. Not only that but, with a Bloodlimit you can only have three techs, you have seven. And for a Multi-Ranked tech such as Partial Transformation you need to underline or bold the current rank you have which would be D.  By the way you still have 7 freebies so don't forget to use those. They ban used on Releases, Perception, skills, and traits.

I hope this doesn't discourage you. Just make the needed changes and PM me or any other available staff with Cyan, Blue, or Green usernames. Until then I can't give a 1/3

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Question 2: Looking at this I would not only check the email but, I would also search for the character myself to check all of its info. From here if all works out I would link the member their character's app then advice them to revamp or recreate their app to fit the sites new rules. Also if it turns out they were here before the site update thing then I think they would also be eligible for that free TP reward.

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Question 3: Seeing as those two are arguing nonstop the first thing I would do is attempt them to calm down. If they still are ranting about the problem I will give a Verbal Warning. If they still argue or bring the problem up all over again then I will notify a mod or, head mod to confirm a site warning is an okay thing for this situation. That is if the othef staff doesn't decide to take over. If any other rules were broken during this time then I will also provide details and reasons why the warning were given.

[KoKoKo]

1. Good few things

The character also used jugo as the direct face claim as well as the name.

It was a bit unclear when you said I had an extra specialist, it made it seem like I had 3 and then 2 non but that was just wording, you were right on that.

It doesn't matter too much about the birth place more sk the village they are in, we have characters coming from made up lands allowed (as long as it isn't too far fetched et ).

The weapom bag doesnt exist and the item changed to also needed it's over view too and it didn't take out of the primary allowance as you get 1 free slot holding item as a D Rank charrie.

The primary Weapons he isn't allowed to have due to the fact they have techniques directly associated with them, he can have their techniques and gain the weapons in character after just not start with weapons with custom techs attached.

Also spoilers in the bio aren't allowed until after acceptance.

You didn't ask about his proof of the 5 events and the previous character with 750 tp or more.



Question 2

Good but before handing over the information you need a trusted member to confirm or some way of proving it is their account.

Question 3

A verbal would work however what you should do is take record of the logs and inbox them to a mod or higher, or post them in the staff board asking for someone to cbox ban them if it is needed, of course if it is really out of control you can give them site warnings too.



I'm going to think about this over night and in the morning give or refuse my mark

[Nekomata Minh]

Oh yeah the the 5 events thing is required -facepalm-. I was proofreading when you posted this which I hope didn't screw anything up. For now I'll just wait for the 1/3 or 1/2.

[Tieren]

You have a decent understanding of the rules, and your answers here show that. While it's not absolutely perfect, we aren't expecting everyone to be perfect. Being an assistant involves making mistakes. That's why assistants have moderators to watch over them. If you knew everything there was to know about the site before becoming an assistant, then your Mod watching over you would have no reason to do just that.

I think I'm willing to give you a chance on this. I think in time, you'll hone the slight mistakes made and can do a good job with it.

1/3 Accepted

[N A T S U M I]

2|3. A little overdone on the links provided, we only as for 5 lol.
But judging from what you’ve answered in Ko’s questionnaire, I agree with Tie here and will give you a shot.

Good luck.

[KoKoKo]

3.3 come be my little minion


Inbox head mod for your title

[Nekomata Minh]

Yay! Wait...which one??

[N A T S U M I]

Locking the thread. Congrats, Minh!